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seven_teen整理的GRE作文精简例子

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For instance, there are various diseases which endanger our life potentially the same as extremes of human behavior do to the society. With the purpose of keeping healthy, people always take the vaccines which can do the precautions against ailments, for if people have taken the vaccines, they have the immunization as to be immune to some kinds of ailments. So the doctors always suggest that: prevention is better than cure. For this reason, the stability of society depends on preventions not the responses.   
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The well-known soft drink Coca Cola is a case in point. In every advertisement of Coca Cola, the feeling of having a drink of Cola is described as wonderful and fantastic. At the same time, some excellent advertising slogans, such as "Cola Adds Life"; "Have a Cola and a Smile"; "Cola is it", are becoming well-known. All these above can make a good "First Impression" to the potential consumers. That is why Coca Cola is popular all around the world. 寄托家园D2d

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Greek philosopher. A pupil of Plato, the tutor of Alexander, the Great, and the author of works on logic, metaphysics, ethics, natural sciences, politics and poetics, he profoundly influenced Western thought. In his philosophical system theory follows empirical observation and logic, based on the syllogism, is the essential method of rational inquiry.
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6. 莎士比亚 Shakespeare William1564-1616
Th-cO$b _|留学|签证|TOEFL|GREEnglish playwright and poet whose body of works is considered the greatest in English literature. His plays, many of which were performed at the Globe Theatre in London, include historical works, such as Richard II, comedies, including Much Ado about Nothing and As You Like It, and tragedies, such as Hamlet, Othello, and King Lear. He also composed 154 sonnets. The earliest collected edition of his plays, the First
莎士比亚，威廉1564-1616英国戏剧家和诗人，他的作品被认为是英语文学作品中最伟大的戏剧，其中大多在伦敦的全球戏院演出过，包括历史作品，例如 理查德二世；喜剧包括 无事生非和 皆大欢喜；悲剧包括 哈姆雷特、 奥赛罗和 李尔王。他还作过154首十四行诗。他最早的戏剧集子，第一对开本，包含了36个戏剧，并在他死后出版(1623年) _7_0Zy f
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The 16th President of the United States (1861-1865), who led the Union during the Civil War and emancipated slaves in the South (1863). He was assassinated shortly after the end of the war by John Wilkes Booth.

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The capital of ancient Babylonia in Mesopotamia on the Euphrates River. Established as capital c. 1750  b.c. and rebuilt in regal splendor by Nebuchadnezzar II after its destruction (c. 689  b.c.) by the Assyrians, Babylon was the site of the Hanging Gardens, one of the Seven Wonders of the World.
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