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My best holidayMy best holidayLearning aims:Learning aims:Get to know the structure of the Get to know the structure of the article.article.Be able to write an article about a Be able to write an article about a trip or a holiday.trip or a holiday.Last summer holiday,I went to Qingdao with my Last summer holiday,I went to Qingdao with my family.My brother met us at Qingdao family.My brother met us at Qingdao AirportAirport.We visited Qingdao Military Museum(We visited Qingdao Military Museum(青岛军事博青岛军事博物馆物馆).Later in the afternoon,we went to the).Later in the afternoon,we went to the seaside.seaside.The next day,we went to a The next day,we went to a seafoodseafood restaurant restaurant and had a and had a deliciousdelicious meal.I bought a lot of meal.I bought a lot of presents for our presents for our relativesrelatives and friends.and friends.We enjoyed the trip very much.I hope I can visit We enjoyed the trip very much.I hope I can visit it again some day.it again some day./e/ep p:t/n.:t/n.机场机场/si:fu:d/n.si:fu:d/n.海鲜海鲜/d/dl ls/adj.s/adj.美味的美味的,可口的可口的/relrelt tv/n.v/n.亲亲戚戚Pre-Pre-writingwritingKittyKittys trip to Hong Kongs trip to Hong KongWhoWho attended the trip?attended the trip?When When did they go for the trip?did they go for the trip?Kitty and her parents.Kitty and her parents.During the winter holidayDuring the winter holidayWhere Where did they go?did they go?They went to Hong Kong.They went to Hong Kong.How How did they feel about the trip?did they feel about the trip?They had a fantastic time.They had a fantastic time.what what did they do?did they do?visit places of interest,go shopping visit places of interest,go shopping.KittyKittys trip to Hong Kongs trip to Hong KongWhoWho attended the trip?attended the trip?When When did they go for the trip?did they go for the trip?Where Where did they go?did they go?How How did they feel about the trip?did they feel about the trip?What What did they do during the trip?did they do during the trip?KittyKittys best s best holidayholiday Read Part B on P33 and help Kitty Read Part B on P33 and help Kitty Read Part B on P33 and help Kitty Read Part B on P33 and help Kitty complete her article With the complete her article With the complete her article With the complete her article With the help of Part A.help of Part A.help of Part A.help of Part A.1.writing while reading2.paying attention to the spellingTips:Pre-Pre-writingwritingThe day finally arrived.My parents and I The day finally arrived.My parents and I left for the airport in the early morning.left for the airport in the early morning.It took us about three and a half hours to It took us about three and a half hours to fly to Hong Kong.fly to Hong Kong.KittyKittys trip to Hong Kongs trip to Hong KongStructure of the passageStructure of the passageMain pointsDetails When The winter holidayWhere Who What How Hong KongHong KongMy parents and My parents and I IThe next day,we went to the most famous theme The next day,we went to the most famous theme park _.I loved watching the park _.I loved watching the interesting_ of Disney characters,andthe interesting_ of Disney characters,andthe Space Mountain ride was very_.Space Mountain ride was very_.DisneylandDisneylandparadeparadeexcitingexcitingKittyKittys trip to Hong Kongs trip to Hong KongOn the third day,we visited another famous theme On the third day,we visited another famous theme park in Hong Kongpark in Hong Kong_.We watched the _.We watched the _ and the birdshow there.They were great _ and the birdshow there.They were great fun.fun.On the fourth day,we visited some museums,and On the fourth day,we visited some museums,and then we want_.My mother enjoyed that day then we want_.My mother enjoyed that day most.She bought a lot of presents for our most.She bought a lot of presents for our relatives and her friends.relatives and her friends.Ocean ParkOcean Parkdolphin showdolphin showshoppingshoppingKittyKittys trip to Hong Kongs trip to Hong KongWe want to a seafood restaurant on the We want to a seafood restaurant on the fifth day and had a(7)_meal.fifth day and had a(7)_meal.The food in Hong Kong was really nice.The food in Hong Kong was really nice.deliciousdeliciousStructure of the passageStructure of the passageMain pointsDetails When The winter holidayWhere Who What How Hong KongHong KongMy parents and My parents and I IVisiting places of Visiting places of interestinterestOther activitiesOther activitiesDisneyland/Ocean parkDisneyland/Ocean parkMuseums/Shopping Museums/Shopping Eating Eating Delicious seafoodDelicious seafoodTHANK YOUSUCCESS2024/2/24 周六12可编辑We enjoyed this trip very much,and I We enjoyed this trip very much,and I hope I can visit it again soma day.hope I can visit it again soma day.KittyKittys trip to Hong Kongs trip to Hong KongKitty wrote the article mainly Kitty wrote the article mainly in the order of in the order of timetime.Time PlacePara1.On the first dayPara2.The next dayPara3.On the third dayPara4.On the fourth dayPara5.On the fifth day(Arrived in)Hong Kong(Arrived in)Hong KongDisneylandDisneylandOcean ParkOcean ParkMuseums&shopping mallMuseums&shopping mallA seafood restaurantA seafood restaurant时间顺序时间顺序Part 1 When&Where&WhoPart 1 When&Where&WhoPara6.Places of interestPlaces of interestPart 2 Experience ActivitiesPart 2 Experience Activities Eating Eating Part 3 FeelingsPart 3 FeelingsPre-writingPre-writing When When;WhereWhere;WhoWho;WhatWhat;HowHowWhen you write about your trip,When you write about your trip,what will you mainly write about?what will you mainly write about?Para 1Places of interestActivitiesEatingPara 2Para 3While-writingWhile-writingWhile-writingWhile-writing 去年暑假和父母一起坐汽车去了青岛。第一天去了青岛海底世去年暑假和父母一起坐汽车去了青岛。第一天去了青岛海底世界（界（Qingdao Underwater World Qingdao Underwater World），看到了各种各样的海底动物。傍），看到了各种各样的海底动物。傍晚去了海水浴场（晚去了海水浴场（Bathing Beach Bathing Beach），在海水里和沙滩上玩得很开心。），在海水里和沙滩上玩得很开心。第二天去了崂山（第二天去了崂山（Laoshan Scenic AreaLaoshan Scenic Area），崂山的风景很优美，拍了，崂山的风景很优美，拍了许多照片。第三天去了栈桥（许多照片。第三天去了栈桥（Zhanqiao Pier Zhanqiao Pier），给亲戚和朋友买了礼），给亲戚和朋友买了礼物。中午吃了海鲜。物。中午吃了海鲜。玩得非常开心，希望能够再去。玩得非常开心，希望能够再去。要求：要求：1.1.要点表达清晰，适当发挥。要点表达清晰，适当发挥。2.802.80词左右；词左右；3.3.语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯。语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯。A fact A fact filefileWhen:_When:_Where:_Where:_Who:_Who:_Para1Para1WhatWhatPara2Para2Places of interest:Places of interest:Activities:Activities:Eating:Eating:How:_How:_Para3Para3While-writingWhile-writingMy best holidayMy best holidayTips:1.Work out a fact file first just like A 1.Work out a fact file first just like A on P32.on P32.2.Remember to state the main points 2.Remember to state the main points clearlyclearly.When,Where,Who,What,HowWhen,Where,Who,What,How3.Give details to support the main points.3.Give details to support the main points.Details should be Details should be interestinginteresting and and specialspecial.While-writingWhile-writing4.Use transitions(4.Use transitions(过渡词过渡词)to connect the ideas)to connect the ideas.5.Accurate use of grammar,spelling,5.Accurate use of grammar,spelling,punctuationpunctuation（标点）（标点）and case matters.and case matters.Grading systemGrading system参考评分标准（满分参考评分标准（满分15分）分）信息清晰，包含五要点4分有细节描述2分单词拼写和词汇运用正确3分语法正确3分结构清晰2分字迹工整、清晰1分How to be a good reporter?How to be a good reporter?AssessmentResult1All about the topic(When,Where,Who,What,How)2Correct structure and sentences3No spelling,punctuation or other small mistakes4HandwritingAdviceRulesRulesExcellent!Excellent!Excellent!Excellent!Good!Good!Good!Good!Not bad!Not bad!Not bad!Not bad!Post-Post-writingwritingImprove your articles after class.Improve your articles after class.THANK YOUSUCCESS2024/2/24 周六23可编辑