英语写作模板市公开课金奖市赛课一等奖课件.pptx

英语写作模板1 1第1页第1页Contents对比选择型对比选择型 给定观点型给定观点型 自由发挥型自由发挥型 2 2第2页第2页 对比选择型对比选择型 对比选择型题目，在提出一个话题之后，同时也给出了关于这个话题两种对立观点（是或否）或两种相关见解，然后要求考生选择其中一个观点作为自己论点，进行论证。黄金模板1(适合Advantages/Disadvantages题型)Peoples views towards the advantages and disadvantages of 主题词vary greatly.Some believe(hold,think)that 观点1,while others argue(support)that 观点2.As for me,I agree to the former/latter idea because its advantages outweigh its disadvantages.There are dozen of reasons behind my belief.First of all,支持论点理由1.证实理由1.The second reason that can be seen by every person is that 支持论点理由2.For example,举例证实理由2.From the above,we can easily see that 主题词is beneficial to 总结理由1、2.3 3第3页第3页A Major Advantage of Advertising on Television(1999)Peoples views towards the advantages and disadvantages of the television advertisement very greatly.Some believe that TV advertising brings us benefits,while others argue that TV advertising is full of false and misleading information.As for me,I agree to the former idea because its advantages outweigh its disadvantages.There are dozen of reasons behind my belief.First of all,TV advertising is a good means for manufacturers to publicize their products.Through advertising on TV,every company tries its best to display the merits of its products and convince consumers that its product is reliable and credible.In the market-oriented economy,TV advertising is probably the best way for company to win in the keen competitions.The second reason that can be seen by every person is that consumers need TV advertising for their reference.Through TV advertisements,consumers can get the first-hand information about new products,so that they can choose the most suitable one.For example,before buying a cell phone,they just need to turn on the television,sit in the sofa,watch the screen,and then make their decision.From the above,we can easily see that TV advertising is beneficial both to manufacturers and consumers on account of the abundant information it provided.4 4第4页第4页黄金模板2(适合Yes/No题型)It has long been a contentious issue as to whether 题目陈说.Some people are of the opinion that 观点1,while others point out that 观点2.As far as I am concerned,the former/latter opinion holds more weight.For one thing,支持观点1理由1.阐释理由1.For another,支持观点1理由2.阐释理由2.Now,after close examination,it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that总结观点.Therefore,as a university student,we should提出提议.5 5第5页第5页More Pressure from Academic Studies Does Good to Us(1997)It has long been a contentious issue as to whether more pressure from academic studies does good to students or not.Some people are of the opinion that pressure makes motive power,while others point out that too much pressure cause problems.As far as I am concerned,the former opinion holds more weight.For one thing,pressure from academic studies can drive students to work harder.Our college education serves as a preparation phase for future career development.In order to stand out among many competitors,students should learn as much as possible in the college and make themselves to be more prepared for the future jobs.For another,pressure form the academic study is a necessary driving force to those less self-disciplined students.College life leaves,compared to middle school life,more freedom.Many students can not adjust themselves to the new life style and become addicted to playing computer games or surfing the internet all day long.Now,after close examination,it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that modest pressure from academic study is useful and necessary.Therefore,as a university student,we should treasure our college life and properly arrange our time.“Play while play,study while study”,as the saying goes.6 6第6页第6页黄金模板3(适合A/B题型)通过现象引出话题.As a result,some people are worried that A与B之间矛盾.However,I dont think their concerns are necessary,because A has some exclusive advantages over B.First of all,A与B比较优势1.A长处.However,B缺点.Furthermore,A与B比较优势2.For example,举例阐明优势2.Last but not the least,A与B比较优势3.A长处.In contrast,B缺点.In short,A has some merits that B doesnt have.Therefore,结论.7 7第7页第7页Saving Money or Using Tomorrows Money()The argument over saving money or using tomorrows money among students has recently been brought into focus with the results of a survey released recently.Quite a few deem that saving money is a good habit,but others,in contrast,take using tomorrows money today as the premier choice.Personally,I think thrift should never be abandoned,especially by our students.The main reason for my inclination for saving money is that thrift is a traditional virtue in China.Our country is still a developing country,and is also a country with a too large population.If we have used up all of tomorrows money,then how should we do tomorrow?Furthermore,thrift is a virtue that young students should hold.Knowing how to spend money today doesnt mean knowing how to earn money tomorrow.It is dangerous when we spend more than we can earn.Among all of the supporting evidence,the strongest one is“Dont count your chickens before they are hatched.”Future is too uncertain.We have to save something in case of the rainy days.The using-tomorrow-money way of thinking is too limited.As a college student,I am supposed to hold the good habit of saving money,because it is not only a virtue,but also a kind of attitude toward life.8 8第8页第8页 给定观点型题目，在提出一个话题之后，同时也给定了关于这个话题一个见解或观点，要求考生以这个给定观点或见解作为作文论点进行论证。黄金模板1 Nowadays,with现象,people are becoming increasingly aware of the significance of 主题词.In my point of view,把标题变面陈说句.There are numerous reasons to support my point of view,and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here.One of the primary causes is that 支持论点理由1.As the saying goes,引用名言证实理由1.Another reason that can be seen by every person is that 支持论点理由2.阐释理由2.Taking into account of all these factors,we may draw the conclusion that 重述标题观点（论点）.Therefore,提出意见或提议.给定观点型给定观点型 9 9第9页第9页 The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood()Nowadays,with the surging cases of mental problem,committing suicide,or killing reported,people are becoming increasingly aware of the significance of keeping a good mood.In my point of view,it is really important to keep an optimistic attitude toward pressure.There are numerous reasons to support my point of view,and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here.One of the primary causes is that keeping a good mood helps you to get along well with others.Nobody would like to make friends with one who always complains.As the saying goes,“A bad workman always blames his tools.”Another reason that can be seen by every person is that good mood benefits your health.Life is always full of ups and downs.When you are in trouble or frustration,you should take it in a reasonable way and overcome it as soon as possible.Taking into account of all these factors,we may draw the conclusion that keeping a good mood brings you not only friendship,but health as well.Therefore,we should learn to look at things from a positive angle,face challenge and pressure with optimistic attitude.1010第10页第10页黄金模板2 Upon the benefit(importance,significance)of 题目中关键词,people share a common view that 论点.As to me,I cant agree more with them.题目中关键词should,undoubtedly,be an indispensable part of our life.On the one hand,支持论点理由1.阐述理由1.On the other hand,支持论点理由2.阐述理由2.Finally,支持论点理由3.阐述理由3 So,based on the above discussion,there is no doubt that 综述支持论点理由1、2、3.What worths mentioning is that强调或引申论点.1111第11页第11页 Travel Broadens the Mind()Upon the benefit of travel,people share a common view that it relaxes our body and broadens our mind.As to me,I cant agree more with them.Travel should,undoubtedly,be an indispensable part of our life.On the one hand,travel enables us to know more about the geography and history of the outside world.Such knowledge often arouses our love of the world and makes us less narrow-minded.On the other hand,travel helps us to understand people of different culture and interests.We can get ideas of the living conditions and customs of other people.We can also taste different foods and local flavors.Finally,by traveling we can see with our own eyes many places read from books.We can visit the famous cities and scenic spots.We can enjoy the beautiful scenery in different places.We can gain much beyond written in the books.So,based on the above discussion,there is no doubt that travel is beneficial to our minds with the knowledge of geography,history,people and culture.What worths mentioning is that the knowledge we gain from traveling is definitely much beyond that we gain from book reading.1212第12页第12页黄金模板3 Now,there is a growing awareness among our students that 引出话题.From my point of view,I think that 论点.I will explain why this is the case.The first and most import reason is that 支持论点理由1.If you look around,you will always find that举例证实1.Another reason to support my idea is that 支持论点理由2.A good case in point is 举例证实2.As the saying goes,引用谚语.So from what has been discussed,one can reach only this conclusion that 重述标题观点(论点).Students should提出提议或意见.If we can manage to 以及改良办法,our life will be more enjoyable.1313第13页第13页 The Importance of Extracurricular Activities()Now,there is a growing awareness among our students that college life should be varied and colorful.From my point of view,I think that extracurricular activities make up an important part of our college life.I will explain why this is the case.The first and mist importance reason is that extracurricular activities are indispensable for us to build our bodies.If you look around,you will always find that those who never or seldom do physical exercises are more inclined to suffer this or that kind of frustrations or mental problems.Another reason to support my idea is that extracurricular activities help us to develop teamwork spirit.A good case in point is when playing volleyball,the team members must help and cooperate with each other in order to gain scores.As the proverb says:By uniting we stand;by dividing we fall.So from what has been discussed,one can reach only this conclusion that extracurricular activities are helpful.1414第14页第14页 自由发挥型自由发挥型 自由发挥型题目，在提出一个话题之后，要求考生对此论题目展开联想，发挥创造力，提出自己观点，题目对此不加以任何限定。依据对历年考题分析，自由发挥型主要分为两类，一类是The way型。通常是要求考生就某一问题提出一个处理方案。无论题目要求是One Way还是The Best Way,考生所提出都应当是你所认为最佳方案。另一类是My Idea型。题目的问法也许是My Idea也也许是My View,甚至有也许是My Opinion,My Attitude等，事实上要求考生写都是个人观点。黄金模板1(适合The Best Way型)Nowadays,it is a heatedly discussed topic that引出话题(转述问题).People have put forward various ways,such as例1，例2，例3,etc.As for me,the best way to 主题词is 论点.The benefits for my ideas can be generalized to two mayor ones.First of all,支持论点理由1.Suppose if 提出假想例子证实理由1.Another benefit is that 支持论点理由2.引用名言或谚语证实理由2.In conclusion,总结.So提出提议.1515第15页第15页 The Best Way to Stay Healthy()Nowadays,it is a heatedly discussed topic that what is the best way to stay healthy.People have put forward various ways,such as doing exercises,keeping a balanced diet,taking vitamin tablets every day,etc.As for me,the best way to stay healthy is to develop a positive mind toward life.The benefits for my ideas can be generalized to two major ones.First of all,a positive mind helps to release you from the pressure or frustration of your work or life.Suppose if you always keep a bulldog mood toward everything,you cannot be healthy even if you have a very good diet and exercise very often,Another benefit is that the positive attitude helps you to gain friendship.“There is no man that impart his joys to his friends,but that he joy the more”,as Bacon said.No one would like to make friend with one who always complains.In conclusion,mental health is as important as physical health,but more difficult to gain.So once you are under pressure,you should learn how to relax and release your tensed nerves.And dont forget to share it with your friends!1616第16页第16页黄金模板2(My Idea型)This problem is a much debated one in that it affects almost everybody in their daily lives.As a college student,I think that论点.To begin with,支持论点理由1.阐明理由1.A further reason why I support this is that 支持论点理由2.There is good evidence to show that 证实理由2.All in all,重述主题.提出提议.1717第17页第17页 My View on College Students Paying the Tuition Fee（非真题）（非真题）This problem is a much debated one in that it affects everybody in their daily lives.As a college student,I think that it is reasonable for Chinese college students to pay several thousand Yuan a year as their tuition fees.To begin with,the tuition fee goals the students to be more industrious.In the past,when they did not have to pay the tuition fee,some students did not treasure the opportunity much.So,most of them spent time in a lazy and relaxing way.However,thanks to the financial pressure,many students,now,tend to work harder to compete for the scholarship.A further reason why I support this is that the tuition fee enables colleges to improve their teaching qualities.There is good evidence to show that the hardware of colleges has been much efficiently improved during the last ten years,when students come to shoulder the cost with government.All in all,both students and colleges get benefits when the students pay a rational amount of money as the tuition fee,only if the government and universities should take more effective measures to ensure poor students to finish their college studies.1818第18页第18页黄金模板3(My Idea型)Some people take it for granted that反方论点.But to be frank,I cannot agree with them.From my point of view,论点.First of all,支持论点理由1.证实理由1.Besides,支持论点理由2.证实理由2.From what has been discussed above,a conclusion can be drawn that 总结观点,I wish提出希望.1919第19页第19页 My Idea of a University Arts Festival()Some people take it for granted that the university arts festival is just a series of singing or dancing performance of students.But to be frank,I cannot agree with them.From my point of view,a good university arts festival should be a feast of arts.First of all,a good university arts festival should be a chance for students to get in touch with real arts.Pure arts,most of the time,seem to be far away from students reach.Our school should make a full use of this chance to cultivate students taste toward pure arts,such as classical musical,master paintings,good books,etc.Besides,the university arts festival should also serve as an effective compensation for extracurricular activities.We should ensure that this is an activity that all students have chances to participate in.in this way,the campus life can be greatly enriched and the festival can be really enjoyed by everybody.From what has been discussed above,a conclusion can be drawn that a good university arts festival should be a big course of arts education and an activity of every student.I wish the arts festival next semester be carefully designed and arranged so that it will cater for different interests.2020第20页第20页