【三年经典】全国各地2011-2013中考英语试题分类汇编-书面表达.doc

（三年经典）2011-2013全国各地中考英语试题精选：书面表达
【解题要点】
1. 回答她的问题
2. 提出建议
3. 对于此事谈谈你的看法
来信内容简要说明：
Alice表示自己的好友Angela问自己借钱，但自己不知是否该借给她，担心对方可能不能归还。问刘明是否遇到同样的问题？请刘明给自己一些建议，期待回信。
【解题思路】
依旧牢记"结构、要点、逻辑、语法、亮点"五大要素，审题一定要仔细，看准题目中的要点为：回答她的问题；提出建议；对于此事谈谈你的看法。
1. 结构、要点
文章第一部分，首先要做的就是在来信中找问题，很明显，只有一个问句" Do you have the same problem?" ，所以作文中应该开门见山：I have the same problem. / I have never met things like this. 而且，来信的第一句话为" I'm so sad."， 所以第一部分内容可以表示安慰 " Don't worry" 或者表示理解对方的感受 "I can understand you."
文章第二部分，根据第二个要点，提出建议。可能涉及到如下几种建议，如：
If it's not a lot of money, you can lend it to her.（如果钱不多的话，可以借给她）
If she wants to borrow a lot of money from you, you'd better suggest her to ask her parents for help. （如果她想要借很多钱的话，你最好建议她去问她的父母寻求帮助）
If you decide to help her, then trust her, because she is your close friend.（如果你决定把钱借给她的话，就要信任她，因为她是你的好朋友。）
文章第三部分，根据第三个要点，谈谈自己的感受，其实，也就是回答"why"即：为什么要给出如上建议的原因。如：
Friendship is more important than money, if your close friend needs help, you are supposed to give him / her a hand and trust him / her. （友谊和信任比金钱更重要，如果你的好朋友需要帮助，你应该帮助他/她，并且给予信任。）
We students don't have jobs to earn money but depend on our parents, when we need some money, it's always a better choice to ask our parents for help instead of turn to our friends. Meanwhile, we should be honest to our parents. （我们学生没有工作，不挣钱，需要依赖我们的父母。当我们需要用钱的时候，问父母要总比问同学借要好。同时，我们应该对父母要保持诚实）
2. 逻辑
如果考生能够找全题目要点，并且按照要点所给顺序写下来，结构清晰，那么逻辑应该是通顺的。因为全文基本是按照如下思路：现身说法，对于对方所遇到的问题表示理解 --- 提出建议 -- 说明感受，即说明所提建议的原因。其中，可以使用大量的逻辑连词和状语从句表示因果、条件、转折等逻辑关系。
3. 语法、亮点
根据题目要求，回信文体形式大体为说明文，议论参半，所以下笔前首先确定文章时态大体为一般现在时态。由于文章话题属于生活化细节问题，所以文章内容一般不涉及难度过大的词或句子，只要句式灵活多变，用词准确、丰富，逻辑通顺，语法完全正确，多用词组，向批卷老师呈现出扎实的语法功底和丰富的词汇量，也就是文章的亮点所在。

One possible version:
Hi! Alice,
I’m glad to hear from you.
Yes, I sometimes have the same problem.
I think if she really needs the money, you’d better lend it to her. You don’t need to worry too much. She’ll probably pay you back when she has money. If you don’t lend her the money, I’m afraid you may lose the friend.
I think everyone may have trouble in life and we should help each other. So when my friends need money, I will try my best to help them. Maybe I’ll get it back, or maybe I won’t.
I hope what I said can help you.
Yours, Liu Ming
【2011上海】IX Writing(作文) 共18分
106. Write at least 60 words about the topic “I’m member of _____.”
(以”我是``````的一员”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符合不占格子”)
提示:你可以作为任意兴趣小组或者社团的人员,或者作为家庭,班级,社区额的一员,写出你的经历,感受等.
Use the following points as a reference.
Are you glad to be a member of ``````?
What do you do in it?
How do you feel as such a member?
【写作思路】
一、审题
本文要求写一篇介绍自己作为某兴趣小组或某社团成员的文章，要求学生写出自己的经历以及感受等。
二、列举写作要点
1. have been a member of singing and dancing club for +时间；
2. I’m an actor in the this club.
3. Though I am very tired, I like to sing and dance every day.
三、列出关键短语和句型
be a member of , an actor, singing and dacing, feel very happy,
【范文】
A Possible Version：
I’m a Member of the Singing and Dancing Club
Hello, everyone! I’m very glad to be a member of the Singing and Dancing Club. I have been in this club for 2 years. I’m an actor in the club. I like singing and dancing very much. I sing and dance with my classmates on weekends. Though I am very tired, I like to sing and dance every day. It makes me feel very happy.

（2011桂林）C. 书面表达（共15分）
91. 今年是桂林市创建全国文明城市关键的一年。“桂林是我家，创城靠大家”！作为中学生，我们应积极参与。请根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的短文(开头已给出,不计字数)。
要点：
(1) 尊敬老师，对人礼貌；
(2) 帮助他人，友善待人；
(3) 遵守交规，过马路走斑马线，不闯红灯；
(4) 保护环境，不乱扔垃圾，不踩草地等；
(5) 补充两句个人观点。
参考词汇：respect(尊敬); be polite to; obey(遵守); traffic rules; zebra crossing(斑马线)
要求：
(1)内容包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译；
(2)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。
One possible version:
Guilin is now making its effort to become a national civilized city. As students, what should we do?
We must respect our teachers and be polite to others. We should also help those who are in need and be friendly to the people around us. Besides, we must obey the traffic rules. When crossing the streets, we should walk on the zebra crossing. And we mustn’t go across the street when the traffic lights are red. What’s more, we should protect our environment. For example, We mustn’t step on the grass and climb trees. Litter mustn’t be thrown everywhere.
Guilin is our hometown. Let’s try our best to make it a civilized city.
书面表达评分标准：
1． 评分时先根据短文内容和语言表达，初步确定其所属档次，然后根据该档次的要求衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
2． 本大题满分为15分，不设小数点以下分值。按五个档次给分。
3． 文中若出现真实的人名、校名，扣2分。

一档
13-15分
包含所有要点，应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇， 用词准确、语法正确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，具有较强的语言运用能力。
二档
10-12分
基本包含所有要点，应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇，句子较通顺，表达较清楚，但有少量错误。
三档
7-9分
内容包含了多数要点，语言表达过于简单，句子不够通顺，有部分语言错误，基本上不影响总体理解。
四档
4-6分
只包含了少数要点，语言不规范，句子无条理，行文不连贯，语言错误严重，影响理解。
五档
0-3分
只写出与要求的内容相关的一些信息词语，语言错误多。

（2011四川资阳）第七部分 写作（满分20分）
假如你叫李华，是资阳某中学初三学生。你计划于毕业考试后去英格兰旅行。请根据下列提示给你的英格兰笔友写一封信，告诉他你的安排并就相关问题向他询问。
1.考试结束后和父母一起去英格兰旅行；
2.计划在英格兰停留十天；
3.向他询问英格兰的风俗习惯；
4.请他建议去英格兰哪些地方旅行。
注意：
1.信的开头和结尾已替你写好，不计入总词数；
2.词数60左右。
Dear Ben,
How is everything?___________________________________________________________
____________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
一、审题
本篇作文考查体裁为应用文，假如你叫李华，是资阳市某中学初三学生。你计划于毕业考试后去英格兰旅行。信中要包括自己的行程安排；询问风俗习惯和苏格兰的旅游地点。词数60左右。
二、列举写作要点
1.旅游安排；plan
2. 风俗习惯；culture and customs
3. 名胜：places of interest
三、列出关键短语和句型
be away 离开 provide…with 提供… would like to do 想要做某事
【范文】
Dear Ben,
How is everything? I am going to travel to England with my parents after finishing the final exam. We’d like to be away for about ten days. But I don’t know about England. I hope you can provide me with some information about the customs of England. I would like to travel to exciting places in England. Please introduce some interesting places to me.
Yours.
Li Hua

(2011四川宜宾) 第三节：书面表达。（共1题，计12分）
健康一直是人们关注的问题，我校要举行以“关爱健康”为题的主题班会,请根据以下内容谈谈你的看法。
(1)、保持健康的重要性；
(2)、保持健康的方法：.多吃水果蔬菜；每天锻炼一小时；再睡早起；勤洗手；
（3）、自己的看法（至少一条）。
注意：1.文中不能出现校名和自己的姓名；2. 内容可适当扩展。3. 字数为60—80词；
4. 文章开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Boys and girls,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you.
One possible version
It is very important for us students to keep healthy.
There are many ways to be healthy. We’d better eat more fruits and vegetables. Take exercise for at least one hour every day. We need enough sleep and rest so it is important to go to bed early and get up early. Besides, we should wash our hands as often as possible. In my opinion, we mustn't drink wine or smoke .They are bad for our health.

【2011•四川南充】第三节 书面表达
假设你是Dale，你的网友Cindy发来邮件，希望你知道你最感谢的人是谁，现在请你给她回邮件，邮件内容包括：
1.他/她的外表、兴趣、爱好和职业等；
2.感谢的理由。
要求：1.短文应包括所有要点，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺、意思连贯；
3.字数80词左右，邮件开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数内；
Dear Cindy,
Thank you for sending me your photos. You wonder who the person I thank most is. Now let me tell you.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes
Dale
One possible version
Dear Cindy,
Thank you for sending me your photos. You wonder who the person I thank most is. Now let me tell you.
My mother is the person who I should thank most. She is an English teacher in a middle school. She is of medium height, and wear a pair of glasses. She likes reading and playing ping-pong. She is a good teacher and she is also a good mother. She is very busy every day. But she tries to do what she can to make me study at school. When I am ill, she often takes me to the hospital and stays with me all the time. But sometimes when she falls ill, she never goes to see a doctor.
For my mother, I'll do my best to be a good child. I'll love her forever.
Best wishes
Dale

【2011•四川广元】第三节：书面表达（满分12分）
地球是我们人类共同的家园。“低碳、环保”已成为当今时代主题。目前，我市英语学会准备在全市中学生中开展以“Save(拯救）our earth”为主题的英文征文活动。现请你根据以下三个方面的提示，写一篇70词左右的短文参评。
1.重要性：只有一个地球
2.主要问题：污染、疾病、灾难
3.措施：停止污染、保护大自然
参考词汇：disaster n.灾难 protect V. 保护
注意：(1)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名；
(2)文章标题已给出，但不计入总词数；
(3)可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
Save Our Earth
_________________________________________________________________________
______
_________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________

【2011四川达州】第三节 书面表达（满分10分）
76. 近来由于极端天气，我国长江中下游发生了特大旱情，致使小河断流，湖泊干涸，鱼类死亡，湖底成了牧场请结合下面的提示词，以“Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment”为题写一篇80字左右的短文。内容应包括从干旱引出的环境现状、环保意识到节水，节能，控制污染等环保措施方面的描述。首句已给出，不计入字数。
提示词： bad weather, bottom（底部）, river, lake, grass land, save water, drop, tap（水龙头）, energy, turn on / off, recycle, control pollution, tears(眼泪).
要求： 1. 条理清楚，有表明自己观点的句子。
 2. 书写工整，句式规范，标点符号使用正确。
 3. 短文中应尽量包括提示内容，可适当发挥，但不能出现真实的人名、地名。
Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment
It is recently reported that some rivers and lakes have dried up in South China. 

One possible version:
Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment
It is recently reported that some rivers and lakes have dried up in South China. A lot of fishes died. The bottoms of the rivers and lakes have become grass land. The water is becoming less and less because of the bad weather.
So everyone should do something to save our environment. First, we should save every drop of water, such as turning off the taps after using it and recycling the water. For example, we can water the plants and clean the rest room with our used water. Second, we should save energy, such as less turning on the lights and turning off the lights when we leave；do more walking, more bicycling and less driving and so on. Third, we should ask our government to control the pollution from the factories.
Let’s act now from everything to save our environment. Don’t let our tears be the last drop of water in the world!

【2011呼和浩特】VI.初级写作 （满分15分）
假设你是张林，即将初中毕业，你的美国笔友Bob来信询问你的暑假计划,现在请你写一封回信，告诉他你将在爷爷奶奶家度过这个假期。 注意： 1. 至少写出你将要做的三件事。 2. 回信至少不少于80词，信的开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 3. 所给英语词汇仅供参考。 参考词汇：summer; grandparents; relax oneself; housework; visit; old friends and relatives Hi, Bob, Summer vacation is coming soon. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________How spend your holiday?
Best wishes.
Yours, Zhang lin
One possible version：
Hi, Bob,The summer vacation is coming soon..After a tiring school year, I’m gong to relax myself. I will spend my vacation with my grandparents. I will stay with them for about three weeks. Of course, I am going to help them do some housework. Perhaps we will take some short trips. Besides, I am going to visit some of my friends and relatives. I think we will have a happy time together. What’s more, I will be a senior student in a new term, so I am going to make some preparations. How will you spend your holiday?
Best wishes.
Yours, Zhang Lin
【2011哈尔滨】(B)根据所给英语信息完成应用文。（本题共5分）
假如你是学校疯狂英语”俱乐部主席，你的同学林杰想在暑假去澳大利亚的一所学校当志愿者，请你根据下面的信息介绍一下他的情况，并希望该校能给他一个实现梦想的机会。要求包含所有信息，至少写出5句话。

INTRODUCTION
Dear principal,
I’d like to introduce my classmate Lin Jie to your school in Australia. He wants to be a volunteer during the summer vacation.__________________________ _______________

Thank you!
President of the Crazy English _______
June 26th

【2011哈尔滨】八、书面表达(本题共15分)
同学们，你喜欢阅读英语美文吗？你喜欢积累名篇佳句吗？在英语学习中，正确的阅读方法可以提高阅读理解能力。猜测出生词，就能准确辨别词语含义；查找到主题句，就能快速理解文章大意；获取到关键信息，就能合理推断(infer)作者意图……。请你围绕“中学生如何阅读英语文章(article)”这一话题展开思路谈谈你的感想。
要求：
1.请根据所提供的信息材料和话题（不要逐句翻译，写出结构完整、条理清晰、语法准确、符合逻辑、语言丰富优美、可读性强的短文。
2.至少80词。3.不得使用真实姓名、地句和学校名。
4.题目自拟。
One possible version:
How to read English article better?
It is very important for us to have the right way to read when we learn English. There are all kinds of good ways to improve our abilities to read. When reading, we can find out the main sentences so that we can know the main idea of the article. If we meet the new words in the article, we should guess what they are meanings. We’d better try our best to get the key information, and then infer what the writer’s purpose is. Besides, we should have a good habit of reading, such as, scanning or skimming. I believe good ways are the secret of reading.

【2011•宁夏】九、写作
假设下面是你校的校园示意图，请你根据示意图及说明用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。短文首句已给出，不计入总词数。文中不得提及真实的校名和姓名。
说明：1. 老师办公室在教学楼二楼；2. 校园四周都是树。
参考词汇：示意图 diagram

This is a diagram of our school

参考范文：
This is a diagram of our school. It is four hundred meters long and two hundred meters wide. The school gate faces (the) south. Our teaching building stands in the middle of our school. The teachers' offices are on the second floor. There is a garden in front of the teaching building. Left of the garden is our library and our lab is on the right of the garden. There is a large playground behind the teaching building. Many trees are planted around the school.

【2011本溪】书面表达（共20分）
1.根据要求完成小作文，词数：约30个。（5分）
假如你叫Mike，你的同学Tony生病了，你给他送去鲜花和慰问卡。请你在卡上写几句慰问的话。
内容：1.表达心情；2.提出建议（多喝水、休息……）；3.送上祝愿。
Dear Tony,

Yours,
Mike
A
Dear Tony,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re ill. How are you feeling now? I think you should drink more water and have a good rest. I hope you can be better soon.