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12月英语四级考前密押作文：每天开支变化情况
12月英语四级考前密押作文二十八:每天开支变化情况
    For this part, you are required to write a composition about 120 words on the topic: Changes in People’s Daily Expenses. Your composition should be written on the following table and Chinese given below.
    1. 描述图表中人们每天开支变化情况
    2. 请说明发生这些变化的原因
    3. 结合图表对未来作出合理的预测 Year
    Item
    1995
    1996
    1997
    1998
    1999
    Food
    66%
    61%
    48%
    41%
    36%
    Clothing
    9%
    10%
    12%
    15%
    18%
    Recreation
    4%
    5%
    8%
    9%
    11%
    Others
    21%
    24%
    32%
    35%
    35%
    Total
    100%
    100%
    100%
    100%
    100%
    Changes in People’s Daily Expenses.
What is shown in the table above indicates that dramatic changes have taken place in the people’s daily expenses from 1995 to 1999. The expenses on food have declined by 30% while those on clothing and recreation have increased respectively by 9% and 7% . The statistics of rise and fall seem to exist in isolation but closely related to one another .
    There are two factors accounting for these changes. Development in economy is an essential one in the five years. The increased income resulting from economic growth plays an important part in the less expense on food. Hence, a small percentage of total income is enough to cover food expense. Another one is the changes in life style. When food presents no worry to the average, people begin to focus more of interest on handsome appearance and happy leisure time . As a result of such a shift, spending on clothing and recreation increases year after year.
    From the analyses made above, we may come to the conclusion that people’s living standards have been constantly improved between 1995 and 1999. With the further growth in economy and more changes in life style, the tendency indicated in the table will continue in the better direction .
    点评:该预测题属于图表作文写作,与社会生活密切相关,与1991年6月份四级考试人们饮食结构的变化图表作文写作类似。根据四级图表作文命题规律,第一段描述人们1995到1999年日常开支所发生的巨大变化;第二段分析产生变化的原因;最后一段依据图表所示变化作出了合乎逻辑的预测。文章紧扣主题,条理清楚,语言连贯,表述准确规范,结论合理
:运动会开幕词
    Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition about an opening speech. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
    1. 表明你的身份和事件
    2. 对到场领导老师的支持予以感谢并阐述体育运动所带给大家的好处
    3. 宣布运动会开幕并预祝此次运动会取得成功.
    An Opening Speech
    Ladies and Gentlemen,
    Good morning! I am Oscar, the spokesman of the Students’ Union. On behalf of the Students’ Union, the main organizer of today’s sports meeting, I welcome you all to the beautiful stadium. After two months’ preparation, our annual sports meeting is held on schedule.
    Thanks to the support and help from our school leaders and teachers. Though they have many school responsibilities, they have taken time off to take part in our sports activities. Let’s give them a big hand. Through sports, we can not only develop our physical prowess, but also promote social and emotional skills, and even intellectual skills, which will matter in our future lives substantially. So hope everybody here cherish this opportunity and enjoy
    At last, best wishes for the success of the sports meeting and best wishes for the good results of our athletes. It is my pleasure to announce the open of the sports meeting. Thank you and good luck!
    点评:本预测题是一篇开幕词,与2005年1月竞选学生会主席演说词相仿,运动会也是在校大学生校园生活必不可少的一部分,是在校生比较熟悉的话题,有话可说,便于发挥。
1:教学开展形式
    Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Lectures or Discussions. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.
    1. 一些学生赞成讲座式教学
    2. 另一些学生偏爱讨论式教学
    3. 你的看法
    Lectures and Discussions
    There is a heated debate over the role of lectures and discussions in the classroom. Some people believe that lectures can help students learn more quickly. In contrast, others hold that discussions can stimulate students to learn by themselves.
    Those who hold the first opinion suggest that students attend more lectures. In their view, by giving lectures teachers help students master the knowledge they’ve accumulated over years of study and research. However, others think that in a discussion, the teacher usually guides the students instead of dominating them. They argue that to get involved in a discussion, students have to develop their ability to analyze problems
    In my opinion, I stand on the side of neither idea. First of all, either method has its disadvantages. Furthermore, each student has his or her preference. Thirdly, lectures ate preferable to discussions in the teaching of science subjects, and on the contrary, discussions are preferable to lectures in studying the humanities. Therefore, we should adopt different teaching methods according to different subjects.
    点评:2007年12月考查了大学生选修课话题,再次证明四级作文命题自2003年以后侧重于校园生活话题,该预测与校园生活联系紧密,为四级作文命题经常关注的话题。本文属于对比观点加作者态度型的议论文写作
 :对网络教育的看法
    Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: My View on Online Education.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.
    1. 目前网络教育形成热潮
    2. 你认为这股热潮形成的原因
    3. 你对网络教育的评价
    My View on Online Education.
    Being online is no longer something new or fresh in our life. To some extent, it has become part of our daily life. We can do a lot of things online, such as searching for information and communicating with friends far away. But recently another helpful online activity has become very “in”. That is online education.
    Why could online education be so popular within such a short period of time? Among other reasons, the quick development of the Internet should be an essential one, which makes all our dreams of attending class in the distance possible. Another underlying reason is the quick development of both society and technology. Today, modern science and technology is developing with fantastic speed. To catch up with this development we all feel an urgent and strong desire to study. However, due to the great pace of modern society, many people are too busy to study full time at school. Online education just comes to their
    Personally, I appreciate this new form of education. It’s indeed a helpful complement to the traditional educational means. It can provide different learners with more flexible and versatile ways of learning. Best of all, with online education, we can stick to our jobs and at the same time study and absorb the latest knowledge.
    点评:英特网的迅速发展改变了人们的生活和学习、工作方式,现代生活节奏快工作忙导致人们没时间全日制的学习,网络和远程教育正好满足了人们的学习需要,许多大学生利用因特网学习知识,它成为传统教学的有益补充。本预测题贴近时代,也与大学生校园生活相关,值得重视。
:环境污染
    Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Pollution: An Increasing Concern in China You should write at least120 words following the outline below in Chinese.
    1. 中国的污染的现状
    2. 造成污染的原因
    3. 解决的办法
    Pollution: An Increasing Concern in China
    It is reported that ten big cities in China are being ranked among the top twenty cities with the highest pollution index in the world. This means it is high time we did something to bring the situation under control.
    Many factors are contributing to the deteriorating situation: industrial wastes pumped into the air, the lakes and rivers; a increasing number of automobiles crowding into the streets; the widespread use of plastic bags etc.
    To my view, stiffer laws and regulations must be implemented to check pollution. Industries that release wastes without permission should be heavily fined. Cars should be equipped to minimize the exhaust they release into the air. And the use of plastic bags and disposable meal boxes should be banned. What’s more, the media should play an important role in implanting a sense of environmental consciousness into people’s
    If everybody works toward a common goal of making the environment better, we can create a cleaner and lovelier world for us and for the coming generation.
    点评:该预测题为社会热点话题,也是四级命题作文经常关注的环境问题,值得引起重视。本文属于解释性说明文的写作,主题是“污染”。
1不劳就无获
    Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: No pains,no gains You should write at least120 words following the outline below in Chinese.
    1. 为什么说“不劳就无获”
    2. 试举例说明
    No pains, no gains
    Nearly every civilization has its own equivalent to the proverb “ No pains, no gains.” It means that nothing can be gained without painstaking efforts and that no knowledge or skill can be acquired without sweat or toil.
    You don’t have to look very far too prove the truth of the proverb. Darwin’s great discovery was not the work of a moment but was preceded by years of patient, arduous observation. Mozart was not an accomplished pianist at the age of eight as the result of watching countless hours of TV. Nor did Edison make himself the greatest inventor in the modern world by spending his spare time on going to parties or bars. His words “Genius is 99 percent perspiration and one percent inspiration ,reveals the secret of thousands of successful men and women. All accomplishments and success come from sustained
    Although it is an old saying,“ no pains no gains” has its profound and realistic significance in our college studies. To acquire knowledge in a particular field and to attain any academic goals, great exertion and persistent effort are undoubtedly required because we all know that “No pains, no gains.”
    点评:该预测题与四级1997年1月作文命题类似,属于论证道理性的解释性说明文写作,已有多年未考,值得关注。根据此类作文命题规律,第一段对这一格言所蕴涵的意义做了解释和界定。第二段举例说明了其哲理性;最后一段说明它的现实意义,重述主题。
 :求职信
    Directions: Suppose you were Li Ming. You want to apply for a job as a personal secretary to the General Manager of a trading company. Write a letter to the Human Resources Department of the company . You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below.
    1. 简要介绍自己并说明应征该职位
    2. 告知公司为什么对此感兴趣
    3. 简述你为何是合适人选
    An Application Letter
    Dear Sir or Madam,
    I am Li Ming, a would-be graduate from Ninjing University. My major is English. Through the job advertisement, I have learned that you are hunting a qualified individual for a personal secretary to the General Manager of your esteemed company. I am fully convinced that I am the right person for the
    I realize that my future boss is extremely busy. However, it is exactly the challenge of my prospective position that attracts me. I am sure that my honesty, carefulness, patience, expertise, commitment and extensive knowledge will produce an excellent job performance.
    Next month, I am going to graduate from the English Department of Nanjing University, and I have over two years of secretarial experience. I have enclosed the details of my academic record, skills, and language abilities. Thank you for your time in considering my application.
    Yours Sincerely,
    Li Ming
    点评:本文属于书信体应用文,要求写一封求职信。找工作是四级命题作文关注的话题之一,2001年1月和1995年6月都考查了求职面试的话题,本预测题要求写一封求职信,既与求职话题相关,又是书信体作文,符合四级作文命题思路和考查重点。
  :车辆禁止驶入校园
    Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
    1. 现在某些高校校园禁止车辆驶入,
    2. 这种规定的考虑,
    3. 谈谈你的看法。
    Should cars be allowed into College Campus?
    With the rapid development of our national economy, private cars have become in large number; of course, quite a few cars are heavily driven into College C
    In a significant way, these cars do not take up students’ places for study, but actually affect their daily life and study-- for instance, this crowd of cars may make noise and emit filthy gas to choke us to death. And the campus is jammed with lines of cars and seems to be parking lot instead of an academic institute. So cars have been strictly prohibited into many College Campuses. It seems that this is not convenience to some persons, indeed, but this is for the sake of our safety. Thus when someone enjoys convenience from modern tools, don't forget that it is dangerous to the students in the College Campus. Therefore, I agree that cars are not allowed into College Campus.
    By and large, with the price of cars falling significantly, cars will enter average families, and most Chinese will enjoy a luxurious lifestyle in their life. However, they are still prohibited to drive their cars into College Campus, which , I think, is a hard truth in the eyes of most people.
    点评:随着人们物质生活的提高,私家车发展迅猛,越来越多的私家车停放在校园,由此产生了一些问题,如空间被占、噪音污染、环境污染等,为此许多学校禁止车辆驶入校园,本预测题与2006年1月名校校园是否对外开放相仿,值得关注。

四级考前作文：博客
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Blog. You should write at least 120 words based on the chart and outline given below:
    下图是2007年1-10月中国博客服务人均月度有效浏览时间及增长率,描述变化,说明原因。
    Blog
    This histogram shows the number of people using blog services from January to October in 2007. From it we can see that the number of users increased monthly from January to August, except February. After two peak months, July and August, the number dropped slightly in September, while in October it picked up again.
    Possible reasons for these changes are first, in February Chinese people celebrated the most important festival——Chinese New Year. This means more people spent more time with their families and friends, and therefore they didn’t have as much time for surfing online. Secondly, college students are the main users of blog services. While in July and August, they had summer holidays, which enabled them to have more spare time reading and writing blogs. Thirdly, with improvements of blog services and the influence of some “star bloggers”, most of whom are celebrities, blogs are becoming an important way for people to express themselves and communicate with others. So more and more people are starting to use these services, which help explain the overall increase shown here.
    点评:这是一篇图表题。 可以看出,整体呈增长趋势。但是,二月和九月有所下降。所以,分析的时候要照顾各个方面。

写作必背谚语
1.Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。
    2.God helps those who help themselves.天助自助者
    3.Easier said than done.说起来容易做起来难。
    4.Where there is a will,there is a way.有志者事竟成。
    4.Where there is a will,there is a way.有志者事竟成。
    5.One false step will make a great difference.失之毫厘,谬之千里。
    6.Slow and steady wins the race.稳扎稳打无往而不胜。
    7.A fall into the pit, a gain in your wit.吃一堑,长一智。
    8.Experience is the mother of wisdom.实践出真知。
    9.All work and no play makes jack a dull boy.只工作不休息,聪明孩子也变傻。
    10.Beauty without virtue is a rose without fragrance.无德之美犹如没有香味的玫瑰,徒有其表。
    11.More hasty,less speed.欲速则不达。
    12.It's never too old to learn.活到老,学到老。
    13.All that glitters is not gold.闪光的未必都是金子。
    14.A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.千里之行始于足下。
    15.Look before you leap.三思而后行。
    16.Rome was n