GUIDEDWRITING事理说明文.doc

说明文事理说明文(二) 事理说明文【考例再现】假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写封回信。要点：1. 参加中文学习班； 2. 看中文书刊、电视； 3. 学唱中文歌曲； 4. 交中国朋友。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语已为你写好。 June 8, 2008Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.【范文展示】 June 8, 2008Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try and write me in Chinese next time.Best wishes, Li Hua(2008全国卷)【范文赏析】 文体分析本文为书信格式，主体部分体裁是事理说明文。本文主题是如何才能学好中文，要求根据要点提示进行说明。此范文要点齐全，文字流畅，使用了第二人称，时态是现在时和将来时。 行文模式本文采用了“三段式”结构：第一部分：第一段，提出文章的主题，即文章想要阐述说明的主要内容。第二部分：第二、三段，是文章的核心部分，对文章的主题进行展开说明。作者恰当地使用了过渡词汇first, then, besides, also，使得文章层次分明，四个要点衔接自然。第三部分：最后一段，即书信的结尾段。作者用了Tryand write me in Chinese next time表示愿望。佳句集锦1. Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.（此句是回信中常用的套句, 运用了较多的语法结构，值得模仿。V?鄄ing形式asking for my advice作定语修饰letter， “介词 + how + 动词不定式”结构作advice的定语；高级词汇和短语： receive, be glad to, ask for。） 2. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students.（过渡词first的使用增强了文章的层次感。其后的句子是一个复合句：主句是it is important . course, 其中it是形式主语，动词不定式to take a Chinese course是真正的主语； as引导原因状语从句。高级短语：be able to, learn from。）3. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.（这是一个主从复合句。because引导原因状语从句，主句是it should . songs, 其中it是形式主语，动词不定式to learn and sing Chinese songs是真正的主语，介词短语by doing so在从句中作方式状语。）【即学即练】假定你是李华，你的笔友李伟向你询问进入高中阶段后如何学习的问题。请你根据自己的经验给他写封回信，告诉他进入高中阶段后，第一要培养良好的学习习惯，第二要寻找适合自己的有效的学习方法。注意：1. 词数：120左右。2 可以适当增加细节，注意行文连贯。One possible version:Dear Li Wei, I am glad to answer your question on how to learn well in high school. For one thing, you should form a good habit of learning. Firstly, you should take classes attentively. Secondly, you should preview ahead of time so that you can have a general idea of what you are going to learn. Thirdly, it is necessary for you to review your subjects. Only by reviewing what you have learned can you grasp them really. For another thing, it is very important to find an effective method of learning. For example, you should take notes in class so that you can learn by yourself after class, because it is impossible for you to remember everything the teacher has said in class. I hope that these suggestions can help you. Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua