writing非谓语动词在写作中的应用省公共课一等奖全国赛课获奖课件.pptx

The beauty of writing“Reading makes a full man;conference a ready man;and writing an _man.”-Francis Bacon exact阅读使人充实，交谈使人机智，阅读使人充实，交谈使人机智，写作使人准确。写作使人准确。-培根培根 第第1页页阅卷老师喜欢句子阅卷老师喜欢句子 、同位语结构、同位语结构、with复合结构复合结构，使文章简练、通顺使文章简练、通顺；尽可能使；尽可能使用动词短语和词组、定语从句用动词短语和词组、定语从句等复合句，修辞润色文章。等复合句，修辞润色文章。使用分词短语使用分词短语(非谓语动词非谓语动词）第第2页页Non-finite Verbs in writing非非谓语动词谓语动词在写作中在写作中应应用用第第3页页 1.Seeing from the top of mountain,the city is beautiful.2.In my opinion,climb mountain is an enjoyable thing.3.Which team is good at cooking?A team called itself the supper cook.Correction写作中非谓语动词常见错误写作中非谓语动词常见错误Seenclimbingcalling第第4页页1.When she heard the news,she burst into crying._ the news,she burst into crying.2.Australia is located on the west coast of the Pacific.Australia is the largest country in Oceania.Australia，_ _ the west coast of the Pacific，is the largest country in Oceania.用非谓语结构改写句子用非谓语结构改写句子Hearinglocated on 第第5页页3.Though I admit what he has said,I still doubt he didnt do his best._ _ _ _ _,I still doubt he didnt do his best.4.Because I missed the bus,I went to school late._ _ _,I went to school late.Admitting what he hassaidMissing the bus第第6页页5.When I was walking in the street,I saw him._ in the street,I saw him.6.If you work hard,_hard,you will succeed.WalkingWorking第第7页页7.Although he had failed many times,he didnt lose heart._many times,he didnt lose heart.8.As she was scolded by the teacher,the girl sat there without lifting her head._,the girl sat there without lifting her head.Having failedScolded by the teacher第第8页页例文例文(1)：Getting back what you have lost would be an unforgettable experience.Last Monday,I lost my expensive cellphone,on which my name was inscribed(刻).Fortunately,it was returned.That morning,I rushed out of my house and jumped into a taxi,for I would be late for the final examination.On arriving at school,I headed to my classroom quickly,not noticing that I had left my cellphone on the back seat.Enjoy two essays第第9页页There is always someone behind us,caring about us.On everyday morning,walking out of the doorway to go to school,we may be told to pay attention to the traffic,not to fight or quarrel with others,and may even be told to chew slowly at table.Being a child,we may feel tired of those words.when we come home after school,she has tried her best to provide what she has for us.Even if what we need is just a glass of water,she will alsokeep it in mind.例文例文(2)第第10页页When noticing her grey hairs and the wrinkles around her eyes,I realize I have grown up while she is no longer young.Its time that I should do something for her,even only giving her back somemassage or making a cup of tea for her can make her feel that she seems to be the happiest woman in the world.Do you know who she is?She is our Mom.第第11页页Fun time!Pick out a picture and finish the task 第第12页页play musicmakehappy Playing music makes them happy.make a sentence using nonfinite verbs第第13页页_ by the reporter from CCTV,the man said he was very happy.(interview)Interviewed Finish the sentence using nonfinite verbs第第14页页e.g.Having finished my homework,I went on to help my parents.listen to/burst out laughingHaving listened to the song called“Gangnam style”,we burst out laughing.Follow the example and make a sentence.第第15页页3.Moyan stood there and was surrounded by many reporters.Moyan stood there surrounded by many reporters.用非谓语结构改写和美化句子用非谓语结构改写和美化句子第第16页页Combine the following sentences1.As soon as they arrived at the school.They felt the happy atmosphere.Arriving at the school,they felt the happy atmosphere.第第17页页2.If I am given another chance.I will succeed.Given another chance,I will succeed.第第18页页3.He wants to improve his English(目目)He studies harder.To improve his English,he studies harder.第第19页页4.When he left the classroom,he didnt say goodbye to me.5.Because he is ill,he cant attend the meeting.When leaving the classroom,he didnt say goodbye to me.Being ill,he cant attend the meeting.第第20页页6.The policeman saw the thief who was stealing a bike.7.The boys who swam in the river were in danger.The policeman saw the thief stealing a bike.The boys swimming in the river were in danger第第21页页8.Because he hadnt seen the film before,he went to the cinema.Not having seen the film before,he went to the cinema.第第22页页用非谓语结构改写和美化句子用非谓语结构改写和美化句子1.因为因为在这国家没有朋友在这国家没有朋友，她以为要想找，她以为要想找到工作是不可能。到工作是不可能。用连词用连词becauseBecause she has no friend in the country,she found it impossible to find a job.用非谓语结构用非谓语结构Having no friend in the country,she found it impossible to find a job.第第23页页2.这本这本用简易英语写成用简易英语写成书很轻易读懂书很轻易读懂用定语从句用定语从句 The book,is easy to understand.用非谓语结构用非谓语结构 The book,is easy to understand用非谓语结构改写和美化句子用非谓语结构改写和美化句子which was written in simple English,written in simple English,第第24页页3.他们是他们是来自于几个国家来自于几个国家游客。游客。用定语从句用定语从句 They are visitors who come from several countries.用非谓语结构用非谓语结构They are visitors coming from several countries.用非谓语结构改写和美化句子用非谓语结构改写和美化句子第第25页页4.发觉他好朋友沮丧发觉他好朋友沮丧，他竭尽所能让他朋友开，他竭尽所能让他朋友开心。心。用并列句用并列句He found his best friend frustrated and he did everything he could to make him happy.用非谓语结构用非谓语结构Finding his best friend frustrated,he did everything he could to make him happy.用非谓语结构改写和美化句子用非谓语结构改写和美化句子第第26页页 It is high time we took part in some activities.We want to make ourselves more healthy.It is high time we took part in some activities to make ourselves more healthy.4.用非谓语结构合并以下句子用非谓语结构合并以下句子用非谓语结构改写和美化句子用非谓语结构改写和美化句子第第27页页Nowadays,some students often cheat in exams.It is popular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons.They cheat for they want to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired.Also,some students who work hard at their lessons will cheat in exams because they are afraid of failing in exams.用非谓语结构美化文章用非谓语结构美化文章第第28页页Nowadays,some students often cheat in exams.It is popular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons.Nowadays,cheating in exams is popular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons.用非谓语结构美化文章用非谓语结构美化文章第第29页页They cheat for they want to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired.They cheat to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired.用非谓语结构美化文章用非谓语结构美化文章第第30页页Also,some students who work hard at their lessons will cheat in exams because they are afraid of failing in exams.Being afraid of failing in exams,some students who work hard at their lessons will also cheat in exams用非谓语结构美化文章用非谓语结构美化文章第第31页页Nowadays,cheating in exams is popular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons.They cheat to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired.Being afraid of failing in exams,some students who work hard at their lessons will also cheat in exams.用非谓语结构美化后文章用非谓语结构美化后文章第第32页页提议有足够睡眠是必要。原因原因1.它能有效改进我们课堂学习。2.保持健康身体是深入学习及工作基础。要求：要求：1.1.用用2-32-3句话句话表示表格内容表示表格内容 2.2-32.2-3句话要有句话要有连贯性连贯性necessary an effective way to improve our learning in the class.the base for our further study and work.（高考模拟）高考模拟）高考临近，保持良好心态有利于减轻高考临近，保持良好心态有利于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难勇气焦虑，还能增强克服困难勇气。Having a try第第33页页翻译翻译:高考临近，保持良好心态有利于高考临近，保持良好心态有利于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难勇气减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难勇气。Step1：拆分成几个简单句：拆分成几个简单句(汉字汉字)高考临近。高考临近。(National College Entrance Examination)保持良好心态很主要。保持良好心态很主要。(have a right attitude)它有利于减轻焦虑它有利于减轻焦虑（relax）和勇敢地克服困难和勇敢地克服困难。Step2：分别翻译这几个简单句：分别翻译这几个简单句National College Entrance Examination is coming.It is important to have a right attitude.It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.Having a try第第34页页Step3：合并句子：合并句子 With National College Entrance Examination coming,it is important to have a right attitude to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.National College Entrance Examination is coming.It is important to have a right attitude.It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.Sentence1:Having a try第第35页页Step3：合并句子：合并句子 With College Entrance Examination coming,it is important to have a right attitude which helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.College Entrance Examination is coming.It is important to have a right attitude.It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.Sentence2:Tip:Try to use differentways to express.Having a try第第36页页提议有足够睡眠是必要。原因原因1.它能有效改进我们课堂学习。2.保持健康身体是深入学习及工作基础。要求：要求：1.1.用用2-32-3句话句话表示表格内容表示表格内容 2.2-32.2-3句话要有句话要有连贯性（连贯性（高考模拟）高考模拟）Having a trynecessary an effective way to improve our learning in the class.the base for our further study and work.第第37页页提议有足够睡眠是必要。原因原因1.它能有效改进我们课堂学习。2.保持健康身体是深入学习及工作基础。Having a tryIt is necessary to have enough sleep.Having enough sleep is necessary.It will be an effective way to improve our learning in the class.Keeping healthy is the base for our further study and work.To Keep healthy is the base for our further study and work.第第38页页 Passage：Having enough sleep is necessary,because it will be an effective way to improve our learning in the class.Moreover,to keep healthy is the base for our further study and work.Tip:Never ignore the conjunction.Having a try第第39页页 With College Entrance Examination coming,it is important to have a right attitude which helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.Having enough sleep is necessary,because it will be an effective way to improve our learning in the class.Moreover,to keep healthy is the base for our further study and work.Besides,doing exercise regularly is of great benefit to our health.Last but not least,it is very important to keep a balanced diet.第第40页页二二.使用使用非谓语动词非谓语动词使句子简练高档使句子简练高档三三.巧用巧用倒装倒装增强句子表现力增强句子表现力四四.尝试多尝试多 样化表示方样化表示方式式一一.使用较使用较高级词汇高级词汇使文章增加吸引力使文章增加吸引力强调句强调句With短语复合结构短语复合结构定语从句定语从句名词性从句名词性从句(主宾表同从句主宾表同从句)各种状语从句各种状语从句被动语态被动语态第第41页页1.beggar,lie,sleep2.Mr.Li,hurry,pay no attention to3.stick out，trip over(绊倒绊倒),angry A beggar第第42页页1.一天，一个乞丐在路边讨钱，不过李先生慌忙赶路一天，一个乞丐在路边讨钱，不过李先生慌忙赶路上班，上班，没有注意到那个乞丐。没有注意到那个乞丐。2.结果这个乞丐很生气，伸出拐杖，差点把李先结果这个乞丐很生气，伸出拐杖，差点把李先 生绊倒了。生绊倒了。3.意识到他是个残疾人意识到他是个残疾人，李先生想给他一些钱。，李先生想给他一些钱。4.于是他拿出了一张百元现金于是他拿出了一张百元现金,突然一阵风把现金吹到突然一阵风把现金吹到 了空中。了空中。5.看到被风吹到空中百元现金看到被风吹到空中百元现金，乞丐快速跳起来去，乞丐快速跳起来去 追那张现金，追那张现金，使李先生非常诧异。使李先生非常诧异。实战演练实战演练：用五个句子写出以下信息点，注意：用五个句子写出以下信息点，注意非谓语和复合句利用。非谓语和复合句利用。第第43页页A beggarWriting2.Mr Li hurried home,paying no attention to a beggar.1.The beggar lay on the ground,sleeping.3.Suddenly,the beggar stuck out his legs,tripping over Mr Li,which made him very angry.Make an ending第第44页页 Exchange and discuss your partners composition,following the criteria.Criteria（标准）（标准）Content（内容）（内容）Language（语言）（语言）Coherence（连贯）（连贯）Pair work第第45页页 A beggar One day,hurrying home,Mr.Li paid no attention to the beggar who lay on the ground,sleeping.Suddenly,the beggar stuck out his legs,tripping Mr.Li over,which made him very angry.Realizing the beggar was a disabled person,Mr.Li began to search for some money in his pocket to give him.He took out a 100-yuan note,which was suddenly blown into the air by the wind.Seeing this,the beggar jumped quickly to run after the note,making Mr.Li so surprised that he stood there with his mouth open.第第46页页基础写作：用英语写一篇关于四川地震介绍：写作内容：5月12日，一场特大地震攻击了四川省，造成了成千上万人无家可归。大量人员受伤，甚至丧命。为了营救那些受困和被埋人，政府及时采取有效办法，派遣士兵到受灾地域。听到这个噩耗后，全世界人们都伸出了援助之手。尽管他们失去了一切，但他们正全力以赴，克服重重困难，重建家园。参考词汇：攻击：hit/strike 受灾地域:the earthquake-stricken area 第第47页页 On May 12th,a worst earthquake struck Sichuan Province，causing thousands of people homeless.A great number of people were injured or even killed.To rescue the trapped and buried people,the government immediately took effective measures,sending the soldiers to the earthquake-stricken areas.Hearing the terrible news,the people all over the world came together to help them.Although having lost everything,they are trying their best to overcome all kinds of difficulties to rebuild their home.第第48页页第第49页页