考研写作市公开课一等奖省赛课微课金奖课件.pptx

,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,GEE Writing Seminar,UNCLE LEON,1/86,赵亮老师,新浪微博,莱弗赵亮,国内著名全能英语培训教师；,博鳌亚洲论坛特邀英语主持,;,上海世博会英语口语培训师,;,曾为澳大利亚总理及多位中国国家领导人提供翻译；,20,岁成为新东方主讲，,21,岁成为大学特聘英语教师；,中国电影协会特邀翻译，曾为葛优、唐国强、范冰冰等翻译；,NBA,费城,76,人队翻译，世界第一无腿激励大师约翰,库提斯个人翻译,;,受邀全国开展个人演讲数百场，受到广大学子热烈追捧，被凤凰卫视、,CCTV,等多家媒体报道。,2/86,考研,live,主要性,一定要考研,钱途,爱情,机会,一定要考研,3/86,干掉,”,偏难怪,”,，成功备考考研英语,迟：,Better late than never,早：,The early bird catches the worm,高分：资金投入，生活质量，各种机会,4/86,成功考研三部曲,1.UNDERGRADUATE-SCHOLAR,（大一二三四）,5/86,成功考研三部曲,2.SCHOLAR-RASCAL,6/86,成功考研三部曲,3.RASCAL-LLM,、,GRADUATE,MASTER DEGREE,TEACHER+,7/86,Writing Part,写作高分技巧,/,重点单词积累,/,长难句反向高阶练习,/,阅读、翻译强化,8/86,9/86,分值分配,英语一：,30,分,小作文,10,分,大作文,20,分,英语二：,25,分,小作文,10,分,大作文,15,分,10/86,考神马？,年,温室花朵经不起风雨,-,永恒性话题,年,终点又是新起点,-,大事件（,年神五上天）,年,养老足球赛,-,永恒性话题,年,偶像崇敬,-,大事件（,年超女火爆）,年,自信心缺乏,-,永恒性话题,年,合作精神,-,永恒性话题,/,大事件（,08,年北京奥运会）,年,互联网,-,大事件（互联网普及速度到达高峰）,年,文化学习,-,永恒性话题,年,环境污染,-,大事件（环境污染问题越来越严重）,年,乐观与消极,-,永恒性话题,年,毕业前途选择,-,大事件（就业最难年）,年,？,11/86,So,熟悉宏观话题,贴近生活常识,个性服从共性,远离敏感话题,共创友好社会,12/86,熟悉宏观话题,六类宏观话题,1,，健康,1996,1997,2,，两代关系,1992,3,，爱心,1995,，,4,，环境,1999,，,5,，青年面对社会,6,，文化,1993,健康文化、爱心环境、友好两代关系有利于青年更加好面对社会！,挖掘图像本质,-,学会升华,13/86,贴近生活常识,个人生活体验为主,对常识分析、判断和点评,切勿用“专业”角度去分析及写作！,14/86,个性服从共性,申题,过程要抓出题人思想,主旨一定是主动感情，需在图画寓意中发觉真理或是思索问题主动处理方案。,国内考试需要“顺”，需要“正”，不需要“奇”，不需要“非主流”，因为这在这帮头脑腐朽出题大爷大娘眼里是不被接收和认可！,15/86,远离敏感话题,日常生活话题、轻易判断是非话题才是常考方向；,而像时事政治类敏感话题，是非曲直难以断定，不方便作为考题方向。,而更年期老年男女精神愈加敏感，所以他们就是为了本身健康也一定会原理敏感话题。,16/86,共创友好社会,个体友好发展,节俭与浪费、怎样对待成功（幸福）、剽窃、职业选择和规划,个人、他人与社会友好共处,个性与团体合作、怎样对待竞争、网络利弊、伪劣商品问题、乱收费现象、怎样对待中国传统节日和西洋节日、沟通、再难与爱心问题,人类与自然环境友好,私家车利弊、环境污染话题、食品安全问题、乱砍滥伐问题、人类对历史古迹破坏及保护。,17/86,写作高分秘笈,范文,？,词汇,句子,段落,Flexible,！,18/86,写作词汇三大标准,19/86,词汇第一大标准,复杂标准,第一潜意识表示,?,“我认为,”怎么表示,I think,？,复杂表示：,assume,argue,emphasize,insist,when it comes to me,for my part,as for me,in my point of view,for my own perspective,harbor the idea that,take the attitude that,hold the view that,it is widely shared that,it is universally acknowledged that!,20/86,“.,很主要”怎么表示？,Important,？,Very important,？,Very very important,？,复杂表示：,vital,significant,critical,crucial,play a decisive role,be of utmost importance,indispensable,21/86,“好”怎么表示？,Good？,复杂表示：positive,favorable,rosy,promising,perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding,superior,awesome,wholesome,思索：“好人”呢？,22/86,“坏”？,Bad？,复杂表示：dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse,ill,frightful,discouraging,depressing,harmful,23/86,“,人,”,呢？,People,？,复杂表示,Person individual,People individuals,characters,folks,Famous people celebrity,24/86,“许多”？,Many？,复杂表示：An army of,an ocean of,a sea of,a multitude of,a host of,“一些”？,Some？,复杂表示：A slice of,quite a few,25/86,“事情”？,Thing？,复杂表示：affair,business,matter,“越来越”？,More and more？,复杂表示：Increasing(ly),growing,26/86,“用户”？,Customer？,复杂表示：shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,“非常”？,Very？,overwhelmingly,exceedingly,extremely,intensely,27/86,“必要”？,Necessary？,Indispensable,“感兴趣”？,Be interested in?,Sth.appeals to sb.,sth.exerts a tremendous fascination on sb.,28/86,“切记”？,Remember？,复杂表示：Bear in mind,“为了”？,For？In order to?,复杂表示：for the sake of,29/86,“不论，不论”？,No matter？,复杂表示：regardless of,“就而言”？,For？,复杂表示：In terms of,30/86,“仅仅只”？,Only？,复杂表示：merely,“有些”？,A little?,复杂表示：somehow,31/86,词汇第二大标准,转换标准,做人底线：能够,胡编,但千万不能乱造,胡编,两种方法,1,）复杂汉语,-,简单汉语,-,简单英语,2,）上下义词,32/86,1,）复杂汉语,-,简单汉语,-,简单英语,酵母,I want to buy something to make the bread bigger and bigger.,照料老人,老人？照料？,崇敬偶像,偶像？崇敬？,33/86,2,）上下义词,下义词：对一个事物详细表示；,上义词：对一个事物类别表示。,饺子,上义词：食物,特征：中国特有、传统、春节常吃,a traditional Chinese food for the Spring Festival,上义词+特征,34/86,另外：上下义词还能够增强表示丰富性,Internet,net,technology,invention,miracle,tool,Computer,Machine,technology,tool,invention,PC,laptop,my baby,35/86,词汇第三大标准,温暖标准,阅读其实就是脱衣服,写作其实就是穿衣服,Leon,英语很好。,Leon,是一个好人。,Leon is a good man.,Leon,a famous teacher in China,is a,handsome,warm-hearted and responsible,man,who is crazy about beer.,名词化装：形容词、同位语和定语从句,36/86,Leon,唱“,you are my sunshine,”,Leon sings“,you are my sunshine,”,With a view to make his babe happy,Leon sings“,you are my sunshine,”,loudly,in the bar on her birthday.,动词化装：状语,时间、地点、方式、目标状语。,37/86,例句：,We should take measures to counter fishing.,长句：,For the purpose of preserving the marine resources,we should take,drastic and effective,measures to counter,excessive commercial,fishing.,38/86,总结和期待,词汇三大标准：,复杂标准,转换标准,温暖标准,美好期待：更多三大标准范围下词汇列表请关注新浪微博,莱弗赵亮,我会定时发到上面给我学生学习记忆。,39/86,写作,12,大关键句子,40/86,1,，简单简单句,1,）掌握简单句基本结构，确保结构正确,2,）谓语动词是关键,3,）搞清楚时态,4,）主谓一致,41/86,2,，不简单简单句,1,）添加介词短语,A,）简单句,+,介词短语,B,）介词短语，简单句,2,）用简单句写意群,42/86,1-A,简单句,+,介词短语,介词短语：,1),时间,:in future,in the future,2),地点,:in the modern society,3),范围,:among the youngsters,for the aged,parents,4),总结,:in conclusion,all in all,43/86,Trees provide three vital functions,in the ecosystem.,树木为生态系统提供了三种主要功效。,From my point of view,new buildings is a sign of modernization.,我认为，新建筑是当代化一个标志。,44/86,1-B,用简单句写意群,请各位写一句话,大学生刚才毕业就想找到高薪工作是不可能。,It is impossible for刚才毕业大学生 to 找到高薪工作,45/86,拆分,1）每年，都有很多大学生毕业。,2）他们都想找到工作。,3）这些工作能够给他们很多钱。,4）这是不可能。,5）我了个去，该怎么办？,46/86,1,）,Every year,many college students graduate.,2)They want to find jobs.,3)These jobs can give them a lot of money.,4)This is impossible.,组合：,Every year,heaps and heaps of,students graduate,from universities and institutes,.They all want to find jobs which can offer them,handsome,salaries,but this is,hardly possible.,47/86,3,，四种关系并列句,联合关系,and/not onlybut also,选择关系,or/otherwise/eitheror,转折关系,but/yet,因果关系,so,48/86,真题好并列句句举例,这幅图发人深省，而且它描绘了当今社会一个普遍现象。,The drawing is thought-provoking,and it illustrates a common phenomenon in todays society.,49/86,政府应该对私家车主征税，或者尽快发展公共交通系统。,The government should levy tax on the private car owners,or it will develop the public transport system as soon as possible.,50/86,文化融合已经给我们带来了益处，不过我们应该正确对待这种特殊现象。,Culture integration has brought benefits to us,but we ought to take a right attitude towards this special phenomenon.,51/86,远程教育在现在教育中起到日益主要作用，所以，我们要对它足够重视。,Distance education has been playing an increasingly significant role in the modern education,so we should pay enough attention to it.,52/86,4,名词性从句,【,宾语从句,】,经济学家认为，世界经济与原油价格亲密相关。,The economists believe that the world economy is connected closely with the price of crude oil.,拓展：与,相关,Be connected with,be associated,be linked with,be related to,53/86,【主语从句】有些人不愿意赡养年迈父母，这是一件令人遗憾事情。,It is a pity that some youngsters are unwilling to support their aged parents.,【表语从句】所以，这幅图画寓意是民族文化变成国际文化。,Therefore,the implied meaning of the picture is that a culture of one nation may become international.,54/86,【,同位语从句,】,只要浏览一下报纸，你就会轻易地发觉这方面报道：一些人抛弃了年迈、无劳动能力父母，使他们生活在痛苦和贫穷之中。,Simply by glancing at the newspaper,you can easily find reports that some people,abandon,their parents who are old and incapable of working,leaving them in misery and poverty.,55/86,5,定语从句,有意识、三要素、人物事！,那些收溺爱孩子轻易被生活困难击倒。,Those children who are spoilt by their parents are easily defeated by difficulties in life.,56/86,6,状语从句,（,9,种，详细见长难句部分）,因为电脑被广泛应用于日常生活方方面面，电脑知识成了当代人必备知识。,As computers are widely used in all aspects of our daily lives,computer literacy has become a must to a modern man.,57/86,7,句头状语,追求曲线美！,Unfortunately,a large number of adults are unwilling to take the responsibility of supporting their aged fathers and mothers.,Undoubtedly,the government should lead citizens to stand by the new law on public transportation.,58/86,经典句头状语总结,Most importantly,ironically,just like,in spite of,amazingly enough,apart from,in addition to,interestingly,not surprisingly,similarly,likewise,obviously,overall,without.,59/86,8,含插入语句子,素颜也能够很美,位置：主谓之间,形式：插入语前后两个逗号,类别：词、短语、句子,60/86,Job-hopping,in fact,can offer an opportunity to bring ones potential into full play.,Circumstance,what is important,has a far-reaching impact on ones personality.,全部考场上牛逼神句都不是临场灵感迸发，而是考前练习厚积薄发！,61/86,9,并列修词句,气势磅礴威慑无边,I came,I saw,I conqurered!(,凯撒大帝,),The government of the people,for the people and by the people.(,林肯,),62/86,The American girl,dressed in traditional,costume,indicates,the multinational communication of,cultures.,The American girl,dressed in traditional Chinese,costume and ornaments,indicates and symbolize,the multinational communication of,cultures and customs,.,名词,/,动词,/,形容词,-,同义词近义词,-and/or,连接,63/86,10,双重否定句,一切皆有可能,Anything is possible.,Nothing is impossible.,Impossible is nothing.,Everybody believes in Leon.,Nobody does not believe in Leon.,64/86,双重否定经典积累：,Never fail to,It is not unrealistic to do,It is not uncommon that,65/86,11,倒装句,【A】,否定词,+,助动词,+,主,+,谓,+,宾,Never has the nature suffered from such a severe pollution.,66/86,【B】only+状语+助动词+主+谓+宾,Only by doing so can we have great confidence and power to overcome various difficulties.,67/86,12,强调句,Do,It is/was+,被强调部分,+that/who+,其它部分,It was Leon who helped me get such a high score!,68/86,万能三段段落模块,69/86,第一段：图画描述，,3,句,总体描述：人物,/,动物,/,事物动作,/,服装环境,/,表情，,1,句,挖掘细节词、串连成句：,1,2,句,文字说明,/,象征寓意：,1,句,70/86,第二段：意义阐释，,5,句,主题句：象征寓意，,1,句,论证：,3,句,基础普通同学：,讲原因：,讲故事：,联络现实：图画作文创作标准（以小见大，把握象征寓意，个体想为群体，详细想为抽象）,基础很好同学：,五大角度：背景、事实、反方观点、原因、后果,六种伎俩：,因果、分类、定义解释、统计事实、举例、正反论证,小结：,1,句,71/86,第三段：提议办法，,4,句,结论句：,1,句,针对双方提提议：,2,句,包装结尾、展望未来：,1,句,Only in this way can we,It is that,It is high time that we,72/86,启承转合,：,启：开启观点、开篇点题,承：观点承接、正面论证,First(ly),In the first place,First and foremost,Above all,On the one hand,For one thing,Second(ly),In the second place,Besides,In addition,What is more,Furthermore,Moreover,On the other hand,For another,Third(ly),(The)Last but not(the)least,More importantly,Even worse,73/86,转：观点转折、反面论证,Conversely,Nevertheless,Unfortunately,Whereas,Yet,Instead,In/By comparison/contrast,On the contrary,合：文章结尾、合并归纳,As a result/consequence,Consequently,Accordingly,Thus,Hence,Generally/Briefly speaking,74/86,16,：,：,Directions:Study the following photos carefully and write an essay in which you should,describe the photos briefly;,interpret the social phenomenon reflected by them,give your point of view.,You should write 160-200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.(20 points),图一：把崇敬写在脸上。图二：花,300,元做个,小贝,头,。,75/86,The photos vividly depict that nowadays many people,especially,young fellows are tracing such fashion./The first one signed the name of Beckham on his left face,while the second one asked the hairdresser to copy the hair style of Beckham with about 300 yuan./Both of them are typical fans of the well-known British football playerBeckham.,76/86,This kind of social phenomenon is not entirely a coincidence.There are reasons accounting for this fashion.,Firstly,with the rapid development of society,some people feel dull and desperate about the reality,so,they desire to find some famous people as their idols.In the way,they feel satisfied with their life and have a goal to achieve.,Secondly,just,opposite,to the above,others are just fashion tracers.They barely want to show that they are keeping step with the fashion.,Thirdly,some people even dont have any special purpose but to do it as others.In their deep heart,they dont treat it as fashion but as fun.,77/86,Frankly speaking,this social phenomenon is very dangerous to the whole society.Some young men spend most of their time decorating themselves as their idols.As a result,they dont have enough time to study or work,then they are always left behind.Moreover,it is harmful to the establishment of a harmonious society.,To draw a conclusion,we dont deny that people should have their idols to admire,but in a sensible way.They can learn from what they have achieved and try to behave that way.And also parents should give proper advice to their children to form a proper outlook of the world.,78/86,书信类小作文,79/86,（一）称呼,写给机构,Dear Sir or Madam,Dear Sir/Madam,To whom it may concern,写给个人,Dear+,姓；,Dear+,名；,Dear+,职位。,80/86,（二）正文：,3,段、,7,句、,100,120,词、,3,5,关联词、,3,5,从句,第一段：,2,句,1,）自我介绍,I am a staff member from your company/corporation.,I am a freshman-sophomore-junior-senior-undergraduate,graduate from the Department of Chinese Language and,Literature of Qingdao University.,2,）写作目标：,I am writing the letter in purpose of ordering some,books/resigning from my current post/position.,81/86,第二段：,3,句,依据题目要求写出细节,如理由、要求、提议等。,第三段：,2,句,1,）表示感激（私人提议信除外）,My appreciation to you for your generous help is beyond,words./Words fail me when I want to express my sincere,gratitude to you./I take this opportunity to show my heartfelt,appreciation for the kind assistance you rendered me.,82/86,2,）期待回信,（,1,）,Iam looking forward to your reply/hearing from you soon.,（,2,）,I look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.,（,3,）,Your prompt attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.,（三）落款,/,署名,Yours sincerely,Li Ming,83/86,就这么吧,84/86,就这么我们结束了作文部分课程，希望大家能努力复习及背诵对应知识点。,莱弗赵亮：越努力，越幸运。学习主要性高过全部，你要无欲则刚，你要学会孤独，你要把自己逼出最大潜能，没有些人会为了你未来买单，你要么努力向上，要么烂在社会最底层泥淖里。这，就是生活。,85/86,作文预测请期待冲刺班精彩课程。,更多即时资料更新请关注微博莱弗赵亮,86/86,