重要句型在高考书面表达中的应用-导学案.doc

高考书面表达专题Ⅱ
重要句型在高考书面表达中的应用
导 学 案
ⅠReading and Comparison
There is a writing task from NMET followed by two possible versions. Read the two versions to find out which one is better? And tell us the reason.
【2008 四川】
你校学生会准备办一期英语墙报，主题为：保护环境从我做起。请你根据下图所示写一篇英语短文。

The first version:
What can I do for our environment?
Everyone can do something for our environment. For me, I should try to save electricity in my daily life. For example, if I leave the classroom last in the evening, I will remember to turn off the lights. In order to protect our forests, I will use paper wisely. I should try to use both sides of paper at any time. I will not use things like paper cups and disposable chopsticks because they are made of wood. I believe that doing all these small things will improve our environment and help make our world a better place to live in.
The second version: What can I do for our environment?
Everyone can do something for our environment. For me, I will do whatever I can to save electricity in my daily life. For example, if I am the last person to leave the classroom in the evening, I will always remember to turn off the lights. I will use paper wisely, hoping to protect our forests. I should try to use both sides of paper whenever it is possible. As is known to all , disposable chopsticks are made of wood , so I will not use things like paper cups and disposable chopsticks. I believe that doing all these small things will improve our environment and help make our world a better place to live in.

Ⅱ Pair-work
Work in pairs to finish the task and appreciate the useful sentence structures for us to master.
◆ It句型
① It will be + some time + before…
*练习*众所周知，还有两个月我们就要参加高考了（college entrance examination）。

② It is + adj./n.+ for sb. to do sth.
*练习*我认为掌握一些有用的学习技巧（study skill）是很重要的。

③ It is + 被强调部分 + that…
*练习*或许正是这些技巧将会使你在考试中成功。

◆（非限制性）定语从句、非谓语动词。
*练习*因此，这节由Mr. Zhang 讲的课将会成为你难忘的一次经历。

◆ with结构
*练习*借助这节课学到的技巧，你会发现写一篇令人满意的作文将会变得更容易。

◆名词性从句
*练习*然而，坦诚的说，我这节课所传授的只是一些技巧而已。

◆倒装句
*练习*只有通过你自己的努力，你才能真正培养你的写作能力。

◆祈使句
*练习*多多练习你会发现写作文不再是一件很难的工作。

◆非谓语动词
*练习*听了我这些话，你如何看待我这节课？
Ⅲ Group Reading
Work in groups, filling in the blanks and make your sentence structures better according to the requirement.
ONE
情景作文（20分）【2009 Beijing】
假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”为题的英文稿件。
注意：词数不少于60 提示词：郊区 suburbs

一、 内容要点：1、 骑车去植树 2、植树 3、安插提示牌 4、照相
二、说明： 内容要点可用不同方式表达
Green Action in Our Class
April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, __________一路上有说有笑). Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. __________________________(有些在挖树坑), some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering them. __________________________(干完活之后), we put up a board to remind people to protect the trees. Before leaving, we took some photos to record our green action. _______________________________(看到一行行的小树), we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.
TWO
假设你是李华。你的外国笔友Jane打算于七月来中国，特来信了解中国人的社交习俗。请你用英语回一封信，从以下几个方面作具体介绍。
1. 见面时的问候方式； 2、对表扬的回答方式；3、接收礼物时的回应方式；4、餐宴礼节。
注意：
1 词数100左右，信的开头和结束语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。
2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Jane,
Glad to hear from you and you’re welcome to China in July. The following are some Chinese customs.
Firstly, we greet each other by saying “Hello” or asking such questions as “Where are you going?” or “Are you busy?” to express our care. Secondly, _________________(当受到表扬时), we usually reply with “Oh, no!” or “I’m over-praised” to show good manners. Next, ________________(当我们收到礼物时), we usually say “It’s unnecessary” besides “Thanks” to show politeness and then put it away. Finally, at dinner parties, we talk loudly and touch glasses ________________(当我们为某人的健康或成功干杯时)to show that we’re warm.
Anyhow, different cultures have different customs. If you “Do as the Romans do when in Rome”, you’ll enjoy more of your stay here.
I hope what’s mentioned above might be helpful and wish you a good journey.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Three
基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）【2009.广东卷】
你是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况:
时间: 上周末
对象: 眼科医生（eye-doctor）王教授
主题: 我国中小学生近视（short-sightedness）问题
基本信息: （1）发生率: 略高于50％
（2）人数: 世界第一
专家解读: （1）原因: 很复杂
（2）治疗: 没有哪一种药物能治愈近视
（3）建议: 不要过度用眼；多参加户外活动
（4）特别提示: 如何握笔也和近视有关
[写作内容]根据以上情况写一篇采访报道，并包括如下内容:
1. 采访的时间对象和主题；2. 中小学生近视的发生率及人数；3. 专家解读。
[写作要求]用5个句子表达全部内容。
【参考范文】
Last weekend, I had an interview with eye-doctor Professor Wang about our country primary and middle students’ short-sightedness. ______________(据说) slightly more than 50% of the students, ____________(世界第一), are short-sighted. Professor Wang said the reason for short-sightedness is complicated and there is still no cure for short-sightedness. He suggested that __________(我们不要过度用眼) and do more outdoor exercises. What’s more, ____________(既然握笔也和近视[short-sightedness]有关), we need to pay attention to using the pen.
Ⅳ Individual work
According to the requirements of the exercises, write down at least three sentences to express a whole meaning, using the useful sentence structures you have learnt and share your work with the class.
【2009.湖南卷】假设你是某中学新老师李红，请给你的朋友张华写一封信，告诉他你第一天上课的情况，主要内容如下：1. 描述一件课堂上令你印象深刻的事情；2. 介绍你处理该事的方式；3. 谈谈你的感想。
注意：
1. 词数不少于120个；2. 可适当发挥想象，增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现与本人及学校相关的任何真实信息。

Ⅴ Homework
【2008 江苏卷】实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表，更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为 “Being a Good Listener” 的英文演讲稿。
为何倾听
表示尊重，增进理解，建立良好的人际关系
谁来倾听
家长倾听孩子
理解孩子，消除代沟，……
老师倾听学生
了解学生，满足需求，……
同学相互倾听
增进友谊，互帮互学，……
怎样倾听
（请考生联系自己拟定内容，列举两至三点。）
注意：
1、 对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2、 词数150左右。
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