2016年高考英语复习题：课时29 图画类作文.doc

课时29　图画类作文
Ⅰ.书面表达技法演练
【精要提示】　写图画类作文时要注意
(1)仔细阅读图画及文字说明，确定文章体裁。这类文章一般以记叙文或说明文为主。
(2)确定人称。如果以日记、回忆录等形式来写，一般采用第一人称；如果是以讲故事的形式来写，则一般采用第三人称来写比较方便。注意全文的人称必须一致。
(3)确定时态。根据图画内容及所采用的文章体裁，确定文章所要用的时态。切记全文时态的一致性。
(4)发挥联想合理适度。这类文章的说明一般都要求考生做适度的联想和发挥，以便使上下文能更好地连贯起来。但联想和发挥一定要根据图画做到合情合理，不能过多地胡乱联想和发挥。
(5)虚实结合，详略得当。对于图画中的内容，该详细叙述描写的，就必须要详细、具体；可以一笔带过的就一笔带过。比如图画中所有的时间、数字或言论须一词不漏地写清楚，而有些过程或原因则可适当简略。
【高考经典练】
(2015·福建卷)请阅读下面图画，按要求用英语写一篇词数为120左右的短文。
内容包括：
1．描述画面；
2．概述其含义；
3．谈谈个人感想。

凿壁偷光
注意：1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2．可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、行文连贯；
3．文中不能出现考生的具体信息。
参考词汇：凿，钻：bore
In the picture，

Ⅱ.能力提升练
A
分析以下漫画并根据要求完成一篇150词左右的英语短文。
要点如下：1.用30词左右概括漫画内容；
2．分析产生这一现象的原因；
3．谈谈你对这一问题的看法。
注意：文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

As is vividly illustrated in the picture

B
This is a picture of a ballet dancer whose left foot looks shockingly different from the right one.Someone even jokes that the left foot represents how elegant ballet dancers look.On the contrary，the right one reveals the nature of those dancers' life.One can
hardly imagine how much time and effort have been devoted to endless practice.
【写作内容】
请根据你对所示图片及文字的理解，写一篇150词左右的文章，要点如下：
1．以约30个词简要描述图片内容；
2．以约120个词谈谈你的看法，内容包括：
(1)图片给你的启示，并举例说明；
(2)你最想对图中的芭蕾舞者说什么？为什么？
【写作要求】
1．可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3．不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

课时29　图画类作文
高考经典练
【参考范文】
In the picture, we can see a boy in worn clothes，sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.
This is a well－known story from an ancient Chinese idiom.The boy，being poor，couldn't afford even a candle，so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbor's house to read at night.The moral of the story is：spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.
Of course，things are totally different today.It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.Hard work pays off.We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.
能力提升练
A　【参考范文】
As is vividly illustrated in the picture，in some schools study is the only thing they focus on，and they pay no attention to students' other abilities，thus turning out students who cannot cater to the needs of society.
The picture sets me reflecting on our present school education.There are，in my opinion，many factors contributing to the phenomenon.First，faced with fierce competition，many students desire to achieve high scores in the College Entrance Examination and enter an ideal university，which will give them an edge in their future career，so they cannot afford to spend time on things other than study.Second，with pressure from parents and society，schools have to sacrifice students' development of other abilities for their academic performance.
As for me，it is of great importance for students to develop various kinds of abilities.Only in this way can they adapt to our changing society.Besides，it is high on the agenda for schools to switch their attention to cultivating students' all－round abilities.
B　【参考范文】
The dancer's left foot is elegantly wrapped in her ballet shoe，tied to the ankle with a silk ribbon.The shoeless right foot，however，looks horribly different.Bruises and scars occupy every inch of her toes.
I can only imagine the untold hardship the dancer must have endured for the endless hours of practice to look so glamorous on the stage.Likewise，behind every seemingly stunning success，there can be failures，disappointments，and embarrassments.When the whole world is crazy for J．K.Rowling's Harry Potter stories，rarely do people know it was after the books had been turned down 12 times by the publisher that they finally came out.Nothing is difficult to a willing heart.However，when we admire others' success，we should remember it is not from nowhere.
I have imagined the dancer to be my friend.I will，instead of telling her how awesome her dancing is，ask her to take good care of herself for health is the real elegance of life.

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