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Writing a Diary第1页Revision怎样写英文日志怎样写英文日志日志是用来叙述一天生活中发生日志是用来叙述一天生活中发生最有趣或最有趣或感受最深一些事情感受最深一些事情。写英文日志要注意格式、时态和和人称正写英文日志要注意格式、时态和和人称正确使用。英文日志格式为：确使用。英文日志格式为：第2页日期日期(Date),星期星期(Day)天气天气(Weather)正文正文(Body)：_ 第3页写作指导写作指导1.通常是在通常是在左上角左上角写出当日写出当日日期日期和和星期星期，在靠在靠右右部分写上当日部分写上当日天气情况天气情况。正文可。正文可有标题，也可不要。要注意正确书写月有标题，也可不要。要注意正确书写月份和星期名称；天气多用份和星期名称；天气多用形容词形容词表示。表示。首字母通常要大写。首字母通常要大写。第4页Days:Monday 星期一星期一 Tuesday 星期二星期二Wednesday 星期三星期三 Thursday 星期四星期四Friday 星期五星期五 Saturday 星期六星期六Sunday 星期日星期日第5页Months:1月月-January(Jan.)2月月-February(Feb.)3月月-March(Mar.)4月月-April(Apr.)5月月-May6月月-June(Jun.)第6页7月月-July(Jul.)8月月-August(Aug.)9月月-September(Sep.)10月月-October(Oct.)11月月-November(Nov.)12月月-December(Dec.)第7页晴晴-Fine;Sunny;Shining；雨雨-Rainy;Raining;雪雪-Snowy阴阴-Overcast雾雾-foggy多风多风-Windy多云多云-Cloudy暴风雨暴风雨-Stormy;Thundering阵雨阵雨-Shower Weather:第8页2.正文：正文：日志普通用日志普通用过去时态过去时态。使用使用第一人称第一人称。经过经过：按事情发生先后次序来记述。所按事情发生先后次序来记述。所以惯用以惯用at first,then,later on,soon,at last等单词或词组使整篇文章通顺贯。等单词或词组使整篇文章通顺贯。结尾结尾：发表自己感想或评论，可依据发表自己感想或评论，可依据详细情况使用过去时态、现在时态或未来详细情况使用过去时态、现在时态或未来时态时态。第9页惯用单词或词组使整篇文章通顺贯：惯用单词或词组使整篇文章通顺贯：Beginning of the event:first,firstly,in the beginningCourse of the event:then,later on,after,meanwhile,at the same time,whats more,moreoverEnding:at last,in the end,finally,in short,in a word,as a result第10页10月月20日星期天，你和同学们到红星农场旅游。日星期天，你和同学们到红星农场旅游。依据下面图表用英语写一篇日志。依据下面图表用英语写一篇日志。6：30：起床、乘车出发去红星农场、一路观：起床、乘车出发去红星农场、一路观赏风景、唱歌赏风景、唱歌8：30：抵达农场、受到欢迎，参观、植树、：抵达农场、受到欢迎，参观、植树、了解自然了解自然13：00：野炊、乘车回家：野炊、乘车回家有点累，不过很开心有点累，不过很开心要求：用要求：用first、next、then和和 finally等连词等连词 使使日志连贯日志连贯,可适当加一些感受。可适当加一些感受。writing第11页写作过程写作过程1.审题审题确定格式、体裁、确定格式、体裁、时态时态、人称等、人称等 写作关写作关键键点。点。2.列出提要，确定开列出提要，确定开头头句、句、扩扩展句和展句和总总 结结句，句，选择选择好适宜句型。好适宜句型。3.利用一些关利用一些关联词联词或者或者过过渡句把句子有渡句把句子有 机地机地连连接起来，必要接起来，必要时时可适当增加可适当增加细节细节。4.仔仔细检验细检验，适当修改，确保句子，适当修改，确保句子结结构完构完 整，关整，关键键点点齐齐全，全，人称人称时态时态主主谓谓一致一致。5.认认真真誊誊写，卷面整写，卷面整齐齐。第12页Step 1:Form_ _ _ 正文正文_October,20th.SundaySunny时态：时态：_人称：人称：_体裁：体裁：_普通过去时普通过去时第一人称第一人称记叙文记叙文第13页Step 2:Write down the necessary simple sentences with your partners.Some necessary words and phrases:set off/have a good time/enjoy the scenerygive sb.a warm welcome show sb.aroundget close to nature/be on the way backDiscuss together第14页Today my classmates and I went to Hongxin Farm for travel.I got up at 6:30We set off by bus.We had a good time singing and enjoying the beautiful scenery outside the window.We arrived at the gate of the farm.The farmers waited to give us a warm welcome.We were shown around the big farm.第15页We began to plant trees.It was really a good way to get close to nature and protect the environment.I had a delicious picnic with my classmates.We were on the way back.Although we were all very tired,our travel was really unforgettable.第16页Step 3:connect the sentences with conjunction words and make the article better with your partner第17页Oct.l0st,Sunday,sunny Today I as well as my classmates went to Hongxin Farm for travel.First,I got up at 6:30 and we set off by bus.On the bus,we had a good time singing and enjoying the beautiful scenery outside the window.Then two hours later,we arrived at the gate of the farm,where the farmers were waiting to give us a warm welcome.After we were shown around the big farm,we began to plant trees,which was really a good way to get close to nature and protect the environment at the same time.Next,we had a picnic and it was great fun to eat in the open air.The time went very fast.Finally,It was time for us to go back.Although we were all very tired,our travel was really unforgettable.第18页行文要连贯流畅行文要连贯流畅语句要严谨、准确语句要严谨、准确表示要简明、清楚表示要简明、清楚句型结构要有改变句型结构要有改变语言使用适当得体语言使用适当得体切记书面表示概要切记书面表示概要第19页总结惯用句型：总结惯用句型：外出活动、观赏美景外出活动、观赏美景We went out for a picnic with my friends yesterday.Early in the morning,we set off for the farm for a visit.On the way,we had a good time singing and beautiful scenery.We enjoying the were shown around the farm,where we saw many beautiful plants.第20页The moment we got to the top of the hill,we were attracted by the beautiful scenery.It was time for us to go back when the sun started to go down.事故发生事故发生Unfortunately an accident happened to him=Unfortunately he had an accident.I was walking when I met with an old friend of mine.He was so frightened that I could do nothing 第21页Feelings:Although we were tired,we felt very happy.We enjoyed ourselves.=We had fun.=We had a good time.On the way back,we were laughing and talking all the time.What a wonderful weekend we had!Though I was late for school,Im proud of what I did.It wan an unforgettable experience for me.第22页惯用过渡语惯用过渡语“启启”first,first of all,firstly,in the beginning,generally speaking,now,recently“承承”second,secondly,also,then,meanwhile,still,at the same time,whats more,moreover,after a while,after a few days,for example,in fact,in other words,indeed,of course第23页“转转”anyway,after all,but,nevertheless,on the contrary,otherwise,perhaps,unfortunately,on the other hand,luckily,fortunately,in other words,however,fortunately,especially,in particular,“合合”finally,above all,in brief,in conclusion,in short,in a word,as a result,at last,therefore,thus第24页第25页