专四作文模板给定观点型作文.pptx

专四作文模板一：专四作文模板一：给定观点型模式框架给定观点型模式框架介绍介绍第一部分给定观点型给定明确观点型的题目，一般情况下，考题先提出一个话题话题，并给定了关于这个话题的一种明确的观点明确的观点，要求考生以这个给定的观点作为文章的中心思想中心思想(论点论点)进行论证。做这类题目的关键在于是否能很好地论证这一明确的观点。请看历年相关的考题：2003年：The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood 要求论证保持良好心态的重要性2001年：Travel Broadens the Mind 要求论证旅游对开拓视野的作用2000年：The Importance of Extracurricular Activities要求说明课外活动的重要性实例分析实例分析第二部分2003 TEM-4People in modern society live under a lot of pressure，from education，career，or familySo it is important for them to keep a good mood under whatever circumstancesWrite a composition of about 150 words on the following topic：The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood You are to write in three paragraphs In the first part，state specifically what your view is In the second part，support your view with one or two reasons In the last part。bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary Marks will be awarded for content，organization，grammar and appropriatenessFailure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks范文 The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood Recently，people in modern society live under a lot of pressure from education，career or familyWe often hear cases of going mad or committing suicide by those who cannot handle pressure wellSo，it becomes a hot topicI think，it is important to keep a good mood under whatever circumstances and no matter what happens For one thing，it helps you to get along well with othersIf you could maintain a good mood，you would take an optimistic and positive attitude towards lireThen，you can make a good cooperation with others For another，to be a healthy person both physically and psychologically，one should keep a good moodYour health benefits from your good moodOtherwise，no matter how rich you are and what a high position you occupy，you will possibly have symptoms of stress，lose appetite，and feel completely exhaustedThese，in turn，may have destructive effects on your health In a word，a good mood is the best medicine for every diseaseWe must be fully aware of the importance of keeping a good mood in order to face the pressure考点点拨考点点拨 此题为给定明确观点型的命题式作文，给定考生一个明确的此题为给定明确观点型的命题式作文，给定考生一个明确的论点，要求考生给出论据，去分析论证这个论点论点，要求考生给出论据，去分析论证这个论点，考生不需要，考生不需要考虑给出论点，只需要考虑如何能很好的证明论点。考虑给出论点，只需要考虑如何能很好的证明论点。这个题目这个题目说到现代社会中，人们承受了大量的压力，如教育、职业发展、说到现代社会中，人们承受了大量的压力，如教育、职业发展、家庭等等。所以，保持一个良好的情绪很重要。家庭等等。所以，保持一个良好的情绪很重要。范文的开头以背景现象手段开始，介绍了近年来人们面临的范文的开头以背景现象手段开始，介绍了近年来人们面临的压力越来越大，导致了很多发疯自杀的现象，因此调节压力，压力越来越大，导致了很多发疯自杀的现象，因此调节压力，保持心态很重要。保持心态很重要。正文从两方面进行了论证，一方面良好的心态情绪有助于与正文从两方面进行了论证，一方面良好的心态情绪有助于与他人搞好关系。然后作者又深入的举了一些例子来阐述这一点他人搞好关系。然后作者又深入的举了一些例子来阐述这一点的好处。另一方面，好的心态会使人保持健康的身体。的好处。另一方面，好的心态会使人保持健康的身体。结尾，作者提出我们必须要充分重视好情绪的重要性，这样结尾，作者提出我们必须要充分重视好情绪的重要性，这样才能面对社会的种种压力。才能面对社会的种种压力。这篇文章把握了题目的要求，论证良好心态的重要性，论点这篇文章把握了题目的要求，论证良好心态的重要性，论点清晰，论述清楚，结构合理。清晰，论述清楚，结构合理。特别提醒:这类考题中常出的错误是考生常常扩大题目的论点，然后进行论述。比如，2001的考题“Travel broadens the Mind”要求说明论证旅游对开拓视野的作用，有些考生写了旅游给我们带来的几点好处：开拓视野，获取知识，结交朋友，强身健体等。显然考题只要求考生写出旅游对开拓视野的作用。再 如，2003的 考 题“The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood”要求论证保持良好心态的重要性，很多考生不仅写了重要性，而且还补充了如何保持良好心态的几条方法，显然与题目不符。开头中间结尾段落的句型开头中间结尾段落的句型第三部分Introduction1Nowadays，it is a heatedly discussed topic to many people that _(引出话题)(提出给定的论点)2In resent years，_(引出话题)is very important in our lifeIn my opinion，_(提出给定的论点)3A common ground has been reached that，_(引出话题)From my point of view，it is a good way to_(提出给定论点)4I totally agree with_(提出给定论点)，and I will explain why this is the case Body1The first reason why I have such a view is that_To illustrate this point clearly,we can see that_For exampleFor instanceThe further reason is that _Last but not least，_2The first and most important reason is that_(支持论点的理由1)If you look around，you will always see_(理由1的正面效果)For instance，_(论证理由1)Another reason why I agree with_ is that_(支持论点的理由2)In fact，a good example of this is that_Moving on to wider themes，_(支持论点的理由3)Conclusion Conclusion 1In sum，from what has been discussed above，we may finally draw the conclusion that2On the whole，_(总结全文)So，_(提出建议)3To sum up，_(重述论点)4All in all，from what has been discussed，on can reach 0nly this conclusion_(重述论点)5It is clear that _(重述论点)开头的具体写法开头的具体写法第四部分开头的具体写法1.现象法现象法2.引用法引用法1 现象法现象法 对某种社会现象、倾向或社会问题进行剖析的文章往往在文章一开始首先引出这种现象或问题，然后评论。现象法就适用于这种开头。请看范例：The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood1People in modern society live under a lot of pressureI see three kinds of pressure working on people today：pressure from education，family and careerIt is easy to blame the school for charging too much money，the family members for the heavy burden，the society for the fierce competitionI think people should relaxIt is important for them to keep a good mood under whatever circumstances考点点拨 现象法开头对某种社会现象、倾向或社会问题进行分析时，不应泛泛而谈,应该具有层次感，才能使文章有深度，耐人寻味。现象法开头句型现象法开头句型 1Recently the phenomenon ofhas drawn general attention concern 2Recently the problem ofhas been brought into focus 3One of the pressing problems confronting our society today is 4has become a hot topicissue today 5An acute shortage ofis now under way in our societyAccording to a recent survey。6.With the amazing increase in，people live under great pressure 7Nowadays there is a growing uneasy feeling of 8To our astonishment，the problem ofhas worsened2 引用法引用法文章开头通过引用名人名言，箴言谚语，有代表性的看法见解，或统计数据来引出文章要展开讨论的一种观点。引用法也可用于结尾。请看范例：2001 TEM-4 Travel Broadens the Mind1.An ancient Chinese scholar said：“read ten thousand copies of books，and travel for ten thousand miles”which indicates the importance of travelNowadays，travel has become a popular activity.More and more people have enough money to travel abroad or at homeAs a matter of fact，travel has become part of our life This situation is encouraging，for it not only broadens peoples minds to some extent，which may not be reached previously,but also relaxes them physically,which help people work out mental problems more actively.1开头一：名人名言经典句型：A proverb says，“You are only young once”(适用于已记住的 名言)It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever(适用于自编名言)更多经典句型：As everyone knows No one can deny that更多句型：A recent statistics shows that 熟练掌握下列有关引用法开头的句型。1A master has once said-2A great leader remarked that3We often hear some people say“”4“”The same ideacomplaint is echoed by5The attitude that“”is shared by6How often we hear the statement that“”7We are used to hearing the words that，“”可用于写作开头和结尾的几条常见的英文谚语。1.Knowledge is power.知识就是力量。2Awareness of ignorance is the beginning of wisdom意识到无知是智慧的开始。3A bad beginning makes a bad ending恶其始者必恶其终。4A bird in the hand is better than two in the bush双鸟在林不如一鸟在手。5A blind mail who leans against a wall imagines that its the boundary of the world.坐井观天。6A book is the same today as it always was and it will never change一本好书今天如此，将来也如此，永不改变。7A book that remains shut is but a block有书闭卷不阅读，无异是块木头。8A candle lights others and consumes itself蜡烛焚自身，光亮照别人。9A chain is no stronger than its weakest link.链条的坚固程度取决于它最薄弱的环节。2开头万能公式二：数字统计 原理：要想更有说服力，就应该用实际的数字。According to a recent survey，about 789of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduationHonesty 根据最近的一项统计调查显示，大学生向老师请假的理由当中78都是假的。Travel by Bike 根据最近的一项统计调查显示，85的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。Youth 根据最近的一项统计调查显示，在某个大学，学生的课余时间的70都是在休闲娱乐。按下列题目写文章开头，参考上述句型。More Pressure from Academic Studies Does Good to Us 1We are used to hearing the Words that“Why do we have to learn all this rubbish?”from our classmates we are not accustomed to the pressure in our studies and complain strongly.But I think that it can widen your mind and prepare you for your future lifeWe should seek the useful information from the studies结尾的具体写法结尾的具体写法第五部分结尾的具体写法1 建议性结尾建议性结尾2 后果性结尾后果性结尾1 建议性结尾建议性结尾 建议性结尾主要用于在最后对文章所讨论的问题提出建设性意见，其中包括建议和具体解决问题的办法。请看范例：1To be a healthy person physically and psychologically，one should keep a good mood，according to some psychology expertsThose little things may seem relatively-reading mystery novels，playing volleyball，spending time with family and friends，maintaining your emotional well-being，getting plenty of rest，going fishingThey can help you keep a good mood 建议性结尾在提出建议和具体解决问题的办法时，应该按重要程度来排列建议，有主有次。所提的建议应新颖而别致，有利于解决问题。建议性结尾句型建议性结尾句型1We should spare no efforts to solve the Problem of2It is hoped that persistent efforts should be focused on settling the issue of3In any case，we must4The methods can be classified into three kinds：5We need to take measures to deal with6We should cross the hurdles and consider several waysThe most important：is Another way isThe final one is7Awareness of the problem is the first step toward the solution8If we are to survive as a nation，we have no choice but toPractice1The Decline in Public Trust(写出结尾段)参考范文 Awareness of the decline in public trust is the first step toward its solutionIt can stimulate government effort to involve citizens more directly in government affairsBut access to information about them is a necessary precondition for public participationTremendous efforts must be made to improve access to information before the real participation is possible5.2 后果性结尾后果性结尾这种结尾用于揭示如果所讨论的问题不能解决，或不采取某种行动的话，将会产生什么样的后果。后果性结尾应实事求是的指出问题的严重性，或者不解决问题会有什么样的结果。不能避重就轻或态度模棱两可。也可根据自己的直觉或常识，做出合理的预测。预测应合情合理，不能离谱。1.Without extracurricular activities a student will become a bookworm A bookworm does not know how to apply his knowledge to practice，how to get along well with others，and how to serve society well.So I suggest that students do extracurricular activities along with their academic studies.2It is time that the government should speak out against corruption and take strong action to punish whoever takes bribe or embezzles funds For present official corruption，if permitted to continue,will not only tarnish the governments popularity，but lead to its ultimate downfall1We must take an immediate measure，because the current situation is out of control，which surely will result in the destruction of2Obviously，if we cant improve the situation，there is every chance thatwill be put in danger3Apparently，if we fail in the problem，the fate ofwill be at stake4No doubt，unless there is a radical change,it is very likely thatwill be put in jeopardy(danger).5Any person who ignores the lesson would pay a heavy price6Any society which fails to heed/follow the warning would end in disaster7We need to take a fresh look at the matter from a wider standpoint；otherwise we wont come anywhere near understanding8People must size up the situation in a new perspective；otherwise they cant make a real dent/decrease按下列题目写文章结尾，参考上述句型。1Who should be in Charge of the Processing of Worn-out Batteries?参考范文 1 So far，I have deposited many worn-out batteries，many people just throw them away into the rubbish bags，but I have no idea how to deal with themI see many people just throw them into the rubbish bags,or onto the soilHave authorities ever taken into account the seriousness of this behavior?After the land is polluted；there will not be enough arable landwho will be responsible for the shortage of grain?