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高三 二轮复习专题
Proof Reading 短文改错

I 词法和逻辑错误

短文改错口诀：
动词形名词数，还要注意形和副。非谓语，细辨别，冠词连词常光顾。代词格，细领悟，介词短语须关注。句子成分多分析，习惯逻辑要记住。

一、动词形：
1.动词的时态和语态错误
2. 主、谓不一致的错误
3.非谓语动词的误用

高考链接1：
1. One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. (2014陕西卷)
2. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky. (2014陕西卷)
3. However, my father had to return to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday.(全国卷）
我的错题档案:（错题反复练）
1. My teacher spoke fast and I had a hard time understand him. (岳阳市一模)
2. I am grateful to my uncle for the great effect lived with him has on my life.第21期报纸）
3. Many a foreigner often join us. （第18期报纸）
4. Thousands of people have been here since it is set up. （第18期报纸）
难点突破：非谓语 OR 谓语
1) My parents will do all they can make sure that I get a good education.
2) We fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories.
3) I dream of standing on the platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys and girls.
二、名词数 1.可数与不可数名词的混用2.可数名词的单复数的错用3.名词的格的误用
高考链接2：
1. It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.（2011新课标全国卷）
2. It’s a shame to break your words. You should mean what you say. (2011辽宁卷）
Practice:
1. Don’t lose hearts. You’ll be successful in time.
2. I need some more informations.
3. There are two girls from my course here and I plan to make friend with them.
三、还要注意形容词和副词
1.分清形容词和副词用法
2.正确使用比较级和最高级
高考链接3：
1. Yes, it is clearly that your life in your country is quite different from mine. （全国卷）
2 What he said sounded wonderfully. （全国卷）
3. His father looks much more happier today. （浙江卷）
我的错题档案：（错题反复练）
1. The girl looked extreme frightened. （第19期报纸）
2. It was developed long ago, perhaps as earlier as 2000 BC. （金榜P137）
3. In the evening, she continued to study until deeply into night. 金榜P176）
四、代词格，细领悟
1. 人称代词，物主代词,反身代词的使用．
2.代词指代的人或物前后(性/数/格)不一致的错误.
3. it作形主、形宾或指代时有缺漏 (make, find, think)
4. both, all, either, neither, none的使用.
高考链接4：
1. With the help of Katia, a roommate of me… (2011 重庆卷）
2. It was only when we did their chemistry project together that I began to understand…
3. He found difficult to learn math well. (2010 辽宁卷）
4. After thinking for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teacher’s office.
我的错题档案：（错题反复练）
1. As for your choice between the two courses ,I prefer the fourweek course. (3月联考）
2. I was learning to express me in simple English. (名校仿真四）
3. I stopped to take a photo of a butterfly. I was thinking about posting them on Facebook.
（第19期报纸）
五、介词短语需关注
1)介词的多余或缺失 2) 介词的错用
这部分需要平时多多积累，弄清常用介词的固定搭配。
1. Could you share your experiences for us?
2. In fact, they are planning to visit China in next year.
3. He had only a small cold room to live.
六、冠词 (a, an ,the)
1）不定冠词a和an互改
2）不定冠词 a或an和定冠词the互改
3）根据需要增删冠词(注意惯用法)
1. （全国卷) Today I visited the Smiths --my first visit to a American family.
2. （全国卷) We may be one family and live under a same roof.
3. （全国卷) Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English teacher.
4. （全国卷) What a fun it is to go swimming in summer.
七、连词
(一) 注意连词and/ but, and/ or, but/ however之间错用
(二) 注意从属连词如because与so, though /although与but, if与and / or 等不能同时使用.
1. The food was expensive and the service was good. (2008)
2. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. (2015)
3. Although it is raining heavily, but I decided to go out.

II从句法的角度去分析:
一． 定语从句
常考点1：关系代词和关系副词的误用
1. He put it in a secret place where I couldn't find.
2. The house which Lu Xun once lived is being repaired now.
常考点2：定语从句谓语动词人称和数和先行词不一致的错误
3. Anyone who break the law should be punished.
4. Tom is the only one of the engineers who have come up with the solution.
5. Tom is one of the engineers who is sent abroad
常考点3：与其他句式混淆的错误和其他错误
6. The old man has three sons, all of them are workers.
7. We practise spoken English by talking about everything we are interested in it.
二. 名词性从句
常考点：连接代词和连接副词的混用
1. We express the hope which the Browns will come to China again.
2. Who leaves the room last ought to turn off the lights.
3. That impressed me most was that he had never lost heart.
三、状语从句
常考点：引导词的误用或逻辑关系错误
1. Make a mark which you have any doubts or questions.
2. Because they're expensive, they last forever and never go out of style.
四、句式结构
1）Give me a chance, or I will give you a wonderful surprise.（2014天津卷）
2）I was wandering down the sidewalk while there went a loud crash.(名校仿真四）
3）He was very excited that he couldn’t say a word. (金榜P158）
4）Hardly had we started than it began to rain. (金榜P158）
5）It was at 10 o’clock when he came back. (金榜P158）

实战演练：
At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose
a big one. It was almost as taller as the room! They put them in the corner of the sitting
room. Kate was covered it with a lot of Christmas light. The sitting room looked
really beautifully at the moment. There was a fire burn in the fire place, and the Christmas
tree lights were shinning brightly. Jim or his parents singing and dancing happily.