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高三作文指导与讲评：
本期主题：图片作文
三年的高中即将结束。请你以“I will remember my school life forever”为题，为英语校刊投稿。注意：文章应包括下面四幅图的内容；词数不少于120；文章的开头已为你写出。

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范文：
After the College Entrance Examination , the three-year school life will come to an end. It’s hard to say goodbye to my school, teachers and friends ,because I have an unforgettable time here.
Small as/though our school is, it is very beautiful，with trees，gardens，modern buildings and a large playground on the campus. The national flag at the gate greets (迎接，问候)me every day in the morning，making me feel great．
I also enjoy attending classes，listening attentively to the teachers or having discussions with my classmates. Everyone actively participates in all the activities and every class is meaningful．
Teachers in our school are very helpful．They are not only experienced and knowledgeable，but also patient and understanding. Whenever I have difficulty with my study or life, my teachers are always there ,ready to lend a hand.
We also have colorful sports activities at schoo1. In addition to PE classes，we have more choices 1ike playing basketball, soccer，table tennis，as well as swimming.
In a word, everything here will be in my heart forever.
I.注意以下表达：
1.各种各样的户外活动；various outdoor activities / a variety of / varieties of / all kinds of
2.全神贯注做什么 concentrate on (doing ) sth / be devoted to (doing) sth / be buried in (doing) sth /devote oneself to (doing ) sth/ bury oneself in (doing ) sth /
3.忙于做某事：be busy doing sth / be busy with sth / be occupied in doing sth / be occupied with sth / be engaged in doing sth 4. 在日常生活中 in our daily life
5. 做---对我们来说是重要的it is impotant/ vital /essential for us to do sth
6. respect each other相互尊重 have interest in their studies 对… 感兴趣 lose interest in 对--- 失去兴趣organize various activities 组织各种各样的活动
7offer our helpful hands when someone is in trouble.，当他人在困境中，我们要伸出援助之手
8.get rid of some bad habits, 改掉一些坏习惯kick the bad habit of doing sth
8.Don`t be late for school不迟到 never throw rubbish at random不乱扔垃圾 =randomly
never spit in public 不在公共场合吐痰。
9 concentrate on their study 专心学习 gain rich experience 获得丰富的经验
10.建成一个和谐的校园do as much as we can to build our school into a harmonious campus,
11同学们的观点不同如下Opinions vary from student to student as follows
12每个人都有优点和缺点everyone has strengths as well as weaknesses.
13. develop a friendship 建立友谊 top students 尖子生a civilized student 一个文明的学生
14.gain self-confidence 获得自信 benefits us a lot 让我们获益匪浅
15..learn from each other相互学习 make progress together. 共同进步
16. 40.take up too much time and energy花费太多的时间和精力 on the campus 在校园里
17 make their dreams come true 让你梦想成真 realize my dream实现我的梦想
18.form/get into /develop the habit of doing 养成做…的习惯
have enough rest and sleep 有充足的休息和睡眠
19.make trouble捣乱，制造麻烦 citizens 市民 netizen 网民
20. feel unfair. 感到不公平fully develop their interests and hobbies.充分发展自己的兴趣和爱好
21. becurious about 对…感到好奇 get in touch with society接触社会
22．make comparisons.进行比较 keep it as a secret保密.break school rules 破坏班规
23. release their stress释放压力 seek higher incomes.寻求更高的收入
24.high social status社会地位高 be busy with study 忙于学习
25． healthy and energetic健康且精力充沛 keep healty=keep fit 保持健康
26 affect their studies and health 影响学习 =have an effect on their studies and health
27．participate in social activities(社会活动) Join in / take part in +活动
28． spread the Chinese traditional civilization传播中国传统文化（文明） Enrich our daily life .丰富我们的日常生in proper ways 用合适的方式 in a proper way 用一种合适的方式
29．Neglect/ignore others’ health 忽视健康 feel lonely（感到孤独）
30do part-time jobs做兼职 shop assistants（售货员）typists（打字员 waiters服务员salesmen推销员31．earn money on their own（靠自己挣钱） get social experience（获得社会经验）
32．reduce their parents’ burden /relieve one`s burden / release one`s load减轻压力
33.develop personal abilities开发个人能力make their lives more colorful使人生更加多姿多彩
34.keep a balance between study and work. 劳逸结合lack the ability to control themselves缺乏自控能力）
35．put more effort into their studies把更多的精力用在学业上
36.contribute to your development 有利于你的发展grasp the chance =seize the opportunity 抓住这次机会
默写 目的： 会写关于校园生活的一类作文
1.各种各样的户外活动；v________ outdoor activities / a __________of / __________of / all _______of
2.全神贯注做什么 c__________ on (doing ) sth / be d__________ ___ (doing) sth / be b_________ ___ (doing) sth /d________oneself ____ (doing ) sth/ b___________oneself____________ (doing ) sth /
3.忙于做某事：be busy doing sth / be busy ______sth / be occupied _______doing sth / be occupied ______sth / be engaged ________doing sth 4. 在日常生活中 ______________________________
5. 做---对我们来说是重要的it is i___________/ v__________ /e______________ for us to do sth
6.相互尊重_____________对… 感兴趣_____________对--- 失去兴趣_______________________________组织各种各样的活动____________________________________
7当他人在困境中，我们要伸出援助之手_________________
8 改掉一些坏习惯g_____ _____ _____/k____________the bad habit of doing sth
8.Don`t ____ ______ ___school不迟到 never throw rubbish______ _______不乱扔垃圾 =__________
never _______ ______ __________不在公共场合吐痰。
9 c__________ _______ their studies 专心学习 ______________________获得丰富的经验
10.尽力建成一个和谐的校园do as much as we can to ________our school_________ a ________ _____
11同学们的观点不同如下Opinions________________________________________________
12每个人都有优点和缺点everyone has s______________as well as w__________________
13. 建立友谊 ________________尖子生_________________一个文明的学生_______________
14.获得自信______________________让我们获益匪浅______________________________________
15.相互学习___________________________共同进步 ____________________________
16.花费太多的时间和精力____________________________________在校园里___________________
17让你梦想成真____________________________________实现我的梦想_______________________

18.f__________ /_________ ______ /d________ the habit of doing 养成做…的习惯
有充足的休息和睡眠_____________________________________________
19.捣乱，制造麻烦___________________市民________________网民__________________
20. 感到不公平______________.充分发展自己的兴趣和爱好_______________________________________________
21.对…感到好奇_______接触社会__________________________
22．进行比较___________________保密___________________破坏班规________________________
23.释放压力___________________________寻求更高的收入______________________
24社会地位高 ________________________忙于学习____________________________________
25健康且精力充沛____________________保持健康__________________=_____________
26影响学习 a___________________________ =have an ___________________________________
27．参加社会活动_________________________
28．传播中国传统文化（文明）_______________________________丰富我们的日常生活___________________________用些合适的方式_________________用一种合适的方式____________
29．忽视健康 n_________/i_________________ 感到孤独___________________________________
30做兼职______________（售货员）__________（打字员_________服务员_________推销员________
31．靠自己挣钱____________________获得社会经验_______________________________________
32．R_________ their parents’ b________/r_________one`s burden / r_________one`s l______减轻压力
33.开发个人能力_____________________使人生更加多姿多彩_______________________________
34.劳逸结合___________________________________缺乏自控能力___________________________________________
35．把更多的精力用在学业上 ___________________________________________________________
36.有利于你的发展_________________________________
抓住这次机会_______________________________=_______________________________________
范文默写：
1.尽管我们学校很小，但是它很美，校园里有书，花园，楼房还有操场 .
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2.大门处的国旗每天都迎接我，这让我感觉很好。
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3．我喜欢上课，专心致志地听老师讲课并且和同学们讨论问题。每个人积极参与而且每节课都有意义。__________________________________________________________________________________
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4．老师对我们帮助很大。他们不仅有经验丰富学识渊博而且耐心且理解人。无论什么时候有学习或生活上的事情，老师总会出现并帮助我们。________________________________________________
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5．我们也有多姿多彩的校园生活。除了体育活动之外，我们有更多的选择，比如：打篮球，踢足球，打乒乓球，也可以游泳。______________________________________________________________
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6．总之，我将永远记住我的学校。
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作文范文：
After the College Entrance Examination , the three-year school life will come to an end. It’s hard to say goodbye to my school, teachers and friends ,because I have an unforgettable time here.
My school is beautiful，with trees，gardens，modern buildings and a large playground. The school flag at the gate greets me every day in the morning，making me feel great．
I also enjoy attending classes，listening attentively to the teachers or having discussions with my classmates. Everyone actively participates and every class is meaningful．
Teachers in our school are very helpful．They are not only experienced and knowledgeable，but we also patient and understanding. Whenever I have problems with my study or life, my teachers are always there ,ready to lend a hand.
We also have colorful sports activities at schoo1. In addition to PE classes，we have more choices 1ike playing basketball, soccer，table tennis，as well as swimming.
In a word, everything here will be in my heart forever.
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