专题08-短文改错15篇(第一期)(全国卷专用).docx

2023高考英语名校模拟真题速递（全国卷专用）
第一期
专题08 短文改错15篇
1．（2023春·河南南阳·高三南阳中学校考一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Sir,
Choose a career is a very important stage in people’s life. Almost everything depend on your choice. I’d like to be a interpreter. It’s a very interesting profession where requires advancing knowledge of the foreign language as well as excellent social skills. In my opinion, English and literature is the most important subjects for my future profession, because of my knowledge of English will help me communicate with foreigners fluently and accurately. Literature will not only help me broaden my horizons, but also give me some background knowledges of different cultures. To sum, I’d like to say that the choice of our future career path is extremely important, so we must think twice after making our choice.
2．（2023秋·内蒙古赤峰·高三统考一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处;每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The tornado warning was sounded just as we were about to leave to school. I looked outside. We have been taught to identify a tornado. I could not see a whirlwind but sky was dark. My family went into our shelter, which emergency food and water had been kept.
We were only there for an hour. My brother and I were scaring. We remembered the last time it was a tornado a few mile away. Even the grass was torn up from the ground. Mother cheered me up by talking about our next holiday.
Once we were told it was safe, and we went up. We were gratefully that the tornado missed us.
3．（2023秋·内蒙古阿拉善盟·高三阿拉善盟第一中学校考一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As we are spending more and more time online, both our teachers or parents are increasingly worried about the possibly side effects of the Internet.
But increased use of the Internet is not necessarily good or worse. It becomes unhealthy only when it starts replacing with such important things as physical activities and avoiding friends and families. If our schools and families only focus the amount of screen time, they’re concentrating on the wrong things. What matters are how we spend our time online. Actually, spending more time online may be beneficial for them if we can use the Internet properly. We can learn such things as search for important information and communicating with different persons, who are very important life skills in the future.
4．（2022秋·河南南阳·高三南阳中学校考一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I had a heat discussion yesterday with my friend who was having an extreme difficult time. I tried to encourage him by pointing out some of his achievement, reminding him of the situations that he had made a difference to so many others.
Then I received a “Thank you” message. It was mentioned “How come they are always so positive about everything?” The answer is easier: I am not positive! But helping others to see the good in themselves make me focus on the positive aspects. It helps me out of my own dark hours, too.
Accept ourselves for what we are can help us to be friendlier with ourselves as well others whom we communicate with every day.
5．（2023秋·江西赣州·高三统考一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换作文，请你修改你同臬写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I know many interested neighbours. One of us is Miss Tan. Most of my neighbours drive or took public transport to work. However, Miss Tan walks to her office every mornings. Although it quite a distance away from her home, she walks daily to keep fit. Miss Tan is always energetic and I admire her for her determination to stay healthily.
For the Covid-19 pandemic, exercising seems to be impossible. However, Miss Tan and her family has been doing simple workouts in the comfort of her home. Miss Tan believes that a fit body is important for work or life. It also makes people to feel productive.
6．（2023·广西柳州·统考二模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
To be honest, I wasn’t the fan of sports before. I used to think playing a sport would distract me from my schoolwork. However, after read an article stressing the benefits of working out, I change my mind. Therefore, I joined the football team of their class this year. My coach and teammates are always ready to help me. Though my skills aren’t good enough for me compete in the real games, but I have learned a lot from the daily practice. During the training, I have been taught to build teamwork and communicate effective with other people, that is helpful when I encounter problem in my life. Now I’m in love for football and I will try more sports.
7．（2022秋·广西柳州·高三桂林十八中统考一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分，
Dear Steve,
I’m interested in voluntary work and want to do which I can to help anyone in need. So I’m writing to apply to the job.
I really love science and technology, but I’m a member of the Science and Technology Club in our school, which has helped me accumulate a lot of knowledges. Also, be hard-working and outgoing, I think I can get along well with others easy. Thus, with your experience and deep love of science and technology, I believed I can provide the best service.
I would be more than happy if you could offer to me such a chance. I’d appreciate if you could take my application into consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
8．（2023秋·宁夏石嘴山·高三石嘴山市第三中学校考一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My father has a real neat vegetable garden. Every year he planted different kinds of vegetables for us to eating. Last year his corn were ten feet high and his tomato plants grew five feet high! I often help with him in the garden. We dig the hard ground in early spring, sow rows of seeds, and keep them water and safe from insects. When harvest time arrives, they happily pick the vegetables we have grown. We usually have too much vegetables in August. As result, my mother will freeze some for winter month from December to March.
9．（2022秋·广西南宁·高三南宁三中校考一模）文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每个句子都有一处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays many people drive instead of taking a bus or walking to work. It cause more traffic jams and accidents. As the student, what can we do to guarantee our safe? First of all, the traffic rules must be strict obeyed When we cross streets, waiting until the traffic light turns green. Next, don’t forget walk on the pavement. Finally, I think it very dangerously to wear headphones while walking or cycling. Since we can’t pay enough attention on the traffic around us, so accidents may happen. We should take good care of us and not let our parents worry about us.
10．（2022秋·贵州遵义·高三统考一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My book is The Call of the Wild. I bought one in Xinhua book store, which cost me 30 yuan. The book, which cover is black and green, contains 300 pages. Having been read the story three times, I am always touched by the dog experiences. From the dog Bark’s grow, I realize each living being is born to adapt to nature and competition. Since I want to read another work writing by Jack London, I would like to exchange this book another novel called White Fang. If anybody is willingly to exchange the one with me, please contacting me immediately. It’s an pleasure to share books. Looking forward to your reply.
11．（2022·广西·高三校联考一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As I was growing up, we were often for the move. During that period, I have to admit that moving so often made myself feel lonely. However, my mother did everything she could help me feel happy. In a fact, so much travelling was really a good thing because it made our bond high developed. I respect my mother so much as she never treats me as a child, but as an equal. She gives me the freedom to make mistake and to learn from them all. Unlike friendships that can fade or break, I know I’ll always be connecting with my mother no matter how I face. She is not just a role model for me, and someone I love deeply.
12．（2022·广西·高三校联考一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In schools, it is necessary for us students build a good relationship with our teachers. It is the teachers who showed love and concern for us students in study and life. We can always seek their support and advice, that we benefit a lot from. Thus, a ideal relationship between teachers and students are very important. In my opinion, this relationship should be one filling with love, care, understanding, and respects. So they can exchange for ideas freely. To build a relationship of this kind, teachers should become friends of students while students ought to trust our teachers and voice their feelings frankly. Therefore, let’s make joint efforts to set up a warmly relationship between teachers and students!
13．（2022·广西·统考一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之同交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Two week ago, it was announced that there was going to have an English speech competition. Its theme was linked with a globe event about wildlife protection. One student from each class would be selected for a competition. I really wanted to be involve as it was a subject I had been very interested in it. Afterwards, I searched for a lot relevant information on the Internet. I write a speech and presented it to my class. Lucky, I was given the opportunity. Under the guidance of my teacher, I made a wonderful speech but won first prize in the end.
14．（2022秋·四川成都·高三统考一模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
No matter how troublesome a situation is, we can always find a way to solve it. Therefore, we sometimes show great fear to all kinds of difficulties, which has a negative effect to us more or less. In order to lead a better life for our future, there is need for us to find suitable solutions. The ways to help us get out of a bad situation are as follow.
To start with, we are bound to believe in ourselves, even though we are extreme short of knowledge in this field. And then it’s necessary to turn to people around you, such as parents, close friends, teachers and so on, share inner feelings with them. Next, we can join in various after-school clubs, where we are so occupied that we have no time to think of things of little use.
Last but not the least, we are supposed to be training to face challenges bravely. Only by becoming stronger, can we be more powerful. After all, the world ahead of us, full of wonders, are always waiting for us.
15．（2022·广西南宁·统考三模）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 (\) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10 处，多者(从第 11 处起) 不计分。
Nowadays, more and more people have taken part in voluntary work, that is a sign of social progress. There are many different kinds of voluntary activity students can participate. For instance, they can work as volunteers in a library or a bookstore if they were fond of reading or they can go to the nursing home to help the elderly. As the saying goes, the fragrance always stay in the hand that gives the rose. Being volunteers is of great benefit to students, give them a sense of an achievement when they are helping others. By doing voluntary work, students realize the importance of social work and enhance their social responsibility. Therefore, not all the voluntary activities are suitable for students. It is to say, the activities should be safe and easily to conduct.

参考答案：
1．1.Choose→Choosing
2.depend→depends    
3.a→an     
4.where→which/that
5.advancing→advanced   
6.is→are            
7.删除of   
8.knowledges→knowledge
9.在sum后加up      
10.after→before
【导语】这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者想成为一名口译员，并且认为选择职业是人的一生中一个非常重要的阶段，几乎一切都取决于你的选择。
【详解】1.考查动名词。句意：选择职业是人的一生中一个非常重要的阶段。分析句子结构可知，此处为动名词作主语。故将Choose改为Choosing。
2.考查主谓一致。句意：几乎一切都取决于你的选择。由不定代词everything作主语为单数意义，此处谓语动词应为单三形式。故将depend改为depends。   
3.考查冠词。句意：我想成为一名口译员。由名词interpreter为首音节元音音素单词可知，该名词前应为不定冠词an。故将a改为an。
4.考查定语从句。句意：这是一个非常有趣的职业，它需要先进的外语知识和优秀的社交技能。分析句子可知，此处为关系代词which/that引导的限定性定语从句，先行词profession，关系词在从句中作主语成分。故将where改为which/that。

5.考查形容词。句意：这是一个非常有趣的职业，它需要先进的外语知识和优秀的社交技能。根据句意可知，此处应为形容词advanced“先进的”，作定语修饰knowledge。故将advancing改为advanced。   
6.考查主谓一致。句意：在我看来，英语和文学是我未来职业中最重要的学科，因为我的英语知识可以帮助我流利准确地与外国人交流。由主语English and literature为并列两种事物可知，为复数意义，所以此处谓语动词应为复数形式。故将is改为are。   
7.考查原因状语从句。句意：在我看来，英语和文学是我未来职业中最重要的学科，因为我的英语知识可以帮助我流利准确地与外国人交流。分析句子可知，此处为连词because“因为”引导的原因状语从句，because后面接句子，because of后只可接名词或名词短语。故删除of。
8.考查名词。句意：文学不仅能帮助我开阔视野，还能让我了解不同文化的背景知识。knowledge“知识”为不可数名词，没有复数形式。故将knowledges改为knowledge。
9.考查固定短语。句意：总之，我想说的是，我们未来职业道路的选择是非常重要的，所以我们必须三思而后行。此处To sum up“总之”为固定短语，满足句意要求。故在sum后加up。
10.考查介词。句意：总之，我想说的是，我们未来职业道路的选择是非常重要的，所以我们必须三思而后行。根据句意可知，此处为介词before“在……之前”，满足句意要求。故将after改为before。
2．1.to→for  2.have→had  3. sky前加the   4.which→where  5.scaring→scared
6.it→there  7.mile→miles   8.me→us  9.删除and   10.gratefully→grateful
【导语】本文是一篇记叙文。主要讲述了龙卷风来临时我和家人一起在避难所中度过的故事。
【详解】1.考查固定短语。句意：就在我们即将启程上学时，龙卷风警告响起。根据文意，作者是和家人