英语作文与写字九年级下.doc

作文与写字
九年级英语（下）
总 主 编 方水清 孟继高
本册主编 高 敏
编 委 高 敏 包光荣 吕东生
詹小平 叶苏芬 邵季伟
曾惠祥 李芸惠 罗 洁
胡友华 黄如新 严中顺
陈 刚 舒国民 汪 灿
戴腊梅 李志杰 李玉娇
王定成 岑秋中 夏 萍

目 录
Unit 11 Could you please tell me where the restrooms are?
Topic 1 Ask for information politely
Topic 2 The quality of urban facilities

Unit 12 You’re supposed to shake hands.
Topic 1 Tell what you are suppose to do
Topic 2 Table manners

Unit 13 Rainy days make me sad.
Topic 1 Talk about how things affect you
Topic 2 Different opinions about the same product

Unit 14 Have you packed yet?
Topic 1 Talk about recent events
Topic 2 Talk about someone’s favorite bands/star

Unit 15 We’re trying to the manatees!
Topic 1 Debate an issue
Topic 2 Protect Environment
中考作文专项训练
一、便条
二、通知
三、日记
四、E-mail
五、发言稿
六、倡议书
七、记叙文
八、议论文
九、说明文

Unit 11 Could you please tell me where the restrooms are ?
Topic 1 Ask for information politely
【知识锦囊】

1、Excuse me . Could you please tell me … 打扰一下，请告诉我……好吗？
eg. Excuse me .Could you please tell me where the NO.1 Middle School is？
打扰一下，请告诉我第一中学在哪儿好吗？
2、There is …… 有……
eg. There is a supermarket on the third floor . 有一家超市在三楼。
3、Go out the front door and turn right. 从前门出去，并向右拐。
eg. Go out the front door and turn right，you’ll see a book store.
从前门出去，并向右拐,你就会看见一家书店。
【名师点睛】（ 附：此版面习作与教师点评部分中栏分，且习作部分用浅色的四线三格打印，后面单元此版块要求相同。）
习作要求：
购物中心里的商品种类繁多，顾客更是络绎不绝。约翰逊先生想要买些食物和衣服，但初次光临，对购物中心不熟悉，他向入口处的服务员咨询。假如你就是这名服务员，请你根据下图为约翰逊先生指路。

学生习作：
Mr. Johnson：Excuse me . ①Could you please tell me where can I buy some food？
Clerk：Sure. You can buy food on the first floor. First，walk straight，then turn right and walk to the third store on your left. You can see the food store.
Mr. Johnson：Thanks. ②By the way, can you tell me ③where is the clothing store？
Clerk：Of course. The men's clothing store is on the third floor. You can take the escalator to the third floor. You”ll see the toy store first and ④then turn to left. Walk to the second store on your right. It's between the women's clothing store and the kids' clothing store. You'll never miss it.
Mr. Johnson：Thanks a lot.
ClerkYou’re welcome.⑤ Have a good time here. Good bye.
Mr. Johnson：Bye.
教师点评
①处成功运用了本话题中的重要句型Could you please tell me…，意为：请告诉我……好吗？表明作者的基本功及其扎实。
②处By the way使用自然地道，使对话内容衔接紧凑。
③处改为where the clothing store is
④处turn to left改为turn left, 意为：向左拐。
⑤处表祝愿的句子，充分体现出店员热情礼貌的良好品质。
【佳文共赏】下面是你（张华）写信Tony告诉来你家的路线。

路线：出机场乘出租车沿解放街走，穿过人民街、青年街和东风街，看到一个大超市时向左拐，然后沿着文峰街走到人民公园向右拐。沿南京街走大约300米，你家就在左边。
Dear Tony,
I know you are arriving next Sunday. Let me tell you the way to my home. Take a taxi from the airport. Go along Jiefang Street and then go through Renmin Street, Qingnian Street and Dongfeng Street. When you see a big supermarket， turn left, and then go down Wenfeng street and turn right at the People's Park. Go down Nanjing Street for about 300 meters and my home is on your left. You can't miss it.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【美文临摹】
正文：
Could you please tell me where there’s a good place to eat?
Do you know if there are any public restrooms around here?
Take the escalator to the second floor and turn right.
There’s always something happening.
Is that a good place to hang out?
临摹：

【小试身手】
小明有两张下周在Hongqi Theater举行的演唱会门票，他希望刚搬到赤峰的好友Rob一块儿去，并写信告诉他去Hongqi Theater的路线，请你根据下面的图示，完成刘明的信件。

Dear Rob,
Are you free next Sunday? There will be a concert in Hongqi Theater. I have two tickets. I hope you can go with me. Let me tell you how to get there.

I’ll meet you at the gate of Hongqi Theater.
Yours,
Liu Ming

Topic 2 The quality of urban facilities
【知识锦囊】
1、Do you know if … 你知道是否……
eg. Do you know if there are any public restrooms around here?
你知道这儿周边是否有公共休息室？
2、Why don’t you/we do sth.你们/我们为什么不做……呢？
eg. Why don’t you go to Guilin on vacation ?
你们为什么不去桂林度假呢？
3、… is a good place for sb. to do sth.对于某人来说……
是做某事的好地方。
eg. Mountain Lu is a good place for me to spend my summer holiday.
对于我来说庐山是个过暑假的好地方。
【名师点睛】
习作要求
2010年的广州亚运会给世界各地的人们留下了深刻的印象。请根据下面的英文提示，为广州月光旅行社写一则英文海报，吸引更多的外国游客来广州观光旅游。
要点提示：
1、Geographical information: the capital of Guangdon9 Province; in the south of China
2、Places of interest: Yuexiu Park( the largest park in Guangzhou); the Stone Statue of the Five Rams (the symbol of Guangzhou); Baiyun Shan：rich in natural resources, many people visit it during the Double Ninth Festival（重阳节）
3、Telephone： [phone]
学生习作
Welcome to Guangzhou
Hello, everyone !
Welcome to Guangzhou! Guangzhou, the capital of Guangdong Province, is located① in the south China. It has a lot of famous places of interest.
Yuexiu Park, which is the largest park in Guangzhou, is famous in China. There is the Stone Statue of the Five Rams, the symbol of Guangzhou. You'd better go and have a look at it．
Baiyun Shan is also a great place for visitors. It is rich in natural resources. Local people like to climb it during the Double Ninth Festival. You will ②sure have a good time. Please call us at 020-88899999 and start planning your trip!
Moonlight Travel Agency
教师点评
1. 总体评价；作者介绍游客比较感兴趣的名胜古迹的信息时详略得当，起到了吸引他人注意的作用。同时能用准确的语言、正确的时态把海报信息写得通畅、流利实物一篇难得的学生佳作。

2. 精彩亮点：作者恰当地运用了定语从句，如：Yuexiu Park, which is the largest park in Guangzhou, is famous in China.（越秀公园是广州最大的公园，它在中国很有名。）；同时准确地运用了一些短语，如：places of interest（名胜古迹）、have a look at （看一看……）、have a good time（玩得开心）等使文章语言丰富多样，为文章增色不少。
3. 妙笔回春：① in the south China 改为in the south of China,意为“在中国的南部”。②sure改为surely,因为此处应该用副词修饰后面的动词短语。

【佳文共赏】
请欣赏下面这篇介绍关于伦敦的地理位置、名胜古迹以及你能在那里进行的各种活动的小短文。
Welcome to London
Hello, everyone, welcome to London.
London is the capital of the UK. It's one of the most important cities in the world. It's in the southeast of England and is on the River Thames. It's famous for Big Ben and Buckingham Palace.
There are many interesting activities you can do here. The River Thames is a beautiful river on which many boats and ships come and go. Many visitors go on boat trips there.
【美文临摹】
Can you tell me where there’s a good place to eat?
You can learn all about the history of computers, as well as learn about science.
Water town is a great place for the family to take a vacation.
While the children have fun, parents can take dance lessons on the beach .
Teenagers love the sports Museum and kids enjoy the science Museum.

【小试身手】
某英语报社正在举行征文活动，主题是关于地理名胜。请你根据下面要点提示写一篇关于喜马拉雅山的文章，向该英文报社投稿。

Name
the Himalayas
Location（位置）
lie in many countries such as India，Nepal and China
Appearance
（外观）
the tops are covered with snow；the highest mountain is 8,848 meters high；2,400 kilometers long and 200-300 kilometers
wide
Value(评价)
…

Unit 12 You’re supposed to shake hands.
Topic 1 Tell what you are suppose to do
【知识锦囊 】
1、You are supposed to do… 你应该做……
eg . You are supposed to say sorry when you do something wrong.
当你做错某事时，你应该说对不起。
2、You should do…你应该做……
eg .You should arrive on time if you attend a meeting.
如果你出席一个会议，你应该按时到达。
3、It’s important (for sb.) to do… (对某人来说)做……是重要的
eg .It’s very important for us to learn English well.
对于我们来说学好英语很重要。
【名师点睛】
习作要求
北京每年都有许多游客，这些游客中有不少来自日本、朝鲜、巴西及美国的外宾。如果你要同这些人认识，谈谈你如何去做。要求词数不少于60。
学生习作
Lots of foreigners visit Beijing every year. As a middle school student of Beijing, ①we are supposed to know what to do when we meet them for the first time.
We should bow when we meet ②Japan people. ③ Also we are supposed to bow when we meet Koreans. We should kiss when we meet Brazilians. ③If you meet Americans, you are supposed to shake hands.
I think ④it’s important for us to know more about customs of different countries.
教师点评
① 处恰当地运用了本课时中的重要句型be supposed to do sth.(意为：应该做某事)；同时what to do（“特殊疑问词+不定式”作宾语成分）用得很准确，为一大亮点。
② 处改为Japanese,意为“日本人”。
③also在此处将前后两句衔接地很紧凑，使语言更充实而不空洞。
④处用条件状语从句表达与上文内容意思类似的句子，使文章的句式更丰富、灵活。
⑤为固定句式（It is +adj.+ for sb.+ to do sth.意为：对于某人来说做某事怎么样。）,运用得恰当有力，充分展示了作者扎实的语言功底。
【佳文共赏】 假如你是一名即将去美国学习的交换生，如果你能了解以下这些礼仪，你会在那里学习和生活地更愉快。
In America, it’s important for you to arrive on time. So if you’re invited to someone’s party for 7:30 , you should arrive at 7:30. You are supposed to shake hands when you meet someone for the first time. At the same time, you should wear suitable clothes on every occasion. For most informal dinners, you should wear comfortable, casual clothes. For example, you should wear a T-shirt and Jeans instead of a dress when the party is a barbecue. So I think you had better ask what you are supposed to wear before you go to a party.
I believe you’ll have a good time if you learn more about American’s customs.
[美文临摹]
You should have asked what you were supposed to wear.
Where I’m from, we’re pretty relaxed about time.
Spending time with family and friends is very important to us.
In Switzerland, it’s very important to be on time.
We never visit a friend’s house without calling first.
We usually plan to do something interesting, or go somewhere together.

【小试身手】守时是一个好习惯，无论在学习、工作还是平时的日常生活中，我们都应该做一个守时守信的人。请你以Punctuality is a good habit为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。内容提示：
1、 守时的人能取得他人的信任；
2、 经常地不守时，你会变得越来越懒惰；
3、 应该努力成为一个永远守时的人。

Topic 2 Table manners
【知识锦囊 】
要求相同。）
1、It’s polite to do…做……是礼貌的。
eg .It’s polite to give a seat to old people on a bus.
在公共汽车上给老人让座是礼貌的。
2、It’s rude to do… 做……是粗鲁的。
eg .It’s rude to point anyone with your chopsticks.
用筷子指着任何人都是粗鲁的。
3、You shouldn’t do… 你不应该做……
eg .You should’t be late again.
你不应该又迟到。
【名师点睛】
习作要求：
假如你叫李飞，你的笔友汤姆，作为一名交换生要来到中国学习一段时间，他想要你帮他介绍一下中国的一些风俗习惯，主要包括以下这些方面：
①Greetings;
②Eating meals with other people;
③Attending party. A clock or a watch
学生习作：
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear that you can come to China. Our China is a country with a long history，so there’re many customs in it.
Firstly，you are supposed to ①shake hand when you meet someone for the first time．Secondly ，when you eat dinner with other people, ③it’s rude to point anyone with your chopsticks.
Besides, if you＇re going tｏ a party, it’s polite to arrive at the party on time, or a few minutes’ late．You are not supposed to give a clock or a watch to your friends as a present , because it means “②dead” in Chinese. “When in Rome, do as the Romans do.”
I hope you can have a good time in China.
Yours
Li Fei
教师点评
1、总体评价；作者能够准确、完整地表达出习作要求中的内容，并能够恰当地运用本话题中的重要句型和一些优美的词句将文章内容写得通畅、流利，确为一篇典范之作。
2、 精彩亮点：作者成功地运用了firstly、secondly、besides等词，使文章脉络清晰，层次分明;并恰到好处地运用了谚语“When in Rome, do as the Romans do.”(入乡随俗。)使语言表达更加丰富多彩。
3、 妙笔回春：①处改为shake hands,为固定短语，意为“握手”； ②处改为death,为名词，意为“死亡”。
【佳文共赏】
作为一名中国人，我们应该了解一些西方国家的餐桌礼仪。下面是一篇关于你出席西方晚宴时要注意的礼节。
If you go to a formal western dinner party for the first time, you’d better know about western table manners. It’s polite to follow them.
When you sit down at the table, take your napkin and put it on your lap. The dinner always starts with a small dish. When you start eating, you are supposed to keep the fork in your right hand. If you use your knife, then put the fork in your left hand. It’s polite to eat up the food on your plate. At the same time, you should speak quietly and smile a lot at table. When you drink to someone, you had better raise your glass and take only a sip. Remember not to drink too much. If you can’t remember these rules, just do as other people do.
[美文临摹]
In Brazil, you should wipe your mouth with your napkin every time you take a drink .
You shouldn’t point at anyone with your chopsticks.
The most thing you need to know is that you’re not supposed to talk when you’re eating dinner.
They go out of their way to make me feel at home. I’m gradually getting used to things and don’t find them so strange any more.
Hope you’re having a good school year.

【小试身手】
假如你是王刚，最近收到即将来到中国的美国笔友David的电子邮件，他想了解一些中西方文化习俗的差异。请根据下列信息给David回复电子邮件。

中西方文化习俗对比

中国
西方
见面时谈论的话题
可以谈论很多话题，甚至包括年龄、薪水
谈论的话题常为天气或体育运动
名字
姓氏在前，名字在后
名字在前，姓氏在后
就餐用具
筷子
刀和叉
接受礼物的方式
不马上打开礼物，要等客人离开后才打开礼物
当场打开礼物并向对方表示感谢
注意：1、电子邮件的开头和结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数。
2、词数90左右。
3、参考词汇：薪水 salary n. 接受礼物 accept a gift 打开礼物unwrap a gift

To:davidbrown@
From:wanggang123@
Subject: Chinese Customs
Date:11/11 8:30pm
Dear David,
I am glad to know you are coming to China. Now let me tell you something about the differences between Chinese customs and western customs.

Yours,
Wang Gang

Unit 13 Rainy days make me sad.
Topic 1 Talk about how things affect you
【知识锦囊】
1、Doing sth. makes sb. angry/sad/happy…
做某事使某人生气/伤心/快乐……
eg. Listening to music often makes me relaxed.
听音乐经常使我放松。
2、sb./sth. makes sb. do sth./adj. 某人/物使某人做某事/怎么样。
eg .Loud music always makes me want to dance.
高声的音乐总是让我想跳舞。
3、How do you feel about… 你对……看法如何？
eg. ——How do you feel about smoking?
——It makes me angry.
——你对吸烟的看法如何？
——它让我生气。
【名师点睛】
1、习作要求：
根据下表的提示写一篇80词左右的短文表明自己的见解。

things
opinions
pollution
angry
noise
tense
heavy traffic
annoy