备考10写作专题2十句作文法.doc

备考09写作专题2 十句作文法
重点诠释：
十句作文法是有关专家总结出来的一种高分作文方法，考生在经过短期训练之后便可较大幅度地提高写作水平。其基本模式为：
1． 第一段为开头，包括两句。第一句为主题句，点明全文主题；第二句为扩展句，进一步说明和支持主题句。两者关系也可倒过来，由第一句说明情况，第二句点明主题。
2． 第二段为正文，共七句。第三句为主题句，提出本段的主题，它应与第一段的主题相关或一致。第四至九句为扩展句，说明和支持本段的主题。句与句之间要注意好过渡，以使段落逻辑合理，结构得当。
3． 第三段为结尾，简化为一句，也是全文的总结句， 它将前面的内容总结为一个结果表明自己的论点。
注意：要提高语言表达的档次，在句式运用上就不能一味地使用简单句和称述句，而应该根据实际情况灵活运用所学的各种句式。丰富的句式有助于考生在高考中出类拔萃，赢得高分。
写作典例：
电视在人们的日常生活中占有很重要的地位，电视传播不断深层次地影响着每一个人。请以“Television” 为题，写一篇有关其所带来的积极影响的英语短文。
分析：1。这篇书面表达的中心思想是电视所带来的积极影响。2。电视对现代生活的影响是多方面的，考生不要试图面面俱到，如果涉及面太多，文章反而显得松散，我们只选择几个方面进行写作，可用举例的方法合理安排语言材料。
范文：
Television
Television presents a vivid world in front of us.1(主题句) Through TV, we can learn what is happening half way across the world. 2(扩展句)
Television also plays an important educational role in our daily life.3(主题句) For one thing, the TV university provides an opportunity for people who can not go to formal university.4(扩展句) For another,children can broaden their scope of knowledge by watching such popular programs as “The Animal World” and “The Mickey Mouse and DuckDonald”.5(扩展句) Besides, women can learn about the latest fashion of dresses and the best recipe for making fruit cakes.6(扩展句) Furthermore, we can learn many world advanced technologies from TV programs.7(扩展句) And also we can learn singing, dancing and doing physical exercise in some special TV training courses,8（扩展句）In short,the effect of TV’s educational role is becoming more and more obvious.9(扩展句)
Having viewed these aspects and with many more TV programs produced, I believe that our life will become even more significant. 10(总结句)
针对练习：（用十句作文法和三段式表达）
1．下面是你班班会上以“中学生是否能佩带手机”为题进行讨论的情况。请你写一封信给21st Century报的编辑说明该情况，并附带表明你自己的观点。
比例
40%学生赞同
60%学生不赞同
理由
1.便于同亲友联系；
2.可以上网查资料；
3.空余时间玩玩游戏调节大脑；
4.储存有用信息。
1.手机辐射对人健康有害；
2.响铃影响自己和他人学习；
3.属奢侈品；
4.容易引起相互攀比。
注意：1.要包含所有的要点，但不要逐条翻译；2.字数约100字。3.信的开头和结尾已写好
Dear Sir,
I’m writing to tell you

Best wishes

范文：
Dear Sir,
I'm writing to tell you something about our discussion on the topic“Whether Middle School Students Can Carry Mobile phones (Cell phones)" at the class meeting.
Forty percent students agreed, for they thought it was convenient for them to communicate with their relatives and friends. They also thought they could surf the Internet to search for some information and store some useful information in the meantime. Besides, they could play games for rest if they feel tired after a long time's study. However, sixty percent of us were against it. They said the radiation of cellphones was harmful to health, and the ringing sound did somewhat affect the cellphone holders and others. Also, cellphones were luxurious things for middle school students and it was easy to lead them to compare with each other.
As far as I am concerned, I agree with the majority. It is not suitable for middle school students to have cellphones. We can get in touch with others by other means and we can read more books to enrich ourselves.
Best wishes.
2.随着科技的进步，多媒体已走进很多学校的课堂。课间休息时，有些学校利用它来播放音乐。你班就“课间是否要播放音乐”展开讨论。请你根据下表所提供的信息用英语写一篇短文，陈述讨论结果及你个人的看法、建议 。（字数 120 词左右，不计开头 ）
大多数同学认为
部分同学认为
个人看法
能活跃气氛 ；
能使大脑得到放松，减轻学习的疲劳，使大家在快乐的氛围中做好下一堂课的准备 ；
能给大家带来快乐
课间时间太短 ，播放音乐达不到预期的效果；
课间需要的是安静而不是嘈杂的声音 。
考生陈述

Our class held a discussion about whether music should be played during the break or not .___________________________________________________________________________

范文：
Our class held a discussion about whether music should be played during the break or not .The opinions are divided .
Most of the students think that music should be played. As we know, music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere. Besides , after hard study , music can bring us relaxation , which reduces the tiredness. This can help us make full preparations for the next class. Listening to music also makes us feel happy . On the other hand , some students don’t think so. In their opinion , they can’t get the expected effect from playing music , for the class break time is too short .What is needed most during the class break is peace instead of noise produced by music .
In my opinion , it is good to play some soft and peaceful music instead of loud music during the class break. In this way students can enjoy music as well as have a good rest. Besides, I suggest choosing some music that is suitable for middle school students.

3.下表是某校关于中学生双休日活动现状的一份调查，请结合表格内容，用英语写一篇120—150单词的短文，就中学生应如何过双休日发表你的看法。
学习情况
几乎都在学习
16%
半天学习半天活动
24%
几乎都在做其他事情
60%
娱乐休闲
体育活动
20%
游玩和购物
40%
上网看电视
40%
去图书馆
经常
5%
偶尔
23%
几乎没有
72%
课外兴趣小组
经常
10%
偶尔
20%
不参加
70%

　　范文 (One possible version):
　　This form displays the result of a survey on how to spend students’ weekend. It says that few students are glued to their schoolwork any more. Instead, they prefer to surf on the internet, watch TV, go shopping rather than involve in sports games. Library and interest groups are available but not favourable.
　　Personally I think, students are now freed from heavy burden but their spare time is not well arranged. They are expected to spend some time on what they learn instead of hanging out. More time should be spent not only on green field but also in the libraries to build up themselves physically and mentally. Besides, more interest groups should be established for students to widen their horizon and sharpen their brains so that they can become more creative eventually. All these will contributes a lot to a well-informed and highly qualified teenager.
In conclusion, students should be more scheduled with colorful and fruitful activities.
4．假设你是刘英。最近你就流行节目“超级女生”(Super Grls)或“快乐男生Happy Boys)收集了同学们的不同看法。请根据下表内容给征稿的某英语报刊编辑写封信，并谈谈你自己的观点。
一些同学的看法
另一些同学的看法
有助于发现自己的优缺点
能挑战自我并丰富生活经历
易误导年轻人
会带来一些问题，如学习受到影响
注意：1．词数100个左右，信的开头和落款已为你写好(不计人总词数)；
2．可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3．参考词汇：
误导——mislead
挑战——challenge

Dear Editor,

Yours,
Liu Ying
Dear Editor,
Recently, I've collected some different opinions from my classmates about the program Super Girls or Happy Boys.
Some of them argue that it offers a good chance for young people to discover their own strong points as well as weaknesses. Meanwhile, it can get them ready for any challenges and enrich their life experiences. However, st)me of my classmates don't think so. They feel that it could mislead those youngsters. Especially to the school girls and boys, it may cause some troubles. For example, it may affect their study badly.
In my opinion, every coin has two sides. So long as we have a correct attitude and good self-control, it's still OK to join in it.
Yours,
Liu Ying