高三英语写作教学-新闻评论概要写作(公开课)(课堂PPT).ppt

Summary writing,What is a,summary,?,A summary is a short statement that gives only the,main points,of sth,not the,details,.,How do you usually do summary writing?,Steps:,2.,Read for,structure,3,.Read for,main points,4.Rewrite,in our own words,1,.,Read for,writing style,Step1.Read quickly for writing style,News commentary,（新闻评论）,News,(background),Comments,(suggestions),Ending,Para1-2,Para3-4,Para5-6,para7,News,Comments,Suggestions,Ending,Step2.Read quickly for structure,Para1-2 News,Para3-4 Comments,Para5-6 Suggestions,Para7 Ending,Paras.,Main points,1News,2,3Comments,4,5Suggestions,6,7Ending,Step3.Read carefully for main points,a man was killed/the tiger/get into the zoo in Ningbo/,without paying for a ticket/the tiger was shot dead,blame/cold-hearted/,wrong,tired,of forgiving,the park was not well prepared,raise peoples awareness/visitors to observe rules,no more such tragedies,Step4.Rewrite in your own words,Tip1:use words or phrases of similar meaning,Original expressions,rewrite,get into,without paying for a ticket,was shot dead,cold-hearted,those in the wrong,enter,without paying,was killed,cold-blooded,rule-breakers,Step4.Rewrite in your own words,Tip2.change clauses or sentences,1.Some said this was a sign that people are,becoming more cold-hearted.But they are wrong.,1.Some said that people become cold-hearted,which,is wrong.,2.The tigers death shows the park was not well,prepared for such emergencies.,2.The park should make better preparations.,Step4.Rewrite in your own words,Tip3.use proper connections,The majority of voices online blamed the dead man,for the animals death.Some said that people,become cold-hearted,which is wrong.People,are just tired of forgiving those in the wrong.,People blamed the man,not,because they are,cold-hearted,but,because they are tired of,forgiving rule-breakers.,Write a summary,in groups of four,.Get ready to share the summary in class.,Summary Writing,1.Is the length proper?(4080words),2.Is there any sentence exactly from the article?,3.Does it include all the main points?,one possible version,：,A man,who,entered a zoo in Ningbo without paying was killed by a tiger,which,was consequently killed.Many people blamed the rule-breaker for the death of the tiger,not,because they are cold-blooded,but,because sympathy shouldnt be abused.,To avoid such,tragedies,the park should take more emergency precautions,and,the public should raise their awareness of obeying rules.,(62 words),Use your own words,Rules,Rewrite the article with about 60 words,Dont miss any main points,Make the summary coherent(,连贯的,),Correct spelling,proper punctuation marks and good handwriting,Summary Writing,Read for main points,Skills,Read for structure,Read for writing style,Organize your language,Summary Writing,Homework,Finish your own summary and swap it with your partner and make some change so that it can be,a better one.,Wish you good luck in the coming exam!,(1)Use words of similar meanings,同义替换法,I didnt catch any fish,owing to the fact,that,I was not patient.,I didnt catch any fish_ I was not patient.,because,How to rewrite,(2)Adopt the opposite way when saying a sentence,正话反说法,You will,fail,.,You will _.,not succeed,(3)Change the part of speech,词性转换法,Patience is,very important,.,Patience is _.,of great importance,(4)Change the structure of a sentence,句式变化法,语态变换：,Parents should,give,children more praise.,Children should_more praise.,be given,简单句变复合句：,Children should be encouraged more.This will help them learn faster.,Children should be encouraged more,_ will help them learn faster.,Children are given more praise.They will achieve more success.,When _,children will achieve more success.,which,given more praise,(5)Use the shortest possible transitions,连词衔接法,注意使用一些短而精的连词，如,but,and,so,while,however,then,thus,yet,for,therefore,including,instead of,等。,We should encourage children.We should not scold them.,We should encourage children_ scolding them.,instead of,(6)Change the order of the words.,词序改变法,The secret of success was patience.,_ was _.,Patience,the secret of success,(7)Omit the details,细节省略法,Dont always scold and give lots of,praise instead.,Dont scold and give praise instead.,(8)Make use of the meaning of a sentence,句意理解法,Shopping on the Internet is becoming increasingly popular.,_,More and more people prefer Internet shopping,.,Step3.Read for Main,Points,Para.3,As news of the incident spread,the majority of voices online blamed the dead man for the animals death.Some said this was a sign that people are becoming more cold-hearted.But they are wrong.People have been displaying increasingly more enthusiasm for helping those in need and participating in charity work.In 2016,the China Charity Federation received donations of 18.8 billion yuan($2.7 billion)in total,46 percent more than the donations received in 2015,and they sent helping hands to one tragedy after another.,Para.3,As news of the incident spread,the majority of voices online,blamed the dead man,for the animals death.,Some said,this was a sign that people are becoming more,cold-hearted,.,But,they are wrong,.,People have been displaying increasingly more enthusiasm for helping those in need and participating in charity work.In 2016,the China Charity Federation received donations of 18.8 billion yuan($2.7 billion)in total,46 percent more than the donations received in 2015,and they sent helping hands to one tragedy after another.,opinion,supporting details,Para.4,People are just tired of forgiving those in the wrong.,While sympathy is right,it has been abused too much.,When somebody commits a crime,no matter how cruel the crime is,media outlets explain the criminals miserable childhood and there are calls for forgiveness.,When someone smokes in public,there are always people calling for tolerance.,Step3.Read for Main,Points,Para.4,People are just tired of forgiving those in the wrong.,While sympathy is right,it has been abused too much.,When somebody commits a crime,no matter how cruel the crime is,media outlets explain the criminals miserable childhood and there are calls for forgiveness.,When someone smokes in public,there are always people calling for tolerance.,reason,examples,