高考英语万能写作模版投诉信.doc

高考英语万能写作模版：投诉信
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投诉信
Dear ______,
①I am ______（自我介绍）. ②I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about.
③The reason for my dissatisfaction is ______（总体介绍）. ④In the first place, ______（抱怨的第一个方面）. ⑤In addition,  ______（抱怨的第二个方面）. ⑥Under these circumstances, I find it ______（感觉）to______（抱怨的方面给你带来的后果）.
⑦I appreciate it very much if you could ______（提出建议和请求）, preferably ______（进一步的要求）,and I would like to have this matter settled by  ______（设定解决事情最后期限）. ⑧Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.

十、一封投诉信
假设你是李华，你在5月2日去一家商店买衣服。当你请一个王姓服务员帮你找适合你的型号的衣服时，她以忙为借口让你自己找，你说你找不到才来让她帮忙，她说你找不到就说明没有。你对这位服务员的服务态度十分不满，并写信向该商店的销售经理投诉该服务员。
注意：1、词数120左右；2、信的开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数；3、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
范文：
May 5, 2006
Dear Sales Manager,
This letter is a complaint concerning the actions of one of your salespersons. On Tuesday, May 5, 2012, around 2 P.m.., I went to your store to look for a T-shirt. When I asked a salesperson, Ms. Wang for help in finding my size, she informed me that she was busy and I would have to find one myself. I explained that the reason why I came to her was that I couldn’t find one. She then said in a rude tone that if I couldn’t find one, it meant that the store didn’t have it, and that I needed to look somewhere else.
I felt that Ms Wang was rude. I hope that you will look into the matter: I shop frequently at your store and I look forward to a more pleasurable shopping experience next time.

有一天我从你的商店买了一个SQ200手机。手机不能发短信和拍照之后我开始使用它两天。我真诚地希望你能考虑这事,为我替换一套全新的或者退钱给我。你及时的回复将是高度赞赏的。

　假设你是李华，你在5月2日去一家商店买衣服。当你请一个王姓服务员帮你找适合你的型号的衣服时，她以忙为借口让你自己找，你说你找不到才来让她帮忙，她说你找不到就说明没有。你对这位服务员的服务态度十分不满，并写信向该商店的销售经理投诉该服务员。
　　注意：1、词数120左右;2、信的开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数;3、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
　　范文：
　　May 5, 2006
　　Dear Sales Manager,
　　This letter is a complaint concerning the actions of one of your salespersons. On Tuesday, May 5, 2012, around 2 P.m.., I went to your store to look for a T-shirt. When I asked a salesperson, Ms. Wang for help in finding my size, she informed me that she was busy and I would have to find one myself. I explained that the reason why I came to her was that I couldn’t find one. She then said in a rude tone that if I couldn’t find one, it meant that the store didn’t have it, and that I needed to look somewhere else.

　　I felt that Ms Wang was rude. I hope that you will look into the matter: I shop frequently at your store and I look forward to a more pleasurable shopping experience next time.

1.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I bought an electronic dictionary from your online store on January 1st,but I found it has some problems after using it for a short period of time.
To begin with,the battery needs recharging after a mere 2 hours of use.This means that I need to carry my charger with me when I go out for a day.In addition,the buttons on the electronic dictionary are so small that it is nearly impossible to type anything with them.Personally,I find this to be completely unacceptable.
Therefore,I would like to either change the electronic dictionary for another model that works well or a full refund.Your help is greatly appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Wei
2.
Dear_____,
①I am ______（自我介绍）. ②I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about.
③The reason for my dissatisfaction is _____（总体介绍）. ④In the first place,______（抱怨的第一个方面）. ⑤In addition, ______ （抱怨的第二个方面）. ⑥Under these circumstances, I find it_____（感觉） to _____（抱怨的方面给你带来的后果）.
⑦I appreciate it very much if you could _____（提出建议和请求）, preferably ______（进一步的要求）, and I would like to have this matter settled by _____（设定解决事情最后期限）. ⑧Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.寻范文 上

Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
3.
To Whom It May Concern，
①I am writing to complain about the poor service of yourI received when.
②The causes for my dissatisfaction lie upon three points as follows: 1) _____ (抱怨内容的一个方面); 2) _____ (抱怨内容的另一方面); 3)  (抱怨内容的第三个方面). ③Under these circumstances, I find it difficult to(客观的评论).
④I am sure that you are able to thoroughly understand my discontent, which you are bound to replace with a satisfactory solution. ⑤I would be grateful if you could _____(表达本人的愿望)as soon as possible.

Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

第二节：书面表达（满分25分）
假设是李华，前天晚上你们一家三口在某餐馆就餐，其中点了一份龙虾，当时菜单上明码标价是38元/斤，但在埋单时服务员却说是38元/只，一共收取了你们114元钱。而且，这家餐馆里的就餐环境极差，服务态度也不好。请针对这种欺诈、宰客的不文明现象向当地的工商部门负责人张先生写一封投诉信。
内容要点：1. 写信的目的；2. 问题描述及你的感受；3. 你对解决这个问题的诉求。
注意：1. 词数：120字左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
Dear Mr. Zhang,
How are you doing?

Yours sincerely,
Li Hua