英语四级作文之图画作文PPT课件.ppt

四级四级图画作文图画作文2024/2/29 周四1作文四大要素n根据教育部公布的大纲解析，大作文四大要素为描述、寓意、分析、评论。n根据历年考题，首段应是图画描述，不应发表太多议论，否则属于跑题。n图画描述至少应有两句，根据大纲解析，如果图画只字未提，扣三分之一的分数；如果图画只描述一句，属于描述不充分，扣3分。2024/2/29 周四2写作框架：1）第一段主要是描述图画中的信息和表达的含义。2）第二段的全文的重点，一般都是要求具体分析图画中暗含的社会现象。3）第三段的要求一般视具体的试题而定，有的要求给出自己的评论、有的要求举例、有的要求考生提出自己的建议以及针对现象应该采取的措施。Tips：第二段和第三段的开头最好写一个主题句，既可以防止离题，又符合英文写作的习惯。2024/2/29 周四3论说文框架结构：3段，12句，160200词，57个关联词，57个从句第一段：引言/起始/淘金段，图画描述，3句1.总体描述：人物/动物/事物动作环境 1句2.挖掘细节词、串连成句：1句3.文字说明/象征寓意：1句2024/2/29 周四4第二段：主体段，意义阐释，5句1.主题句：象征寓意，1句2.论证：3句1）因果论证2)举例论证 3)联系现实：图画作文创作原则（以小见大，把握象征寓意，个体想为群体，具体想为抽象）4)正反论证3.小结：概括论证，总结本段 1句 2024/2/29 周四5第三段：结论段，建议措施，4句1.结论句：1句2.针对双方提建议：2句3.包装结尾、展望未来：1句nOnly in this way can we solve this problem.nIt is high time that we solved this problem.2024/2/29 周四6专题一 第一段套话如何描述2024/2/29 周四7首段写法n其实，阅卷教师最重视的就是大作文第一段，也是最难写的段落，盲目套用模板、空发议论，容易导致低分。n阅卷教师最希望看到的写法是:首句总体描述图画，点出人物、动作和环境；次句挖掘细节词、串连成句，将图中细节一网打尽；（根据情况而定）末句点出文字说明或象征寓意。可以发表议论，最好不要太多。2024/2/29 周四8描述图画的常用词n有关图画的名词n描述图画的形容词n修饰动词的副词n“寓意”、“字幕”如何翻译？2024/2/29 周四9替换picture的词语ndrawing 指用线条或色彩绘成的图画。ncartoon 指幽默或讽刺性漫画。(amusing drawing in a newspaper or magazine,esp one that comments satirically on current events(报刊上的)漫画；（尤指）时事讽刺画。)nportrait 指肖像，只用于指人。2024/2/29 周四10描述图画的形容词 nthought-provoking发人深省的nenlightening 有启迪作用/使人感悟的ncompelling/striking/intriguing引人注目/引起兴趣nprofound含义深刻=far-reaching implicationsninstructive有 益 的（=informative）（搭 配 ADV:extremely,highly,most,particularly,very/quite）namusing 令人发笑的，ridiculous 荒谬可笑的nilluminating(particularly revealing or helpful)富有启发性的；很有助益的；nimpressive 印象深刻的，exaggerative 夸张的2024/2/29 周四11修饰动词的副词：ngraphically/vividly生动地nsymbolically象征性地nconspicuously/clearly/explicitly清晰地nsubtly巧妙地，精细地2024/2/29 周四12寓意：moral/implications/messagehave a profound implicationbe pregnant with meaningentertain a thought deeply2024/2/29 周四13字幕:nCaption:words printed with an illustration or a photograph in order to describe or explain it（附於插图、照片上的）说明文字（附於插图、照片上的）说明文字1)We are informed by the caption that“_”.2）The caption reads/indicates that“_”.2024/2/29 周四14 第一句第一句 概括性句子怎么写？概括性句子怎么写？2024/2/29 周四15As is vividly depicted in the cartoon above,描述图画.The cartoon subtly 巧妙地 and symbolically 象征性地 depicts a thought-provoking scenario 场景 in which+描述图画.What is clearly illustrated/presented/portrayed/described in the drawing above is that+描述图画.It is symbolically/explicitly明白地/vividly illustrated/demonstrated in the drawing that+描述图画2024/2/29 周四16nAs is vividly depicted in the cartoon above,the boy expresses his worries about the disposal of nuclear wastes,while his father asks him to empty the dustbin in the room first.2024/2/29 周四17What is clearly illustrated in the drawing above is that a student holds the opinion that the basic math skill might be outdated by the time hes in the job market while his teacher is teaching mathematics.2024/2/29 周四18The cartoon subtly and symbolically depicts a thought-provoking scenario in which a teacher asks his student to read a work of literature as if he were reading a long text-message.2024/2/29 周四19练一个呗，亲练一个呗，亲2024/2/29 周四20nAs is vividly depicted in the cartoon above，two men,dressed in traditional Arabian clothes,are watching the construction of ancient pyramid,which is the amazing achievement of teamwork.2024/2/29 周四212024/2/29 周四22再练习一个呗再练习一个呗2024/2/29 周四23nIt is explictly demonstrated in the drawing that two travellers are wading across mountains and grasslands with heavy baggages on their shoulders.2024/2/29 周四24第二句由图片描述上升到第二句由图片描述上升到文字说明或寓文字说明或寓意的阐释意的阐释2024/2/29 周四25nAs is vividly depicted in the cartoon above,the boy expresses his worries about the disposal of nuclear wastes,however,his father asks him to empty the dustbin in the room first.nFunny and common as the conversation sounds,it reflects that the father intends to advise his son to do small things before undertaking big.2024/2/29 周四26uWhat is conspicuously illustrated in the drawing above is that a student holds the opinion that the basic math skill might be outdated by the time hes in the job market while his teacher is teaching mathematics.uThe picture implicitly raises the question of the importance of the fundamental skills students learn in our classes.2024/2/29 周四27uThe cartoon subtly and symbolically depicts a thought-provoking scenario in which a teacher asks his student to read a work of literature as if he were reading a long text-message.uObviously,the symbolical meaning of this picture is to show us the importance of reading literature.2024/2/29 周四28nAs is vividly depicted in the cartoon above，two men,dressed in traditional Arabian clothes,are watching the construction of ancient pyramid,which is the amazing achievement of teamwork.nIndeed,the pyramid could not have been built if there werent hundreds and thousands of people,indicating the importance of teamwork spirit.2024/2/29 周四29nIt is graphically demonstrated in the drawing that two travellers are wading across mountains and grasslands with heavy baggages on their shoulders.nThere is no denying that life is just like a process of travelling,which is full of ups and downs,happiness and sorrow,oppotunities and challenges.2024/2/29 周四30常州大学外国语学院常州大学外国语学院考研辅导考研辅导由浅入深之句型由浅入深之句型Simple and funny as the cartoon is,it reflects that.The picture implicitly raises the question of the importance of.The picture seems to be humorous at first glance/sight，but on second thoughts(=after reconsideration),you can find the fact that_.主体段落如何写？主体段落如何写？2024/2/29 周四32第二段：主体段，意义阐释，5句1.主题句：象征寓意，1句2.论证：3句1）因果论证2)举例论证 3)联系现实：图画作文创作原则（以小见大，把握象征寓意，个体想为群体，具体想为抽象）4)正反论证3.小结：概括论证，总结本段 1句 2024/2/29 周四33topic sentencedevelopment:sub idea 1development:sub idea2&contrary ideabrief conclusionLinking devices34常州大学外国语学院常州大学外国语学院考研辅导考研辅导主题句（全段核心，全文关键主题句（全段核心，全文关键,必写）必写）What can be inferred in this picture is virtually a prevalent social issue and the significance of _.The purpose of the picture is to inform/remind us of the fact that we should not neglect the significance of _.The unique metaphor in this enlightening drawing endows us with the notion that _.常州大学外国语学院常州大学外国语学院考研辅导考研辅导过渡句过渡句(“原因如下原因如下”）的表述）的表述：Several factors,(both individual and social),could account for the(negative/positive)phenomenon.The reasons for the phenomenon may be complicated,but we can,to a large extent，ascribe/owe/attribute(归结于归结于)it to the following factors.nThe purpose of the picture is to remind us of the fact that we should not neglect the significance of fundamental skills.（主题句）（主题句）nThe reasons for the phenomenon can be attributed to the following factors.（过渡句）（过渡句）n找原因！找原因！2-3条条1.学习基础知识不但学习基础知识不但能帮助我们获得能帮助我们获得高等的技能，还能高等的技能，还能培养我们的情操。培养我们的情操。2.基本技能永远不会基本技能永远不会过时，因为它在过时，因为它在日常生活和工作中日常生活和工作中仍然具有实用性。仍然具有实用性。2024/2/29 周四37nmastering the basic skills can not only help us acquire the advanced skills,but also cultuvate our characters along the way we learn it.nthe basic skills will never be out of date and they remain very practical in our daily life and work.1.学学习基基础知知识不但不但能帮助我能帮助我们获得得高等的技能，高等的技能，还能能培养我培养我们的情操。的情操。2.基本技能永基本技能永远不会不会过时，因，因为它在它在日常生活和工作中日常生活和工作中仍然具有仍然具有实用性。用性。2024/2/29 周四38下面具体指出几个原因，第一个原因可以用下面具体指出几个原因，第一个原因可以用Among the most important reasons cited by people is.One of the most popular reasons is.第二个原因可以用：第二个原因可以用：Another important reason is.Also playing a part is.第三个原因可以用：第三个原因可以用：The third reason,which can not be neglected,is that.In addition,(名词名词)is also responsible for the phenomenon.last but not least,.39non the one hand,mastering the basic skills can not only help us acquire the advanced skills,but also cultuvate our characters along the way we learn it.non the other hand,the basic skills will never be out of date and they remain very practical in our daily life and work.for one thing,for another2024/2/29 周四40nThe unique metaphor in this enlightening drawing endows us with the notion that it is necessary to deal with trival things.nSeveral factors could account for the phenomenon.n找原因找原因1+21.做小事能够培养我们的情操，而这正是做大事所需要的。2.2024/2/29 周四412024/2/29 周四422024/2/29 周四43