专题复习慰问信.pptx

作文专题复习作文专题复习慰问信慰问信（一）文体概述（一）文体概述 慰问信是指在同学、亲友考试失利、慰问信是指在同学、亲友考试失利、生病、受伤或遇到火灾、水生病、受伤或遇到火灾、水 灾、地震灾、地震等不幸事件时，对对方表示慰问的信件。等不幸事件时，对对方表示慰问的信件。慰问信要写得真诚并注意措辞慰问信要写得真诚并注意措辞,要围绕要围绕一个中心一个中心,鼓励对方并令其得到安慰和鼓励对方并令其得到安慰和鼓舞。鼓舞。内容常包括：内容常包括：对不幸事件表示同情对不幸事件表示同情进行安慰和帮助和鼓励进行安慰和帮助和鼓励再次表示同再次表示同情并希望其早日复原。情并希望其早日复原。(二二)必备词汇必备词汇1.sorrow _ 2.Flood_ 3.go through _ 4.recovery_ 5.wish_ 6.convey _7.sympathy_ 8.deeply_ 9.shocked_ 10.quickly_11.sad_悲伤（名词）悲伤（名词）sadness洪灾（其他常见自然灾害的词？）洪灾（其他常见自然灾害的词？）渡过，熬过渡过，熬过恢复，康复恢复，康复祝愿祝愿传达传达关心，同情，慰问关心，同情，慰问深深地深深地震惊震惊快速地快速地 rapidlyfast伤心，难过伤心，难过(三三)必备短语必备短语1.1.我很抱歉知我很抱歉知_2.听到听到我深感难过我深感难过_3.请接受我最深切的慰问请接受我最深切的慰问_4.我无法相信我无法相信_5.请转达我对请转达我对的同情的同情 _6.最好的祝愿最好的祝愿_ I am deeply sorry to hear that I was so sorryto learn of the news thatPlease accept my deepest sympathyI couldnt believe thatPlease convey my sympathy toBest wishes for7.我们都希望我们都希望 _8.我相信你会成功我相信你会成功 _9.完全康复完全康复 _10.出院出院 _11.我祝你快速康复我祝你快速康复_12.渡过难关渡过难关_We are all hopingI am sure you will succeed inmake a full recovery leave the hospitalI wish you quick recoverygo through the difficulty(四四)必备句式必备句式1.1.听说水灾毁了你的家，我难过极了。听说水灾毁了你的家，我难过极了。_2.我们感到很悲痛。我们感到很悲痛。_3.请转达我向你家人的慰问。请转达我向你家人的慰问。_4.祝你很快度过（难关）。祝你很快度过（难关）。_I was so sorry to hear that the flood destroyed your house.We are filled with deep sorrow.Please convey my sympathy to your family.I wish you go through the difficulty soon.5.大家都希望你早日归来。大家都希望你早日归来。_6.6.如果需要我的帮助，请告知。如果需要我的帮助，请告知。_7.7.我们真心我们真心希望希望你能很快完全康复。你能很快完全康复。_ We all really hope that you will make a full recovery soon.If there is anything I can do to help you,please let me know.5.We are all hoping you will be back soon.(五五).).慰问信的结构慰问信的结构第一段：引出事实，表达惋惜和同情；第一段：引出事实，表达惋惜和同情；第二段：安慰对方或鼓励对方或者提第二段：安慰对方或鼓励对方或者提出给予帮助出给予帮助第三段：表达愿望和祝福。第三段：表达愿望和祝福。六解题步骤：六解题步骤：1 1）审题）审题 ：确定写作的信件类型确定写作的信件类型:_:_慰问信慰问信_ _确定人称：第一，第二人称（有可能有第确定人称：第一，第二人称（有可能有第三人称）。三人称）。确定时态：现在时，过去时，将来时确定时态：现在时，过去时，将来时 2)2)列提纲：用自己的话将题目要求的要点列提纲：用自己的话将题目要求的要点陈述出来。陈述出来。开头：不认识的要做自我介绍，开头：不认识的要做自我介绍，但是认但是认识的不用问候。识的不用问候。引出收信人遭受的不好事引出收信人遭受的不好事件，并表达惋惜同情。件，并表达惋惜同情。内容：对收信人表达安慰，鼓励，或者内容：对收信人表达安慰，鼓励，或者帮助。帮助。(三方面）三方面）结尾：表达对收信人的美好祝愿和祝福结尾：表达对收信人的美好祝愿和祝福例题例题1：据报道，据报道，7岁的美国女孩岁的美国女孩AmyBruce得知自得知自己身患肺癌己身患肺癌(lungcancer)后处于极度的痛苦后处于极度的痛苦之中，美国抗癌协会之中，美国抗癌协会(ACS)决定，每当决定，每当Amy收到一封慰问信，就给她增加收到一封慰问信，就给她增加3美分的治疗美分的治疗款。款。假如你是新华中学的学生李华，请你假如你是新华中学的学生李华，请你用英文给用英文给Amy写一封慰问信，主要内容包括：写一封慰问信，主要内容包括：1.自我介绍自我介绍2.得知的得知的Amy的情况的情况3.表示鼓励表示鼓励 4.打算为她做什么打算为她做什么5.祝她早日康复祝她早日康复Dear Amy,Im Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China.Im sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain.I quite understand how you feel now.But you should realize that you are young and have a bright future.So stand up and fight against the disease!Im sure you will win.It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive.So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you.In that way,you will get enough money for you to be cured.Hope you can go through the difficulty and make full recovery soon.Yours,Li hua例题例题2 2：你班同学你班同学TomTom生重病住院两个星期了，同学生重病住院两个星期了，同学们都很难过。今天班主任要去医院看他，并们都很难过。今天班主任要去医院看他，并请你代表全班同学些一封慰问信，要点如下：请你代表全班同学些一封慰问信，要点如下：1.表示同情和关心表示同情和关心2.送他一个包裹（幸运星和千纸鹤；现金一送他一个包裹（幸运星和千纸鹤；现金一万元）万元）3.祝他早日康复，返校上课祝他早日康复，返校上课参考词汇：参考词汇：幸运星：幸运星：lucky stars lucky stars 千纸千纸鹤：鹤：paper cranespaper cranesDear Tom,Iam very sorry to heat that you are seriously ill and that you have been in hospital for about two weeks.We are very concerned about you and your studies.Our head teacher will come to see you today so we ask him to bring you a package with some lucky stars and colorful paper cranes in it.I hope you will like it and it will bring good luck to you.Also youll receive 10,000 yuan,which will help you pay the medical fees.Dont worry about your studies.Well try to help you make up the lessons you have missed because we are good friends.I hope I can come and see you soon on Sunday.Everyone in our class misses you very much,hoping youll be well and get back soon.Yours sincerely,Li Hua课堂演练：课堂演练：假定你是李华，你的同班好友小明假定你是李华，你的同班好友小明 的家乡（湖的家乡（湖北）北）5月月1日以来数日降雨遭受洪灾，洪水毁坏了日以来数日降雨遭受洪灾，洪水毁坏了家园，你作为朋友给正在抗洪的她写一封慰问信，家园，你作为朋友给正在抗洪的她写一封慰问信，要点如下：要点如下：1.对该同班好友（对该同班好友（小明小明）表示关心。）表示关心。2.向其提供一些帮助，如捐助和回校后为她补习。向其提供一些帮助，如捐助和回校后为她补习。3.希望她对生活充满希望。希望她对生活充满希望。注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右。左右。2.可以适当增加细节，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。以使行文连贯。Dear xiaoming,Were so sorry to hear that a horrible flood happened in your hometown and your house is in ruins.Were filled with deep sorrow.Please convey my sympathy to your family.Thinking about your present situation,we cannot wait to make our effort to help you.As your friend,on behalf of our class,I express our most sincere pity and care for you.Besides,we made a donation of some money,expecting that it can help you go through the difficulty.We believe that with the help of so many kind people,a better house can be rebuilt.Finally,were all hoping youll be back soon and we will make up the lessons for you.We all hope you can realize that it is full of hope for life.Yours sincerely,Li Hua课外作业课外作业 假定你是李华，你的好友李明参加了今年的中假定你是李华，你的好友李明参加了今年的中国好声音国好声音(The Voice of China)比赛，没有进入决比赛，没有进入决赛，感到很伤心。请你给他写一封慰问信，要点赛，感到很伤心。请你给他写一封慰问信，要点如下：如下：1.表示难过和理解。表示难过和理解。2.失败原因不在于他，而是另有别的缘故。失败原因不在于他，而是另有别的缘故。3.勉励他不要灰心，来年再战必能成功。勉励他不要灰心，来年再战必能成功。注意注意：1.词数词数100左右。左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。开头语和结束语已为你写好。Dear Li Ming,I am deeply sad to hear that you could not enter the finals of The Voice of China of this year.I quite understand how you feel now.You have been doing well and your failure is not your own fault,I am sure.However,as we know,failure is the mother of success.I do hope you wont lose heart and will get ready to try again.Still you have many more chances to try for you are so young.Fate(命运命运)only can be changed by working hard,so if you go on practising singing,I am sure you will succeed next year.Best wishes!Yours sincerely,Li Hua