高三英语书面表达优质课.pptx

高三汝河高三汝河高三汝河高三汝河 山东山东2007年高考考试说明年高考考试说明第第II卷书面表达部分的解读与例证卷书面表达部分的解读与例证关于写作关于写作“写作写作的词数要求提高到的词数要求提高到120150词汇，词汇，既要求表达事实信息，又要既要求表达事实信息，又要陈述个人观点陈述个人观点，相对以往试题而言，思，相对以往试题而言，思维和表达的空间骤然增大，需要考生花维和表达的空间骤然增大，需要考生花大力气进行有关训练。大力气进行有关训练。”齐鲁晚报齐鲁晚报2006年年12月月19日日B2版版例证例证当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影，有人则喜欢读有人选择看电影，有人则喜欢读原著。请你以原著。请你以“Filmorbook,whichdoyouprefer?”为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文：短文：看电影：省时、有趣、易懂看电影：省时、有趣、易懂读原著：细节更多、语言优美读原著：细节更多、语言优美我的看法及理由我的看法及理由注意：注意：1、词数：、词数：100-120文章题目和开头已文章题目和开头已给出（不计入词数）。给出（不计入词数）。2、参考词汇：、参考词汇：originalwork或或bookintheoriginal（原著）（原著）Film or book,which do you prefer?Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.Film or book,which do you prefer?Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.bad beginningsa.I dont think seeing a film is better than reading a book.b.As for me,c.Others hold the view that bad conclusionsa.I think both films and books have their advantages.b.I have no preference between the two.c.I first watch a film,then read the book.Good ConclusionsGood Conclusions：我的看法及理由：我的看法及理由：Revised film is just like one tree in the original works forest.I prefer to go across the forest rather than enjoy only one tree.Through reading,every reader will have a different Hamlet in mind.So dont give up reading.Lets taste the original flavor of art.Books introduce us into the best society.By reading a book,we hear what they said and did;we see them as if they were really alive;we sympathize with them,enjoy withthem.给出的参考答案给出的参考答案 Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story.Besides,the film is usuallymore interesting,and it is easier to follow.Some others have just the opposite opinion.They think that they can get more detailed information from the original.Meanwhile,the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.Personally,I agree with the second view.Actually I have more reasons for it.I think I can stay at home,reading quietly in a situation of my own,and whats more,I am able to better understand the authors ideas.In a word,to read the original workis better than to see the film based on it.高考英语作文模版高考英语作文模版对比观点题型对比观点题型阐述主题题型阐述主题题型解决方法题型解决方法题型说明利弊题型说明利弊题型对比观点题型对比观点题型对比观点题型对比观点题型（1 1）要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。的看法。的看法。的看法。1 1有一些人认为。有一些人认为。有一些人认为。有一些人认为。2 2另一些人认为。另一些人认为。另一些人认为。另一些人认为。3 3我的看法。我的看法。我的看法。我的看法。（2 2）给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点）给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点）给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点）给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点ThetopicofThetopicof-主题）主题）主题）主题）isbecomingmoreandmoreisbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.popularrecently.Therearetwosidesofopinionsaboutit.Therearetwosidesofopinionsaboutit.SomepeoplesayAistheirfavoriteSomepeoplesayAistheirfavorite.TheyholdtheirviewTheyholdtheirviewforthereasonofforthereasonof-（支持（支持（支持（支持A A的理由一）的理由一）的理由一）的理由一）WhatisWhatismore,more,-理由二理由二理由二理由二).Moreover,).Moreover,-(-(理由三理由三理由三理由三).).WhileothersthinkthatBisabetterchoiceinthefollowingWhileothersthinkthatBisabetterchoiceinthefollowingthreereasonsthreereasons.Firstly,-(.Firstly,-(支持支持支持支持B B的理由一的理由一的理由一的理由一).).Secondly(besides),Secondly(besides),-（理由二）（理由二）（理由二）（理由二）.Thirdly(finally),Thirdly(finally),-(-(理由三理由三理由三理由三).).Frommypointofview,IthinkFrommypointofview,Ithink-（我的观点）（我的观点）（我的观点）（我的观点）.Thereasonisthat.Thereasonisthat-(-(原因原因原因原因).).Asamatteroffact,therearesomeotherreasonstoAsamatteroffact,therearesomeotherreasonstoexplainmychoice.Forme,theformerissurelyawiseexplainmychoice.Forme,theformerissurelyawisechoice.choice.2 2）给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点）给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点）给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点）给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点SomepeoplebelievethatSomepeoplebelievethat-（观点一）（观点一）（观点一）（观点一）.Forexample,theythinkForexample,theythink-（举例说明（举例说明（举例说明（举例说明)AnditwillbringthemAnditwillbringthem-(-(为他们带来的好处为他们带来的好处为他们带来的好处为他们带来的好处).).Inmyopinion,IneverthinkthisreasoncanInmyopinion,Ineverthinkthisreasoncanbethepoint.bethepoint.ForonethingForonething,-(我不同意该看法的理由一我不同意该看法的理由一我不同意该看法的理由一我不同意该看法的理由一).).ForanotherthingForanotherthing,-(-(反对的理由之二反对的理由之二反对的理由之二反对的理由之二)FormallwhatIhavesaid,IagreetotheFormallwhatIhavesaid,Iagreetothethoughtthatthoughtthat-(-(我对文章所我对文章所我对文章所我对文章所讨论主题的看法讨论主题的看法讨论主题的看法讨论主题的看法)阐述主题题型阐述主题题型要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述纲的要求进行论述.阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义分析并举例使其更充实分析并举例使其更充实Thegoodoldproverb-Thegoodoldproverb-（名言或谚语）（名言或谚语）（名言或谚语）（名言或谚语）remindsusthat-(remindsusthat-(释义释义释义释义).).Indeed,wecanlearnIndeed,wecanlearnmanythingsformit.manythingsformit.FirstofallFirstofall,-(,-(理由一理由一理由一理由一).).Forexample,-(Forexample,-(举例说明举例说明举例说明举例说明).).Secondly,-Secondly,-(理由二理由二理由二理由二).Anothercaseisthat-().Anothercaseisthat-(举例说明举例说明举例说明举例说明).).Furthermore,-(Furthermore,-(理由三理由三理由三理由三)Inmyopinion,-(Inmyopinion,-(我的观点我的观点我的观点我的观点)Inshort,).Inshort,whateveryoudo,pleaserememberthesay-A.whateveryoudo,pleaserememberthesay-A.IfyouunderstanditandapplyittoyourstudyIfyouunderstanditandapplyittoyourstudyorwork,youllnecessarilybenefitalotfromit.orwork,youllnecessarilybenefitalotfromit.解决方法题型解决方法题型要求考生列举出解决问题的多种要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径途径问题现状问题现状怎样解决怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点解决方案的优缺点Inrecentdays,wehavetofaceaInrecentdays,wehavetofaceaproblem-A,problem-A,whichisbecomingmorewhichisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.First,-andmoreserious.First,-(说明的现状说明的现状说明的现状说明的现状)Second,-Second,-(举例进一步说明现状举例进一步说明现状举例进一步说明现状举例进一步说明现状)ConfrontedwithA,weshouldtakeConfrontedwithA,weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocopeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocopewiththesituation.withthesituation.ForonethingForonething,-,-(解决方法一解决方法一解决方法一解决方法一).).ForanotherForanother-(-(解决方法二解决方法二解决方法二解决方法二).).Finally,-(Finally,-(解决方法三解决方法三解决方法三解决方法三).).Personally,Ibelievethat-Personally,Ibelievethat-(我的解决方法我的解决方法我的解决方法我的解决方法).).Consequently,ImconfidentthatConsequently,Imconfidentthatabrightfutureisawaitingusabrightfutureisawaitingusbecause-(because-(带来的好处带来的好处带来的好处带来的好处).).说明利弊题型说明利弊题型说明利弊题型说明利弊题型这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度（利或弊）出发，最后往往要求一个角度（利或弊）出发，最后往往要求一个角度（利或弊）出发，最后往往要求一个角度（利或弊）出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度（或对事物前景提出考生表明自己的态度（或对事物前景提出考生表明自己的态度（或对事物前景提出考生表明自己的态度（或对事物前景提出预测）预测）预测）预测）.说明事物现状说明事物现状说明事物现状说明事物现状.事物本身的优缺点（或一方面）事物本身的优缺点（或一方面）事物本身的优缺点（或一方面）事物本身的优缺点（或一方面）.你对现状（或前景）的看法你对现状（或前景）的看法你对现状（或前景）的看法你对现状（或前景）的看法NowadaysmanypeoplepreferAbecauseithasasignificantroleinourdailylife.Generally,itsadvantagescanbeseenasfollows.First-(的优点之一的优点之一).Besides-（的优点之二）（的优点之二）.Buteverycoinhastwosides.Thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent.Oneoftheimportantdisadvantagesisthat-(的第一个缺点的第一个缺点)Tomakemattersworse,-(的第二个点的第二个点)Throughtheaboveanalysis,Ibelievethatthepositiveaspectsoverweighthenegativeones.Therefore,Iwouldliketo-(我的看法我的看法)Asisshown/indicatedbythefigure/percentageinthetableAsisshown/indicatedbythefigure/percentageinthetable(graph/picture/chart),(graph/picture/chart),_作文题目的议题作文题目的议题作文题目的议题作文题目的议题_hasbeenon_hasbeenonrise/decreasesignificantly/dramatically/steadilyrisingrise/decreasesignificantly/dramatically/steadilyrisingfrom_in_to_in_.from_in_to_in_.Fromthesharp/markedFromthesharp/markeddecline/riseinthechart,itgoeswithoutsayingthat_.decline/riseinthechart,itgoeswithoutsayingthat_.Thereareatleasttwogoodreasonsaccountingfor_.Thereareatleasttwogoodreasonsaccountingfor_.Ontheonehand,_.Ontheotherhand,_isduetoOntheonehand,_.Ontheotherhand,_isduetothefactthat_.Inaddition,_isresponsibleforthefactthat_.Inaddition,_isresponsiblefor_.Maybetherearesomeotherreasonstoshow_._.Maybetherearesomeotherreasonstoshow_.ButitisgenerallybelievedthattheabovementionedButitisgenerallybelievedthattheabovementionedreasonsarecommonlyconvincing.reasonsarecommonlyconvincing.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iholdthepointofviewthat_AsfarasIamconcerned,Iholdthepointofviewthat_.Iamsuremyopinionisbothsoundandwell-grounded.Iamsuremyopinionisbothsoundandwell-grounded.Studying AbroadAttending schools abroad has many advantages.Firstly,by looking at our own country form outside,we can widenour vision and broaden our minds.Secondly,we can visit famous scenic spots and make friends with the local people.thirdly,we can use the foreign language quickly.However,there are also some disadvantages in attendinga foreign school.The most serious problem is the language barrier.Most students do not have adequate knowledge of language spoken there.On arriving there,they find it difficultto understand what the teachers are saying.Furthermore,thecost of living is much higher than that in our country,so most students have to find part-time job to support themselves.On the whole,it is a good thing to study abroad.However,one must not lose sight of the disadvantages.On punctuality Punctuality means observing regular or appointed time.There is no doubt that punctuality is of great importance inmodern world,and to be punctual is not only a good quality,but it is also to show respect for others and to win trust.As far as I am concerned,failure to be punctual in keeping ones appointment is invited to a dinner and arrives later than the appointed time,he keeps all the others guestswaiting.This is great discourtesy towards both the guests and the host.As a proverb says,“Time flies never to berecalled”,this is true.If we lose something,we may find it again.But lost time can never be regained.In fact,timeitself is life.Therefore,wasting others time is the same as taking away time from others lives.IstheonlywayouttogotocollegeWehadadiscussionaboutwhetheritistheonlywayoutforseniorstudentstogotocollege.Viewsvaryfrompersontoperson.Themajorityofstudentsconsideritnecessarytogotocollege.Theythinkitcanwidentheirknowledgeandimprovetheirqualities.Onlyinthiswaycantheyfindbetterjobsaftergraduation.Veryfewstudentsthinkitunnecessarytogotouniversity,becausethetuitionistoohighfortheirfamilytoafford.Whatsmore,itsratherhardforcollegegraduatestofindsatisfactoryjobs.Thirtypercentofthestudents,however,believe“AllroadsleadtoRome.”Therefore,itdoesntmakeanydifferencewhethertheygotocollegeornot.Inmyopinion,wecanreceiveabettereducationatcollegesothatwecanseverourmotherland.写作中需要注意的问题写作中需要注意的问题了解短文写作的内容及要求了解短文写作的内容及要求把握好写作步骤把握好写作步骤写作时要注意写作时要注意“三忌三忌”形式上要一致形式上要一致避免犯小的笔误（语法，拼写）避免犯小的笔误（语法，拼写）书写规范，工整书写规范，工整形式上的一致也是运用英语进行表达时需要十分注意的形式上的一致也是运用英语进行表达时需要十分注意的a.a.主谓一致主谓一致 Twenty percent of the students in our class is Twenty percent of the students in our class is from the suburb.from the suburb.b.b.人称、指代要一致人称、指代要一致 Bring your books here tomorrow and I will Bring your books here tomorrow and I will return it to the library.return it to the library.c.c.平行平行(对称对称)关系要一致关系要一致 My teacher,Mr Wang,is patient as well as My teacher,Mr Wang,is patient as well as imagination.imagination.d.d.时态（语态）的起点要一致时态（语态）的起点要一致 Mary got up and dressing quickly.Mary got up and dressing quickly.书面表达注意衔接与连贯书面表达注意衔接与连贯表示表示表示表示转折转折转折转折关系的词：关系的词：关系的词：关系的词：but,while,however,yet,rather but,while,however,yet,rather but,while,however,yet,rather but,while,however,yet,rather than,not but,whereas,than,not but,whereas,than,not but,whereas,than,not but,whereas,表示表示表示表示选择选择选择选择关系的词：关系的词：关系的词：关系的词：or,eitheror,or,eitheror,or,eitheror,or,eitheror,表示表示表示表示原因，结果原因，结果原因结果原因，结果关系的词：关系的词：关系的词：关系的词：for,thus,because,since,for,thus,because,since,for,thus,because,since,for,thus,because,since,表示表示表示表示并列并列并列并列关系：关系：关系：关系：not only but also,and,both and,not only but also,and,both and,not only but also,and,both and,not only but also,and,both and,as well as.neither nor.,as well as.neither nor.,as well as.neither nor.,as well as.neither nor.,表示表示表示表示时间时间时间时间关系的词：关系的词：关系的词：关系的词：when,while,as,before,after,.when,while,as,before,after,.when,while,as,before,after,.when,while,as,before,after,.表示表示表示表示目的目的目的目的的词：的词：的词：的词：for this purpose,so that,in order that,for this purpose,so that,in order that,for this purpose,so that,in order that,for this purpose,so that,in order that,表示表示表示表示让步让步让步让步关系的词：关系的词：关系的词：关系的词：although,though,even though/if although,though,even though/if although,though,even though/if although,though,even though/if 表示表示表示表示条件条件条件条件的词：的词：的词：的词：if,unless,as/so long as,if,unless,as/so long as,if,unless,as/so long as,if,unless,as/so long as,eg:Therefore,itsveryimportantforustoformhealthyeatinghabits._,badeatinghabitsarestillverycommonamongusstudents.(2006福建卷福建卷)_youdidntspeakclearly,_Ididntlistenwell.However,othersprefertogooutfortraveling,_itcanincreasetheirknowledgeandbroadentheirhorizons.(2006陕西卷陕西卷)However,thischangehasbad_goodeffects,especiallydependenceontheInternet.(2006广东卷广东卷)_hegothome,hesaidtohisgrandpa,“Birdsalsoneedfriends!”(2006辽宁卷辽宁卷)HoweveraswellassinceEitherorWhen写好主题句：写好主题句：一一一一.主题句在段落中常出现的位置由两种。主题句在段落中常出现的位置由两种。1.段落开端段落开端:后面的句子提供支持信息或论证。后面的句子提供支持信息或论证。Someofusthinkthatitisbettertoseethefilmthantoreadthebookintheoriginal.Thereasonisthatittakeslesstimetounderstandthewholestory.Besides,thefilmisusuallymoreinterestinganditiseasiertofollow.2.段落结尾：前面提供细节的支持句，最后用一句总结性的主段落结尾：前面提供细节的支持句，最后用一句总结性的主题句加以概括。题句加以概括。ImahighschoolstudentsinBeijing,wheretheWinterAsianGameswillstart.MyspokenEnglishisgoodandIcancommunicatewithforeignersfluently.AndIhaveothervirtues.IlikesportsandImfamiliarwithBeijing.SoIthinkImsuitableforservingtheWAG.二二.写好段落主题句的三原则写好段落主题句的三原则1.概括全段主要内容，既不能以偏概全，也不能随意扩大范围概括全段主要内容，既不能以偏概全，也不能随意扩大范围如：在一段介绍如：在一段介绍“我在英语学习听说读写方面发生的变化我在英语学习听说读写方面发生的变化”的的段落中，主题句应该是：段落中，主题句应该是：MyspokenEnglishhasimprovedalot.GreatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyEnglishstudy.2.有体现中心思想的关键词或短语。有体现中心思想的关键词或短语。3.以简洁明了的句子为主，避免为追求使用以简洁明了的句子为主，避免为追求使用复杂结构而导致理解错误或主题不鲜明的句子。复杂结构而导致理解错误或主题不鲜明的句子。请根据下面选篇的结构形式和内容确定一个主题句。请根据下面选篇的结构形式和内容确定一个主题句。_Firstly,thetuitionisreasonable.Secondly,theuniversitycanhelpthestudentsgetasumofloanfromthebanks,whichreducestheloadofpeasantfamilieslikemine.Thirdly,itsprogramincomputerisrecognizedastheleaderinthecountry.A.WhydoIchoosetomajorincomputerscienceinthisuniversity?B.ThereareseveralreasonswhyIhavedecidedtoattendthisuniversity.Learningaforeignlanguagehaschanged.Notsolongagostudentswouldsitwithpensinhand,writingthebasicformsofalanguage,andthelearningstructurestheywouldneverbeabletospeak.Inthatsameclassroomtoday,pensandnotebookshavebeenputaway.Thespokensoundsofforeignlanguagefilltheroom写好段落扩展句写好段落扩展句扩展句是主题句的具体例证或有力支持。写好扩展句要注意扩展句是主题句的具体例证或有力支持。写好扩展句要注意以下三点以下三点:1.扩展句要紧扣文章中心和主题句的内容。扩展句是主题句的扩展句要紧扣文章中心和主题句的内容。扩展句是主题句的补充和支持。补充和支持。2.扩展句的层次很重要。一个主题句可以从以下几方面展开，每扩展句的层次很重要。一个主题句可以从以下几方面展开，每一个方面就是一个扩展句。这些扩展句只有按照时间，空间，一个方面就是一个扩展句。这些扩展句只有按照时间，空间，因果等逻辑顺序展开，文章才能层次分明，条理清晰。因果等逻辑顺序展开，文章才能层次分明，条理清晰。3.关联词对扩展句来说很重要。汉语注意思想相联，英文强调关联词对扩展句来说很重要。汉语注意思想相联，英文强调形式相联。从属于一个主题句的几个扩展句不能简单地堆砌形式相联。从属于一个主题句的几个扩展句不能简单地堆砌在一起了事，而要用丰富多采的连词连接起来。在一起了事，而要用丰富多采的连词连接起来。阅读下面的文段，并为所给的扩展句排列顺序：阅读下面的文段，并为所给的扩展句排列顺序：IthinkImfitforthejob._SoImsureIcandothejobwellifIgettheposition.A.ImfondofEnglishanddowellinbothspeakingandwriting.B.Asastudent,Ihavereadalotandhavemuchknowledgeinmanyfields.C.Aboveall,Ionceworkedasareporterformyschoolbroadcastingstation.D.Besides,Imeasytogetalongwithandenjoyworkingtogetherwithothers.写好结尾句写好结尾句结尾句要紧扣段落主题，有要有所扩展。结尾句要力求简洁结尾句要紧扣段落主题，有要有所扩展。结尾句要力求简洁结尾句要紧扣段落主题，有要有所扩展。结尾句要力求简洁结尾句要紧扣段落主题，有要有所扩展。结尾句要力求简洁有力，意味隽永。有力，意味隽永。有力，意味隽永。有力，