1、 Outline 1.(Para.1) Hypocritical charity of Chen discussed heatedly 2.(Para.2) Adverse effects of false philanthropy for the survivors and the whole society 3.(Para.3) Professional opinion and beneficial suggestion of charitable organizations in America 4.(Para.4) Authentic demands of people in
2、 need 5.(Para.5) Personal suggestion for charity career Writing Prosperity in Action, Poverty in Mind A violent earthquake hits a small county town in Yunnan province. Buildings are overturned instantaneously, residents are killed relentlessly, and the wail of despair and misery lingers a
3、mong the ruins like ghosts. At this bitter moment, people throughout the country lend their hands to the recipients with no spare. Chen Guangbiao, a millionaire who considers himself as the most charitable philanthropist in China, contributes his effort to the survivors by an unprecedented way. Howe
4、ver, the action rendering survivors holding up cash and taking a photo makes the public burst into uproar, for people view it as a hypocritical charity show. The donation contributed by Chen Guangbiao could have received heartfelt praise from people. Nevertheless, the way he shows off degrades hi
5、s “benevolence” to a false hype even if he acts out of mercy. Also, adverse effects are brought to both the recipients and the whole society. Grateful as they are, those who accept donations are reluctant to take this photo, inasmuch as they are forced to complete a charitable show for Chen after th
6、ey lose beloved families and cozy homes. Moreover, the method Chen expresses his kindness will be concerned by others to admire, to imitate and to popularize at the cost of true charity. This event reminds me of a similar action Chen Guangbiao makes in New York, which receives heavy criticism fro
7、m philanthropic organizations in America. What they champion is that Chen enables the organizations to assign the donations instead of individual action, because they are more professional and skillful than Chen. In contrast, there is only rising idleness among people in need as a consequence of Che
8、n’s charitable pattern. On my part, cash will never be the panacea for relieving one’s pain, while the power of humane treatment overwhelms that of money. For those survivors of earthquake, only by receiving loving care from fellows can their despair fade away gradually. For those unemployed peo
9、ple, only by receiving job opportunities from certain organizations can they retain the dignity as independent persons. As for the society, it is not the aptitude but the attitude that determines its altitude. It is expected that the government can issue, strengthen and enforce laws of philanthro
10、py. It is expected that the society can establish more charitable organizations expertised in humanitarian aid. It is expected that those charismatic philanthropists will never become people who have prosperity in action, but poverty in mind. Outline 1.(Para. 1) Objective analysis of deficie
11、ncies of essay writing 2.(Para.2) Rational planning for confronting frustrations and promoting writing 3.(Para.3) Cordial aspiration for growing up in frustrations Writing Bear Frustration Piously, Bear Fructification Plentifully --Reflection on my first in-class writing Some consider th
12、e frustration as a razor that leaves the soul to bleed, while I consider it as a river that nourishes the tender reed. Doubtlessly, getting au unsatisfactory mark must be a frustration for me. The deficiency of writing it conveys to me, however, is the matter I ought to confront indeed. When I retro
13、spect the process of writing with care, it occurs to me that I rush into throwing words on paper without organizing well. Even when I chew the essay again, the flavorless sentences and viewpoints make me find it tasteless. Frankly, the bitter fruit I reap is the consequence of my lack in the accumul
14、ation of precious knowledge. It is the one who is afraid to bear frustrations that can not bear fructifications. If I choose the escape from facing frustrations, it is destined for me to fall into the abyss of the failure. Instead, the constant accumulation and continuous innovation might make gr
15、eat differences. Only by standing on the shoulder of giants can I see further than others. Thus, it is through reading the classic that I pave the way for the preferable writing. Moreover, the frequent practice enables me to write in calm instead of being chased by time. The frustrations kiss me with pain, but request me to grow up in song. It is true that the process of bearing frustrations is that of growing up. Only by lying a seed beneath the bitter snows can it bear plentiful fruits in summer.






