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专四作文万能句型：结束语
1. From what has been mentioned above, we can come to the conclusion that…(从上面提到的，我们可以得出结论……)
2. Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally/reasonably come to the conclusion that……(把所有的这些因素加以考虑，我们自然可以得出结论……
3. Hence/Therefore, we'd better come to the conclusion that……(因此，我们最好的出这样的结论……)
4. All in all, we cannot live without……,but at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.(总之，我们没有……无法生活，但同时我们必须寻求新的解决办法来面对可能出现的新问题)
阐述观点
1：People's views on……vary from person to person. Some hold that……However, others believe that……(人们对……的观点因人而异，有些人认为……然而其他人却认为……)
　　　 　表示论证
1：I firmly believe that……/I personally think that….. 　　
5：Finally, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why ……(最后，坦率地说，还有另外一个实际的原因……)
常用谚语

1：Actions speak louder than words.事实胜于雄辩
　　2：All is not gold that glitters.发光的未必都是金子
　　3：All roads lead to Rome.条条大路通罗马
　　4：A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半
　　5：Every advantage has its disadvantage有利必有弊
　　6：A miss is as good as a mile.失之毫厘，差之千里
　　7：Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母
　　8:Industry is the parent of success.勤奋是成功之母
　　9:It is never too old to learn.活到老，学到老
　　10:Knowledge is power.知识就是力量
　　11:Nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it.世上无难事，只怕有心人
采取措施
1：The best way to solve the troubles is……解决这些麻烦的最好办法是……
解决问题
1：The best way to solve the troubles is……解决这些麻烦的最好办法是……
　　 给出原因
1：The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子 (...的原是...)
2:This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons .First,…….Second,…….Third，……。这一现象存在有很多原因的，第一……第二……第三……
4：I quite agree with the statement that……The reasons are chiefly as follows.我十分赞同这一论述，即……。其主要原因如下。
开头
1：It is well-known to us that……(我们都知道……)= As far as my knowledge is concerned, …( 就我所知…)
2：Recently the problem of…… has been brought into focus. ==Nowadays there is a growing concern over ……(最近……问题引起了关注)
3：Nowadays(overpopulation)has become a problem we have to face.(现今，人口过剩已成为我们不得不面对的问题)
4：Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.(互联网已在我们的生活扮演着越来越重要的角色，它给我们带来了许多好处但也产生了一些严重的问题)
　　5：With the rapid development of science and technology，more and more people believe that……(随着科技的迅速发展，越来越多的人认为……)
　　6：It is a common belief that……==It is commonly believed that……(人们一般认为……
3.As society develops, people are attaching much importance to…….　　.随着社会的发展，人们开始关注…………)

英语万能作文模板
　　1.Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that…….随着社会的不断发展，出现了越来越多的问题，其中之一便是……。
4.People are attaching more and more importance to the interview during job hunting求职的过程中，人们慢慢意识到面试的重要性。
6.In the process of modern urban development, we often find ourselves in a dilemma.在都市的发展中，我们往往会陷入困境。
7.Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern, some people are in alarm that…….最近，这种现象引起了人们的广泛关注，有人开始担心…………。
8.The human race has entered a completely new stage in its history, with the increasingly rapid economic globalization and urbanization, more problems are brought to our attention.
人类进入了一个历史的崭新的阶段，经济全球化、都市化的速度不断加快，随之给我们带来了很多问题。
10.Now we are entering a new era, full of opportunities and challenges,
.现在我们正在进入一个充满机会和挑战的新时代。
11.People from different backgrounds would put different interpretations on the same case.
不同行业的人对同一种问题的解释不尽相同。
13.When asked ……, some people think…….. while some prefer……
说到，有人认为……，而另一些人则认为……。
15.To this issue, different people come up with various attitudes.　　对于这个问题，不同的人持不同的观点。
17.When it comes to ……, most people believe that ……, but other people regard ……as …..　　
.提到……问题，很多人认为……，不过，一些人则认为是.
　　32.观点的用词：Attitude, opinion, 与其搭配的动词以及词组：Take, have, come up with，set forth, put forward等。
　40.On the other hand, there are also many opponents who strongly 　.另一方面，也有很多反对的人，他们认为……。
41.According to my personality and fondness, I would prefer …… rather than……　根据我的个性以及兴趣，我选择……而不会选择……。
43.Personally, I am in favor of the former point of view.
就我个人而言，我较同意前一种看法。
　　46.For my part, I stand on side of the latter opinion that..　.就我而言，我较赞同后一种观点…………。
47.As far as I am concerned, I am inclined to be on the side of the latter view.在我看来，我较同意后一种观点。
48.After a thorough consideration, for my part, I am in favor of the latter view that……经过深思熟虑，我较支持后一种看法，亦即……。

写作模式范文赏析
1.比较类作文

Major Is More Important than School Brand in College Choice
After years of preparation for high education, it is time for high school students to decide which school to enroll. Among various factors, school brand and major become the most important factors to be taken into consideration. Between them I hold major is more important than school brand.
My preference for a good major rather than school brand lies in the following two reasons. The first one is an ideal major can motivate me to make greater efforts in academic study. As a popular saying goes, interest is the best teacher. With a major of great interest, I will exert more efforts on it and more inspiration will come out. But in a famous school with no ideal major, though there are learned supervisors, and excellent teaching facilities, I will feel dull with no academic interest. The second reason is that a good major means a good occupation in the future. The reputation of a famous college is very important in job hunting. But what employers need are faculties who can do special jobs. So they pay more attention to the employee’s quality and ability in specialties.
From what we have discussed above, we can safely get the conclusion that major outweighs school brand in our decision of college entrance.

2. 意义、重要性、危害性说明类作文
Being Indulged in Computer Games Is Harmful
An excellent college student flunked because he could not concentrate on the study for being indulged in computer games. He spent nearly all the money on games, which was earned by his father’s selling blood. When his father knelt down to beg him to return to school, he was too numb to show any regret. When computers’ entertaining function is highly spoken of, such a problem does deserve our serious concern.
The most serious harm of computer games comes from their contents, which affect children’s mental health. Many games involve violence, such as fighting and killing. To win or kill their opponents, children are permitted to use all various means like guns, knives and bombs. When they are enjoying the pleasure of success, a violent turn of mind is developed and rooted in them, which may include future violent behaviors in their real life. Being indulged in computer games also does harm to children’s health. The radiation from the computer can arouse many uncomfortable feelings, like headache, poor eyesight and even losing hair. Being lack of sleep and dinner, children are more likely to get irritable and suffer from severe malnutrition.
Of course, it is not the end of the story. Being indulged in computer games also affects children’s study, and their communication with others. All these facts show that it is time for us to manage computer games by the whole society.

3. 观点论证类作文
Reserve Certain High-Level Jobs for Women
Nowadays, most of the high paying, powerful, and responsibility-demanding jobs are held by men. Some people suggest that the government should reserve a percentage of these jobs for women. I do agree with this opinion, because our society could benefit a lot if more women were in the positions of power for the following reasons.
First, women may make greater contribution to the development of the society because of their peculiar way of thinking. Women tend to care more about details, which may decide the success or failure of a matter to some extent. The more detailed consideration, the fewer loopholes there are in an important plan. With female leaders’ thoughtful consideration, work decisions and plans may be more comprehensive. Secondly, women’s nature of tenderness and tact in communication may make highlevel jobs more fruitful especially in some fields demanding harmonious interpersonal communication. Conflicts are unavoidable in any work, and the negotiation among various parts to reach agreement is especially critical. In these cases, women, with their born tact to communicate with others may play an important role in negotiating.
As the above-mentioned advantages for providing more high-level jobs to women, though it may arouse problems against tradition, reserving high-level jobs for women is a course worthy of our efforts, considering the contribution women make in high positions.

4.现象解释类作文

Why Do College Students Have Difficulty in Finding a Job

In recent years college graduates are facing greater change in job markets. To avoid such an embarrassment, many students even choose to further their study to wait for another three years for a possible job opportunity. The reasons for the employment difficulties lie in the following three aspects.
Firstly, the enlarged college enrollment supplies more than enough graduates with a certain specialty. There has been an overabundance of executive secretaries, lawyers, and workers etc. Therefore in the contest for a single position by tens of hundreds of graduates, most will suffer the failure. Secondly, job finding also comes from the curricula design of many colleges. They have not adjusted their majors and subjects to meet the demand of modern society, so that students cannot find a position in the market to apply their knowledge in practice. Thirdly, I believe the difficulties also come from the graduates themselves. The job demands are quiet unbalanced between developed areas and undeveloped areas. A large number of graduates would rather stay jobless in big cities than take positions in small or undeveloped cities.
Taking all these reasons into account, we’d like to suggest that the government should have a micromanagement in college enrollment and major design, and students should have a broader and more reasonable view about careers.

5. 提建议、解决问题类作文

One Way to Solve Pollution from Vehicles

Cities are not as clean as they were 20 years ago, which has become a serious problem deserving our great concern. One important source of air pollution, generally believed, is vehicles, which emit a large amount of waste gases into the air. To solve the problem, many and varied proposals have been presented, like limiting the number of vehicles, and using smokeless fuel. My advice is that electricity-replacing fuel should be an effective way to solve pollution from vehicles.
Electricity contributes to the solution to vehicle pollution for two reasons. The first reason is that electricity is a clean power. Unlike fuel containing toxics like plum bum, benzene, etc., electricity will not emit any such waste gases. Many electricity- powered bicycles have appeared which have made our cities cleaner. The second reason is that electricity may make the air protection sustainable. In the long run, electricity is more easily available than fuel. Compared with the fuel exploration, which depends on the limited reservoir of crude oil in the sea or on the land, electricity can be generated widely from wind, water, and oil. If some technological difficulties are solved, I believe electricity will certainly be a way to replace fuel as driving power.
From the above evidence, we can easily see the prospect electricity may bring us in solving the problem of vehicle pollution. We are expecting a cleaner world.

Many universities in China include internships as part of graduation requirements. Students doing an internship fill short-term positions with companies or organizations to gain hands-on work experience and to help develop career-specific skills. An internship is important for two reasons. Firstly, it can give students a better idea of whether their chosen field is right for them. Secondly, an internship can teach students skills which will help them land their ideal job after graduation.
However, many students do not think it is necessary for universities to make internships compulsory. They complain that applying for and doing an internship takes up precious time which would be better spent preparing for postgraduate school entrance examinations. Some students also complain about being treated as free or cheap labor and being assigned to trivial jobs such as answering the telephone, photocopying and buying lunchboxes for the staff which are not related to their field of study. Some students fake (伪造) internship experiences, for example, by using connections to get their Internship Evaluation Form stamped, which makes a mockery of the rule.

Internships are Invaluable for College Students
         Internships are one of the indispensable（不可缺少的 steps for college students who would like to graduate from university smoothly（顺利的）. Different people hold various opinions about that. Some students reckon（认为） that internships are valuable treasures and lay a foundation of （打下基础）their career life. On the contrary, the others complain that they don’t gain anything useful and making internships compulsory is a waste of their limited time. From my own perspective
（透镜，望远镜; 观点，看法; 远景，景色; 洞察力; adj. （按照） 透视画法的; 透视的）;, I firmly believe that it’s essential for college students to apply for and do an internship.简述两种观点
         Today, we live in a world where most college students are desirous of success in the quickest way possible. They think internships are useless and ignore the advantages that internships can bring. First, doing an internship enables them to find out whether the job they have chosen is suitable for them or not. But the truth is that the current college student is an increasingly impetuous冲动的 and immature generation, and is easy to follow the trend where they think they can achieve success easily and make money such as the popular purchasing agent. Every child, to be honest, is born with special talent, and not all the children are right for the same job. In that case如果那样的话, an internship is a perfect chance to let them have a further understanding about the chosen job, and teach them to distinguish appropriate work from inappropriate work.社会背景对学生的影响
         What’s more, college students can cultivate relevant practical skills and enrich hands-on knowledge from the internship. What they should clearly know is that the current society, frankly speaking, requires all-round college students who equip with theory and practice. However, the college education doesn’t provide students with practical knowledge It’s true that Chinese education always stress grades no matter students are in high school or in college. The chance of practice must be gripped 吸引by students themselves. Under that circumstance, an internship is a good chance for them to achieve necessary skills and then make good preparations f