高考英语书面表达专题指导、练讲及习作评析(第二部分)-专题二-图画式专题练评1.doc

2013届高考英语书面表达专题指导、练讲及习作评析（第二部分专题练评）（专题二 图画式1）
假定你是某中学生英语报的小记者；以下漫画内容是你和你的朋友们上星期六在“the Fairy Lake Park”观光时的所见所闻，请根据要求写一篇英语短文投稿。

注意：1.描述漫画内容及发表个人感想。
2.考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯；
3.词数150左右（短文标题已经给出，不计入总词数）；
参考词汇：告示牌sign
Mind Your Behavior in Public Places

讲 评
公民道德话题的看图写作，均是现实生活中的片段展示，探讨面对公民道德缺失的社会现象个人的感
想，即公民道德缺失原因与解决方法，考生应该有话可说。本篇是看图作文，属于先叙后议的文体。

认真看图，结合文字和图画，确立所要表达的主题是什么。
本篇的主题就是标题所表达的内容“Mind Your Behavior in Public Places”，无需考生多想。

围绕确立的主题，仔细看图和文字，列出文字提示和图中的要点。
文字提示中的要点：
“我”和“我”的朋友们上星期六在“the Fairy Lake Park”观光。（这是交代事情发生的时间和地点）
遣词造句（注意多重表达）
1.①Last Sunday, my friends and I went travelling in the Fairy Lake Park.
②Last Sunday, I ,as well as my friends went to pay a visit to the Fairy Lake Park.
③Last Sunday, together with my friends ,went sightseeing in the Fairy Lake Park.
④Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park.
2.①The park was full of fresh air and beauty of spring . The sun was shining. Birds were singing
beautifully.
②There was fresh air and beauty of spring here and there in the park with sun shining and birds were
heard singing beautifully.
③The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring, with the sun shining and birds singing.
3.①A young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly. They didn’t realize that there was somebody else around. They spat and even threw rubbish into the lake without noticing the sign “Don’t throw rubbish into the lake”.
②A young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly as if there was nobody else nearby. They spat and even threw rubbish into the lake and they seemed not to notice the sign “Don’t throw rubbish into the lake”.
③A young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly as if there was nobody else nearby. They spat and even threw rubbish into the lake, turning a blind eye to the sign “Don’t throw rubbish into the lake”.
④A young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly as if they were the only people in the world. They spat and even threw rubbish into the lake, totally ignoring the noticeable sign “No Littering” nearby.
美与丑形成鲜明对比。
连贯成篇(注意红体字部分)
Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park. The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring, with the sun shining and birds singing. When we were enjoying the fantastic scenery around, something unpleasant caught my eye. To my surprise, a young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly as if they were the only people in the world. What's worse, they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake, totally ignoring the noticeable sign “No Littering” nearby. What a shame!

发表个人感想时可适当发挥，但内容要符合逻辑，层次要分明，衔接要自然。
围绕漫画主题自拟感想
可以按照这样的思路去自拟感想：
这对夫妇的行为给了“我”什么印象——如果人人都这样会造成什么后果——我们应该怎么做——总结性话语。
遣词造句（注意多重表达）
1.①What the couple did made a bad impression on me.
②What the couple did left me in thought.
③I had no choice but to take what the couple did into consideration.
④Such behavior did left me deep in thought.
2.①If we do what the couple did as was shown in the above picture, all lakes will be seriously polluted and soon turned into huge dustbins.
②If all people visiting the Fairy Lake Park do as the couple did, the lake will be seriously polluted and turned into a huge dustbin sooner or later.
③If all visitors to the Fairy Lake Park do as the couple did, the lake will be severely polluted and soon turned into a huge dustbin.
3.①Littering pollutes the environment; bad manners ruin the beauty of tourist attractions. Dear countrymen, mind your behavior in public places.
②I think all of us should mind our behavior in public places. For example, make sure to throw rubbish into a dustbin or into our plastic bags and don’t make any noise in public places ,please.
4.①Only in this way can we live harmoniously with nature.
②Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings.
参考答案
Mind Your Behavior in Public Places
Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park. The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring, with the sun shining and birds singing. When we were enjoying the fantastic scenery around, something unpleasant caught my eye. To my surprise, a young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly as if they were the only people in the world. What's worse, they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake, totally ignoring the noticeable sign “No Littering” nearby. What a shame!
Such behavior left me deep in thought. If all visitors to the Fairy Lake Park do as the couple did, the lake will be severely polluted and soon turned into a huge dustbin. I think all of us should mind our behavior in public places. For example, make sure to throw rubbish into a dustbin or into our plastic bags and don’t make any noise
in public places ,please. Only in this way can we live harmoniously with nature.
2012高考安徽卷官方提供的答案
Mind Your Behavior in Public Places
Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park. The park was full of freshness and
surroundings.

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