高考英语读后续写高分大招：三大步八小步速成作文法.docx

高考英语读后续写高分大招：三大步，八小步速成作文法

【一三大步】
三步的核心即：审题 构思 润色
审题：审人称时态情节结构衔接
构思：组织材料。围绕全文思想展开情节构思，但要与所给各段落开头语衔接合理。
润色：本着语言形象生动的原则，把构思句子进行修改，使得行文流畅，逻辑合理，语法正确，可以使用无灵主语句。避免句式单一，可以灵活使用高级句型，非谓语短语，独立主格结构，从句。过渡词如What’s more, not only...but also，personally等。最后，务必整洁地写在答题卡上。
【二八小步】
l情绪：消极情绪
l细节：进一步解释描写
l转折：个人的努力或借助外界
l转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰
l失望：但是问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题
l新法：突然有了一个想法（一句话说明这个想法）
l结局：过了一段时间；事情有了最后的转折
l总结：点题，呼应前文
读后续写，大部分都是围绕conflict，solution来运转的。大部分文章都是这个模式：
【三高考真题典例剖析】
第1步 情绪：情绪描写
第2步 细节：进一步解释描写
情细节描写∶笑绪描写∶ 笑
smile brightly;laugh; beam; light(sth)up; light up with; burst into laughter; burst out laughing; wear a bright/broad smile; give sb a smile
看到直升飞机，Jane高兴地笑了起来。
（1）At the sight of the helicopter，Jane beamed with wild joy.
（2）Seeing the helicopter，Jane beamed with wild joy.
（3）The moment she caught sight of the helicopter，Jane's eyes/face lit up with delight.
情绪描写∶哭
cry; sob; weep; burst into tears; burst out crying;(one's eyes)brim with/be full of/be filled with tears
细节描写∶哭
（1）His eyes misted/dimmed with tears.他泪眼模糊。
（2）Her eyes were red from crying.她的双眼哭得通红。
（3）He is closed to tears.他快要哭了。
（4）Tears rolled down/coursed/trickled/streamed her cheeks.眼泪沿着她的面颊流下来。
情绪描写∶ 害怕
frightened; panicked; scared; speechless; in (a) panic; in a cold sweat;be full of fear; be filled with terror;be rooted to the spot; freeze;run away; flee; one's knees feel weak; (hands) sweat
细节描写∶ 害怕
我感到很害怕。
(1)I felt very frightened/scared/panicked.
(2) I was in a) panic/was full of fear.
(3)I stood rooted to the spot,brimming with fear/filled with fear.
(4)I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.
(5)I froze with terror, too scared to move.
(6)I was seized by a strong sense of horror; my palms sweating.
情绪描写∶ 高兴激动
v. dancejump/leap with joy; feel a surge of happiness/delight/joy/excitement; whistle; be overcome with happiness/delight/joy/excitement;(one's eyes) twinkle;(one's heart) beat/pound wildly
adj. happy; delighted; overjoyed; excited; thrilled; wild with joy
细节描写∶高兴激动
当她知道考试结果时，她兴奋极了。
(1)When she knew the result of the test, she felt excited/thrilled.
(2) When she knew the result of the test, her eyes twinkled with excitement.
(3)When she knew the result of the test,her heart was pounding with wild joy.
(4))When she knew the result of the test,a wild excitement took hold of her.
(5)Knowing the result of the test, she felt a surge of excitement.
(6)Knowing the result of the test,she was overcome with excitement.
情绪描写∶伤心痛苦
sad; bitter; sorrowful; feel a surge of sadness; (sadness)surge within sb; one's heart ache; be overcome with sadness
细节描写∶伤心痛苦她伤心不已。
(1) Sam felt extremely sad.
(2) A sadness came over her.
(3) Her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks.
(4) Numb with grief, she became speechless.
(5)Feeling a surge of sadness,she couldn't help crying bitterly.
(6) Sadness surging within her, she burst into tears.
情绪描写∶ 生气愤怒
felt/get angry/furious; feel a surge of anger/rage/fury;eyes blaze;storm out of/into/off; storm/say angrily; sth makes sb blood boil; sth makes sb extremely angry; clasp one's fists/teeth; speechless
细节描写∶ 生气愤怒
Sam感到非常生气。
(1) Sam felt very angry.
(2) Sam stood rooted to the spot, his eyes blazing with anger.
(3) Sam felt so angry that he stormed out of the room,slamming the door
furiously behind him.
(4) Boiling with rage,Sam shook his fist at me.
(5)Filled with fury,Sam was unable to utter a single word.
第3步转折：个人努力或借助外界（由“负”变“正”）
鼓起勇气; 他人的鼓励
Pluck up/take/gather one's courage(to do….)

毫不犹豫
(1)sb could hardly wait to do sth
(2) without a second thought
(3) without even thinking
(4) without delay
(5) without hesitation
_典例分析_
费尔法克斯先生深夜开车回家，途中又累又困，于是违章停车，想休息一下，结果被警察逮住，接下来怎么写呢？
Mr. Fairfax lowered his head with a sigh, ready for a ticket.(费尔法克斯先生叹了口气，低下头，准备接受罚款。) Unexpectedly, the police added,“But I’ll figure out some place for you have a good rest though.”(出乎意料的是，警方补充说，“不过我想给你找个地方好好休息。”) Wild with joy, Fairfax accepted his offer without hesitation,following him to drive his car to somewhere warm(费尔法克斯毫不犹豫地接受了他的提议，跟着他开车到温暖的地方。)
这个例子属于“负”变“正”的模式。主人公由开始的“焦虑”，原以为会被警察罚款，最后变“感动”警察帮他找到温暖的地方。
第4步转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰
似乎
(1) It was like doing sth
(2) It seemed as if/that
希望
(1) hoping that..
(2) see/feel a glimmer of hope
(3) trying hard to do sth
欣慰
(1)…..breathed a sigh of relief-sighed with relief 松了—口气
(2) (a wave of relief flooded through/washed over sb
(3) to one's relief… 使人欣慰的/放心的是……
第5步失望：但是问题还未解决或出现了新问题（由“正”变“负”）
不幸的是

(1)but bad luck for sb,.….(2), but in vain
(3),but without success (4),but no use
不知道做什么

(1)sb did sth, wondering what to do next.(2)sb did sth,not knowing what to do next.
(3)sb did sth,unsure of what to do next.(4)sb was at a loss what to do.
(5)sb was in a dilemma about whether to do or not.
_典例分析_
感谢好心人：故事中，主人公的戒指被清洁工捡到后，物归原主，想要感谢这位好心人。你怎么继续描写。
I expressed my gratitude and promised him a well-prepared gift for thanks.(我表达了感激之情，并答应给他一份精心准备的礼物，以表示感谢。) However, he immediately refused and hung up the phone.然而，他立刻拒绝了，挂断了电话。) 这个例子属于“正”变“负”的模式。想要感谢清洁工，属于“正向”，但是对方拒绝了，变成了“负向”。
这个例子属于“正”变“负”的模式。想要感谢清洁工，属于“正向”，但是对方拒绝了，变成了“负向”。
第6步想法：突然有了一个想法（一句话说明这个想法）

某人想到 /明白/有了主意
（1）It suddenly occurred to sb that+从句
（2）It hit sb that+从句
（3）It struck sb that+从句
（4）It dawned on sb that+从句
（5）（idea，thought..occurred/came to sb
（6）..came/flashed into one's mind-...crowded in one's mind
（7）one's mind began to race
第7步 结局：过段时间，事情有了最后的转折
过了一段时间
(1)not long after that,..=shortly afterwards,….before long,….=It
didn't take long before+从句=It took some time before+从句(2) for an instant/moment
事情有了转折
1)To one's surprise(delight)/Strangely enough, it turned out that+从句
(2) But on second thoughts,….
(3)But what happened next was pure magic.
第8步总结：点题，呼应前文主旨升华
直到……才意识到

（1）倒装句∶Not until+时间状语+did sb realize/notice that+
从句
（2）强调句∶It was only+时间状语+that sb realized that+从句
还记得某人的话；还在某人的脑海中

(1) One's words(echoed/rang out) in one's ears.
(2) One's words/voice/song lingered/whispered in one's mind/ head.
(3) One's head was still full of..
经历与教训

(1)What a/an valuable/useful/great/painful lesson sb taught
me/sb learned from sb!
(2)What a/an enjoyable/pleasant/wonderful/unforgettable/
memorable/interesting/valuable experience sb had!
(3) Down deep in one's heat….在某人的内心深处
第二部分“八步法”实战应用：高考真题讲解
_典例分析1_
故事梗概：父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马，儿子也很想骑，于是亲身上马体验。临走叔叔告诫我们不要走偏了路（"Don’t be late for supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!"一路上，风景优美，让人陶醉。
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.
We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.
His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn on my farm," he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.
In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. "Don’t be late for supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!" "OK! " my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
注意：
（1）所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；
（2）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
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Paragraph 2: We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.
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Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
八步法思路
1. A wave of nervousness swept over me especially when the horse ran like crazy.
（情绪）
2. My heart pounding and my palms sweating, an inner voice told me that I had to calm down.
（细节详述）
3. Though in a panic, I plucked my courage to pull on the reigns.
（转折：个人努力）
4. Luckily it didn’t take long before I settled down the horse.
（转机：成功，希望来了）
5. Just at that moment, Dad ran over, gasping for air.
（衔接句：新问题来了）
6.“Boy, we are way off the track.” He said seriously, a look of concern spreading across his face.
Paragraph 2: We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.
1. Hungry and frustrated, we tried to find a way out but in vain.
(努力，失败)
2. It suddenly dawned on me we could rode down the river nearby.
（突然有了办法）
3. Unexpectedly, the river brought us to the familiar track at last.
（开始做）
4. After what seemed two hours, Uncle Paul’s farm house did come into sight.
（成功了）
5. My father’s face brightened up, so did mine.
（感受）
6. Upon our arrival, Uncle Paul couldn’t wait to asked us, “Where have you been? I am just calling 911.”
（幽默对话）
7.“To Alice’s Wonderland” my father answered, winking at me with a big grin.
8. What an unforgettableexperience we had!
_典例分析2_
故事梗概：夫妻旅游途中吵架，妻子独自离开，述路在树林里，直升飞机来了几次授救但没有看见她。她感到很失望。
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. “I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp" and walked away.
With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place. she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom! "she cried. "Help!"
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落）somewhereat a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now. Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off heryellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
Paragraph 1
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
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Paragraph 2
It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
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第一段：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.(但是没有直升机来了，天又黑了。)
读后续写

续写
1.A wave of terror swept over her.
一阵恐怖的浪潮席卷了她。
1.情绪
2.Her heart pounding fiercely and her palm sweating, an inner voice told her that she had to find a safe place.
她的心剧烈地跳动着，手心冒汗，一个内在的声音告诉她，她必须找到一个安全的地方。
2.细节：详述情绪
3.Tired and terrified as she was,Jane plucked her courage to feel the way.

虽然她很累，也很害怕，但简鼓起勇气去感受这条路。
3.转折∶ 个人努力

4.Luckily, it didn't take long before she found a cave.
5. Sighing with relief, she felt a glimmer of hope. saying to herself."Tomorrow is another day."
4.幸运的是，没过多久她就找到了一个洞穴。
5.松了一口气，她感到了一丝希望。 对自己说。 “明天又是新的一天。”
转机：成功、希望来了。
With that, she went to sleep, in whose dream her husband kept her company.
说完，她就去睡觉了，她丈夫在梦里陪伴着她。
衔接句
第二段：It was daybreak when Jane woke up.简醒来的时候天已经亮了。
读后续写

续写
1.Hungry and disappointed, she found not any helicopter overhead,at a loss what to do.

1.饥饿和失望，她发现头顶上没有任何直升机，不知所措。
再度失望（出现新问题）
2.It suddenly dawned on her that she should find a big open area first.

3. Having gobbling down some blackberries, she can't wait to set off.

4. After what seemed a century,such an area did come into sight.

1. Her face brightened up.
2.她突然明白，她应该先找一个大的空地。

1. 她狼吞虎咽地吃了些黑莓，迫不及待地要出发了。
4.好像过了一个世纪之后，这样的地区确实出现了。

5.她的脸变亮了。

突然有了办法
6. What a coincidence that meanwhile, a helicopter was flying towards her.
7. Upon its landing, out dashed her husband who hugged Jane tightly, tears welling up in their heart.
6.与此同时，一架直升机正朝她飞来，真是巧合。
7.她的丈夫紧紧地拥抱着简，眼泪涌上心头。
结果解决问题，巧不成书，皆大欢喜

8. It was at the moment that they decided not to quarrel any more but learned to compromise.
8.就在这时，他们决定不再争吵了，而是学会了妥协
（总结）