1、专题13书面表达 全国卷 一、2022年高考真题 1. (2022年全国甲卷书面表达) 你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛,请你写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括: 1. 海洋的重要性; 2. 保护海洋的倡议。 注意:1. 词数100左右; 2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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3、 【one possible version】 Our Oceans,Our Responsibility Do you know June 8, which is not only a day for the college entrance examination to Chinese youngsters, but also World Oceans Day, designated by the UN to arouse people’s awareness to protect the oceans? The ocean is the home to all life
4、 on earth, rich in natural resources, and also our blue home for a happy life and happy growth. To care for the ocean is to care for our future. So we should shoulder responsibility to protect it. To begin with, protect the Marine ecological environment and advocate green environmental protection ac
5、tions. What’s more, to strengthen the consciousness of the sea in accordance with the law, consciously protect the blue land and resources environment, start from me, start from now, start from around things, take an active part in green volunteer activities, and advocate green environmental protect
6、ion. Do you agree with me? If so, let’s hand in hand to protect the Marine environment, and inherit the Marine civilization from heart to heart.(165) 2. (2022年全国乙卷书面表达) 学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括: 1.学习活动状况描述: 2.简单评论; 3.你的建议。 注意: 1.词数100左右;
7、 2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。 Learning English Beyond the Classroom There are many things we can do to learn English well. 【满分范文】 Learning English Beyond the Classroom There are many things we can do to learn English well. Recently a survey about how to learn English beyond the classroom has been conducte
8、d. As can be clearly seen from the statistics, appreciating English songs accounts for 65 percent compared with 50% who choose to watch movies as a way of English learning. Reading English books prove to be the less popular ways making up 18%, together with visiting English learning websites, taking
9、 up 12% . It turns out that students attach greater importance to interest and entertainment instead of traditional approaches such as reading books when learning English. However, from my point of view, what benefits students most is reading English books, for it is one of the best ways to incre
10、ase vocabulary and to strengthen the understanding of grammar. Therefore, students become best English learners quickly. 二、2022年模拟题 Writing 1(2022·北京师大附中三模) 假如你是红星中学高三1班班长李华。最近你班同学听外教Jim线上讲课时遇到了一些问题。请你代表你班同学给Jim写一封邮信,内容包括: 1. 反映情况; 2. 给出建议。 注意:1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 【答案】Dear Jim, I
11、’m Li Hua, monitor of Class One Senior Three from Hongxing Middle School. Representing my classmates, I’m writing to tell you some questions. During your online classes, you know, some of our students’ spoken English is not very good, so we are thinking whether you can speak a little slowly, so tha
12、t we all can follow you. Besides, you are too strict with us, which is of course good, but you can also be relaxed and kind to us. Then, the atmosphere in your classes will be more active, and we dare to express ourselves more bravely. You can believe that we can still finish what you ask us to do e
13、ven though you are not so strict. We will appreciate it if you can take our suggestions. Hope to hear from you soon.
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15、 Li Hua 【解析】本文是应用文。要求考生给外教Jim写一封邮信,反映学生们线上听课时遇到的一些问题并给出建议。 1.词汇积累 代表:represent→on behalf of 英语口语:spoken English→oral English 此外:besides→what’s m
16、ore 建议:suggestion→advice 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句:I’m Li Hua, monitor of Class One Senior Three from Hongxing Middle School. 拓展句:I’m Li Hua, who is the monitor of Class One Senior Three from Hongxing Middle School. 【高分句型1】During your online class, you know, some of our students’ spoken English is no
17、t very good, so we are thinking whether you can speak a little slowly, so that we all can follow you.(运用了由whether引导的宾语从句和so that引导的结果状语从句) 【高分句型2】Besides, you are too strict with us, which is of course good, but you can also be relaxed and kind to us.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型3】You can believe th
18、at we can still finish what you ask us to do even though you are not so strict.(运用了that引导的宾语从句、what引导的宾语从句和even though引导的让步状语从句) Writing 11(2022·新疆·克拉玛依市教育研究所三模) 假设你是高三(1)班李华,最近你们年级的英语老师针对高三学生进行了一次睡眠时间调查,结果如下图。请你给你校英文电子报社编辑写一封信,内容包括: 1. 说明调查结果; 2. 分析危害; 3. 提出建议。 注意: 1. 词数100左右; 2. 开头结尾已为你写
19、好,不计入总词数; 3. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear editor, I’m Li Hua, a student from Class One, Senior Three. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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21、 Thank you. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Recently, our Grade English teacher conducted a sleep time survey for senior three students, and the results are as follows. Twenty percent of the students slept seven hours; Thirty-five percent of the students sle
22、pt six hours; Twenty-five percent of the students slept five hours; only five percent of the students sleep eight hours. Among them, boys sleep slightly more than girls. Fifteen percent of the students even sleep less than five hours. What a horrible statistic! Although we students are under great
23、pressure from study, the lack of sleep does great harm to our bodies. It's a huge burden not only physically but also psychologically. This is a problem that must be solved immediately. Dear students, we have a long future. On our way to life, we must make sure that we get enough sleep and spend ou
24、r time wisely. Only in this way can we study and live better. 【解析】本篇书面表达属于图表类作文。要求考生针对最近年级的英语老师针对高三学生进行了一次睡眠时间调查的结果,给你校英文电子报社编辑写一封信。 1.词汇积累 明智地,合理地:wisely→ sensibly 可怕的:horrible → terrible/awful 压力:pressure→ stress 确保:make sure→ guarantee 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句:Only in this way can we study and
25、live better. 拓展句:As long as we stick to this way, we can live and study better. 【高分句型1】Although we students are under great pressure from study, the lack of sleep does great harm to our bodies.(运用了Although引导的让步状语从句。) 【高分句型2】This is a problem that must be solved immediately.(运用了连词that引导的限制性定语从句。)
26、 Writing 2(2022·上海杨浦·三模) Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 国际经合组织(OECD)对 600,000 名青少年就生活中最令他们担忧的事情进行了调查,结果如下图。请联系自身实际,谈谈最让令你担忧的事情及原因。 【答案】The ORGANISATION for Economic Co-operation and Development (OECD) asked 600,000
27、 teenagers what worried them most about their lives. It turns out that forty percent of the students in their academic assignments feel pressure; thirty percent of the students on their relationship with their parents feel a little nervous; twenty-five percent of the students in their own image mor
28、e care about, giving them some confusion.The remaining five percent of the students feel anxious and concerned about other things. As far as I am concerned, sometimes the problems that make me worry are mainly in study. It makes me feel anxious and confused and sometimes helpless. Maybe because of
29、 a failure in an exam, I will be in a bad mood. To improve their psychological quality, I think we students should be better improved. I think we should get more help from parents and teachers. 【解析】本篇书面表达属于图表类作文。要求考生针对国际经合组织(OECD)对 600,000 名青少年就生活中最令他们担忧的事情进行调查的结果,联系自身实际,谈谈最让令你担忧的事情及原因。 1.词汇积累 压力
30、pressure→ stress 担心:be concerned about→ be worried about 就我而言:as far as I am concerned → personally speaking 无助的:helpless→ unassisted 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句: Maybe because of a failure in an exam, I will be in a bad mood . 拓展句: It is maybe because of a failure in an exam thatI will be in a bad mo
31、od. 【高分句型1】twenty-five percent of the students in their own image more care about, giving them some confusion.(运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作伴随状语。) 【高分句型2】As far as I am concerned, sometimes the problems that make me worry are mainly in study.(运用了连词that引导的限制性定语从句。) Writing 3.(2022·山西·一模) 你校高三英文社团就“What is the
32、most effective way to ease stress?”话题进行了一次调查,请根据下面调查结果写一篇调查报告,内容包括: 1. 简述调查结果; 2. 分析原因。 注意: 1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 THE MOST EFFECTIVE WAY TO EASE STRESS _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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34、 【答案】According to the pie chart, students have a variety of ways to ease their stress. As is shown in the chart, about 40% of students choose to listen to music, while 25% of them prefer to do ph
35、ysical exercise to make them relaxed. Meanwhile, 18% of the students tend to surf the Internet as their recreation way when facing the hardship in the study. By comparison, there are nearly 12% , who are fond of talking to friends and 5% choose other activities to help relieve stress. From my point
36、 of view, the reason why the majority of students accounting for almost 65% in the diagram choose more positive ways is that they focus much on their health.Students clearly concentrate on building a well-developed body so that they will make progress in their study. 【解析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生依据提供的饼图,对调查报告做以
37、说明并解释形成原因。 1.词汇积累 许多:a variety of|→a number of 同时:meanwhile→ at the same time 喜欢:be fond of→be keen on 压力:pressure→stress 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句:According to the pie chart, students have a variety of ways to ease their stress. 转换句:According to the pie chart, students have a variety of ways that
38、 can help ease their stress. [高分句型1] As is shown in the chart, about 40% of students choose to listen to music, while 25% of them prefer to do physical exercise to make them relaxed. Meanwhile,(运用了as引导的非限定性定语从句) [高分句型2] By comparison, there are nearly 12% , who are fond of talking to friends and
39、 5% choose other activities to help relieve stress.(运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句) Writing 4(2022·江西·临川一中模拟预测) 请你根据下面图片,以“Labor Education Counts”为题写一篇英语短文,内容包括: 1.你对图片的解读; 2.你的一次劳动体验。 注意:1.词数100左右; 2.题目已为你写好。 【答案】Labor Education Counts The picture vividly illustrates that labor education plays an impo
40、rtant role in nurturing teenagers’ development, cultivating their all-round development of morality, intelligence and physique. Just like the tree in the picture, it is thriving on the boy’s watering. When it comes to my experiences of labour, making a fruit plate after Tiktok struck me as an unfor
41、gettable one. I first collected some kinds of fruit like apples, oranges, strawberries and bananas. Then came the most challenging part, cutting them into the style in the video, which took me about thirty minutes. After that, I shaped them on a plate into a blossoming flower with delicious sauce. T
42、o my delight, when I served it to my families, they all spoke highly of it. No pains, no gains. Through the hands-on experience, not only do I gain a sense of achievement, but I also appreciate that labour itself is a kind of enjoyment and a must for our personal growth. 【解析】本篇书面表达属于夹叙夹议文。要求考生以“La
43、bor Education Counts”为题,描述对所给图片的解读,并讲述一次劳动的体验。 1.词汇积累 重要的:important →significant 难以忘怀的:unforgettable → memorable 美味的:delicious →delicate 赞扬:speak highly of → applaud 2.句式拓展 强调句 原句:The picture vividly illustrates that labor education plays an important role in nurturing teenagers’ developme
44、nt, cultivating their all-round development of morality, intelligence and physique. 拓展句:The picture vividly illustrates that it is labor education that plays an important role in nurturing teenagers’ development, cultivating their all-round development of morality, intelligence and physique. 【高分句型
45、1】The picture vividly illustrates that labor education plays an important role in nurturing teenagers’ development, cultivating their all-round development of morality, intelligence and physique.(运用了that引导的宾语从句,动名词作宾语) 【高分句型2】Then came the most challenging part, cutting them into the style in the v
46、ideo, which took me about thirty minutes. (运用了倒装句,which引导的非限定性定语从句) Writing 6(2022·河南·通许县第一高级中学模拟预测) 假定你是李华,你的新西兰好友Paul发邮件询问你高考后的暑假计划。请你回复邮件,内容包括: 1. 你的计划; 2. 给出理由。 注意: 1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________
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49、e possible version: Dear Paul, I’m glad to receive your e-mail in which you asked about my plans for the summer holiday after the college entrance examination. And I’m willing to share them with you. First of all, I decide to become one of the volunteers in my community, who play an important rol
50、e in fighting against the pandemic. Besides, I plan to learn to cook some typical traditional Chinese foods so that I can prepare meals for my parents. More importantly, to enjoy a better college life, I’m going to make some preparations, such as searching for relevant information and taking several






