八年级英语寒假复习专题(四)——写作技巧北京实验版.doc

初二英语寒假复习专题（四）——写作技巧北京实验版
【本讲教育信息】
一. 教学内容：
写作技巧

二. 教学目标：
通过本讲的学习，使学生进一步掌握英语写作的技巧。

三. 教学重点：
写作技巧

四. 本讲的重点知识讲解：
英语作文的写作技巧：
1. 审题：了解要写作文章的内容知识领域，所要用到的句型和词组。
2. 组织材料：把根据中英文提示所领会到的知识和自己所拥有的知识组织在一起，形成初步的作文轮廓。
3. 润色文章内容：使文章中心突出，段落间必须是有机地联系、连贯、前后呼应，祛除与主题无关的内容。

【典型例题】
一. 你将来可能会很富有，请你就以下这个题目用英语表述你一旦富有后，你将如何帮助他人。要求：
（1）根据所给题目写一篇短文。
（2）词数不少于80词。
（3）抒发真情实感，词语连贯正确，语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁。
If I have A lot of Money, I will
（一）审题

（二）组织材料：
If I have a lot of money. I will build a nice school for those children who live in the mountains. I will buy enough desks and chairs for them. I will make the classrooms clean and bright. I want to prepare some computers for the children. If it is so, the students can search a lot of information on the internet. They will get lots of knowledge. I will buy too many books. I will build a library for the children. So I think, if I have enough money, I will help those poor have a nice future.

（三）润色调整文章。
If I have a lot of money, first of all, I will build a big and modern school, second, I will build different buildings. For example, a classroom building, an art building, a science building, a library, a gym, a playground and so on. In the classroom building. Then I will buy enough desks and chairs, books and other school things for them. I will also prepare some computers for the children. If it is so, the children can get on line and search information. They will get the knowledge. If I can do so, I will help them to have a nice future.

二. “少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲”，作为学生，应该懂得珍惜时间并努力学习。
针对在同学之中存在的浪费时间的现象，请写一段英文作为在班会上的发言稿，谈谈你的看法、认识。
内容提示：
1、谈谈时间的重要性
2、指出存在浪费时间的现象
3、对节约时间的认识
词数要求：80词左右
We are very young, we are students. Time is very important for us. If it passes, it will never come back forever. But, among the students, some students spend much time playing computer games and watching TV. They waste much time. That is wrong. Everything can be bought except time. When an opportunity is neglected, it never comes back to you. Don’t waste time any more. We should study hard. We should spend every second reading books and getting knowledge. If we do so, we will have a nice development in the future.

【模拟试题】（答题时间：55分钟）
I. 阅读理解
A

Everyone knows that exercising（锻炼）is important. We all need to exercise. Doctors say it is good for us. It makes your heart and body strong. Children who often exercise are more alert（机灵的）. This means they do better in tests and schoolwork than those who don’t exercise.
These are many ways to exercise. You can walk, run, swim, skate, or play ball games. Please exercise in these ways: 1. You have to like what you’re doing. 2. Exercise enough, but not too much. It’s best to exercise twice each week. Thirty minutes each time is OK. 3. Try all kinds of things until you find one, two or even three sports right for you.
Lots of people choose to exercise at fitness centers（健身中心）. Why? Because there are a lot of sports equipment（设备）. The equipment will help exercise your arms, legs and other parts of your body to make you fit. Some people buy sports equipment for their homes. But it is very expensive.
Exercising can be fun. Friends can exercise together at fitness centers, or they can play sports together outside. How do you exercise?
根据短文内容，选择正确答案。
1. In the passage, the writer tells us that we all need to ________.
A. drink B. sleep C. exercise D. food
2. Which of the following sports is NOT mentioned in the passage?
A. Fishing. B. Running. C. Swimming. D. Ball games.
3. It’s best to exercise __________ a week and __________ each time.
A. once; thirty minutes B. three times; an hour
C. twice; half an hour D. twice; an hour
4. What does the word “right” here mean in Chinese?
A. 右边的 B. 适合的 C. 正确的 D. 不适合的
5. Why do many people go to fitness centers to keep fit?
A. Because they have much free time.
B. Because they think they can’t keep fit at home.
C. Because there are different kinds of sports equipment at fitness centers.
D. Because they are rich.

B

Do you know how to play the game－ “Musical Chairs”（抢座位游戏）? It is easy to play and most people enjoy it What you need are some chairs, some people and some ways of making music. You may use a piano or any other instruments, if someone can play it. You may use a tape-recorder. You may even use a radio.
Put the chairs in a row. The chairs may be put in twos, back to back. A better way is to put the chairs in one row and each chair faces in the opposite directions（相反的方向）to the chair next to it.
The game is easy. When the music starts, the players walk around the chairs. Everyone goes in the same direction, of course. They should walk to the music. If the music is fast, they should walk quickly. If the music is slow, they should walk slowly.
The person playing music cannot see the people in the game. When the music stops, the players try to sit on the chairs. If a person can not find a chair to sit on, he drops out. Then, before the music starts again, one chair must be taken away. When the music stops again, one more player will be out.
At last, there will be two players and one chair. The one who sits on the chair when the music stops is the winner.
根据短文内容，选择正确答案。
1. When ten people play “Musical Chairs”, the game should begin with _________.
A. eight chairs B. nine chairs C. ten chairs D. eleven chairs
2. Which of the following is not suitable（适宜的）for playing “Musical Chairs”?
A. A piano. B. A radio.
C. A telephone. D. A recorder.
3. The chairs should be put _________.
A. with the desks B. all over the room
C. in a line D. in the corner of the room
4. When the music starts, the players _________.
A. run about in the room B. sing songs in the room
C. walk around the chairs D. walk on the chairs
5. Which of the following is NOT true?
A. The game “Musical Chairs” is not difficult to learn.
B. The last one who can sit on the chair is not the winner.
C. The winner can sit on the chair.
D. The game “Musical Chairs” is very popular.

C
阅读下面的短文，根据短文内容，完成短文后的表格。

You speak, write a letter, make a telephone call. Your words carry a message. People communicate with words. Do you think you can communicate without words? A smile on your face shows you are happy or friendly. Tears in your eyes tell others that you are sad. When you raise your hand in class, the teacher knows you want to say something or ask questions. You shake your head, and people know you are saying “No.” You nod and people know you are saying “Yes.” Other things can also carry messages. For example, a sign at the bus stop helps you to know which bus to take. A sign on the wall of your school helps you to find the library. Signs on doors tell you where to go in or out. Have you ever noticed that there are a lot of signs around you and that you receive messages from them all the time?
People can communicate in many other ways. An artist can use his drawings to tell about beautiful mountains, about the blue sea and many other things. Books are written to tell you about all the wonderful things in the world and also about people and their ideas. Books, magazines, TV, radios and films all help us to communicate with each other. They all help us to know what is going on in the world and what other people are thinking about.
When you are happy, the 1___________ on your face can show your happy feeling.

Artists use 2___________ to communicate.

Signs around us 3___________ messages so that we will know which bus to take, where to go in or out and where to find the library in the school.

The text mainly talks about how people communicate 4___________.

II. 请你根据以下提示，写篇短文，词数80左右。
1. 锻炼身体的好处；
2. 锻炼身体的方式；
3. 你对体育锻炼的看法和建议。

【试题答案】
I. A 1~5 CACBC
B 1~5 BCCCB
C 1. smile 2. drawings 3. carry 4. without words

II. 略。

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