英语写作中高级句.pptx

英语写作中高级句式的应用将乐一中 巫瑶环How to write a good composition 高考作文评分细则第五档(21-25分）1.覆盖所有内容要点2.运用较多的语法结构和词汇3.有效地使用英语句子之间的连接成分,全文结构紧凑 Studentshomework 假如你是李华。最近，你的外国笔友戴维发来一封邮件，说他饮食不规律，缺乏锻炼，导致过度肥胖，经常被同学们嘲笑。为此他感到非常苦恼，特向你求助。请根据下面的写作提示给他写一封建议信。内容包括：1.对他表示同情；2.提出你的建议；3.希望情况好转。Student ADear David,-I can understand your mood.Dont be too nervous,take it easy.Here are some my advice:First,you should be more confident.Dont think about too much.Second,you can do some exercise.Such as,running,swimming and so on.Finally,you ought to have a balanced diet,eat more vegetables and fruits,and eat less meat.You will lose weight.I hope everything will be ok.Im looking forward to your reply.Student BDear David,-because youre laughed at by your classmates for being overweight.Therefore,I will give you some suggestions.I think it is vital for you to live a healthy life.First,you should have a balanced diet.Second,it would be a good idea to have three meals on time.Last but not least,youd better do some exercise in the morning,because its helpful to lose weight.You can run around your house,which is a good way to lose weight.I do hope my advice is useful to you.Who writes betterWho writes better?Student A:语法基本正确，句式单一，多为简单句，三档或四档；Student B：句式变换丰富，语法运用正确并得体，如：It形式主语，强调句，非限制性定语从句 上下文衔接词，如：therefore，because，last but not least 五档 ComparisonSample Dear David,-Now Id like to offer you some advice.I think its necessary for you to lead a healthy lifestyle now.First,you should have three meals on time instead of eating snacks now and then.Second,it is a good idea to have a balanced diet that includes grain,meat,milk,fruit and vegetables to get enough energy.Third,I suggest you should get up early and take physical exercise every morning,which will help you lose weight and regain your confidence.I hope my advice will be helpful to you.Dear David,-Now Id like to offer you some advice I think its necessary for you to lead a healthy lifestyle now.First,you should have three meals on time instead of eating snacks now and then.Second,it is a good idea to have a balanced diet that includes grain,meat,milk,fruit and vegetables to get enough energy.Third,I suggest you should get up early and take physical exercise every morning,which will help you lose weight and regain your confidence.I hope my advice will be helpful to you.What we have learned？Some useful sentence patterns：1.Its+adj.+that(vital,important,necessary,etc)Its+adj.+for sb.to do.2.Its+a pityshame pleasure+that3.Its done+that 4.Noun clauses(objective clauses,subjective clauses,predicative clauses,etc)5.find it adj.to do.(difficult,possible,interesting)6.Its+被强调+that7.倒装句式：Not only-but also，Only+状语+部分倒装，So+adjadv that 8.There is no doubt that,there is no need to do9.Which 引导的非限制性定语从句。10.when，while，if，although，because 引导的复合句。11.Its not until-that 12.With sb.sth doing doneto do.Warming up training Translation1.我们有必要在学习中探寻有效的办法。（Its necessary）2.杭州如此迷人，以至于我决定明年再去参观它一次。(so,that)3.有人建议说父母应多陪伴孩子。(Its done that)4.它不仅能够锻炼身体，而且还能减压。(not only,but also)5.作为老师，很难平衡工作和家庭生活。(Its hard）6.你必须遵守规则并举止得体，即使你觉得他们不公平。（even if）7.我宁愿呆在家里也不愿意到处闲逛。(Would rather)8.只有用这样的办法，我们才能提前完成任务。(Only+adv.)9.我每周运动三次，这对我的健康有好处。（which）10.有这么多家务活要干，你周末最好呆在家里。（with）1.Hang Zhou is so attractive that I decide to visit it again.2.Its suggested that parents should accompany children.3.It can not only build up our body but also release the stress.4.Its hard for teachers to balance work and family life.5.Its necessary for us to explore efficient ways in our study.6.You should obey the rules and behave yourself even if they are unfair.7.I would rather stay at home than hang around.8.Only in this way can we complete our task ahead of time.9.I do exercise three times a week,which is beneficial to our health.10.With so much housework to do,youd better stay at home.假如你是李华，是某国际学校的学生会主席。做家务有助于培养同学们独立生活的能力、构建融洽的家庭关系。现请用英语写一封倡议信。内容包括：1.青少年学会做家务的意义；2向同学们发出倡议。注意：词数100.WritingDiscussion in groups Making an outline StructurePara 1 express topic&opinionPara2 the reasons of doing housework（three or four points）Para3 calling onReasonsgood exercise,relaxcommunicate with parents train our skills,independentEnjoy the sampleDear schoolmates,Many teenagers are not allowed to do housework at home so that they can spend more time on their lessons.However,I think we should share housework with our parents.Its known that sharing housework benefits us greatly.First,it strenghtens our family bonds.we can not only enjoy the pleasure of doing housework,but also communicate with our family members.Second,doing housework is a kind of physical exercise which builds up our body.More importantly,we can learn some basic living skills,which enables us to live independently when we grow up.Only in this way will we adapt our life.So lets set aside some time for housework everyday.Lets make doing housework part of our life.Conclusion:If you want to get 25 points in composition,you need to use advanced sentence patterns properly.要想写出一篇有文采的英语作文，就需要巧妙运用高级句型。Good luck to you!Thank you