高级写作段落写作.pptx

1)As one of my most rewarding experiences,chatting online has brought a lot of benefits to my life.2)For one thing,it helps me avoid nervousness and embarrassment I used to feel in regular talks.3)Unlike the face-to-face conversation,it offers me much freedom in time to think out my ideas and prepare them well before posting them on the screen.4)For another,Reference model:Chatting Online My Most Rewarding Experience上一页上一页下一页下一页it adds no little to the improvement of my English.5)Through online chatting,I have more chances to speak with native speakers,thus bathing myself in the sea of genuine English.6)The most valuable result of chatting online is that it gives me insights into other cultures and keeps my mind open to better ways of seeing things.7)Now I tend to see things from a more objective上一页上一页下一页下一页THE ENDTHE ENDperspective.8)In short,there is not anything in my free time that is more beneficial than chatting online.下一页下一页 Paragraph Writing 2Paragraph Writing 2Views on Sth.（各抒己见）各抒己见）(comparison&contrast)comparison&contrast)写作模式写作模式（各抒己见）（各抒己见）1)When it comes to sth.,peoples ideas are not cut from the same cloth.2)Some people hold/argue that(观点一观点一)3)They base their argument on the ground that(理由理由)4)But others react to the problem the other way around and contend that the opposite is just reasonable or right.(观点二观点二)5)From their angle of view,(理由理由)6)I am of the opinion that(我的看法我的看法)7)(理由理由)8)(结论句结论句).下一页下一页上一页上一页 1)When it comes to the problem of generation gap,peoples ideas are not cut from the same cloth.2)Most of the old argue that young people should be responsible for the problem.3)They base their argument on the ground that young people either turn a deaf ear to the elders experience-based advice or set themselves against what the elders have been proud of.4)Yet the younger Reference model:Views on Generation Gap下一页下一页上一页上一页generation reacts to the problem the other way around and holds that the opposite is just reasonable.5)From their angle of view,the older generation is too conservative to accept anything new,as a result of which,their voices are not taken into account,and their efforts are far from the requirements set by the elders.6)I am of the opinion that both generations should take the responsibility for the problem.7)Much evidence proves that the generation下一页下一页上一页上一页THE ENDTHE ENDgap results just when the two generations miss connecting or understanding with each other.8)As long as both sides keep their minds open to each others outlooks on the world and get ready for adjustment of their own ideas to the social needs,therefore,the gap between them will be narrowed down in time.上一页上一页CollegeeducationEnvironmental protectionScientific progress下一页下一页 Paragraph Writing 3 Paragraph Writing 3 The Effect of Sth.upon Our Society（影响分析）（影响分析）(c&c)(c&c)写作模式写作模式（影响分析）（影响分析）1)The effects/influences/impacts/mark of sth.on our life/society are(is)positive/negative/profound/far-reaching/a mixed one.（主题句）主题句）.2)On one hand,(分析分析I).3)(进一步阐述进一步阐述).4）On the other,(分析分析II).5)(进一步阐述进一步阐述).6)On the whole,_(分析分析III).7)(进一步阐述进一步阐述).8)Therefore,_(结尾句结尾句).上一页上一页下一页下一页 1)The effects of SARS on our society are both negative and positive.2)On one hand,it has brought about a heavy loss to our economy.3)According to the official report,it is a foregone conclusion that there is a great loss in such industries as transportation,food,recreation,and tourism.4)On the other,it will serve as a reminder of Reference model:The Effects of SARS upon Our Society下一页下一页上一页上一页what the healthy lifestyle should be like.5)We will think of it when we spit anywhere,when we help ourselves to wild game,and when we are careless of our personal hygiene.6)On the whole,SARS has made a great difference to our long-honored ways of seeing things.7)Despite our efforts,for example,our wish to better economy has invited heavy losses in it as a result of our ignorance of other factors,such as the attack of SARS.8)Although SARS is bound上一页上一页下一页下一页to die out,therefore,its influences will not fade away in the years to come.上一页上一页THE ENDTHE ENDThe Importance of Health to UsThe Benefits of Environmental Protection to UsThe Harmfulness ofVideo Games to Us下一页下一页Paragraph Writing 4 The Importance of Sth.to Sb./Sth.Else(listing)1)The importance of sth.is now draw-ing more of our concern than ever before.（划线部分可替换）2)2)To beginTo begin with with,it has,it has a strong a strong hold on hold on 3)3)(进一进一进一进一步阐述步阐述步阐述步阐述)Analysis14)4)BesidesBesides,it serves as it serves as a litmus a litmus test for test for 5)5)(进一进一进一进一步阐述步阐述步阐述步阐述)Analysis26)6)And mostAnd mostof allof all,it has,it has the power tothe power todetermine determine whether or whether or notnot 7)7)(进一进一进一进一步阐述步阐述步阐述步阐述)Analysis38)8)In shortIn short,where there where there is a better is a better employment employment of sth.,of sth.,there will be there will be more hope more hope of ofConclusionTopic Sentence写作模式写作模式下一页下一页上一页上一页 1)The importance of body language to our success in social contact is now drawing more of our concern than ever before.2)To begin with,it has a strong hold on the reactions of others to us.3)What we tend to show through our eyes,faces,bodies and gestures often brings about a chain of reactions from others,ranging from appreciation to disgust.4)Besides,it serves asReference model:下一页下一页上一页上一页The Importance of Body Language to Our Success in Social Contacta litmus test(试金石试金石)for our true feelings.5)Every time we make insincere remarks,our facial expressions,the tones of our voices and even our posture may reveal more to others than our speech.6)And most of all,it has the power to determine whether or not we will succeed in social contact.7)If you have a decisive date with a girl/boy and your manners or the way you conduct yourself doesnt match your下一页下一页上一页上一页social status,for example,your chances of winning the others heart will be slim.8)In short,where there is a better exercise of body language in social contact,there will be more hope of success.上一页上一页THE ENDTHE END 下一页下一页(建议类建议类)Paragraph Writing 5How to Break with Something Unwanted(listing&illustration)1)If you find it hard to get rid of sth.,you are not alone,for many people have tried to break with sth.but without any success.（划线部分可替换）2)2)Like otherLike other things,things,sth.sth.,once,once you have become you have become addicted to it,is addicted to it,is hard to breakhard to break.3)For 3)For instance,.instance,.Problem4)4)If there is If there is every reason every reason for you to rid for you to rid yourself of it,yourself of it,here is how:here is how:5)5)(方法方法方法方法I)I)I)I)6)6)(方法方法方法方法II)II)II)II)7)7)(方法方法方法方法III)III)III)III)Solution8)8)As long as As long as you you cling tocling to the the stepssteps,you,you will will be amazedbe amazed at at how how effectiveeffective they they are.are.EvaluationEvaluation写作模式写作模式Topic Sentence下一页下一页上一页上一页 1)If you find it hard to get rid of your bad habit of smoking,you are not alone,for quite a few smokers have tried to break with it but in vain.2)Like other bad habits,smoking,once you have become addicted to it,is very hard to break.3)For instance,one friend of mine,a chain smoker,has done everything he could to give up smoking but now he is still living with it.Reference model:How to Break with Your Bad Habit of Smoking下一页下一页上一页上一页4)But if there is every reason for you to rid yourself of it,here is how:5)Build up your will to abandon it by frequently reminding yourself of its harmfulness.6)Replace your bad habit with a good one,such as coffee drinking or bubble-gum chewing.7)And listen to the regret the victims of smoking express from the bottom of their hearts.8)As long as you cling to the steps as mentioned above,you will be amazed at how effective they are.上一页上一页THE ENDTHE ENDParagraph Writing 6Paragraph Writing 6Contributors to Changes/Success/Failure in Sth.(原因分析原因分析)(changes:decline/rise/improvement,etc)下一页下一页写作技巧写作技巧（原因分析）（原因分析）1）Just as what has happened to anything in the world,many factors lead to the changes in sth.2)In the first place,(原因原因I).3)(进进一步阐述一步阐述).4)In the second,(原因原因II)5）(进一步阐述进一步阐述)6)And above all,(原因原因III)7)(进一步阐述进一步阐述)8)Our list of contributors could go on,but the foregoing ones are already enough to give us a deep insight into the changes.(划线部分可被替代划线部分可被替代)下一页下一页上一页上一页Back 1)Just as what has happened to anything in the world,many factors lead to their success in marriage life.2)In the first place,a positive psychological suggestion plays a role.3)If a couple often utter syllables,like“We will love each other and live a happy life”as shown in their story,about the bright side of their marriage,they will bring more spirits of love and happiness Reference model:Contributors to Their Success in Marriage Life下一页下一页上一页上一页Backinto their life whereas,if a couple constantly speak of poison-words such as“terrible”,“painful”and“exhausted”,they will build one little ghost of bitterness after another to live with.4)In the second,a common and good taste for life counts much to a couples thirst for each other.5)As told in their story,the couple used to underline favorite passages to share with each other,which added color to their marriage life.6)And above all,readiness to devote more to the other serves下一页下一页上一页上一页Backas the bottom line in their marriage life7)Like many other couples,the couple in the story also had much to complain about in their daily life,but both acted to fill each others needs as time and opportunity allowed.8)Our list of contributors to their success in marriage life could go on,but the foregoing ones are already enough to give us a deep insight into the problem.上一页上一页THE ENDTHE ENDCheating in ExamsArmed RobberyDrug TakingParagraph Writing 7 Paragraph Writing 7 Should We Leave Some Room for Sth.Undesirable?(批驳分析批驳分析c&c)c&c)（划线部分可替换）（划线部分可替换）下一页下一页上一页上一页写作模式（批驳分析）写作模式（批驳分析）1)Doing sth./Sth.is so popular in our society that many people regard it as a natural thing we have to live with.(错误观点错误观点)2)Underlying their view is the ground that(理由理由I)I)3)Furthermore,they argue that(理由理由IIII)4)A deeper insight into the problem,however,can find that(批驳分析批驳分析I)5）If allowed to run its course,it would(进一步阐述进一步阐述)6）On the other hand,批驳分析批驳分析II)II)7)It must be kept in mind that (进一步阐述进一步阐述)8)Thus,no room is to be left for(doing)sth.in our society.1)Nowadays,cheating in exams is so popular on campus that many people regard it as a natural thing we have to live with.2)Underlying their view is the ground that any struggle against it will give rise to more sophisticated methods of cheating,like burning the grass that comes back to life in spring winds.3)Furthermore,they argue that theReference model:Should We Leave Some Room for Cheating on Exams in Our Society?下一页下一页上一页上一页cheaters success in the college entrance examinations did not come by easily and they will forever lose the chance of further education if they are expelled from school.4)A deeper insight into the problem,however,can find that those keen on this have formed a raging current,which is eating away at the foundations of our values and moralities in education.5)If allowed to run its course,this current,with more and more students getting involved in it,would become stronger and 上一页上一页下一页下一页stronger until there would be little that we can do about it.6)On the other hand,a severe punishment for cheating on exams can bring both honesty and fair competition back into our campus life.7)It must be kept in mind that the purpose of our education is not to preserve every students false mask but to build up their self-confidence for the sake of future competition.8)Thus,no room is to be left for cheating on exams in our society.上一页上一页THE ENDTHE END下一页下一页1.1.科研科研2.2.经商经商3.3.行医行医4.4.从教从教要求要求:从四种职业中选出两种进行对比分析从四种职业中选出两种进行对比分析,并阐明你的选择倾向和理由并阐明你的选择倾向和理由.Paragraph Writing 8 Paragraph Writing 8 Why I See/Choose Sth.over Sth.Else（c&c）1)If my choice were restricted between(doing)sth.and(doing)sth.else,the former/latter would hold more attraction for me.（划线部分可替换）（划线部分可替换）写作模式写作模式Topic Sentence下一页下一页上一页上一页2)2)For one For one thing thing,3)3)By By contrastcontrast,Comparison I4)4)For For anotheranother,5)5)In contrastIn contrast to that to that,Comparison II6)6)And the And the most striking most striking difference difference between both between both lies in lies in 7)(7)(进一步进一步进一步进一步阐述阐述阐述阐述)Comparison IIIComparison III8)8)From the From the comparisonscomparisonsand contrastsand contrastsabove,anyoneabove,anyonecan concludecan concludethat my pre-that my pre-ference for ference for sth.is moresth.is morereasonablereasonable.ConclusionConclusion 1)If my choice were restricted between doing science and going into business,the former would hold more attraction for me.2)For one thing,a businessman has to waste his precious time beating one bargain after another with his counterparts.3)By contrast,a scientist can always spend his valuable time attacking one profoundReference model:Why I Choose Doing Science over Doing Business下一页下一页上一页上一页problem after another in science.4)For another,a businessman,once involved in a dirty or illegal deal,tends to place himself on the road to crime.5)In contrast to that,a scientist,once involved in a potential or landmark research,is more likely to put himself on the way to success.6)And the most striking difference between both lies in their contributions to society.7)What a businessman has achieved may be of much上一页上一页下一页下一页profit to his firm or his circles while what a scientist has fulfilled will be of great benefit to his field or the whole human society.8)From the comparisons and contrasts above,therefore,anyone can conclude that my preference for doing science is more reasonable and more acceptable.上一页上一页THE ENDTHE END写作模式写作模式参考范文参考范文Different Approaches to Something通过对比说明人们是如何用不通过对比说明人们是如何用不同的方式对待某事物的，使读同的方式对待某事物的，使读者从中受到启迪。者从中受到启迪。Paragraph Writing 9(c&c)（对比说明）（对比说明）（划线部分可替换）（划线部分可替换）下一页下一页上一页上一页写作模式（对比说明）写作模式（对比说明）1)With a view of the changes in life of people of the past and today,we get/gain a deeper insight into/a better sense of sth.(主题主题)2)Viewed from the angle of lifestyle,modern people are famous for,as shown in 3)But in the past people are known for,as confirmed in(对对比比I)I)4)Judging by the concept of the value of time,modern people approach sth.as Back（划线部分可替换）（划线部分可替换）下一页下一页上一页上一页while in the past people treat sth.as(对比对比II)II)5)As is known to all,modern people prefer to,in contrast to which in the past people tend to(进一步说明进一步说明)6)If set on the scene of work,people today are more likely to pour sth.into whereas people in the past are more liable to put sth.into(对比对比III)III)7)As can be seen from,(进一步说明进一步说明)8)Clearly,such differences render us better and better at planning our time as long as we dont forget to enjoy ourselves a little while keeping up with the pace of the times.Back下一页下一页上一页上一页 Approaches to Time in the Past and Today通过对比说明过去和现在人们是如通过对比说明过去和现在人们是如何对待时间的。何对待时间的。Back下一页下一页上一页上一页Approaches to Time in the Past and TodayBack 1)With a view of th