2010年高考改错幻灯片.ppt

How to correct a How to correct a compositioncomposition 短文改错短文改错11.We all had a good time yesterday.2.Ill return back to school now.3.I like playing piano.4.I majored at English in college.theWrongword MissingwordinUnnecessarywordright lineback2高考短文改错的短文通常只有高考短文改错的短文通常只有120120个词个词左右，分成左右，分成1010行，短文的难度也与考生行，短文的难度也与考生的习作相当，的习作相当，9 9行中都存在错误。各种行中都存在错误。各种错误所占比例为错误所占比例为 2：1：6或者或者 1：1：7：多多 缺缺 错错3得法者，事半功倍得法者，事半功倍 43 steps1.Gothroughthewholepassagetogetageneralidea.(浏览全文，掌握大意）浏览全文，掌握大意）2.Readthepassagesentencebysentenceandfindthemistakes.（分句阅读，逐行（分句阅读，逐行找错）找错）3.Readthepassageforthethirdtime,checktheanswersandcorrectthedifficultones.（检查核对，攻克难点）（检查核对，攻克难点）5短文改错应注意的问题短文改错应注意的问题 1.1.在有错行改动一词。在有错行改动一词。2.2.改变实词形式，不能将一个实词换改变实词形式，不能将一个实词换成另一个实词成另一个实词.3.3.最小限度地改变单词形式最小限度地改变单词形式 .4.4.添加或删除虚词添加或删除虚词(如冠词，介词等如冠词，介词等).).5.5.多改正，少添加或删除多改正，少添加或删除.6.6.最大限度地保持句子和短文原意最大限度地保持句子和短文原意.6Four points that you should pay attention to标点符号不改标点符号不改.大小写不改大小写不改.词序错误不改词序错误不改.在纲外生词不改在纲外生词不改 (带汉语注释的词带汉语注释的词).).7动词形，动词形，名词数名词数还要注意形和副还要注意形和副代词代词格格，细领悟细领悟习惯用法习惯用法要记住要记住冠词连词常光顾冠词连词常光顾 A Limerick非谓语，细辨别非谓语，细辨别句子成分多分析句子成分多分析逻辑错误须关注逻辑错误须关注8一、动词形一、动词形 主要包括两类错误：动词的主要包括两类错误：动词的时态时态和和语态语态错误，以及错误，以及主、谓不一致主、谓不一致的错误。的错误。2010四川卷：四川卷：Andaftermanyattempts,shepastherdrivingtestandtoldherhusbandthat2010重庆卷：重庆卷：Inaword,friendsarethoseyoulikeandtrust,andyouwillenjoyeveryminutethatyouspentwiththem.passedspend92010辽宁辽宁Herhairwasblackandpurple,andshewornblacksportsshoesandablacksweaterwore2010全国全国Whatwerebetter,Ihadusefulhelp.was10二、名词数二、名词数 指指名词单、复数形式名词单、复数形式的用法错误。的用法错误。2010全国全国：Christiewasoneofmybestfriendathighschool.2008浙浙江江卷卷：Anearbycompanywaslookingfor students with good handwriting to writeaddressesonevenlope.Thepaywas10centsperenvelope.friends evenlopes112006福建卷福建卷：If you have interests in it,reply to me soon.2010四川卷：四川卷：In fact,Ive nearly killed three peoples.2006重庆卷：重庆卷：In summer,the sea under the blue skies is even more beautiful.interestpeoplesky12三、还要注意形和副三、还要注意形和副 注意注意形容词和副词形容词和副词在句子中的作用和具体用在句子中的作用和具体用法。这也是高考短文改错题的常考点。法。这也是高考短文改错题的常考点。2010辽宁：辽宁：she was,in fact,rather attractively.2006福建卷：福建卷：We can hear birds singing happy all around.attractivehappily修饰修饰名词，名词，bebe动词，系动词动词，系动词要用要用形容词形容词修饰修饰动词，形容词，整个句子动词，形容词，整个句子用用副词副词比较级比较级和和最高级最高级的使用的使用132008全国卷全国卷：I will learn more about the history of the Olympics as good as the 2008 Olympic games.2006辽宁卷：辽宁卷：She was usual patient with her students and never made them disappointed.usuallywell14四、非谓语，细辨别四、非谓语，细辨别这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有现现在分词、过去分词，动名词在分词、过去分词，动名词和和不定式不定式错误。错误。2007浙江卷：浙江卷：I could not to run very fast and fell behind.2007宁夏卷：宁夏卷：Li Meng came see me every day.to152008重庆卷：重庆卷：Andthereweremanymeaningfulthings2008辽宁卷：辽宁卷：Weallenjoyedthispreciousdaygreatly,rememberthetimewespenttogetherandthepeopletheywerefamiliarwith.rememberingthat were worth think of.thinking16五五、代词代词格，格，细领悟细领悟高考链接高考链接6：IheardthatMr.WangwouldteachourEnglishthisterm.us1.1.人称代词人称代词主格主格和和宾格宾格，物主代词物主代词的使用的使用反身代词反身代词oneselfoneself的使用的使用3 3不定代词不定代词的使用的使用4 4Both,all,either,neither,noneBoth,all,either,neither,none的使用的使用.5 5.WhoseWhose 和和whowhos s，itsits和和itits s的区别的区别17五五、代词代词格，格，细领悟细领悟2007全国全国IIwasonlyaboutsixwhenheheldhishandouttome.Itookitinmeandwewalked.mine2007陕西：陕西：JustatthattimeIwokeupandfoundmestillinbed!myself18主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识，其主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识，其错误表现形式主要有三种：错误表现形式主要有三种：多词、少词和搭多词、少词和搭配错误。配错误。catch a sight of lose my heart in hurry in Sunday afternoon such many people in a shortaon so六、习惯用法要记住六、习惯用法要记住191.Dont approach to a work of art in such a spirit.2.The boy was absorbed building a dam in the brook.3.I was impressed at the zeal（热情）（热情）with which he spoke of the plan.4.The gentleman insisted at my receiving the money.5.At last we reached to the village at the foot of the hill.inwithon20七、句子成分多分析七、句子成分多分析 不同的句子成分要用不同的词类；不同的语境要不同的句子成分要用不同的词类；不同的语境要选择不同的词语。只有对句子结构和成分作细致的分选择不同的词语。只有对句子结构和成分作细致的分析，才能找出用词不当的错误。析，才能找出用词不当的错误。2008年安徽卷年安徽卷:She looked at me and started to laugh.“How are you laughing?”I asked.2010全国全国：Soiftheyhadsaidwastrue,Iwouldhaveachanceofwinningtheprize.whatWhy 211.My roommate lives in a small town in central Missouri,a quiet town which I would like to live myself.2.The United States is composed of fifty states,two of those are separated from the others by land or water.3.These photos will show you how our village looks like.4.I cannot make sense of that he said at the meeting.wherewhichwhatwhat222010全国全国Beforeherleaving,Ipreparedagifttoshowmybestwhishestohim.her2010四川卷四川卷Shepassedherdrivingtestandtoldherhusbandthat，torelease，hewasgoingtodrivehimovertoFranceforaholiday.she八、逻辑错误须关注八、逻辑错误须关注 与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑性错误，如称谓上的逻辑性错误，如称谓上的张冠李戴张冠李戴。23常考的错误形式有：常考的错误形式有：连词连词but，and，or和和so的用的用法错误，以及法错误，以及冠词冠词的用法错误等。的用法错误等。2oo7全国全国II：ImeanttowritelongletterandtellyouallthethingsImdoingattheschool2007四川卷：四川卷：AnAustralianfarmerfoundthekangaroocaughtinthefencearoundhisfarms.a a九、冠词、连词常光顾九、冠词、连词常光顾242010辽宁卷：辽宁卷：Her hair was black and purple,and she wore black sports shoes and a black sweater,although in the summer.2010全国全国：All I had to do was to write a story or present it.2007四川卷：四川卷：He thought the poor animal was injured,but the kind farmer took off his jacket and put on the animal.evenandso 25冗词的多用冗词的多用1.Last summer,I went to Beijing,my first time trip to the city.2.Two years later,he returned back home.3.It is about 200 miles far away from London.2627AtChristmasEve,Jimwentwithhis1._fathertochooseaChristmastree.Theychoose2._abigone.Itwasalmostastallerastheroom!3._Theyputtheminthecornerofthesitting4._On_chose_tall_it动词形动词形介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住还要注意形和副还要注意形和副逻辑错误须关注逻辑错误须关注2011高考英语短文改错模拟训练高考英语短文改错模拟训练28room.Katewascovereditwithalotof5._Christmaslight.Thesittingroomlooked6._reallybeautifullyatthemoment.Therewas7._afireburninthefireplace,andtheChristmas8._treelightswereshiningbrightly.Jimorhis9._parentssinginganddancinghappily.10._was_lights_beautifulwere动词形动词形还要注意形和副还要注意形和副动词形动词形名词数名词数2011高考英语短文改错模拟训练高考英语短文改错模拟训练冠词连词常光顾冠词连词常光顾and非谓语，细辨别非谓语，细辨别burning29动词形，动词形，名词数名词数还要注意形和副还要注意形和副代词代词格格，细领悟细领悟习惯用法习惯用法要记住要记住冠词连词常光顾冠词连词常光顾 A Limerick非谓语，细辨别非谓语，细辨别句子成分多分析句子成分多分析逻辑错误须关注逻辑错误须关注短短文文改改错错口口诀诀30Dont make the same mistake twice.不要重复犯同样的错误。不要重复犯同样的错误。Proverb31HomeworkFinish the exercises on the paper.3233