高考英语书面表达指导课件-短话长说市公开课一等奖百校联赛优质课金奖名师赛课获奖课件.ppt

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,*,本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。谢谢。本资料仅供参考，不能作为科学依据。,英语书面表示指导,短话长说,1/30,1 General structure,3 Advanced expressions,Various structures,Graceful words,2 Linking words,Elements of a passage,Topic sentence,Supporting sentences,Concluding sentence,2/30,一、文章总体模板,1.,文章开头总体交待,起（引出主题）,A.Recently,we had a discussion about,B.we carried out a survey of,C.When it comes to the topic whether,2.,展现不一样观点句式,转承（陈说观点）,A.Some of them are in favor of the idea that,However,others hold a completely opposite opinion.,B.Some people firmly believe that.Others argue that,展现论据时惯用连接词,inthefirstplace,_(,原因一,).Furthermore,inthesecondplace,_(,原因二,).Soitgoeswithoutsaying that_(,观点一,).,Some people holdtheideathat_(,观点二,).Intheirpointofview,ontheonehand,，,_(,原因一,).Ontheotherhand,_(,原因二,).Therefore,there isno doubt that_(,观点二,).,3.,结尾部分表示个人观点和总结用语,结（总结观点）As far as Im concerned,/From my point of view,/To sum up,3/30,方法一,:,使用各种句子结构,If she is compared with other teachers,we find she pays more attention to her way of teaching.(,状语,),Compared with other teachers,she pays more attention to his way of teaching.,2 You should keep silent at the meeting unless you are invited to speak.(,连词,+,分词,),Unless invited ,you should keep silent at the meeting.,3,He didnt realize his foolishness until he returned home.(,倒装,/,强调,),Not until he returned home did he realize his foolishness,It was not until he returned home that he realized his foolishness.,二、高分作文技巧,4/30,4 We can achieve a satisfying grade by changing the way we study.(only,倒装,),.,5 How should we protect eyesight?It still remains a question among us.(,主语从句,),6 We should emphasize the importance of protecting our eyesight.(cant too much),Only by changing the way we study can we achieve a satisfying grade.,How to protect our eyesight still remains a question among us.,We cant emphasize the importance of protecting our eyesight too much.,5/30,方法二,:,善用高级词汇,Which is better?,1,周末我们会有很多作业要做,.,A We have endless homework to do at the weekend.,B We have a lot of homework to do at the weekend.,2,在我全部老师里,毛老师给我留下了很深印象,.,A Of all my teachers,I still remember Mr Moore.,B Of all my teachers,Mr Moore gave me the deepest impression.,6/30,3,高级培训班结束后回到家，他妻子感到精疲力尽。,A.His wife came back home after the advanced training class,feeling very tired.,B.His wife came back home after the advanced training class,feeling very exhausted.,4.,他没听我课上讲东西。,A He turned a deaf ear to what I said in the class.,B He didnt listen to what I said in the class.,7/30,Topic:,How to Lengthen Your Composition,8/30,When it comes to the issue of,the majority of people,seem to get accustomed to the idea that However,attitudes towardsvary from person to person.,some people firmly believe that,there are some factors,contributing to this attitude as follows,in the first place,in the second place,.On top of that,As a matter of fact,it is not often the case.Others have,a preference of,there are several remarkable reasons.,For one thing,for another,On my part,.,1.,利用模板,9/30,方法,添加与所给信息相关前因后果及条件，目标等内容,2,、附加成份作解释说明,例一：这么更方便照料父母。,拓展：因为父母越来越年迈。,原因,as they are getting older and older.,Owing to/because,例二：因广告过多，影片放映晚点,。,拓展：这造成观众不耐烦甚至恼火,。,后果,which made audience impatient and some of them even annoyed.,making audience impatient and some of them even annoyed.,It will be much more convenient to look after your parents,There were too many advertisements that they delayed the time of showing,the film,10/30,方法,添加与所给信息相关前因后果及条件，目标等内容,2,、附加成份作解释说明,条件,目标,例三：安全出口（,exit,）标志不明，存在安全隐患,(potential hazard,）。,拓展：万一碰到危险，观众难以逃脱。,In case of danger,it is difficult for the audience to escape,.,例四：对中学生假期通讯方式进行了一项调查,We did a survey about how our high school students communicate with,each other during the holiday,拓展：为了了解对中学生假期通讯方式,In order to learn about how our high school students communicate with,each other during the holiday,we did a survey with the help of my classmates.,The exit is not clear,so there will be potential hazard.,11/30,方法,添加与所给信息相关前因后果及条件，目标等内容,2,、附加成份作解释说明,(1),表示不一样原因概括语,There are several reasons for this.,The reasons are as follows.,The reason foris that,The reason why is that,(2),表示无需说明事实概括语：,It goes without saying that,Its needless to say that,Needless to say,Its obvious that,12/30,3.,加谚语,(Proverb),锻炼对学生有好处,It is good for us students to take exercise.,As the saying goes,“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”,It is good for us students to take exercise.,3.,添加谚语,13/30,加谚语,(Proverb),集中注意力于学习,We should focus our mind on our studies.,As the saying goes,“No pains,no gains.”,We should focus our mind on our studies.,.,怎么添加谚语？,方法,添加与所给信息相关前因后果及条件，目标等内容,14/30,惯用谚语,(Proverb),Strike the iron while it is hot.,趁热打铁。,Think twice before you do.,三思而后行。,Practice makes perfect.,熟能生巧。,A bird in the hand is worth than two in the bush.,一鸟在手胜过双鸟在林。,Do as the Romans do.,入乡随俗。,Do it now.,机不可失，时不再来。,Failure is the mother of success.,失败是成功之母。,It is no use crying over spilt milk.,覆水难收。,An apple a day keeps the doctor away.,一天一个苹果，医生远离我。,All roads lead to Rome.,条条大路通罗马。,15/30,青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球,We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.,We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.,For example,we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags,refuse to use single-use products,plant more trees and save water and energy.,4.,举例说明,16/30,人口密集地域遭受许多自然灾害（举例说明）,Many populated areas suffer from many natural disasters,such as flood,hurricanes,droughts or other disasters.,17/30,珍惜每一滴水,Therefore,we should no longer be indifferent about this.To protect our valuable water resources,we should call on people to cherish every drop of water.,Otherwisemaybe the last drops of water will be our tears.,As middle school students,we also have a part to play.Do remember:we are not saving water,we are saving our own life.With everyone doing his bit,we can make a difference.,5.,结尾提出倡议或号召,18/30,As students,we should start from ourselves.,Here Id like to remind my friend to take the lead in protecting the environment.With everyone doing his bit,we can change the present situation.,参加俱乐部或活动,Dont hesitate.It will be great fun!,Dont wait.Join us now!,Since it has so many benefits,what are you waiting for?,Start to join us now!,保护环境,19/30,“,短话长说,”,方法：,1利用模板,2.,附加成份作解释说明,3.,加谚语,(Proverb,),4.,举例说明,5.,结尾提出倡议或号召,20/30,写作任务,现在，青少年肥胖越来越严重，很让父母担心。请你依据以下提醒写一篇文章,参考词汇：肥胖：,obesity,垃圾食品：,junk food,要求：,1.,字数,150,左右,2.,对全部关键点要适当发挥，不要简单翻译。,3.,开头已给出，不计入总数,Recently,the phenomenon of teen obesity has made a lot of parents concerned._,原因,缺乏运动,饮食结构不合理,提议,多参加体育锻炼,多吃健康食品，远离垃圾食品,21/30,关键点分析,怎样起、转、承、结,On my part,利用模板,When it comes to the,phenomenon of teen obesity,our parents are in great concern.,Why are so many kids getting,fatter and fatter?,Some are,others are,22/30,Because of the popularity of TV and computers,and because students have so much homework to dothey are getting less exercise than before.,1.,缺乏运动,Because of the popularity of TV and computers,and students are burdened with so much homework,23/30,Because peoples quality of life has gotten better and better,families can afford to buy many foods,such as meat,chocolate and other sweet or oily snacks,which might make the kids overweight.,2.,饮食结构不合理,24/30,In order to lose weight and stay healthy,teens should avoid spending too much time in front of the TV or the computer and do more exercise.,提议,1.,多参加体育锻炼,25/30,As the saying goes,“An apple a day keeps the doctor away.”,They should also eat a more balanced diet such as fruits and vegetables,and less fast food and junk food.,2.,多吃健康食品，远离垃圾食品,26/30,Last but not least,they should make a proper time schedule so that they can balance our exercise and studies.,3.,制订合理计划，时间表,27/30,合成文章,Recently,the phenomenon of teen obesity has made a lot of parents concerned.,Why are teens getting fatter and fatter,?,In my opinion,there are two remarkable reasons for this problem.,Firstly,because of the popularity of TV and computers,and students are burdeded with so much homework to do.,They are getting less exercise than before.Secondly,because peoples quality of life has gotten better and better,families can afford to buy many foods,such as meat,chocolate and other sweet or oily snacks,which might make the kids overweight.,For another,On the other hand,aroused,For one thing,On the one hand,28/30,In order to lose weight and stay healthy,teens should avoid spending too much time in front of the TV or the computer and do more exercise.,As the saying goes,“An apple a day keeps the doctor away.”,They should also eat a more balanced diet,such as fruits,vegetables,less fast food and junk food.,Last but not least,they should make a proper time schedule so that they can balance their exercise and studies.,29/30,Thanks for you listening,Bye-bye!,30/30,