初中英语书面表达学案.docx

株洲市外国语石峰学校初中英语书面表达写作指导学案
StepⅠ. Warm-up
Brainstorm:
Teenagers’ colorful life:
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Teenagers’ healthy life:
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StepⅡ.写作指导
1)写作步骤：
健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。

A:travel B: stay at home C:visit friends or parents D:work

1.审 :认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心:
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2.列:用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点:
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3.加:加首尾，使结构完整：
开头:_____________________________________________________________________
结尾：____________________________________________________________________
4.连:使用关联词句。使层次清晰，衔接自然。
表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and, not only…but also, neither…nor;
表示选择: or, either…or;
表示转折: but, however, although, though, after all,
表示因果: because, so, therefore
表示条件: if , unless
表示对比: instead, not…but, on the one hand…on the other hand;
表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words;
表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next,
later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end;
表示强调: also, besides, what’s more, actually, in fact,
表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking,
5.美
选好词句，美化文章，在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。
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2）写作技巧
1.Make your sentences correct.
Good good study, day day up.________________________________________________
We should do sports a week once.____________________________________________
Save the environment is our duty._________________________________________
There is going to have a meeting today._____________________________________
I hope I can come true my dream. ___________________________________________
2.Express in different ways.
Our parents really wish us to work hard.
Our parents really wish us to _______________________________
The teenagers like the computers.
The teenagers____________________ the computers.
We shouldn’t eat junk food.
We should___________________the junk food.
When he spoke he got more excited.
___________________ he spoke, ________________ excited he got.
We should learn English grammar.
______________________ to learn English grammar.
3.写作步骤：___________________________________________________
4.中考作文评分标准：1-2；3-4；5-6；7-8；9-10.
StepⅢ.Practice
I have a dream

Sentence patterns for reference(以下句型供参考）
My dream is to be…/to do…/to go… I enjoy /like/prefer…
To make my dream come true, I … If my dream comes true…
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