英语写作-第三周.pptx

English Writing the Third WeekEnglish Writing the Third WeekvSentence writing 2v授课教师：张洪芹授课教师：张洪芹v授课时间：授课时间：2015年年4月月10日日English Writing:Week TwoEnglish Writing:Week Twov句子写作技巧句子写作技巧句子写作句子写作句子写作句子写作v1.句子类型句子类型(for revision)v3.语法病句语法病句v4.写作病句写作病句1.1.句子类型句子类型句子类型句子类型vAccording to use,sentences are declarative陈述句陈述句,interrogative问句问句,imperative 祈使句祈使句or exclamatory感叹句感叹句vAccording to structure,sentences are simple简单简单,compound并列并列,complex复合复合,or compound-complex并列复合并列复合vFrom a rhetorical point of view,sentences are loose松散句松散句,periodic掉尾句掉尾句,or balanced排比句排比句simple sentencescomplex sentences compound-complex sentencesstructureTypes of sentencesTypes of sentencescompound sentences loose sentences periodic sentences balanced sentences rhetoricalTypes of sentencesTypes of sentencesIdentify the types of sentencesIdentify the types of sentences vOpen any English textbook available to you and check up the sentence types contained at any page.vWhich is more and which is less?vWhich sentences do you frequently put in use?vWhat should we do?Sentence writing 2Sentence writing 2v1.语法病句语法病句v2.写作病句写作病句v3.句内强调：从属连接方法句内强调：从属连接方法1.A.Grammatical errors from 1.A.Grammatical errors from textbookstextbooksvDangling modifiers 悬垂修饰语悬垂修饰语v A modifier that opens a sentence must be followed immediately by the word it is meant to describe.Otherwise,the modifier is said to be dangling.vE.g.While reading the newspaper,my dog sat with me on the front steps.vDancing on their hind leg,the audience cheered wildly as the elephants paraded by.Misplaced modifiers Misplaced modifiers 修饰语错位修饰语错位修饰语错位修饰语错位vMisplaced modifiers are words that,because of awkward placement,do not describe what the writer intended them to describe.vE.g.He nearly brushed his teeth for twenty minutes every night.vThe woman picked up a heavy frying pan with arthritis.关节炎关节炎 Run-ons Run-ons 粘连句粘连句粘连句粘连句vA run-on is two complete thoughts that are run together with no adequate sign given to mark the break between them.vRun-ons can be divided into two types:fused sentences混合句混合句 and comma splices逗逗号误接句号误接句.vE.g.The bus stopped suddenly I spilled coffee all over my shirt.vMario told everyone in the room to be quiet,his favorite show was on.Fragments Fragments 不完整句不完整句不完整句不完整句vEvery sentence must have a subject and a verb and must express a complete thought.vA word group that lacks a subject or a verb and does not express a complete thought is a fragment.vE.g.After I cashed my paycheck.I treated myself to dinner.vWhenever I spray deodorant喷洒除臭剂喷洒除臭剂.My cat arches拱起拱起 her back.She thinks she is hearing a hissing enemy.vTo get to the bus station from here.You have to walk two blocks out of your way.2 2.B.Grammatical errors from.B.Grammatical errors from students writingstudents writingv现在分词误用现在分词误用v1）Taking all the reasons above into account,it is naturally for phone take place the letter at last.v2）After owning this special experience,its easier and more comfortable for those young people to get along with colleagues after graduate.现在分词可以独立使用的成分是现在分词可以独立使用的成分是现在分词可以独立使用的成分是现在分词可以独立使用的成分是vConsidering that six of them can sustain the payment,with their parents permission,its proper to employ anyone they want.vRegarding 句子结构问题句子结构问题句子结构问题句子结构问题 Not only but alsoNot only but alsovThey reap many benefits from this good habit not only in the age of students but also after entering the workplace.vTo do the laundry by ourselves leads the right way to not only a well-arranged schedule but also to our diligence.vWhats more,keeping a good mood can not only do good to ones own mental health,but also is beneficial to others by radiating sanguine spirit to people around.主语问题与谓语问题主语问题与谓语问题主语问题与谓语问题主语问题与谓语问题v1.make friends online increases possibilities of suffering internet frauds.vIt maybe killed and replaced by phones in some peoples opinion.v2.Hence,refreshing brains by taking part in physical activities is considerably attribute translation system to the recovery of energy and vigor.v3.These damages can never be return to former appearances.v4.Cars which tourists drive bring more automobile exhaust and broke the original tranquil,with declined of air quality.v5.All my class mates were stare at me.主谓一致性主谓一致性主谓一致性主谓一致性 v1）It stop peoples pressing step and send them to wait then make them think what all is about.v2）bad person spread harmful messages,such as facetiaes,erotic films,several male net friends even invite girls to have a date and carry out sexual assaults.v3）For this reason,it exist danger to make friends online.v4）He climbs to the balcony of her room,and open the door quietly.v5）He never knew that he is the one to open up a fresh new world.逗号问题逗号问题逗号问题逗号问题v1）College students are grown-ups,they have every right to make decisions without others judgments.v2）Hiring a cleaner enchants their daily life,then it could be a optimal choice.v3）These days,making friends online came to a trend,young generation think it is a fashion and make them seems popular.v4）This is because having net friends requires more time to be spent in front of computer,thus adolescents apply less time to former friends and participate in less outdoor activities.v5）Xiao Wangs unfortunate experience persuasively reveals that with the feature of invisibleness,net friends pose a risk to us.v6）A sweet voice chuckled,the echo is sound again and again.连词问题连词问题连词问题连词问题v1）While I am in favor of that the internet for college students is a blessing than a curse.v2）While others on the opposite side argue that it is reasonable to do so for we students today are filled with such pressure as well as so little spare time.v3）While Jessie entered this family after both her parents died.v3）Whereas letters can be easily kept in a drawer and taken out whenever one feels like rereading them,which is of great help especially for the aged to recall their old memory.v4）Whereas that isnt the exclusive view,and we students require a quiet study atom-sphere to take in excessive knowledge facing with intensive competition which is only can be indulged in the study hall.v5）Because people have changed and so have the instruments to achieve environment protection.2.2.写作病句写作病句写作病句写作病句:内容或形式上不一致内容或形式上不一致内容或形式上不一致内容或形式上不一致v1.Du Fu was one of the greatest poets.v2.A man is judged not only by what he says but also by his deeds.v3.We thought she was charming,intelligent,and a very capable young woman.v3.We have great faith and high hopes for her.v4.He was knocked down by a bicycle,but it was not serious.v5.Im going to the lecture on modern Chinese drama,because he is a dramatist I like.v6.Looking out of the window,the grassland stretches as far as the eye can reach.v7.To get ready for the trip,all the things she needed were put into a suitcase.v8.She bought several picture books and put them into her bag,which she intended to give to her children.v9.An important thing for the student to remember is that when writing a paper,you should not plagiarize.v10.Those who wish to take Linguistics are expected to sign his name on this sheet of paper.v11.Students should learn to analyze and solve problems independently.Dont rely on your teachers help.v12.She reviewed the lesson taught last week and all the exercises assigned by the teacher were done.练习练习练习练习p48.p48.vPlease do the exercise on p.48.3.Subordination:emphasis within the 3.Subordination:emphasis within the sentencesentencev从属连接方法从属连接方法vA sentence contains two ideas:with the minor one in a dependent part of the sentence,the major one in a prominent position.v练习练习v 1.The professor walked into the classroom and he carried a bag of books with him.v2.Li is a new student.He comes from a southern province.He speaks a dialect.We find it hard to understand his dialect.v3.A young worker was learning to operate the machine.An old worker was standing by her.He was watching her attentively.v4.Do task 6 p.56.Assignment for Week 2Assignment for Week 2v仔细阅读第十章，仔细阅读第十章，标点符号部分标点符号部分，P356。v第二周要课堂检测第二周要课堂检测病句病句和和英语逗号、圆点和分英语逗号、圆点和分号号的用法。的用法。vThank You!