八下Unit4writing.pptx

Unit4 Why dont you talk to your parents?Writing 1.Do you have after-school classes?2.What kind of classes do you have?3.Do you like them?Lead-in In fact,the reason why my son takes after-school classes is just that he is interestedin them.I never push him hard.But I think its good for him to take up a hobby.Now whether children should take after-school classes is a hot topic.Different people have different opinions.Here are two students opinions.Read and try to complete the passages with“agree”or“disagree”.Mary:I _ that children should take after-school classes.I believe these activities are important for my future,because it can help me get good grades and later get into a good university.Peter:I _ that children should take after-school classes.Because these activities can cause a lot of stress for children.Kids should have time to relax and think for themselves,too.agreedisagreePros(Pros(正方正方)Cons(Cons(反方反方)Life shouldnt just be about grades.Its important for children to learn some skills so thatthey can get into a goodhigh school.Free time activities likesports and hanging out with friends are important.I need more free time to dothings I like.This can help me relax and be healthier.Its good for children to start learning from a young age.I believe these activities are important for my future.These activities can cause a lot of stress for children.Too much pressure is not good for kids development.People shouldnt push their kids so hard.Before-writing Its time to share your opinions!1.Share your opinion:_2.Have a debate(辩论)with your classmates to show your reasons:_ _3.Example:_I agree/disagree that children should take after-school classes.Too much pressure is not good for kids development.These activities help them to be successful in the future.I take lessons on weekends.It helps me.I never take any after-school lessons.Because I think1.Discuss with your group members and write down your ideas.2.When you finish,debate like this:S1:I agree/disagree that children should take after-school classes.BecauseS2:I agree./I think so./You are right.支持本方队友。I dont agree./I dont think so./Thats not true.I think反对对方辩友,再加至少一条理由。S3:Tips:In my opinion,getting good grades and learning skills are important,but its even more important to have happy children.So people shouldnt push their kids so hard.Ms.Lins opinion:Writing Task如今，越来越多的学生参加课外辅导班，不同的人有不同的观点，请你以Should children take after-school classes?为题，写一篇80-100词的短文说明你的观点。Take after-school classespros（正方）cons（反方）How to write a passage to express your opinionShould children take after-school classes?Beginning:These days,more and more children have to take after-school classes on weekends.Body:1.表达你的观点（支持表达你的观点（支持/反对反对)Ending:In my opinion,Writing tips参考句型:(1)I agree/disagree that children should take after-school classes.(2)I think it is important for children to take2.表述原因并举例说明：表述原因并举例说明：I believe I take lessons on weekends.They help me/I never take after-school classes becauseSample writing1Should children take after-school classes?These days,more and more children have to take after-school classes on weekends.As a student,I think that children should take some after-school classes.I take English lessons on weekends.And it helps me to get good grades.I believe it can also help me to get into a good high school.However,we still need some time to relax and think for ourselves.So I think its not good for kids to take too many after-school classes.Because too much pressure is not good for their development.In my opinion,getting good grades and learning skills are important,but its even more important to have happy children.So people shouldnt push their kids so hard.Being neutral（中立）Sample writing2Should children take after-school classes?These days,more and more children have to take after-school classes on weekends.I agree that children should take some after-school classes.Firstly,I think its good for kids to learn some exam skills.I take English lessons on weekends.And it helps me to get good grades.I believe it can also help me to get into a good high school.Secondly,I believe these activities are important for my future.They help me to compete and win so that I can be successful when I start working.In my opinion,its good for children to start learning from a young age and take some after-school classes,because these activities help them to be successful in the future.Be for（同意）Sample writing3Should children take after-school classes?These days,more and more children have to take after-school classes on weekends.In my opinion,I disagree that children should take after-school classes.Firstly,I think its bad for kids health.Because these activities can cause a lot of stress for them.For example,my parents took me to all kinds of classes on weekends.That made me feel nervous and unhappy.Secondly,I believe children already have enough stress from school.So they need time to relax and think for themselves.Thirdly,life shouldnt just be about grades.Free time activities such as sports and hanging out with friends are important.In a word,I dont think its good for kids to take after-school classes,so parents shouldnt push their kids so hard.Be against（不同意）首先，必首先，必须须有首尾句有首尾句A A组组学生学生 (80(80分以上）：主体部分分以上）：主体部分理由至少写出四点，理由至少写出四点，能能够够运用本运用本单单元元词汇词汇和句型，和句型，举实举实例，例，8080词词以上。以上。B B组组学生（学生（6060分分-79-79分）：主体部分分）：主体部分理由至少写出三点，理由至少写出三点，举实举实例，例，60-8060-80词词。C C组组学生学生 (40-59(40-59分）：分）必必须须交代自己的交代自己的观观点，其中理点，其中理由至少写出两点，由至少写出两点，4040词词以上。以上。D D组组学生学生 (39(39分以下）：分以下）：必必须须交代自己的交代自己的观观点，其中点，其中理由至少写出一点，理由至少写出一点，2020词词以上。以上。短文写作要求 Peer-assessment(同伴互评)评分表内容内容评分评分1有首尾句。有首尾句。1 2 32能够说清楚自己的观点。能够说清楚自己的观点。1 2 33能够用实例来证明自己的观点。能够用实例来证明自己的观点。1 2 34能够用理论来表达自己的看法。能够用理论来表达自己的看法。1 2 35书写规范，语法正确，字数达到书写规范，语法正确，字数达到要求。要求。1 2 3加分加分能运用到本课和本单元所学习到的词汇能运用到本课和本单元所学习到的词汇和句型等。和句型等。1 3 51.Finish the writing task.2.Try to correct it with your partner.3.Preview P26-27.Homework