剑桥雅思9真题+解析-Test1写作.doc

剑桥雅思9真题+解析-Test1写作task1

雅思写作名师点题：
地图题以及一些工程图表题是雅思考试中比较“另类”的话题。考生接触较少，因此会产生一定的恐惧心理。在总结这类地图和表格题的信息时，考生可遵循以下两个步骤:首先要弄清楚地图的方位顺序，其次要对比必要的信息，此外，考生还需要持别注意时态的应用。

雅思写作高分范文：
The two drawings illustrate the changes of the same island before and after the construction ofsome transport and service buildings.
It is clear that before development, the horizontal island which is about 260 meters long has a Few trees on both east and west sides. Furthermore, on the west edge, a small beach is located for tourism in the future.
The layout changes tremendously after buildings are constructed in almost the whole island. The trees on the east side are kept for the natural view.
However, the west trees are surrounded by some accommodation houses, with a footpath linked to the beach where a swimming zone is closely connected, Next to the western accommodation, there is a reception building around which a vehicle track road heading to the south pier for tourist sailing is just paved. On the opposite side of the pier, a restaurant stands at the north side near the seashore. The center of, the island is also designed to supply housing for tourists.
In sum, comparing the two drawings,tremendous developments have been evident.These developments make the whole island crowded with modern facilities, which may cause damages to the environment.

作文结构分析：
    范文由四段组成:第一段为引言段，主要介绍该图表展示的是什么方面的信息;第二段对改建之前的岛屿进行描述;第三段对改建之后岛屿的设施和交通进行描述:最后一段对两个图表体现出来的总体特点(overview)进行归纳，同时也表达了对岛屿环境的担忧。

亮点词汇：
第一段：
Illustrate 以图表的形式说明
Construction 建设；建筑物
第二段：
Horizontal 水平的；地平线的
第三段：
Layout 格局，布局
Tremendously 惊人地，非常地，可怕地
Accommodation 住处
Reception 接待，接收；招待会；感受，反应
Seashore 海滨，海岸
Crowded with 充满，挤满

亮点语句：
I. The two drawings illustrate the changes of the same island before and after the construction of some transport and service buildings.
  两幅图画描绘了同一座岛屿在建造交通服务设施前后的变化。
2. However, the west trees are surrounded by some accommodation houses, with a footpath linked to the beach where a swimming zone is closely connected.
  然而，西边的树林周围则建起了一座座的房屋，房屋和紧挨着游泳区的海滩之间由一
条道路连接。
剑桥雅思9真题+解析-Test1写作task2

雅思写作名师点题
这个题目是近几年多次出现过的考题，属于pros and cons的辩论型题。具体而言，题目的要求Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages属于传统的对某一观点或做法的利弊发表看法并进行论证的形式。此外，考生需要注意题干中的rather than，此短语通常代表态度出现倾向性。

雅思写作高分范文
Most parents and teachers believe that kids should start language learning in their middleschools. However, some elementary schools also provide foreign language learning as a test in educational field. Obviously, it contains positive as well as negative influence. Lingual skills from primary education are always based on the great interests kid's obtained in expressing their feelings. The strong motivation helps students acquire language with ease and fun, and then their unshaped mother language will also remove the barrier between one language and another. More importantly, without exerted pressing stress from tests and exams, students may devote themselves to language itself but nothing else
However, the primary education for language learning is not as perfect as it sounds. The overly flexible timetable for language learning will never ensure that children have mastered some key features of lingual skills. Compared with that, secondary school will supply more professional lessons with accurate teaching from which children can benefit a lot. However, if so, this activity will entirely ruin the interests of language learning for kids, which shift their flexible foreign language interests into the forced and test-oriented study all the time. Thus, this should never be put into practice for a better result until secondary schools. Obviously, primary school should also make some revolutionary changes for a better lingual atmosphere to cater to kids' interests.
In sum, all the contributions made to optimize language learning will benefit both individuals as well as the community, culturally and traditionally, so the adjustments in primary education will be the key to solve this educational problem.

结构分析：
此范文根据题目的要求相应地分为四段: 第一段介绍题目背景并表明两个立场(Positions);
第二段通过分析基础教育阶段进行外语教学的好处，来充分论证其实施的必要性;
第三段介绍基础教育阶段学习语言所存在的问越，特别将其与中学教育进行了比较，
最终还是肯定基础教育.并提出要做适当的调整:
最后第四段作为结尾归纳总结自己的现点并提出相应的解决方案.

亮点词汇：
第一段
Elementary 基本的，初级的
Obviously 明显地，显而易见地
Positive 积极的
Negative 消极的
第二段
Motivation 动机；积极性；推动
Acquire 习得；获得；得到
Devote…to 投身于
Unshaped 不成体系的；不成型的
第三段

Flexible 灵活的
Timetable 时间表
Test-oriented 以考试为目的的，应试教育的
Revolutionary 变革的，革命的
第四段
Optimize 优化，最大化
Adjustment 调整，调节，调节器

亮点语句：
1. Lingual skills from primary education are always based on the great interests kid's obtained in expressing their feelings.
  基础教育阶段的语言技巧总是建立在孩子们获得用语言表达自我情感的兴趣之上
2.However, if so, this activity will entirely nun the interests of language learning for kids. which shift their flexible foreign language interests into the forced and test-oriented study all the time.
  但是.如果真的这样的话，孩子们学习语言的兴趣就会被完全毁掉。它又将灵活的外语学习兴趣变成了整个中学阶段压迫式的应试教育。

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