首尾段与写作.doc

The First and last Paragraph in writing
“凤头、猪肚、豹尾”六字---抬头要精彩亮丽，中间要充实丰富，结尾要响亮有力。
“五字诀”（一审、二列、三组、四写、五查）书面表达速成法
Part 1 Letters
1）回信
假设你是李越,你的加拿大笔友Steve来信说,他和他的一些同学正在学中文,请你推荐两本学中文的词典，根据下表提供的信息,请你给他写一封回信.

英汉/汉英词典
新华字典
收词(字)
18,000(英语) 20,000(汉语)
10,000
　价格
52元
11元
　特点
大量例子、用法说明,适合初学者
中国最常用的汉语字典
Dear Steve,
Very glad to have received your letter, saying that you and your classmates are learning English. I wish you good luck with your efforts in Chinese learning. In your letter you also ask what Chinese dictionaries to use. Here are the two that I highly recommend.
An ideal tool for study, the English-Chinese & Chinese–English dictionary collects 20,000 Chinese words and 18,000 English words with abundant examples illustrating how to use them . The dictionary , worth 52 yuan., is indeed a must-have reference for beginners.
By contrast , the Xinhua Dictionary, which consists of 10,000 Chinese words, has been the most influential Chinese-only dictionary available. The dictionary is relatively small, easy to carry and affordable, costing only 11 yuan.
If you have further questions, don’t hesitate to ask me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Yue
2) 求职信 申请信 自荐信
分为三个部分：①得知招聘 ②简介自我 ③表明期待 参考模式如下：
Your address
Month, Date, year
Receiver's address
Dear sir or madam,
I am extremely pleased to see your advertisement for the position in ....... And I would like to write a letter to tell you that......
I am confident that I am suitable for the kind of the job / I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed. On the one hand, ....... On the other hand, ....... I am enclosing my resume for your kind consideration and reference.
I shall be much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity and I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience./ I am looking forward to your replies at your earliest convenience.
Best regards for your health and success.
Yours sincerely,
X X X
NMET 2005重庆
加拿大高中生David在互联网（Internet)上登出启事（notice），希望结识一位中国朋友，以便学习中国的语言、文化（culture）。
假设你是李华，请在看到这则启事后，用英文给David发一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：
　●你怎样得知David的愿望
  ●你愿意成为他的朋友
  ●你打算如何帮助他
  ●你盼望他的回复
Dear David,
I am extremely pleased to have learned it from the Internet that you want to make a Chinese friend so as to have a good knowledge of the Chinese language and culture. I long to be your friend.
As an energetic and warm-hearted young man , I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed. On the one hand , I will write to you as often as possible to keep you informed of the Chinese culture. On the other hand, when you have the chance to come to China, teaching you how to speak Chinese and showing you around some famous historical places of interest is also within my plan. Anyway, I am going to help you as much as I can.
Much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity and I will greatly appreciate a response at your earliest convenience.
Best regards for your health and success.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
（08 福建）阅读下面一则广告，按照要求完成写作任务。
EIL International English Summer Camp
Volunteer Wanted
EIL was founded in Britain in 1936 with the fundamental aim of international understanding “Learn to live together by living together”.
Requirements: Over 16, good knowledge of English; outgoing working well with children between 7—12.
Activities: Language study, outdoor recreation and travel
Camper: Students from different countries
Camp site: Mount Wuyi, Fujian
Time: July 26 — August 9
Application deadline: July 15, 2008
If interested, please e-mail to [e-mail]

写作内容
假设你是李华，这则广告引起了你的兴趣，请用英文写一封自荐信。要点如下：
1、对夏令营主题的理解；
2、根据招聘要求自我介绍；
3、参加夏令营的目的。
范文：
Dear sir or madam,
I am extremely pleased to have learned it from the advertisement that volunteers are wanted for your camp. While I was reading it , the aim of this activity impressed me greatly. I think it instructive to learn to live together by living together and it is a good opportunity for the only child like me to learn to share and work together. Therefore I recommend myself to you without hesitation.
As an outgoing boy of 17, I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed. On the other hand, English is my favorite and best subject. On the one hand , experienced in working with children aged from 7 to 12, I know what to expect from my job .Anyway, it is a kind or win-win activity. I can help care for the children. At the same time, through the activity, I am bound to improve my English and make more friends, enriching my life during the summer vacation.
Much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity and I will greatly appreciate a response at your earliest convenience.
Best regards for your success.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua

3）感谢信 感谢信一般分为五个部分：①表达谢意；②感谢内容；③说明对方的恩惠对自己的影响；④表达出自己希望有回报的机会；⑤最后表达真挚的祝福。参考模式如下：
Dear Bob,
I’m now writing these few lines to express my sincere thanks for （直接表达谢意）. I’d like you to know how much your （表达自己非常珍惜对方的付出或礼物）meant to me. You have a positive genius for （对对方的赞美）. I not only enjoyed , but also （表述对方的恩惠对自己的影响）
I （介绍自己的近况）. I hope to have the opportunity of （表达出自己希望有回报的机会）. Would you kindly let me know （询问对方是否有时间）? I will feel very honored and pleased if you have time to （表达自己回报的心情）. How nice it would be to see you again（提出希望下次见面的愿望）！
I repeat my thanks again for （再次表示感谢）. Please give my kind regards to your （最后表达真挚的祝福）.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
模板范文鉴赏：
Dear Mr. Black,
I’m now writing these few lines to express my sincere thanks for the money and the reading materials you sent to me. I’d like you to know how much your generous help meant to me. You have a positive genius for making people moved and inspired .
But for your help, no progress would have been made . It is because of what you did that not only have I improved my grades but also I feel more confident now . Besides, I make up my mind to study harder than before to learn every subject well in order to be admitted to key universities in the future. How I expect to have the opportunity to return your great favor one day !
I repeat my thanks again for what you have done for me . Please give my kind regards to your whole family!
Yours,
Li Hua

4邀请信 分为①自我介绍 ②发出邀请 ③介绍活动内容④表明期待
2010年全国卷一
假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛(speech contest).希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。

【解题指导】审题分析内容要点，有这么几点
1.自我介绍 2.邀请做评委
3.演讲主题 4.比赛时间
5.参赛选手 6.联系方式
首先是自我介绍，可以用同谓语和定语从句或非定语从句，之后写写信目的：邀请组评委，范文中此句不仅邀请，还描述了该比赛的一些信息，彰显长句功底。说到比赛时间可能很多同学都会写几点开始几点结束，但我觉得范文这句就很好，几点开始，持续多久时间，special又出来了才能出彩一些。总体来说这些要点都很好的做一一说明，但我们要做到长短结合，熟练运用多种句式才能有高分。
范文：
Dear Mrs Smith,
It is an honour to write to invite you to our English Contest. I’m Li Hua, Chair of the Students’ Union of Yucai Middle School.（同位语）
As is known to us all（as引导定语从句）, nowadays pollution causes a lot of problems. So we will hold this contest, of which the topic is Human and Nature, to appeal（appeal to sb to do sth高级词汇） to students to protect our environment. Considering（V-ing形式） you are an expert in English, we would like you to be our judge ,making some comments and giving some valuable advice.
I would appreciate it if you accept our invitation（it做形式宾语）. The contest will be on from 2:00 to 5:00 on June 15th in Room 501. There are ten competitors in all. If you want further information, please call me at 44876653.
Thank you for reading my letter. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
With best wishes
Li Hua
5）寻物信
2010年重庆卷
假设你是李华，于2010年6月3日搭乘国外某航空公司航班（flight number BA793）回国后，发现遗失了一个行李箱（suitcase）。现请用英文给该航空公司写一封信，请他们帮你寻找。
信件要点包括：
陈述写信原因
简要描述该行李
说明其重要性
期待回复并表示感谢
注意：
1. 词数100左右。
2. 信件格式已为你给出。
3. 请在答题卡上作答。
【解题指导】写好此文，需注意三点：一是写信格式要准确，信的开头已经给出，但切要写好信的结尾。二是要详略得当，本文应重点写的是对箱子的描述，这就包括其外观和为什么重要。三要注意适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。
首先开门介绍自我介绍，然后就是写信的原因，寻求帮助找箱子是吧，但之前肯定要介绍丢箱子，也就是乘坐了该航空公司的飞机，写好请求之后就可以另起一段描述箱子了。箱子的描述肯定是先从外观，再从其意义，如何得来的，谁送的，或者箱子中装了什么贵重物品。请求别人当要要致谢啦，特别是老外没事就把thank挂嘴边，文章最后我们要致谢in advance 和 looking forward to your reply。
范文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua I took the flight BA793 on June 3, 2010. But when I came to my home, I found I lost a suitcase. I am writing to you to request you to help me find it back.
My suitcase is a small blue one with a zip. There is a lable on the handle with my name and address on it. It si really important for me, because I had put all my important documents in it, including my ID card, passport and so on. Besides, it is what my father sent to me on my birthday.
Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua.
6）投诉信 投诉信一般分为四个部分：①自我介绍；②提出投诉内容；③说明具体情况；④提出解决办法。参考模式如下：
Dear Sir / Madam,
My name is / I’m （自我介绍，因后面有签名，可以省略）. I am writing to you for something / to tell you something about （投诉的内容）.
（简述导致矛盾的事件）. I （表达本人曾作的努力）. But （投诉原因一）. Besides, （投诉原因二）. To be frank, （客观的评论，以示诚恳）. I do hope / I require that （表达本人期待的解决方案）.
Thank you for your time and kind consideration（信件结尾的常用语）.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
（08 湖北）假设你是卜曼宜，你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机，因有质量问题，要求该公司更换。请根据下列要点，用英文写一封电子邮件。
要点：
1. 问题：手机不响铃，不能发短信；
该产品已售完，无法更换；
型号新，无配件，无法维修。
2. 要求：公司应尽快予以更换。
Dear Sir，
I’m a senior high student. I am writing to you for a mobile phone produced by your company .
On 20th April, I bought one Dephone-S250 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, China. Surprisingly, ten days after that, it didn’t ring and send short messages. Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one. Later I went to the repairman. He said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. I was so desperate on hearing that. How can I wait that long? Therefore, I require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.
Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply.
Sincerely yours,
Bu Manyi
7）求助信
全国I
假定你是李华，希望通过外籍教师Peter找一个英语笔友。请写一封短信，描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔友。具体条件包括：
1. 年龄；
2. 性别；
3. 爱好（旅游、运动、宠物等）。
注意：1．词数100 左右；
2． 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3． 开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
I’m writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.
I want to have a pen friend, hopefully a girl in her early twenties, and with interests similar to mine. In my mind, she is someone who is interested in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Besides, it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time. With such a pen friend, I think I can share with her our traveling experiences, taking care of pets, or whatever we have in common. And I believe I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her country.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best regards,
Li Hua
Part 2 演讲稿、发言稿
Dear fellow . / Hello, everyone. It’s nice to speak about (演讲话题). I think (点明个人观点). The reason is that (理由).
In my opinion, the first thing we can do . The second thing we can do . The second thing we can do (分条阐述个人观点).
As for my suggestion, I think (进一步阐明个人观点). If everyone , I am sure (提出希望).
Thank you for listening.

2010年福建卷
假设你是李华，福建省某中学高中学生，今年暑假将前往澳大利亚参加主题为WATER FOR LIFE“的交流活动。请你以参访代表的身份，根据以下图片提示，用英语写一篇演讲稿。
Ladies and gentlemen,
Good morning, I’m Li Hua from Fujian, China, It’s my great honor to be here to say something about the global water shortage and ways of dealing with it.
__________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you.

Ladies and gentlemen,
Good morning. It’s my great honor to be here to say something about the global water shortage and ways of dealing with it.
As we all know, the earth is short of fresh water. With the rapid growth of the world’s population, the rising demand of water for industry, and the environmental pollution, the world is facing the danger of running out of fresh water. But what can we do to solve the problem?
First, we should call on all the people to reserve water; Second, scientists must work even harder to find more substitutes to reduce the use of fresh water, such as purifying sea water and recycling water. As for my suggestion , I’m convinced that strict laws should be passed to control the water pollution. Furthermore, everyone should be aware of the importance of saving water in our daily life.
So it’s high time for us all to take quick action. Stop pollution and save water, otherwise（虚拟语气） we wouldn’t survive on the earth.
Dear friends , let's start fight now and spare no effort to do a little bit every day, every hour, and every minute!
That’s all. Thank you.

江西
你所在的班级将要举办一次主题为“What Can We Do for Our School?”的英语演讲比赛。请写一篇英语演讲稿，要求从以下四方面中任选一至二个进行阐述，并举例加以说明。
1.关心他人；
2.美化校园；
3.受护学校设施；
4.营造良好的学习氛围。
注意：
1.不要在书面表达中出现所在学校的校名和本人姓名，否则本节判为零分；
2.词数：100左右；
3.参考词汇：
爱心——love and care;校园——campus; 设施——facilities; 氛围——environment
4.开头和结尾已经写好，且不记入词数。
Hello, everyone. It’s nice to speak about what we can do for our school, and I think each of us can do something.
The first thing we can do is to make our campus more beautiful. Every one of us may plant a tree in the school, or organize a thorough cleaning on the campus. We can also form a good habit of putting the rubbish in the trashcan.
The second thing we can do is to protect the facilities in our school. When we leave the classroom, we should never forget to turn off the light or close the door. We should not leave the tap water running or waste any materials in the laboratory class.
If everyone does one thing for our school, I believe we will turn our school into a better place to Study and live in.
Thank you for listening!

NMET 2005江苏
假设你是李晓平，是“江苏中学”的学生。请你围绕“建设和谐社会’’的主题，根据下面所给出的要点提示，用英语给全省中学生写一封倡议书。
要点提示：1．人与社会：祖国、家乡、学校，热爱关心
2．人与人：家人、师长、同学，诚信互助
3．人与自然：能源、环境、动植物，爱惜保护
4．你的态度：(内容由考生自己拟定)
注意：1．词数：100左右。倡议书的开头、结尾以及提示句已为