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留学申请书范文
Due to the comprehensiveness of China’s “reform and open” policies, economics plays an increasingly important role in the development of its global position. Though more and more companies built, management of companies cannot catch up with the development of the companies. Management is a burgeoning field in China, so I hope I can acquire more modern knowledge on management in England.
     The roots of my strong interest in business can be traced back to my childhood.  My father was among the first of China’s new breed of modern entrepreneurs. As a young girl, it was inspirational hearing about his business ventures, and meeting the varied and interesting circle of entrepreneurs. My mother was also involved in business as an accountant, helping him with simple calculations. And so it was early in my life that I hoped I, also, would someday be able to enter the realm of business.   
With the time of growing up, I preferred reading books to satisfy my curiosity. I never ceased to contemplate over the questions I encountered. Subjects on business and management became a special fascination to me and my knowledge of psychology as well as interest in this field was increasing rapidly.
      As a high school student in China, I had to concentrate on the College Entrance Examination (CEE), even so, books not related to the exams were never excluded from my life. Unfortunately when sitting in the exam in June, 2001, I was so nervous that I didn’t score well in the CEE exam. I enrolled in the department of Computer Science in Zhejiang College of Traditional Chinese Medicine. Any attempt to persuade myself to focus on my major turned out to be a failure at the beginning of my college life. After several terms, I realized that I would never be interested in being a programmer or an engineer. At that moment, I lost my direction and objectives.
    My persistence in reading saved me from the dark situation. As a matter of fact, I enjoyed reading the books included Encyclopedia American, and some books about management by Peter F.Drucker. I began to notice something interesting: Why some companies can produce more than others? Why some company can sell more than others? Why some companies can build up but others cannot when facing the same difficulties?
    With the questions in my mind, I started to read many relevant books. I was lucky to read the book “Jack: Straight from the Gut”by Jack Welch,  in Which John A. Byrne makes a clear illustration that the management is important for a company. When I was a junior, I ran a bookshop by myself near my school. I should manage not only the finance in the shop but also the employees in my shop even made some strategies to enlarge the business in my shop to hold on the run the shop. From this, my interpersonal skills and the capacity in business has been greatly developed, definitely I was increasingly interested in what I was doing. By December, 2003, I had finally determined to take business management as my career instead of IT. To accumulate more relevant knowledge, I strived to gain more practical work experience in some big companies.  
       Fortunately, as a senior, I began by conducting an internship in the Architecture Company in Zhejiang Province. Over six months, I worked as an assistant of the manager to harmonize the relationship between the different departments in this company and to draft some management system, which broadened my perspective of management conditions and business performance in different industries.  The experience showed me that management is much more important than that of I thought in big companies. After graduation, I continued my work in this company. In May, 2005, the company offered me an opportunity to participate in an training program held by a famous management school. Through in-depth discussions with teachers and students in the classes, they all encouraged me to pursue my future career in management field because of my intellectual ability and the brand new ideas I mentioned.
During the short period of training, I realized that pursuing a higher degree in management is a wise choice for me now. Lancaster, with its excellence in management, represents the perfect fit for my needs. In your challenging environment, I can build the required foundation of knowledge related to management to achieve my goals. I am firmly convinced that your admission will be my first step of success. With this in mind, I hereby submit my application, and await your favorable reply.  

出国留学如何准备申请书
PS(Personal Statement)是一个向AdmissionCommittee展示你个人风采的好机会。所以需要好好准备。　
　　有的PS是一般性的，可以用来申请很多学校。也有的学校需要学生在PS里有针对性的回答问题。　
　　在准备PS前，你必须仔细回想学校的学习生活和你过去生活的点点滴滴，把这些经历一一列举。你可从以下着手：　
　　1.你的家庭，生活，周围环境中有没有什么转折点或特殊事件影响你的人生选择和研究方向的选择。　
　　2.你有什么特殊，与众不同的经历和才能；你曾经获得过什么奖项？　
　　3。为什么你选择这个专业？你的研究经历；你的研究兴趣；你对这个研究的展望。　
　　4.你有没有很强的工作能力，沟通能力，团对合作精神和组织管理才能？这些才能如何帮助你将来的学习和研究。　
　　5.你的短期学习目标和长期事业目标。　
　　6.你曾经遇到过大的挫折和苦难吗？你是如何走过来的？　
　　7.你的个人爱好及个人特点；这些对你的学习和研究有帮助吗？　
　　8。为什么选择这个学校？　
　　9.如果你的一些成绩不理想(TOEFL，GREORGPA)，你能解释清楚为什么吗？　
　　总之，你必须非常清楚地呈明为什么你就是AdmissionCommittee要找的人。突出你的背景和资格，充分展示你的成功经历。　
　　如果有些学校需要你的PS是回答问题的，你必须对每一个问题都非常清晰，明确的回答。不能偷懒拿一篇PS申请所有的学校。事实上根据每个学校的特点和教授研究方向，有针对性地修改PS，会对你的申请帮助很大。　
　　当你回顾了你的学习生涯及罗列了众多事例后，你基本可以理出一条主线(中心思想)，这时候你可以试着下笔写firstdraft

下面是一些写作的建议。　
　　1。针对学校问题回答；每个学校对PS都会有一些特殊的要求，所以你必须有问必答。　
　　2。针对你的专业加强说明你的能力；每个专业对申请者的素质要求不同；比如，工程类的学生可能要求数学背景好，有非常强的动手和解决问题能力，你就需要有事例加强说明你这方面的能力。　
　　3.你的故事必须能打动人；你必须是unique，specialandmemorable；我们知道每一个人都是unique的，但如何把这些表达出来，是一个学问；要在几十几百几千个预选人中脱颖而出，你必须要抓住committee的心。　
　　4。不要面面俱到，但也不要放过任何一个你的最强项；不要从小学开始讲故事除非这个故事惊天动地；但如果你的GPA/TOEFL/GRE非常高，你完全可以showoff一下；如果你的论文很多，也需要在你的PS中强调一下你的研究能力和成果。　
　　5。不要堆积形容词，空洞或过份夸张；任何一个statement，你都需要简单的事例来说明；比如说：”Iamanexcellentstudentinmyclass”；Howto证明？”Iaminthedean’slistoveryears”；or“Ireceivedawardof…”　
　　6.清楚地说明你的motivationandcommitment；你的目标必须明确。　
　　7.抓住主线展开；主题不明确是一大忌。　
　　8。对自己的研究了如指掌；准确清晰地描述自己的研究；不要堆积专业名词或冲当“高手”。　
　　9。不要避免你的weakness；如果你有一些明显缺点，如GRE奇低，你可以在PS中说明原因。　
　　10.你要充分展示你的学习热情，潜力，诚实和自信心。　
　　11。展望未来，同时也要过去的经历衬托。　
　　12。平凡中的不平凡；大多数人都未必有惊人的事例，但你需要从中挖掘一些让人感兴趣的东西。　
　　13.英语流利，精炼；语法，用词准确；无spellingmistake。　
　　14。避免文章太长，使committeeboring。　
　　15.反复修改，请别人阅读；如不能感动你自己，你的朋友，也无法感动committee。　
　　16。为什么选择这个学校？每个人都会对自己的学校有荣誉感，包括committee。对他们学校的称赞绝对是有益的。　
　　Committee是有好几个members组成的，人为因素很大。除了你的硬件(GPA/TOEFL/GRE/PAPERS/RESUME)，你的软件(PSandRecommendationLetter)是唯一了解你个人的关键，所以千万忽视不得。　
　　如果你的写作有问题，我们建议你寻找优秀的文书写作机构帮助。找范文。

出国留学推荐信英文范文
Prof. Dr. 0000 
Center for Fluorescence and Spectroscopy
Department of Biochemistry and Molecular Biology
University of Maryland School of Medicine 
725 West Lombard Street, Baltimore, Maryland 21201, 
USA
[phone], FAX: [phone] 
Dear Prof. Dr. 0000 
    I take great pleasure in writing this letter of recommendation for Dr. 0000 to support his application for a postdoctoral position in your lab. Dr. 000 is an outstanding graduate student working for the M.S. degree under my supervision. In my contact with him in the University, his creativity and attitude to research work gave me deep impression. He always proposed new ideas on his research and could
resolve problems by himself, I was very satisfied with him. Dr 000 has been working on molecular luminescence research about six years. As I know, most of his researches have been concentrated on bioanalytical chemistry in his Masters work, such as protein and nucleic acids assays etc. In these fields, Dr. 000 has strong background and research ability. He has and would be published several papers in international journals. I am often interested in reading his papers in publication and discussing with him. I am very appreciated of his research ability. Dr 0000 also possesses very fine character. He is a devoted research worker. He works on weekends. He is an honest and smart, reliable and responsible person, and is very cooperative too. Based on these qualities, I believe this young man will achieve greater academic success in his future work. Therefore, I strongly support his application, and it would be greatly appreciated if you could give him your favorable consideration.
     Please feel free to contact me if I can answer any additional questions about 00000. My address is as follows:

Professor 00000

University

P. R. China

Your Sincerely