英语六级作文的亮点词及模板.doc

一、 亮点词汇替换
前面的词为六级所淘汰的且出现频率高的，括号内为替换这些淘汰词的六级中的亮点词。
也许 perhaps （替换词（词帽）：It is Perhaps the case that…
1． 逐渐意识到 gradually know （be gradually aware of that …..）
2． 应该 should do sth （① be expected to….②be supposed to….）例：we are expected to do our part to enhance the awareness of environmental protection.我们应该尽自己努力提高环保意识。
3． 尽力去做….try our best（endeavor to do ….）
4． 建议：suggest、advice（propose）
5． 谈到、涉及到talk about （as far as sth is concerned 说到）
6． 非常地 very (absolutely, extremely, excessively, exceedingly)
7． 重要 important （动词替换：mean(matter) a lot ；make a difference；it’s sth that count….形容词替换：crucial、critical、significant、fundamental、vital）例：minimizing（减少） the utilization（使用） of disposable plastic bags is fundamental（重要的） to environmental protection and the economic development．
8． 不同的原因 different reasons （diverse reasons）
9． 举例来说 for example；such as （it’s the case in point that…..）
10． 引起，导致 lead to，result in （contribute to ，give rise to）
11． 大多数人 most people （①the majority of individuals②the overwhelming number of individuals③the overwhelming proportion of individuals④a vast number of individuals）
12． 人们 people （individuals ，population）
例：there are diverse reasons which contribute to the environmental pollution，it’s the case in point that the majority of individuals will throw bags here and there．（导致环境污染有不同的原因，例如大多数人到处扔塑料袋。）
14. 我认为 I think （动词替换：argue，claim，maintain，reckon，deem，短语替换：from my standpoint ；from my perspective ）
15.我相信 I believe （I hold the firm belief that….）
16.必须 must （it’s a must for us to do sth ）
17.知道 know （be aware of that （in that）…..）
18.最后 at last （eventually）
19.如果 if （provided that ）
20.各行各业的人 all kinds of people （all walks of individuals）
21.在当今社会 in the modern society （in the contemporary society）
22.明显的 obvious （it is apparent that ）
23.经常 often （frequently）
24.使 make （enable sb to do sth ；render sb to do ）
25.提高 prove （enhance）
26.越来越多 more and more（①the mounting number of +可n②the mounting amount of +不可数n③the skyrocketing number of ）
27.为了 in order to （in an attempt to do …..）
28.和 and （coupled with …..）
二．在英语写作中充当帽子及亮点的短语
1.There is an universal（普遍的） phenomenon nowadays that ….（用于现象解释性作文中）
2.it is universally acknowledged that ….（人们普遍认为）
3.it goes without saying that ；it is needless to say that….（毫无疑问）
4.it is highly significant that …..（做事重要）
5.Play a crucial role ；fulfill a critical role （发挥重要作用）
6.English proficiency（英语水平）；living standard （生活水平）
7.with the advance of economy and the improvement of living standard…..（随着经济的发展和生活水平的提高）
Coincident with the advancement of science and technology （随着科学技术的发展）
8.exert（产生）tremendous （enormous，considerable，remarkable）influence on (产生巨大的影响)
9.change dramatically（发生了巨大变化）
10.increasingly（越来越、、、）
11.the dawn of the new century witnessed 、、、（新世纪的黎明目睹了、、、）例：the past decades witnessed the wide utilize of plastic bags（塑料袋在过去曾广泛使用）
12.干任何事情都能产生以下后果（下面的这些可以用于大多数英语写作中）：①enrich（acquire） knowledge （丰富（获得）知识）②broaden horizon （开阔眼界）③tap potential 开发潜力）④accumulate experience （积累经验）⑤get acquainted with individuals（认识人）
13.as a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds.（就像一句谚语说的没有花园就没有杂草）（这句谚语用于陈述任何事情都有不足）
14.Never in the history has sth been so frequently talked about as today.（过去从没sth（事情）像今天这样被频繁的谈论）
三．六级写作重点短语
1.经济的快速发展 the rapid development of economy
2.人民生活水平的显著提高／稳步增长 the remarkable improvement ／steady growth of people′s living standard
3.先进的科学技术 advanced science and technology
4.面临新的机遇和挑战 be faced with new opportunities and challenges
5.人们普遍认为 it is commonly believed ∕recognized that、、、
6.社会发展的必然结果 the inevitable result of social development
7.引起了广泛的公众关注 arouse wide public concern ∕draw public attention
8.不可否认 it is undeniable that、、、∕there is no denying that、、、
9.热烈的讨论∕争论 a heated discussion∕debate
10.有争议性的问题 a controversial issue
11.完全不同的观点 a totally different argument
12.一些人、、、而另外一些人、、、 some people、、、while others、、、
13.就我而言∕就个人而言 as far as I am concerned，∕personally，
14.就、、、达到绝对的一致 reach an absolute consensus on、、、
15.有充分的理由支持 be supported by sound reasons
16.双方的论点 argument on both sides
17.发挥着日益重要的作用play an increasingly significant role in、、、
18.正如谚语所说 as the proverb goes：
19.对、、必不可少 be indispensable to、、、
20.对、、、产生有利∕不利的影响 exert positive∕negative effects on、、、
21.利远远大于弊 the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages .
22.竞争与合作精神 sense of competition and cooperation
23．复杂的社会现象 a complicated social phenomenon
24.责任感∕成就感 sense of responsibility∕sense of achievement
25.积累经验 accumulate experience
26.开阔眼界 widen one′s horizon∕broaden one′s vision
27.学习知识和技能 acquire knowledge and skills
28.考虑到诸多因素 take many factors into account∕consideration
29.从另一个角度 from another perspective
30.对、、、有益 be beneficial∕conducive to 、、、
31.打下坚实的基础 lay a solid foundation for
32.综合素质 comprehensive quality
33.致力于∕投身于 be committed∕devoted to、、、
34.应当承认 Admittedly，
35.满足需求 satisfy∕meet the needs of、、、
36.可靠的信息源 a reliable source of information
37.宝贵的自然资源 valuable natural resources
38.在人类生活的方方面面 in all aspects of human life
39.社会进步的体现 a symbol of society progress
40.对这一问题持有不同态度 hold different attitudes towards this issue
41.支持前∕后种观点的人 those in favor of the former∕latter opinion
42.在一定程度上 to some extent∕degree∕ in some way
43.理论与实践相结合 integrate theory with practice
44.、、、必然趋势 an irresistible trend of、、、
45.日益激烈的社会竞争 the increasingly fierce social competition
46.眼前利益 immediate interest∕short-term interest
47.长远利益 interest in the long run
48.、、、有其自身的优缺点、、、has its merits and demerits∕advantages and disadvantages
49.扬长避短 Exploit to the full one′s favorable conditions and avoid unfavorable ones
50.取其精髓，去其糟泊 Take the essence and discard the dregs
51.跟上、、、的最新发展 keep pace with the latest development of、、、
52.采取有效措施来、、、 take effective measures to do sth
53.有利有弊 Every coin has its two sides.∕No garden without weeds.
54.对、、、观点因人而异 Views on、、、vary from person to person.
55.重视 attach great importance to、、、
56.社会地位 social status
57.把时间和精力放在、、、上 focus time and energy on、、、
58.扩大知识面 expand one′s scope of knowledge
59.缓解压力∕减轻负担 relieve stress∕burden
60.优先考虑、、、give priority to sth.
61.与、、、比较 compared with、、、∕in comparison with
62.相反 in contrast ∕on the contrary
63.社会进步的反映 mirror of social progress
64.增进相互了解 enhance∕promote mutual understanding
65.保障社会的稳定和繁荣 guarantee the stability and prosperity of our society
66.更多的强调 put more emphasis on、、、
67.主要理由列举如下 The main reasons are listed as follows：
68.首先 First，Firstly，In the first place ，To begin with
69.其次 Second，Secondly，In the second place
70.再次Besides，In addition，Additionally，Moreover，Furthermore
71.总而言之 All in all ，To sum up ，In summary ，In a word
72.我们还有很长的路要走 We still have a long way to go.
四、高分范文（必背熟）
第一篇：computer
I never forget the exceedingly（非常） thrilling day when my mother bought a computer as birthday present，which exerted（产生） a tremendous（巨大的） fascination on me so that I indulged myself in googling an army of（大量） useful information I had expected，and enjoy a sea of （大量）melodious classic music .That night I was sleepless，feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasingly popularity（越来越流行） of computers. Coincident with（随着） the advancement of science and technology，pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them！
For a short，we can，freely，search desired information at any moment. little by little，our knowledge will be well enriched，and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally， we can get huge recreations online by playing games，or delivering email.
There is no denying that，however，computers will exert negative influence on us. The growing violence，porn pictures and films emerge on the screen，which contributes to the happening of crimes and suicides.
As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people′lives，despite a slice of unfavorable impacts . we should ，therefore，take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.
第二篇：2010.6 六级作文 1.近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文学习的现象；2.出现这种现象的原因和后果；3.为了改变这种情况，我认为、、、
With the rapid growth of economy，coupled with the globalization，the mounting number of students start to ignore the study of Chinese.
From my standpoint，the reason why this phenomenon ensued（出现、接着发生） is that foreign language gains more popularity with the process of globalization. A vast number of individuals believe that mastering a foreign language is more significant than learning Chinese，which contributes to the fact that they can find a decent job. It is the case in point that a skyrocketing number of individuals prefer to go abroad to pursue further study.
In an attempt to（为了） alter（改变） the current situation，I reckon that our government are expected to publicize the importance of learning Chinese in that Chinese is an extremely significant culture Secondly， from the perspective of us students，we are supposed to do our part to attend Chinese classes， enhancing our Chinese proficiency.
1.加入，参加 be admitted into、、、∕be enrolled into、、、
2.因为 in that、、、∕for the reason that、、、（连词）
3.接触到 have access to、、、 ∕be exposed to、、、
4.举例 a good case in point is that、、、
5.举例中用到的模版 there is convincing evidence to illustrate phenomenon，A case in point is that、、、
6．There are a couple of reasons which contribute to 、、、（导致、、、有不同的原因）（用于提问原因）
例如：There are a couple of reasons which contribute to the fact that the increasing number of students are indulged in playing computer games.
7.产生好（不好）的影响 exert desirable（undesirable） influence on、、、
五：作文模版
作文一般是三个提纲，即是三个主题句，一般写作是主题句+支撑句（总-分的形式）
第一种：观点对比题写作范式：
第一段：陈述对象（四个模版）
1.nowadays， as a hot topic，is increasingly arousing public attention for the very reason that .
2.nowadays，those who often read newspaper might well be exposed to a fact that ，which is increasingly arousing the attention of the public.
3.At recent years， have stepped into our daily life and gained increasing popularity among common people， has become a fashion in most people′life. According to a recent survey，the past decade has witnessed a sharp increase in the number of people who pay more attention to .
4.on campus，such topics as how to pass an exam，to find a good job or even to make friends can often be heard about. while，recently，in some colleges it seems no other topics can arouse more students′attention than the one that第一个提纲中关于校园现象的句子 （此模版用于校园话题）
第二段：不同观点
5．As for this phenomenon，different individuals from different backgrounds can not reach consensus. A large proportion of the population holds the opinion that have a negative influence on in that .however，the minority of the population hold the opposite opinion. They argue that will contribute to positive effect on for the reason that
6.As regards（关于） ，there has been a heated discussion among the general public in our society nowadays. Different people from different backgrounds have different opinions. Those who believe it is no necessary argue that ，however，some people really appreciate its positive influence for they maintain that will fulfill a significant role in
7.Frankly speaking， is obviously helpful for a college student′s growth，whether he is a student of art or science（不管他是文科生还是理科生），For example，it can be greatly instrumental（有帮助的）to develop a student′s ability and enrich his experience，which will exert far-reaching significance for his future life.
第三段：我的看法
8． ？As for this question，one person′s answer may be quite different from another′s because people have their own ways of looking upon this problem and their own reasons for thinking so．
9. In my opinion， I agree with the latter，for I have always been of the impression that . Further， it is also one reason for my standing point that .
10．There is some truth in both arguments．But in my opinion，the advantages of overweigh the disadvantages. In addition to the above-mentioned positive effects it might bring about，it also may .
例：09年12作文：选上面的模板 2、5和9写作如下：
nowadays，those who often read newspaper might well be exposed to a fact that there are a mounting number of parents who prefer to sent their children to attend all kinds of art classes. which is increasingly arousing the attention of the public.
As for this phenomenon，different individuals from different backgrounds can not reach consensus. A large proportion of the population holds the opinion that attending art classes have a negative influence on children′s development in that all of these art classes will occupy much of their spare time and then they have little time to be engaged in other activities. Secondly，the art class will add to them burden in study .however，the minority of the population hold the opposite opinion. They argue that attending art class will contribute to positive effect on children for the reason that they can acquire knowledge in the class and enrich their extracurricular activities. secondly ，they can get acquainted with children from different family and culture backgrounds. thirdly， the art class can tap their potential and they will have an all-round development.
In my opinion， I agree with the latter，for I have always been of the impression that attending art class exert desirable influence on them . Further， it is also one reason for my standing point that in an attmept to enable the children to have a promising future，we are expected to send the children to attend the art classes.
第二种，问题解决性作文写作范式：
第一段：陈述现象和问题：使用和观点对比题相同的范式。（1、2、3、4）
第二段：说明原因和结果：
原因范式：
5．A number of factors could account for the phenomenon，but the following are the most critical ones．First of all，原因一 what is more，原因二 in addition，原因三．
6.just as what has happened to anything in the world，many factors lead to ．on the one hand， ．on the other hand， ．
What is more， ．our list of contributors could go on，but the foregoing ones are already enough to give us a deep insight（让某人了解） into the phenomenon．
7．Along the most convincing reasons identified by people for this problem ，one should be emphasized（提及，重视） that ．
“结果”范式：
8.This issue may lead to a number of unfavorable consequences ，with the following two the most serious. For one thing，后果一 .For another，
后果二 .we are expected to be aware of the seriousness of this issue. Otherwise，things will be increasingly through for us to deal with it.

第三段：说明措施或者如何去做：
9.No matter how serious the problem is，we can come up with a couple of measures to handle this problem. First of all，途径一 .In addition， another way，contributing to success of the solving problem is 途径二.
10.many ways can contribute to solving this serious problem，but the following