雅思作文7.5分的作文建议.doc

雅思作文7.5分，就说说作文好了~~心得+好句，哈~
我用的雅思材料（供参考）:
1 听力：（8分）
  1 剑4—7：我把真题的听力听写了两遍。第一遍是全部听写，一开始要听好几遍才能写下来一句话，而且词的单复数也好多不对，一套题就要听写好长时间。由于雅思听力很多填空，单词的准确性极为重要，尤其是单复数很难听准确，所以这样的听写有利于找到听力中的漏洞，找到一些自以为会但写不对的单词，而且单复数听也会比较准确，连读也会听的比较清楚。第一遍听下来我就写了好几本白纸了，很厚一沓~~第二遍主要听写了一下主要意思，写的也比较快。
    听力每天都要听，精听和泛听配合，我们老师让我每星期5个BBC或VOA的听（2分多钟的），每篇都写下来，然后找他对原文，找那个地方错了。如果写的困难，可以用ＶＯＡ慢速。泛听挑零碎时间听，最好不要晚上睡觉在床上听，听的睡着的话以后一听见英文就犯困。囧~~
2 王陆807 听力词汇（黄皮）全部都是要写会的单词噢~
  3  卢峭梅讲雅思听力机经

2阅读
1剑4--7
 有的同学只全部做了一遍，做多了多少会记住答案，但如果阅读不是很好，最好还是做三遍 。第一遍：成套做一遍，注意做错的题，必须找到做错的原因（注意不要留下深的印记）同时尽量控制做题时间在50分钟。把真题里不会的单词总结并背会。 第二遍：分8大题型做，如把leadings的题目都找出来，集中做一遍，把错题搞明白。8大题型其实都是在找关键词，集中练习有利于快速准确确定关键词并在文章中找到关键词。其中最难的应该是判断false 与not given的题目，需要多练习。8大题型有4个有顺序，4个没顺序。Leadings题型做题时一般取每个段落的前两句的大意，如果段落里有but however等转折词，就取最后一句的意思，而不取第一二句意思。第三遍：成套再做一遍。
 2刘洪波的阅读真经 （1—4 ）
  这个书上的文章跟雅思文章相似度很高，题出的不好，可以用来联系卡时间，文章有时间要精读。

3 写作
 雅思写作机经题源大全

这个蓝的 还有十天突破雅思写作
4 口语
 十天突破雅思口语

写作7.5分心得：
大作文的写作最重要，但是小作文也很重要，不能一直放的小作文不看，因为小作文如果写的不流畅，老是思考，不能在20分钟内写完，就会严重影响大作文的质量。写作文一定要知道换说法，一个意思同样的说法最好不要出现第二遍，这当然需要积累不同的句型和短语，比如文章后面给的写好处的句子要记得换的用哦~~~老师说大作文要得高分，倒装句、插入语、强调句、复合句和同位语至少各用一次！！一开始，我每篇作文都五种句型刻意出现一遍，到后来就用的比较熟
1把《雅思写作机经题源大全 》看了三遍，主要是记了上面的论据。上面的文章按类型分类，可以总结一下某一方面常用的搭配和句型。
    2 我的写作老师让我把新概念3的文章背了，这不是要命么。。不过我把新3上的文章都看了一遍，把觉得好的句子总结在了一个本上，然后背，尤其是快考试那几天每天背一遍，弄得很熟，所以用起来也很熟。大家一定要看啊！！！
    3 关于模板：我觉得模板还是很有用的，但不是已有书上的模板，大家都知道的那些模板和句型最好少用。因为雅思作文一共五大类，我一般练得都是两边倒的作文，自己有准备一个模板，除了问原因解决类的作文外都可以用同一个模板，所以要练得比较熟，一般写作文都要用自己的模板。不过我考试时候还是碰上了问原因类的作文，所以最好是总结两个模板就万无一失啦~~。
 4 当时老师让我基本上一天看一篇《经济学人》的文章，总结不会的单词、短语和句型，因为上面的文章都是老外写的，所以文章非常地道，好句子很多~~~
5 上强化课前看过一遍十天突破雅思写作，觉得还是很不错的，对雅思写作有了比较全面的了解。但是上面的句型和模板最好不要用了~~
 6 关于写作文：我一共写了十篇左右的大作文，小作文要每种至少练一篇吧，快考试前一个星期我用专门的雅思考试写作纸卡时间，大小作文一起一起写，写了4套。我觉得大作文不在于要练的很多，但是要刻意的改进。写完一篇文章后要自己改一遍，把看的出来的语法和单词错误改了，还要看论据合不合理再把看过的好的句型刻意套进去，然后如果有条件找个老师给改改。第一篇作文我写了一个半小时才写完，当时真是把所有能用的上的好句子和词组都尽量往里套。老师说第一篇要是半小时之内写完就是混的没好好写。尽快把能用的上的写作资料背熟，这样写作时间自然会减少，小作文必须20分钟搞定，如果你的模板和句子用的熟，大作文也会很流畅。我的雅思考试作文写了满满的2页考试纸后，又要了一张写了一半，还把小作文检查了一遍（真的检查出一个错~哈）。
 7 除此之外，我还总结了四种句型，开头句型，写好处的句型，写坏处的句型和解决问题类句型。因为所有的雅思议论文题目基本上都是要讨论一个问题的好的方面和坏的方面，所以这样的句式要准备几个（不用太多），而且确定自己背的很熟，最好是每篇文章都换的多用，达到用的灵活自如。

好句总结：
1 多用such替换the ,a . 例：Admittedly, such issue ,to some extent,has given rise to a bunch of familiar questions.（模板的第3段开头）
2 开头句型：（放在文章中间也很好的句子）
  1 As a result of constant media attention , A(A指题目话题) , once largely ignored,has come to be seen as especially valuable/significant.
  2  (The right of the media to do this )is rarely disputed, but (the way in which it does this )often comes under withering critism. (括号里可以换)
  3 As our lives are saturated with the flood of (advertisements) ,no one can avoid being influenced by ads.(ads 错的，不能用简写哦~)
  4 (Bad traffic and increasing pollution) are thorny issues challenging every major city in the globe.（in the globe全世界）
  5 The issue of  A  is a complex and sensitive one . What lies behind …..? (问原因类)
  6 After years in the wilderness , the term “ A ” seems posied to make a comeback.(和第一句意思比较像)
3 好处句型！！
1 Nothing can be compared with sb/sth ~~(新3的哦，推荐)
2  A  exert a positive impact on ….
3  A can an effective way to (help)……(简单但好用)
4  Few things can be more （impressive）than ….that…  (新3的哦，推荐)
5  play a pivotal role in …
6  benefit from ../ profit from…一般
7  promot the development of ..
8  A is the cornerstone of …
9  remove the barrier for ..
10 raise one’s awareness of …常用
11 enable sb to do …
12 sb is the ultimate beneficiary  （sb是。。的最终受益者，社会问题类说人们应该自己也承担责任用）
13 consolidates its status as the ..
14 get a clear perspective of ..
15 give a boost to ..
16 A is an indispensable part of B
17 A is irreplaceable tp B
18 The signigicant of A to B can never be ingored
19 A is the key ingredient to B~~
20 A made it possibe for sb to…
21 A exert a peculiar fascination on a great many people . (新3的哦，推荐)

 find it impossible to resist the temptation  to do ….
22 Needless to say / Indeed ,……（可以放在任一句开头，很好用哦~）
23  develop an unshakable faith in …
24 have a reputation of ..
25 Nothing can catch them for …
26 make a contribution to  (也可作写坏处的句子 the city make its own contribution to noise)
27 build  bridges between
28 特别的
   Improve one’s physical and psychological wellbeing /soundness 身体心理健康
   optimise people’s living standards 提高人们生活水平
   eradicate poverty 消除贫困
   It’s not A that are important ,but B
   Satisfy basic (human) needs 满足要求
   Ease the tension and conflicts between alleviate the problem of  消除冲突和紧张
   Be fully aware of the consequences
   The impact of （sporting activities） goes far beyond the bounds of (leisure and recreation.)
3 坏处的句型
1 drive up the crime rate ..
2 widen the gap between A
3 pose a (direct) threat to …
4 stifle creativity
5 diminish individual’s leisure time…
6 spin out of control
7 cause(creat) tension and conflicts between…
8 exert(have) detrimental/negative/adverse  influence（impact）upon/on
9 is markly incompatible with…与。。不协调
10 be afflicted with …
11 deprive one of sth
12 sth is the root cause of …
13 be saturated with sth
14 at the expense of ….
15 be confronted with sth
16 run contrary to …
17 erode the national identity
18 pose a dilemma for
19 is an vicious circle
20 hamper (scientific) progress
21 there is  a yawning gap between
22 pose a devastating problem
23 the reputation is ruined
24 A is a complete failure
25 Things can go wrong on a big scale
26 sth is always faced with a difficult task /problem
27 It is impossible to
28 have (little) difficulties in doing
29pay the price for (fame)
30 (pollution) is the price we pay for( overpopulated ,over industrialized planet )
31 people seem to fail to take into account the fact that ….好句！！
32 lead to some unfavorable results
33 sacrifice ….for …
34 There  is a  major concern  over  t he  world  about ….
 35 give rise to a bunch of familiar questions
36This is compounded by the fact that …
37 the problem of ( information overloaded ) exacerbated by (the growth …)
38 The problem , however , is complicated by the existence of dozens of ..and by the fact that…..
4 解决问题类
 小模板：（经济学人）
 1Evidence suggests that a key step is to develop a policy on ….,saying clearly (that..). 
2Other policies (such as 。) can be taken to back up the policy .
3 One helpful step is to … ,Another possibility is to improve …. , so that ….
4 It should be an addtion to the policy work ,not a substitute.
5 The more effort put in and wider (the whole school) involvement ,the substantial  the results are likely to be .
 1 give priority to sth
2 shoulder the responsibility to
3 comply with
4 impose restrictions on..
5 take …into account /consideration
6 should be increasingly focus on…rather than …
7 what will make the most difference is …..The new study makes this point even   more starkly
8 There are ways of dealing with the topic through …, …. and …..
  Three factors are involved in this change.

新概念3+剑桥好句：
1 Apparently,there is a good deal of truth in this idea./There is an element of truth in both agreements
2More importantly/significantly,there is still good evidence that …
3This is compounded by the fact that …由于。。的事实，使。。变得更糟
4Women,it is obvious, are freer than in the past. 插入语
5 has given rise to a bunch of familiar questions.
6 It’s not A that are important ,but B
7 Providing more parking area, in the long run ,has proved to be a practical way out in many large cities in the world.插入语
8 Not only had the poor man been arrested ,but he had been  sent to prison ,as well
9 It has been estimated that …据估计
10 Considering the amount she paid ,he was dear in more ways than one .非谓语
  Fearing that she would never see Ratus again
11 use fewer materia resources and ,therefore,be much compatible with protecting the environment
12 avoid squandering money on 避免浪费钱在。。上
13 shoulder important responsibilities on major global issues
14These regions are fragile not just in terms of their ecology,but also in terms of the culture of their inhabitants.
25 Climate change ,whatever its causes,is a direct threat to their way of life.插入语
26 Cinema might, for example , have become pimarily a documentay form. for example放中间，好！
27 But what happened was that it became ,overwhelmingly, a medium for tekking stories. 插入语
28Unfortunately, they are the ones the organisation can least afford to lose.
29 There is an abundance of evidence to support the motivational benefits that result from carefully matching people to jobs. an abundance of 大量的，好！
30 Managers, must be sure ,therefore, that employees feel confident that their efforts can lead to performance goals. 插入语
31To varying degree, we all have secrets which……
32 Instead of becoming a doctor , however ,he became a successful writer of detective stories.
33 It seemed certain that
34 广告Much as we may pride ourselves on our good taste,we are no longer free to choose the things we want ,for advertising exerts a subtle influence on us .
35 In time ,it became an accepted fact that …
大家有时间最好自己总结一遍新3，有很多好句子哦~~~愿这篇对奋斗的你有帮助，看到的人雅思都考得特别棒，哈~

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