山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练-短文改错+写作(46).doc

山西省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+写作（46）
短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
When father bought me a computer for a birthday present 1．
in last year, I felt very excited. As we all know, computers 2．
are getting more usefully nowadays. Much information 3．
can be stored in it. We can learn what has lately happened 4．
in the world on the Internet. People had to do lots of work 5．
which was very danger. Now, computers can do it instead. 6．
When an exam is come, I do exercises on my computer. 7．
Then it will correct them but tell me the right answers. 8．
It is convenient for me to prepare for the exam than 9．
before. The computer have become a real friend of mine. 10．

书面表达
假如你是江城某中学高三学生名叫李想，住在江城。你的加拿大笔友Bob来信谈到了他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家乡江城的情况。请你用英语写一封回信。回信须包括下表中的内容。
自然情况
①位于长江边、风景优美、适合居住
成 就
②经济发展迅速
③新建了不少工厂、住房、道路等。
存在问题
④水、空气污染
⑤交通拥挤
对江城发展的看法
⑥(内容由考生自己拟定)’
注意：1．回信中不能使用“江城”以外的地名。
2．词数150左右。信的开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入词数。
Dear Bob，
It’s very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Xiang

1．for – as 2．去掉in 3．usefully – useful 4．it – them 5．对
6．dangerous 7．coming 8．but –and
9．more convenient 10．have – has

Dear Bob，
It’s very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng.
Located on the bank of the Changjiang River, Jiangcheng is a beautiful city which is quite suitable for people to live in. With its fast economical development in the past ten years, new factories, houses and streets and roads have been built, which have invited more and more people from other places to come to work and live here. So, more schools and hospitals are available for its people.
However, there are some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours. Our city government and people should pay special attention to protecting the environment. We should not develop at the sacrifice of our environment. So I think everyone will want to do something to make our city more beautiful.
I hope you will come to China and pay a visit to our city. You’ll have a good time here.
Yours,
Li Xiang
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