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高考书面表达：高考书面表达：如何写好邀请信如何写好邀请信假如你是班长李华，你假如你是班长李华，你打算邀请外教打算邀请外教Mr.Brown到你班到你班作一个健康知识讲座作一个健康知识讲座，请你给他写一封电子邮件，要点如下：请你给他写一封电子邮件，要点如下：1.学生面临的健康问题学生面临的健康问题2.讲座的具体内容讲座的具体内容3.讲座的时间安排：下周三下午讲座的时间安排：下周三下午3:30-5:00Step 1审题审题1.审任务审任务:2.审目的审目的:3.审内容审内容:给外教写邀请信给外教写邀请信邀请外教作健康知识讲座邀请外教作健康知识讲座3个重要要点（缺一不可：具体化）个重要要点（缺一不可：具体化）Step 2 构思构思写写作作目目的的：邀邀请请外外教教作作健健康康讲讲座座思考：思考：学生存在哪些学生存在哪些健康问题？健康问题？细节细节 拓展拓展健康问题健康问题（具体的问（具体的问题）题）由问题决定由问题决定讲座内容讲座内容活动时间、活动时间、地点地点细节拓展的细节拓展的三个维度三个维度写写作作目目的的决决定定细细节节拓拓展展 ImLiHua,monitorofclass1.Onbehalfofourschool,Isincerelyinviteyoutoto give a lecture about health in our class.自我介绍自我介绍发出邀请发出邀请写作目的写作目的邀请信邀请信名词作同位语名词作同位语 Nowadays the state of senior highschoolstudentsbodyqualityisgettingworseandworse year by year.Many students arenear-sighted.Somestudentsareoverweightandsomehavesleepproblems.邀请信邀请信写作目的写作目的健康问题健康问题问题一问题一问题二三问题二三 In order to stay slim,some students choose to go on a diet or even take weight-loss pills to keep a good figure.Therefore,our class would like to invite you to give us a lecture,in which you can talk about the dangers of unhealthy ways of losing weight and offer us advice on keeping fit in a healthy way.邀请信邀请信写作目的写作目的健康问题健康问题讲座内容讲座内容目的目的 Lastingoneandhalfhoursfromfrom3:30pmto5pm,thelecturewillbeheldnextWednesdayinourclassroom.Willyoubeavailablethen?Imlookingforwardtoreceivingyourearlyreply.邀请信邀请信写作目的写作目的健康问题健康问题讲座内容讲座内容目的目的时间地点时间地点邀请信邀请信写作目的写作目的自我介绍自我介绍发出邀请发出邀请健康问题健康问题问题一问题一问题二问题二问题三问题三讲座内容讲座内容具体内容具体内容讲座时间、交际结语讲座时间、交际结语Step 4 思维导图思维导图有效有效拓展拓展无效无效拓展拓展VSStep 5 有效有效 VS 无效无效 假定你是李华。你是学生会主席。你校将于假定你是李华。你是学生会主席。你校将于5月月25-30日在广州沙面举行龙舟赛日在广州沙面举行龙舟赛(Dragon Boat Race)。请根。请根据以下内容给姐妹学校剑桥中学据以下内容给姐妹学校剑桥中学(Cambridge High School)写一封邀请信。写一封邀请信。（1）写作目的）写作目的（2）活动时间、地点和意义）活动时间、地点和意义（3）回复时间：）回复时间：2017年年4月月15日前日前Step 1审题审题1.审任务审任务:2.审目的审目的:3.审内容审内容:_邀请姐妹学校邀请姐妹学校参加活动参加活动给姐妹学校给姐妹学校写邀请信写邀请信3个个要点要点Step 2 构思构思写写作作目目的的：邀邀请请姐姐妹妹学学校校参参加加活活动动思考：思考：如何如何说服说服姐妹姐妹学校学校参加活动参加活动？细节细节 拓展拓展活动内容活动内容(what)活动目的活动目的(why)活动收获活动收获(how)细节拓展的细节拓展的三个维度三个维度写写作作目目的的决决定定细细节节拓拓展展Outerbeauty23Step 3 赏析赏析Innerbeauty Im Li Hua,chairman of the Student Union.On behalf of our school,I sincerely invite you to join in the Dragon Boat Race organized by us.自我介绍自我介绍发出邀请发出邀请写作目的写作目的邀请信邀请信 Lasting 5 days from May 25th to May 30th,the race will take place in Sha Mian,Guangzhou.The race is not only exciting and inspiring,but also rich in symbolic meaning.The traditionally-held activity conveys Chinese peoples wish to show their respect and admiration to the great poet,Qu Yuan,which enables us to better inherit our traditional culture and pass on its spirit.邀请信邀请信写作目的写作目的活动内容活动内容时间、地点时间、地点活动意义活动意义With the hope that our students can have further communication with your students as well as learning the spirit of cooperation,I sincerely wish you could accept our invitation and we together make it an educational and far-reaching acitvity.邀请信邀请信写作目的写作目的活动内容活动内容时间、地点时间、地点活动意义活动意义收获、再邀收获、再邀 In order to get everything perfectly prepared,Ill be extremely grateful if you could give us your reply before April 15th.Looking forward to hearing from you soon.邀请信邀请信写作目的写作目的活动内容活动内容活动须知活动须知提示期限提示期限交际结语交际结语邀请信邀请信写作目的写作目的自我介绍自我介绍发出邀请发出邀请活动内容活动内容时间、地点时间、地点活动意义活动意义收获、再邀收获、再邀活动须知活动须知提示期限提示期限交际结语交际结语Step 4 思维导图思维导图有效有效拓展拓展无效无效拓展拓展VSStep 5 有效有效 VS 无效无效1.Besides,all the participants will receive a secret present designed by our school.What maybe deserves your attention is that we also invite some schools with good reputation as well as yours,intending to offer students a chance to share learning experience with each other.2.The Race will be held from May 25 to May 30 in Sha Mian.More than 20 excellent teams have been invited to take part in it.The team which arrives at the finish line first will gain the first prize.拓展拓展1：活动的内容：活动的内容有效拓展有效拓展_拓展拓展2：活动的意义：活动的意义1.Besides eating Zongzi on the Dragon Boat Festival,we will also hold the race,because we want to show our respect for a great poet Qu Yuan,who threw himself into the river.And people threw rice into the river in case the fish would eat his body.2.The Dragon Boat Race is designed to honor and remember Qu Yuan,a talented poet with a strong and noble personality.The Race can not only broaden the students horizons,but also strengthen the friendship between our school and your school,Cambridge High School.有效拓展有效拓展_有效有效拓展拓展Step6总结总结围绕围绕目的目的逻辑逻辑严密严密行文行文连贯连贯表达表达得体得体1思路示范2 思维训练3片段写作4 课堂总结目 录假如你是校英语俱乐部主席李华假如你是校英语俱乐部主席李华,计划下个月在全计划下个月在全校开展一次英语演讲比赛校开展一次英语演讲比赛，请你给请你给Mr.Smith写一封写一封英文电子邮件，邀请他担任本次比赛的评委，并询问英文电子邮件，邀请他担任本次比赛的评委，并询问他下周什么时候有空在学校大礼堂做一次关于演讲技他下周什么时候有空在学校大礼堂做一次关于演讲技巧的讲座。巧的讲座。注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右左右2.可适当增加细节，可适当增加细节，以以使行文连贯。使行文连贯。3.邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearMr.Smith,_Yourssincerely,LiHua 假如你是校英语俱乐部主席李华假如你是校英语俱乐部主席李华，计划下个月在计划下个月在全校开展一次英语演讲比赛全校开展一次英语演讲比赛，请你给请你给Mr.Smith写一封写一封英文电子邮件，邀请他担任本次比赛的评委，并询问英文电子邮件，邀请他担任本次比赛的评委，并询问他下周什么时候有空在学校大礼堂做一次关于演讲技他下周什么时候有空在学校大礼堂做一次关于演讲技巧的讲座。巧的讲座。_Step 1审题审题1.审任务：审任务：2.审目的：审目的：3.审内容：审内容：邀请邀请Mr.Smith担任评委担任评委+做讲座做讲座给给Mr.Smith写电子邮件写电子邮件4个个要点要点_有效有效拓展拓展围绕围绕目的目的逻辑逻辑严密严密行文行文连贯连贯表达表达得体得体Step 2 有效拓展有效拓展常见错误：常见错误：1.I am Li Hua,the chair of our school English club.I am Li Hua,chairman of the English club of our school.2.There is an English speech race will be held on next month.There is an English speech contest(competition)to be held next month.3.To improve students english spoken,we will held a english speaking match.To improve students spoken English,we plan to hold an English speech competition.4.I want to know weather you are convenience to give us a lecture about speech skills.I wonder whether it is convenient for you to give us a lecture about speaking skills.有效有效拓展拓展无效无效拓展拓展VS有效有效 VS 无效无效拓展拓展1：举办：举办英语演讲比赛英语演讲比赛的目的的目的1.To encourage students to speak English bravely,our school plans to hold an English speech competition.2.In order to improve students spoken English,an English speech competition will be held.3.To inspire students motivation in learning English and give them a chance to put what they have learnt into practice,we plan to hold an English speech competition.有效拓展：更具体有效拓展：更具体如何区分如何区分hold 和和 held 1.人人/组织组织+hold+活动活动2.活动活动+will be held(作谓语，将来时）作谓语，将来时）3.活动活动+to be held（作后置定语，表将来）（作后置定语，表将来）4.活动活动+held（作后置定语，表过去或被动）（作后置定语，表过去或被动）拓展拓展2：邀请：邀请Mr.Smith做评委的原因做评委的原因1.You are so good at oral English that we cant find anyone else that is more suitable to be a judge.2.You are one of the best English teachers in our school.Many students have made great progress with your guidance.So I want to invite you to be a judge in the coming competition.3.To make the competition more professional and wonderful,we will invite you and some excellent teachers to be the judges.Besides,you could make some effective and helpful comments on the competitors performances.有效拓展：更有说服力有效拓展：更有说服力无关内容无关内容结束交际语：结束交际语：Para.2/3What+(Why)+(How)Step1写作写作