写作技巧10-不落俗套的“高级词”.doc

第三讲　让亮点词汇添彩
层级十 不落俗套的“高级词”
在写作中，考生如能在正确使用基本词汇的基础上，将一些基本词汇升级为高级词汇，就会为自己的高考作文增加得高分的亮点。
■ 美句输入
在使用高级词汇时，我们可以尝试如下方法。
一、无重复原则——求雅变异
写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的词汇水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是词汇高级用法的体现。
1.I like reading while my brother likes playing football.
→I like reading while my brother prefers playing football.
2.We may have different opinions in organizing class activities.We may also have different ways to deal with such a situation.
→We may have different opinions in organizing class activities.We may also have various ways to deal with such a situation.
二、具体化原则——生动贴切
所谓词义具体化原则是指，写作中尽量避免使用意义宽泛、模糊的词，而要根据语境使用具体生动的词。
1.He is a good teacher.
→He is a kind/patient/knowledgeable teacher.
2.He goes to work every day.
→He rides/drives to work every day.
三、晚词优先原则——新颖高级
为了表现自己的语言功底，吸引阅卷老师的眼球，尽量用高年级阶段学到的词汇代替低年级阶段学到的词汇。
1.I am very glad to know you are interested in Tang poems.
→I am extremely/more than delighted to know you are interested in Tang poems.
2.I should be free any time after school next week.
→I should be available any time after school next week.
四、短语优先原则——凑词增色
用短语代替单词不仅会使文章增加亮点，而且如果关键时刻思维短路，用短语凑字也是一个很好的选择。
1.形容词变短语的方法：of＋同根名词
形容词
对应短语
very important
of great importance
very useful
of great use
very valuable
of great value
very beneficial
of great benefit
very helpful
of great help
Taking regular exercise is very beneficial to our health.
→Taking regular exercise is of great benefit to our health.
2.动词变短语的方法：同义短语替换
动词
对应短语
think
hold the view
know/realize
be aware of
use
make use of/take advantage of
①I like playing football in my spare time.
→I’m fond of playing football in my spare time.
→I’m interested in playing football in my spare time.
→I’m crazy about playing football in my spare time.
→I’m addicted to playing football in my spare time.
②I sincerely hope that you will consider my suggestions.
→I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestions into account/consideration.
■ 佳句输出
Ⅰ.用高级词汇替换加黑词汇
1.He should have driven more slowly.
→He is supposed to have driven more slowly.
2.Most of the students are short-sighted.
→The majority of the students are short-sighted.
3.Jack is very clever，who often thinks of new ideas.
→Jack is very clever，who often comes up with new ideas.
4.Some students think that they should save some of their pocket money for books.
→Some students think that they should set aside some of their pocket money for books.
5.I’m very glad to learn that you are coming in September.
→I’m more than glad to learn that you are coming in September.
6.Would you please help me to turn down the radio?
→Would you please do me a favor to turn down the radio?
Ⅱ.根据提示用高级词汇改写下列句子
1.As a result，the plan was a failure.(turn)
→The plan turned out to be a failure.
2.I believe that our country will become stronger and stronger.(convince)
→I am convinced that our country will become stronger and stronger.
3.He spends all his spare time in reading.(devote)
→He devotes all his spare time to reading.
4.As soon as he arrived，he began his research.(介词短语作状语)
→On his arrival，he began his research.
5.Developing a good habit is also important.(of＋n.)
→Developing a good habit is also of importance/significance.
6.More and more Americans are curious about Chinese culture.(number)
→A growing/An increasing number of Americans are curious about Chinese culture.
■ 完美文章(电子邮件/普通书信)
用高级词汇升级下面考生作文中的加黑词汇并背诵
【题目要求】
(2020·淮北高三模拟)假定你是李华，想给英国朋友 Jason写一封信，介绍你的家乡泉州，内容包括：
1.泉州的发展情况；2.泉州面临的问题。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
【考生作文】
Dear Jason，
I’m 1.very (→extremely/more than) happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London.Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown Quanzhou.
Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live in.Its economy has been developing 2.fast (→rapidly) during the past ten years.New bridges and roads have been 3.built (→constructed) with high-rise buildings standing in many parts of the city.4.More and more (→A growing/An increasing number of) schools and hospitals are 5.useful (→of great use) for the native people.It is developing into a modern and 6.beautiful (→attractive) city.7.But (→Nevertheless，) there are still some problems，such as heavy traffic in rush hours and 8.serious (→severe) air pollution，which have a bad 9.effect (→influence) on people’s daily life.10.I think (→I hold the view that) Quanzhou should develop healthily and scientifically，so that we could have a better hometown in future.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours，
Li Hua
■ 常用表达
Ⅰ.首段常用语
1.I am very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago.我非常高兴收到你两周前寄给我的信。
2.I’m very glad/pleased to tell you that...
我很高兴告诉你……
Ⅱ.中段常用语
1.The purpose of this programme is to develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in listening and speaking.这个活动的目的是培养我们在英语学习方面的兴趣和在听说方面的实际能力。
2.It offers teenagers，like you and me，a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture.
它给像你和我一样的青少年提供了一个享受运动和了解中国文化的机会。
3In my opinion，the most important duty for you today is to learn knowledge and learn how to deal with different difficulties at home and at school.
依我看来，当今对你来说最重要的职责是学习知识以及学会如何处理家中和学校中出现的不同困难。
4.Therefore，I think it quite necessary to take action to relieve the growing pressure.
因此，我认为很有必要采取行动缓解日益增长的压力。
Ⅲ.尾段常用语
1.How I wish I had read and replied to your e-mail as soon as I received it!
我多么希望我一收到你的电子邮件就阅读和回复啊！
2.I’m looking forward to your reply.我盼望着你的回复。
3.If so，please e-mail me in response...
如果这样，请给我回复邮件……