1、中考英语作文评分标准中考英语作文评分标准据标准答案和评分标准规定,英语书面表达的满分为据标准答案和评分标准规定,英语书面表达的满分为 1515 分,分分,分 4 4 档评分:档评分:第一档第一档(1315(1315 分分),符合题目要求,内容完整,层次结构清晰,符合题目要求,内容完整,层次结构清晰,表达清楚,语言无误。表达清楚,语言无误。第二档第二档(912(912 分分),基本题目要求,内容较完整,层次结构较清晰,基本题目要求,内容较完整,层次结构较清晰,表达较清楚,语言有少量错误。表达较清楚,语言有少量错误。第三档第三档(48(48 分分),部分内容符合题目要求,内容不够完整,层次,部分内
2、容符合题目要求,内容不够完整,层次结构不够清晰,表达不够清楚,语言有较多错误。结构不够清晰,表达不够清楚,语言有较多错误。第四档第四档(03(03 分分),不符合题目要求,整片表达不清楚,或照抄、拼凑几个词语。,不符合题目要求,整片表达不清楚,或照抄、拼凑几个词语。(如果考生按照要求进行写作,逻辑清晰,语言表达比较好,有一些亮点的词语、句式,(如果考生按照要求进行写作,逻辑清晰,语言表达比较好,有一些亮点的词语、句式,就容易拿到高分。而分数较低的考生,从作文中可以看出基础知识掌握得不好,语言平淡,就容易拿到高分。而分数较低的考生,从作文中可以看出基础知识掌握得不好,语言平淡,逻辑顺序较差。逻辑
3、顺序较差。)20072007 年河南省英语中考作文年河南省英语中考作文上周,你们班召开了上周,你们班召开了“校校园园节节约约从从我我做做起起”的的主主题题班班会。会。大家讨论了校园常见的浪大家讨论了校园常见的浪费现象。费现象。请你针对这四种现象请你针对这四种现象以班级名义写出一份倡议书。以班级名义写出一份倡议书。要求:要求:1.1.词数词数 8080 左右左右;2.2.倡议书的开头和结尾已给出,倡议书的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数不计入总词数;3.;3.文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名。文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名。Dear teachers and schoolmates,We are sor
4、ry to see so much waste in our school!_Class1,Grade 9WWh ha at t w we e o of ft te en n s se ee e i in n o ou ur r s sc ch ho oo ol ll le ea av ve e t th he e t ta ap ps s(水水龙龙头头)o on n a af ft te er r c cl le ea an ni in ng g h ha an nd ds sl le ea av ve e t th he e l li ig gh ht ts s o on n w wh h
5、e en n l le ea av vi in ng gw wa as st te e p pa ap pe er r a an nd d o ot th he er r s sc ch ho oo ol l t th hi in ng gs st th hr ro ow w t th he e f fo oo od d a aw wa ay y a af ft te er r mme ea al ls s1/8范文:范文:Dear teachers and schoolmates,Dear teachers and schoolmates,WeWe areare sorrysorry tot
6、o seesee soso muchmuch wastewaste inin ourour school!school!WeWe studentsstudents oftenoftenleaveleave thethe tapstaps onon afterafter cleaningcleaning ourour hands,hands,andand leaveleave lightslights onon whenwhen weweleave.In the classroom,we often see a lot of paper is wasted.At the diningleave.
7、In the classroom,we often see a lot of paper is wasted.At the dininghall,we can see food left on the tables after meals.hall,we can see food left on the tables after meals.I think we should save water and electricity.We should make good useI think we should save water and electricity.We should make
8、good useof our school things.Dont throw food away.Lets try to make a good habitof our school things.Dont throw food away.Lets try to make a good habitand save things around us.Lets do it from now on!and save things around us.Lets do it from now on!Class 1,Grade 9Class 1,Grade 920082008年河南年河南英语中考作文英语
9、中考作文假如你叫张蒙,班主任李老师想了解班级同学的状况假如你叫张蒙,班主任李老师想了解班级同学的状况,以便有针对性地以便有针对性地对学生进行考前心理疏导。请你根据下面的内容要求对学生进行考前心理疏导。请你根据下面的内容要求,给班主任李老师写封给班主任李老师写封e-maile-mail,说明自己的情况,说明自己的情况,并请她给你提一些建议。并请她给你提一些建议。内容要求:内容要求:1 1、学习任务重,睡眠不足,缺少体育活动。同学间缺乏沟通和交流。、学习任务重,睡眠不足,缺少体育活动。同学间缺乏沟通和交流。2 2、在家不允许看电视、上网、听音乐等。、在家不允许看电视、上网、听音乐等。3 3、词数、
10、词数 8080 左右。文中不得出现真实的校名、姓名。左右。文中不得出现真实的校名、姓名。4 4、开头和结尾已给出。不计入总词数。、开头和结尾已给出。不计入总词数。范文:范文:Dear Ms Li,Dear Ms Li,How are you?How are you?I have a lot of troubles these days.Every day I have a lot of homeworkI have a lot of troubles these days.Every day I have a lot of homeworkto do at school.I dont have
11、 enough time to sleep.I nearly have no time toto do at school.I dont have enough time to sleep.I nearly have no time todo sports.My friends and I can hardly find time to talk,or play together.do sports.My friends and I can hardly find time to talk,or play together.When I get backWhen I get backhome
12、from school,Im not allowed to watch TV,surf thehome from school,Im not allowed to watch TV,surf theInternet or listen to my favourite music.I feel worried about them.I dontInternet or listen to my favourite music.I feel worried about them.I dontknow what I should do.Could you please give me some sug
13、gestions?know what I should do.Could you please give me some suggestions?Best wishes.Best wishes.Zhang MengZhang Meng20092009 年中考英语作文年中考英语作文七、书面表达(七、书面表达(1515 分)分)以以“A person I will never forget”“A person I will never forget”为题,写一篇英语短文。为题,写一篇英语短文。要求如下:要求如下:1 1短文内容应包括人物的外貌、性格、爱好和使你难忘之处等;短文内容应包括人物的外貌、
14、性格、爱好和使你难忘之处等;2 2短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名;短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名;2/83 3词数词数 8080 左右。左右。A person I will never forgetA person I will never forget_范文:范文:The person Ill never forget is my English teacher.HesThe person Ill never forget is my English teacher.Hesa tall man witha tall man withthick glasses.He likes sports
15、and often plays footballthick glasses.He likes sports and often plays footballand basketball withand basketball withus.Hes humorous and always makes his classes lively and interesting.Hesus.Hes humorous and always makes his classes lively and interesting.Heskind but is strict with us.He never allows
16、 us to pretend that we know whatkind but is strict with us.He never allows us to pretend that we know whatwewe dontdont know.know.HeHe oftenoften tellstells usus thatthat itsits nono useuse memorizingmemorizing newnew wordswordswithout understanding.My English has greatly improved with his help.with
17、out understanding.My English has greatly improved with his help.20102010 年作文年作文七、书面表达(七、书面表达(1515 分)分)请请“is isfun”fun”为题写一篇英语短文。为题写一篇英语短文。要求:要求:1.1.先把题目补充完整先把题目补充完整(空格处可以是单词、短语,也可以是从句空格处可以是单词、短语,也可以是从句);2 2短文中不得出现真实的地名或人名等信息;短文中不得出现真实的地名或人名等信息;3 3词数词数 8080 左右。左右。Is Isfunfun范文:范文:Cooking is funCookin
18、g is funWhy is cooking fun?Here are two reasons.Why is cooking fun?Here are two reasons.First,it is a good way to show my love to my parents.Both my parentsFirst,it is a good way to show my love to my parents.Both my parentsare very busy.So when I come back home early,I11are very busy.So when I come
19、 back home early,I11cook for them.Aftercook for them.Aftertheythey returnreturn,wewe sitsit togethertogether andand enjoyenjoy thethe meal.meal.I I cancan seesee themthem smilesmilehappily.happily.SecondSecondIt It is is a a kindkind ofof creation.creation.I I alwaysalways trytry toto cookcook diffe
20、rentdifferent dishes.dishes.When my new dish is praised by others,I feel proud.When my new dish is praised by others,I feel proud.I like cooking.It brings me a lot of fun.I like cooking.It brings me a lot of fun.20112011 年作文年作文刘伟,无臂钢琴演奏者。他十岁时在一次意外中失去双臂,但他并没有刘伟,无臂钢琴演奏者。他十岁时在一次意外中失去双臂,但他并没有放弃成为一名钢琴家的梦
21、想。经过刻苦用脚练习弹琴,他最终在放弃成为一名钢琴家的梦想。经过刻苦用脚练习弹琴,他最终在“中国达人中国达人秀秀”(Chinas Got TalentChinas Got Talent)的舞台上实现了自己的梦想。请根据以上内容写)的舞台上实现了自己的梦想。请根据以上内容写一篇英语短文。一篇英语短文。3/8要求:要求:1 1 简要描述刘伟的经历;简要描述刘伟的经历;2 2 谈谈从他的经历中得到的启示;谈谈从他的经历中得到的启示;3 3 词数词数 8080 左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。Liu Wei,an armless piano player,has a v
22、ery special experience.Liu Wei,an armless piano player,has a very special experience.范文:范文:Liu Wei,an armless piano player,has a very special experience.He lostLiu Wei,an armless piano player,has a very special experience.He losthis arms in anhis arms in anaccident when he was 10,but he didnt give u
23、p his dream ofaccident when he was 10,but he didnt give up his dream ofbeing a pianist.He tried to practice playing the piano with his feet.Finallybeing a pianist.He tried to practice playing the piano with his feet.Finallyhe realized his dream in Chinhe realized his dream in Chinas Got Talent.as Go
24、t Talent.As a student,Ive learnt a lot from his story.We may meet a lot ofAs a student,Ive learnt a lot from his story.We may meet a lot ofdifficultiesdifficultiesinin ourour futurefuture life,life,butbut wewe shouldshould believebelieve thatthat ourour dreamdream willwillcomecome truetrue byby work
25、ingworking hard.hard.NoNo mattermatter howhow hardhard lifelife is,is,wewe wontwont failfailunless we give up our hope.unless we give up our hope.20122012 年作文年作文目前有不少历史剧在电视上热播。有人通过看历史剧来了解历史,有人选目前有不少历史剧在电视上热播。有人通过看历史剧来了解历史,有人选择读史书来了解历史。你选择的理由是什么?请你根据以下内容写一篇英择读史书来了解历史。你选择的理由是什么?请你根据以下内容写一篇英语短文。语短文。选择选
26、择理由理由看历史剧看历史剧情节有趣、通俗易懂;情节有趣、通俗易懂;读历史书读历史书资料真实、引人深思;资料真实、引人深思;你的选择你的选择?要求:要求:1 1、语言表达准确;短文连贯通顺;、语言表达准确;短文连贯通顺;2 2、短文必须包括以上内容要点,可以适当发挥;、短文必须包括以上内容要点,可以适当发挥;3 3、文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;、文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;4 4、词数、词数 8080 词左右。开头已给出,不计入总次数。词左右。开头已给出,不计入总次数。Many historical plays have been on TV recently.Many historic
27、al plays have been on TV recently.范文:范文:ManyMany historicalhistoricalplaysplays havehave beenbeen onon TVTV recently.recently.SomeSome peoplepeople likelikewatchingwatching historicalhistorical TVTV playsplays toto knowknow aboutabout history.history.TheyThey thinkthink theythey areareinteresting an
28、d easy to understand.Both the old and the young will have ainteresting and easy to understand.Both the old and the young will have alot of fun watching them.lot of fun watching them.Some other people think another way to learn about history is to readSome other people think another way to learn abou
29、t history is to read4/8booksbooks onon history.history.TheyThey believebelieve booksbooks cancan telltell themthem thethe truetrue storied.storied.TheyTheycan learn and think a lot from them while reading.can learn and think a lot from them while reading.I like watching historical TV plays because t
30、hey make me relaxed andI like watching historical TV plays because they make me relaxed andsave me much time.save me much time.20132013 年作文年作文每个人都是独一无二的,都有与众不同之处,人们喜欢你一定会有很多原每个人都是独一无二的,都有与众不同之处,人们喜欢你一定会有很多原因。请以因。请以“what makes me a good friend“what makes me a good friend?”为题目写一篇英语短文。为题目写一篇英语短文。要求:要求:
31、1.1.语言表达准确,短文连贯通顺语言表达准确,短文连贯通顺2.2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称3.803.80 词左右词左右范文:范文:what makes me a good friendwhat makes me a good friend?I am a boyI am a boyeasyeasy toto get along with.I neverget along with.I neverget angryget angry easily.Thats theeasily.Thats themost important reason that make
32、s me so popular.most important reason that makes me so popular.ImIm always ready to help others.Whenever my friends meet with troubles,always ready to help others.Whenever my friends meet with troubles,I will give themI will give thema hand without even a momentsa hand without even a moments thought
33、.thought.Besides,Im quite humorous.I can always tell some jokes or funny storiesBesides,Im quite humorous.I can always tell some jokes or funny storiesto make my friends laugh.They say time spent with me is full of fun.to make my friends laugh.They say time spent with me is full of fun.ImImhonest.I
34、never tell lies.So Im a friend worth trusting.honest.I never tell lies.So Im a friend worth trusting.20142014 年作文年作文你身边的每个人对你来说都具有特殊的意义。请以你身边的每个人对你来说都具有特殊的意义。请以“My“My special_”special_”为题用英语写一篇短文,描述你家庭的为题用英语写一篇短文,描述你家庭的某个成员或你的朋友、老师、同学某个成员或你的朋友、老师、同学等。等。要求:要求:1.1.在题在题 目空目空 格处格处 填入填入 你要你要 描述描述 的的对对象,象
35、,如如 grandma,grandma,teacherteacher或或friendfriend 等;等;2.2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.803.80 词左右。词左右。My special_My special_范文:范文:My special grandmaMy special grandmaMyMy grandmagrandma is is specialspecial toto meme becausebecause werewere likelike friends.friends.ShShe e alwaysalwayshelps me o
36、ut whenever I am in trouble.There are no secrets between us.helps me out whenever I am in trouble.There are no secrets between us.WhenWhenI I amam withwith mymy grandma,grandma,wewe spendspend a a lotlot ofof happyhappy timetime together.together.I I5/8know my grandma is very smart because she seems
37、 to know everything.Myknow my grandma is very smart because she seems to know everything.Mygrandmagrandma is is goodgood atat manymany things.things.OneOne thingthing shesshes bestbest atat is is cooking.cooking.SheSheoften cooks delicious food for me.I know my grandma loves me and I loveoften cooks
38、 delicious food for me.I know my grandma loves me and I loveher as well.her as well.20152015 年作文年作文七、书面表达(七、书面表达(1515 分)分)在每个人的心中,在每个人的心中,总会渴望拥有某样东西,总会渴望拥有某样东西,你想拥有什么?请以你想拥有什么?请以“I wantI wantto haveto have”为题,为题,用英语写一篇短文,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你想拥有它的理由及你会谈谈你想拥有它的理由及你会有怎样的想法或感受。有怎样的想法或感受。要求:要求:1.1.请补全标题,如请补全标题,如
39、a a footballfootball,a a mountainmountainbikebike 或或 a a magicmagicpaintbrushpaintbrush等;等;2.2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.3.词数词数 8080 词左右。词左右。I want to haveI want to haveI Iwant to have a magic paintbrushwant to have a magic paintbrushI I wantwant toto havehave a a paintbrushpaintbrushwithwit
40、h magicmagic power.power.It It cancan makemakewhatever I draw become a reality.whatever I draw become a reality.WithWith thethe paintbrush,paintbrush,i i cancan drawdraw a a newnew earth.earth.ThereThere willwill bebe sosopollution on it.The rivers will be clean and the sky will be blue.With thepoll
41、ution on it.The rivers will be clean and the sky will be blue.With thepaintbrush,i also want to draw a nice home where people can livepaintbrush,i also want to draw a nice home where people can livehappilyhappilytogether like a big family.together like a big family.I want to have the magic paintbrus
42、h to draw a beautiful new world.I want to have the magic paintbrush to draw a beautiful new world.20162016 年作文年作文七、书面表达七、书面表达(15(15 分分)我们的每一次变化都见证着我们的成长。请以“我们的每一次变化都见证着我们的成长。请以“TheThe biggestbiggest personalpersonalchange Ive ever madechange Ive ever made”为题,并根据要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文。”为题,并根据要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文。1
43、 1要点:要点:1)1)变化是什么;变化是什么;2)2)变化是如何发生的;变化是如何发生的;3)3)变化后有何感受。变化后有何感受。2 2要求:要求:1)1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;2)2)词数词数 8080 左右。左右。6/8One possible vOne possible version:ersion:(参考范文)(参考范文)The biggest personal change Ive ever madThe biggest personal change Ive ever madThe biggest personal change Ive
44、ever made is that I have fallen in love withThe biggest personal change Ive ever made is that I have fallen in love withreading.reading.When I was a child,I didnt enjoy books at all.Later,my mother always readWhen I was a child,I didnt enjoy books at all.Later,my mother always readstories for me and
45、 bought me books.Gradually I began to love reading.Whilestories for me and bought me books.Gradually I began to love reading.Whilereading,I feel like talking with a wise man.Reading is also a fantastic way toreading,I feel like talking with a wise man.Reading is also a fantastic way topass mypass my
46、free time.free time.Books are my friends.And they have and will benefit me a lot.Books are my friends.And they have and will benefit me a lot.20172017 年作文年作文我们每天都要做很多事情,有些还很棘手请以I did it为题,并根据要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文,描述一件你完成的棘手事情1要点:1)你做了什么事情;2)你是如何做那件事情的;3)你做完那件事情后的感受2要求:1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;2)词数 80 左右I did it【考
47、点】S2:提纲作文【分析】高分句型:句型一:I have also been infected by this atmosphere and ready to join the crowd我也被这种气氛感染了准备好加入大伙现在完成时被动语态:have/has been donebe infected by 被感染7/8ready to 准备做某事句型二:I could not help feeling sad for him我不禁为他感到悲伤cant help doing 不禁做某事【解答】I did itHowHow timetime flies!Imflies!Im fifteenfift
48、een yearsyears nownowThereThere waswas oneone thingthing thatthat I I willwill neverneverforgetforget Gone through that matterGone through that matter,I seem to grow up a lotI seem to grow up a lot That was New Years EveThat was New Years Evelast yearlast year,the students send each other greeting c
49、ardsthe students send each other greeting cards Cards with their own wishesCards with their own wishesand sent to good friendsand sent to good friendsI have also been infected by this atmosphere and readyI have also been infected by this atmosphere and readytoto joinjoin thethe crowdcrowd【高分句型一】【高分句
50、型一】SuddenlySuddenly,I I sawsaw a a studentstudent sittingsitting theretherealonealoneThat is not the famousnaughty KingLiu Kai doThat is not the famousnaughty KingLiu Kai do?But nowBut now,he seems like ahe seems like achangedchanged manmanHowHow hehe gotgot it it?I I lookedlooked atat himhim puzzle
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