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雅思写作改错练习(附答案)
1Futurism, an early twentieth-century movement in art, rejected all traditions and attempts to glorify contemporary life by emphasizing the machine and motion.
2 But, for a small group of students, professional training might be the way to go since well-developing skills, all other factors being equal, can be the difference between having a job or not.
3 For a group of remaining in existence, a profit-making organization must, in the long run, produces something consumers consider useful or desirable.
4 For a result of two or three centuries of scientific investigation we have come to believe that Nature is understandable in the sense that when we ask her questions by way of appropriate observations and experiments，she will answer truly and reward us with discoveries that endure.
5 At the same time, young people should be encourage to communicate with their peers and develop their interpersonal skills, which may help them greatly to reduce dependence in their parents.
6 When a new movement in art attains a certain fashion, it is advisable to find out what their advocates are aiming at, for, however farfetched and unreasonable their principles may seem today, it is possible that in years to come they may be regarded as normal.
7 Numerous other commercial enterprises, from theaters to magazine publishers, from gas and electric utilities to milk processors, bring better and more efficiently services to consumers through the use of computers.
8 The American economic system is, organizing around a basically private-enterprise, market-oriented economy in that consumers largely determine what shall be produced by spending their money in the marketplace for those goods and services that they want most.
9 Thus, in the American economic system it is the demand of individual consumers, coupled with the desire of businessmen to maximize profits and the desire of individuals to maximize their incomes, which together determine what shall be produced and how resources are used to produce it.
10 The individual now has more information available than any generation, and the task of finding that one information relevant to his or her specific problem is complicated, time--consuming, and sometimes even overwhelming.
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1Futurism, an early twentieth-century movement in art, rejected all traditions and attempts to glorify contemporary life by emphasizing the machine and motion.
错误: and并列连接两个谓语，应当是平行构造。所以attempts应当改为attempted.
2 But, for a small group of students, professional training might be the way to go since well-developing skills, all other factors being equal, can be the difference between having a job or not.
错误: 培育良好的技能不是well-developing而是well-developed.
3 For a group of remaining in existence, a profit-making organization must, in the long run, produces something consumers consider useful or desirable.
错误: For a group of remaining in existence应当是For a group to remain in existence.只有后者才可以做一个目的状语。produces应当是produce，由于在插入语in the long run的前边有must.
4 For a result of two or three centuries of scientific investigation， we have come to believe that Nature is understandable in the sense that when we ask her questions by way of appropriate observations and experiments，she will answer truly and reward us with discoveries that endure.
错误: For a result of应当是As a result of.介词搭配不当.
5 At the same time, young people should be encourage to communicate with their peers and develop their interpersonal skills, which may help them greatly to reduce dependence in their parents.
错误: should be encourage应当是should be encouraged,情态动词的被动语态. dependence in应当是dependence on, 介词搭配不当.
6 When a new movement in art attains a certain fashion, it is advisable to find out what their advocates are aiming at, for, however farfetched and unreasonable their principles may seem today, it is possible that in years to come they may be regarded as normal.
错误: their advocates应当是its advocates. Its在这里指代的是a new movement in art.所以不能是their.
7 Numerous other commercial enterprises, from theaters to magazine publishers, from gas and electric utilities to milk processors, bring better and more efficiently services to consumers through the use of computers.
错误: efficiently services应当是efficient services. 这也是很多同学经常犯的一个错误。副词不能修饰名词必需得改为形容词。
8 The American economic system is, organizing around a basically private-enterprise, market-oriented economy in that consumers largely determine what shall be produced by spending their money in the marketplace for those goods and services that they want most.
错误: organizing around a basically private-enterprise应当是organized around a basically private-enterprise.这里应当是过去分词来做一个伴随状语，而不应当是如今分词，由于它是主语的承受者。in that应当是in which.由于只有in which才能引导一个定语从句。in which=where, 在引导一个定语从句时，后面需要加上一个完好句。而in that只能引导一个状语从句=because.
9 Thus, in the American economic system it is the demand of individual consumers, coupled with the desire of businessmen to maximize profits and the desire of individuals to maximize their incomes, which together determine what shall be produced and how resources are used to produce it.
错误: which应当是that.与前面的it is构成一个强调句型。强调原句中的主语。
10 The individual now has more information available than any generation, and the task of finding that one information relevant to his or her specific problem is complicated, time--consuming, and sometimes even overwhelming.
错误: one information应当是one piece of information. 由于information是不行数名词，前面必需加量词修饰。[CKQ]
11 While talking to you, your could-be employers is deciding whether your education, your experience, and other qualifications will pay him to employ you and your wares and abilities must be displayed in an orderly and reasonably connected manner.
12 With economic growth has come centralization: fully 76 percent of Japan’s 119 million citizens lives in cities which community and the extended family have been abandoned in favor of isolated, tow-generation households.
13 After six months of arguing and final 16 hours of hot parliamentary debates, Australia’s Northern Territory became the first legal authority in the world to allow doctors to take the lives of incurably ill patients whom wish to die.
14 The great interest in exceptional children shown in public education over the past three decades indicate the strong feeling in our society that all citizens, whatever his special conditions, deserve the opportunity to fully develop their capabilities.
15 Your humor must be relevant with the audience and should help to show them that you are one of them or that you understand their situation and are in sympathy with their point of view.
16 The people who get on in this world are the people who get up and look for circumstances they want, and if they cannot find them, make them. Such is the remark made by Bernard Shaw, a great writer. This view has been shared now by more and more people.
17 The current passion to making children compete against their classmates or against the clock produce a two-layer system, in which competitive A-types seem in some way better than their B type fellows
18 Science moves forward, they say, not so much through the insights of great men of genius as because of more ordinary things like improving techniques and tools.
19 The shareholders as such have no knowledge of the lives, thoughts or needs of the workmen employing by the company in which he hold shares, and his influence on the relations of capital and labor are not good.
20 During the discussion of rock singing verses at last months stockholders meeting, Levin assert that music is not the cause of societys ills and even cited his son, a teacher in the Bronx, New York, who uses rap to communicate with students.
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11 While talking to you, your could-be employers is deciding whether your education, your experience, and other qualifications will pay him to employ you and your wares and abilities must be displayed in an orderly and reasonably connected manner.
错误: While talking to you在这里没错。当主句的主语和状语从句的指代的是同一个人或物时，状语从句的主语可以省略，这就是状语从句省略构造。your could-be employers is应当是your could-be employers are.否那么主谓不全都。pay him应当是pay him or her.
12 With economic growth has come centralization: fully 76 percent of Japan’s 119 million citizens lives in cities which community and the extended family have been abandoned in favor of isolated, tow-generation households.
错误: 119 million citizens lives应当是119 million citizens live. 否那么主谓不全都。which应当是where或in which. which引导的定语从句应当是一个不完好的〔句子〕，where或in which的后面才能加上一个完好句
13 After six months of arguing and final 16 hours of hot parliamentary debates, Australia’s Northern Territory became the first legal authority in the world to allow doctors to take the lives of incurably ill patients whom wish to die.
错误: whom wish to die应当是who wish to die. whom引导的定语从句应当是一个不完好的句子，whom在定语从句中只能做宾语。而在who引导的定语从句，who既可以做主语，也可以做宾语。
14 The great interest in exceptional children shown in public education over the past three decades indicate the strong feeling in our society that all citizens, whatever his special conditions, deserve the opportunity to fully develop their capabilities.
错误: Indicate应当是indicates.由于该句的主语是The great interest。否那么主谓不全都。whatever his special conditions应当是whatever their special conditions. Their在这里指代all citizens。
15 Your humor must be relevant with the audience and should help to show them that you are one of them or that you understand their situation and are in sympathy with their point of view.
错误: must be relevant with应当是must be relevant to. 介词搭配不当.
16 The people who get on in this world are the people who get up and look for circumstances they want, and if they cannot find them, make them. Such is the remark made by Bernard Shaw, a great writer. This view has been shared now by more and more people.
错误: This view has been shared now应当是This view is shared now或者This view is now being shared.已经有了明确的时间状语now，所以这里只能用一般如今时或者如今进展时的被动语态。
17 The current passion to making children compete against their classmates or against the clock produce a two-layer system, in which competitive A-types seem in some way better than their B type fellows
错误: The current passion to应当是The current passion for. 介词搭配不当. produce应当是produces，由于该句话的主语是The current passion。否那么主谓不全都。
18 Science moves forward, they say, not so much through the insights of great men of genius as because of more ordinary things like improving techniques and tools.
错误: improving techniques and tools应当是improved techniques and tools.用过去分词或如今分词做状语时，要留意它们与被修饰名词的关系。这里讲得是被改进过的技术和工具，所以应当是improved techniques and tools而不是improving techniques and tools。
19 The shareholders as such have no knowledge of the lives, thoughts or needs of the workmen employing by the company in which he hold shares, and his influence on the relations of capital and labor are not good.
错误: employing by the company应当是employed by the company.过去分词做后置定语时，相当于一个省略了的定语从句。所以这里的employed by the company相当于who are employed by the company. he hold shares应当是they hold shares.由于这里的they指代的是The shareholders。his influence on the relations应当是their influences on the relations. Their在这里也是指代The shareholders。
20 During the discussion of rock singing verses at last months stockholders meeting, Levin assert that music is not the cause of societys ills and even cited his son, a teacher in the Bronx, New York, who uses rap to communicate with students.
错误: and并列连接两个谓语，应当是平行构造。 assert应当是asserted.
雅思写作：中国雅思写作教与学的重大误区
雅斯题目要求中有句话：用你自己的观点和经受。这句话的目的不是要你写： I think 或者 In my opinion。不能用文字来表示这是你的观点，要通过合理合规律的论述。这话的目的是不让你背诵别人的观点，例如教材上的观点，而且不要在考场上作弊，别抄袭其他考生的话语。
英文〔谈论文〕的大禁忌就是：使用 I,you,me,he,she,him,her,his,my,your,hers,mine，等等此类第一人称单数，第三人称单数和其次人称。就是不能用某具体人来举例。
更不要写什么： Do you think ...? I dont think so.而几乎百分之百的老师和同学不知道这一个禁忌，由于他们都没有在英美写作教学争辩专家的指导下学习过写作。
事实上，不只是华人，就是英国很多语言学校的老师也不懂。虽然判卷子的人也都未必懂，但是你写出那样的〔文章〕他看这就不顺眼，当然他说不出为什么，但是不会高看你一眼，而会低看你几眼。大家可以试验一下，不使用这些词，看看还会不会说话?会不会〔造句〕?一开场会不知所措，习惯了之后，你的作文和口语就都飞跃了。
雅思写作：雅思写作常见错误经典〔总结〕
一. 不全都(disagreements)
所谓不全都不光指主谓不全都，它还包括了数的不全都　时态不全都及代词不一　致等.
例1. when one have money ,he can do what he want to .
(人一旦有了钱，他就能想干什么就干什么.)
剖析：one是单数第三人称，因此本句的have应改为has ;同理，want应改为wants.本句是典型的主谓不全都.
改为：　once one has money ,he can do what he wants (to do)
二. 修饰语错位(misplaced modifiers)
英语与汉语不同，同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置，句子的含义可能引起转变.对于这一点中国同学往往没有引起足够的重视，因此造成了不必要的误会.例1. i believe i can do it well and i will better know the world outside the campus.
剖析：better位置不当，应置于句末.
三. 句子不完好(sentence fragments)
在口语中，交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等，不完好的句子完全可以被理解.可是书面语就不同了，句子构造不完好会令意思表达不清，这种状况经常发生在主句写完以后，笔者又想加些补充说明时发生.
例1. there are many ways to know the society. for example by tv ,radio ,newspaper and so on .
剖析：本句后半局部for example by tv ,radio ,newspaper and so on .〞不是一个完好的句子，仅为一些不连贯的词语，不能独立成句.
改为：there are many ways to know society ,for example ,by tv ,radio ,and newspaper.
四. 悬垂修饰语(dangling modifiers)
所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的〔短语〕与后面句子的规律关系混乱不清.例如：at the age of ten, my grandfather died. 这句中at the age of ten只点出十岁时，但没有说明〞 谁〞十岁时.按一般推理不行能是my grandfather, 假设我们把这个悬垂修饰语改明确一点，全句就不那么费解了.
改为：
when i was ten, my grandfather died.
例1. to do well in college, good grades are essential.
剖析：句中不定式短语 “to do well in college〞 的规律主语不清楚.
改为：
to do well in college, a student needs good grades.
五. 词性误用(misuse of parts of speech)
“词性误用〞常表现为：介词当动词用;形容词当副词用;名词当动词用等.
例1. none can negative the importance of money.
剖析：negative 系形容词，误作动词。
改为：
none can deny the importance of money.
六. 指代不清(ambiguous reference of pronouns)
指代不清主要讲的是代词与被指代的人或物关系不清，或者先后所用的代词不全都。试看下面这一句：
mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.
玛丽和我姐姐很要好，由于她要她做她的伴娘。)
读完上面这一句话，读者无法明确地推断两位姑娘中谁将结婚，谁将当伴娘。假设我们把易于引起误会的代词的所指对象加以明确，意思就一目了然了。这个句子可改为：
mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.
例1. and we can also know the society by serving it yourself.
剖析：句中人称代词we 和反身代词yourself指代不全都。改为
we can also know society by serving it ourselves.
七. 不连续句子(run-on sentences)
什么叫run-on sentence?请看下面的例句。
例1. there are many ways we get to know the outside world.
剖析：这个句子包含了两层完好的意思：“there are many ways.〞 以及“we get to know the outside world.〞。简洁地把它们连在一起就不妥当了。
改为：
there are many ways for us to learn about the outside world. 或：
there are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside world
八. 措词毛病(troubles in diction)
diction 是指在特定的句子中怎样适当地选用词语的问题，囿于教学时间紧迫，老师平常在这方面花的时间往往极其有限，影响了同学在写作中没有养成良好的推敲，斟酌的习惯。他们往往随心所欲，拿来就用。所以作