专题十六短文改错.docx

专题十六 短文改错
Correction 1(2015课标Ⅰ)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was a child,I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city,but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately,on the development of industrialization,the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so,we􀆳ll live to regret it.
答案
第二句:think→thought　
第三句:countryside前加the　
第四句:or→and　
第五句:on→with　
第六句:去掉been　
第六句:seriously→serious　
第七句:airs→air　
第八句:Much→Many　
第九句:found→find　
第九句:your→our/the　
Correction 1(2015课标Ⅱ)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One day,little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time,he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later,Tony saw parents.Mom said,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.
答案
第一句:parent→parents　
第三句:on→in　
第四句:去掉very　
第五句:looks→looking　
第五句:where→that或去掉where　
第六句:begun→began　
第七句:telling→told　
第七句:第二个a→the　
第八句:在saw后加his　
第九句:terrible→terribly　
Correction 1(2015浙江)
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
　　例如:
It was very nice to get your invitation to spend weekend with you.Luckily I was completely free then,so I􀆳ll to\ say“yes”.I􀆳ll arrive in Bristol at around 8:00 p.m.in Friday evening.
　　My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass.I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view.On the left-hand side of the class,I could easy see the football field.In the mornings,it was full of students exercising.The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid.Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them.Farther in the distance,I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains.On the right side of the class was the road.I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning.The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming.If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom,I will never forget it.
答案
第一句:side→sides　
第一句:from→of　
第二句:sit→sitting　
第三句:easy→easily　
第五句:is→was　
第六句:them→it　
第七句:删掉could后的not　
第九句:在第一个in后加a　
第十句:felt→feel　
第十一句:If→Although/Though　
Correction 1(2015陕西)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线(　),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My soccer coach retired in last week.I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party.My mum makes the better biscuits in the world,so I decide to ask her for help.Mum taught me some basic step of baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself.I thought the biscuits were really well.My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.
At a party,my coach,with a biscuit in his mouth,asked surprisingly who made them and joked,“I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!
答案
第一段第一句:去掉in　
第一段第二句:anything→something　
第一段第三句:better→best　
第一段第三句:decide→decided　
第一段第四句:step→steps　
第一段第六句:well→good　
第一段第七句:after→when/while　
第二段:第一个a→the　
第二段:just后面加上to　
第三段:enjoy→enjoying　
Correction 1(2015四川)
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每句不超过两个错误;
2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

3.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Hi,Janice,
It􀆳s been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.
As I tell you last time,I made three new friend here.We hang out together during lunch and after school.We􀆳ve been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars.It􀆳s been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many.And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity!In fact,I don􀆳t like to go anymore,so I􀆳m afraid I􀆳ll lose their friendship.How do you think I should do?If you are me,would you talk to him?
Please help with me and give me some advice.
Grace
答案
第一段:want后加to　
第二段第一句:tell→told　
第二段第一句:friend→friends　
第二段第三句:sing→singing　
第二段第四句:many→much　
第二段第六句:so→but　
第二段第七句:How→What　
第二段第八句:are→were　
第二段第八句:him→them　
第三段:去掉with