高一练习(作文练习).doc

高一期末复习书面表达（1）
一家宾馆新开业，为吸引外国宾客，希望在互联网上进行宣传，请你用英语为其写一篇文字介绍。主要内容应包括；
1、 地点：距白山入口处500米；
2、 房间及价格：单人间（共20间），100元/天；双人间（共15间），150元/天；热水淋浴；
3、 餐饮：餐厅（中、西餐），咖啡厅（茶、咖啡）；
4、 游泳池：全天免费开放；
5、 欢迎预订。
注意： 1、词数150左右，开头语已为你写好；
2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel
Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business. ___________________________

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1、文体信息
这是一篇介绍地方的说明文，在表达时，时态应用一般现在时，人称根据具体的句子来确定。主语主要有旅馆房间、客户、旅馆主人等。
2、要点信息
① 距……，入口处；
② 房间类型，价格，淋浴
③ 中餐、西餐、茶、咖啡
④ 游泳池，免费开放
⑤ 预订
⑥ 增加：欢迎入住等友好词语
3、选词造句
A、列出所需要的单词和短语
① be away from
② single room, double room, 100 yuan for one night, hot shower
③ Chinese food, western food, tea, coffee
④ swimming pool, for free, open (adj.)
⑤ book/reserve, in advance/ahead
⑥ welcome
B、把下列两句译成英语
① 单人房间100元一晚上，并有热水淋浴。（用with）
② 我们旅馆里有游泳池，游泳池全天开放并且免费。（用which连接）
4、温馨提示
① 餐饮部分可以适当增加细节。
② 房间类型和预订可以连接起来，适当调整顺序。
③ 不要句句直译，要自然一些。
范文
Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel
Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.
Our hotel stands 500 meters away from the entrance to Baishan Mountain. It has 20 single rooms and 15 double rooms, ① all with hot showers. A single room is 100 yuan and a double room 150 yuan for one night. ② You are advised to book in advance. The hotel serves three meals a day and there are Chinese food and western food for you to choose from. You can also enjoy yourself at the café ③ drinking tea or coffee in the evening. We also have a swimming pool, ④ which is open all day and free of charge.
All are welcome!

高一期末复习书面表达（2）
2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万中学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时举行。江苏省1100万学生积极参与了这项活动。
教育部 (The Ministry of Education) 倡导学生：每天锻炼一小时 健康工作五十年 幸福生活一辈子
请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况，并就高中学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。
开头结尾以给出
注意： 1、词数150左右，开头语已为你写好。
2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Good afternoon, everyone,
　　First, I’m very glad to stand here talking with all of you.
　　As everyone knows, health is our most important thing in our life. ____________

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范文
Good afternoon, everyone,
　　First, I’m very glad to stand here talking with all of you.
　　As everyone knows, health is our most important thing in our life. Now the Ministry of Education holds a national student sports program, and there are 1.1million students in Jiang Su take part in this activity. The Ministry of Education advises us “Doing sports for one hour each day, you will work healthy in fifty years and live a happy life forever”. I think this is a good thing for all of us.
　　Some students in Senior High School think taking exercise is tiring and it’s a waste of time, but I don’t think so. We should take all kinds of exercise every day but not spend too much time. Taking exercise can build body, keep us healthy and let us relax ourselves. If we study all the time, we will be tired and have little progress. Relaxing can make a better work, and it’s of great benefit to our study.
　　So, let’s do sports together and keep a healthy life forever.
Thank you

高一期末复习书面表达（3）
写作任务：
假如你是李丽，你将代表你们学校参加2008年国际中学生文化交流节，活动的主题是“未来在我们手中”。请你发挥自己的想象力拟一份关于月球旅游的报告。报告中要写明月球旅游的内容以及它会给人们带来什么感受。可参考以下信息：
目前月球的环形山中，共有五座以中国人的名字命名的，它们是石申环形山、张衡环形山、祖冲之环形山、郭守敬环形山和万户环形山。科学家建议进行一次登月旅行，到月球上的巨大的陨石坑中收集岩石样本，来研究月球上未知生命的痕迹。
参考词汇：环形山ring mountain n. 陨石坑cloud stone pit n.
The future is held in our hands
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写作分析：
写作任务是以月球旅游”为主题，对未来进行设想，是一篇开放性作文。
要求学生充分发挥自己的想象力，写作时可以有选择地使用一些参考资料。文章共分为两个部分，分别写月球旅游的内容和感受。两个部分要衔接流畅，逻辑严谨。
文章所使用的时态应为一般将来时。人称以第一人称为宜。
初稿：
My dear friends,
Tourism is developing very fast, and I am sure that in future the spaceship will manage to send people to have a travel on the moon. There are five ring mountains named after Chinese people, such as Zhang Heng ring mountain, Zu Chongzhi ring mountain, and so on. So we are certain to travel there. Besides, we will visit the huge cloud stone pit to take some stones so that we can study the unknown life on the moon. It is certain that moon travel will be very exciting. Besides, it must be very helpful for human beings to know more about the moon and the universe, and it may help us build our future home there. That’s all. Thank you.
教师点评：
本篇短文基本覆盖了写作任务要求的内容，写出了月球旅游的内容和感受。所使用的词汇和语法结构也基本能满足写作要求。但仍存在一些不足：1、文章的开头部分有些唐突,缺少过渡性话语。2、在旅游内容方面，没有适当地发挥，所以使得文章的内容不太充实。
成稿：
My dear friends,
I believe that one day human beings will travel to the moon in spaceships just as easily as we fly to other countries now. On the moon, people in space suits will climb mountains, and enjoy the beautiful full view of the earth. Tour guides will take us to see cloud stone pits which may give us some clues of the origins of life. People will also be able to visit Guanghan Palace, and meet Chang’e and her rabbit, just like in the Chinese fairy tale. Traveling to the moon will be very exciting. It will also help us learn more about the moon and the universe. After we learn more about the moon, it will be possible for us to build homes on the moon too. That’s all. Thank you.
教师点评：
此文结构清晰，想象合理，内容充实，所使用的语法结构准确自然。对旅游内容进行了适当发挥。我们从小常听嫦娥玉兔的故事，中国的嫦娥一号又成功登月，这些都可以是我们写作灵感的源泉，使文章更加生动。