劝说性的书信写作市公开课一等奖百校联赛获奖课件.pptx

英语写作专题英语写作专题劝服性议论文劝服性议论文第1页 劝说性书信写作劝说性书信写作文体分析文体分析 劝说性书信写作目标写作目标是向某个组织或个人提出劝提出劝说性提议说性提议一个应用文体。先提出提议先提出提议，随即给出充分充分理由劝说对方接收你提议理由劝说对方接收你提议，提出理由要合情合理，用词要恰当，既要委婉礼貌，又要有说服力。基本结构和内容基本结构和内容 首先点明写信目标是提劝说性提议点明写信目标是提劝说性提议，然后讲清楚讲清楚提议事项、理由、详细提议和办法提议事项、理由、详细提议和办法，最终再一次提出再一次提出希望，礼貌结束全文。希望，礼貌结束全文。第2页 确定题材确定题材 劝服劝服,给出提议给出提议确定结构确定结构第一段：说明目标，讲清楚要提议事项第一段：说明目标，讲清楚要提议事项第二段：给出理由第二段：给出理由第三段：提出希望第三段：提出希望确定关键点确定关键点1.有利于查找资料有利于查找资料2.浏览新闻，了解信息浏览新闻，了解信息3.作为高中生，我们正形成我们判断力作为高中生，我们正形成我们判断力确定时态确定时态 普通现在时普通现在时确定人称确定人称 第一人称为主第一人称为主第3页实战演练实战演练 假如你是小明，学校领导和教师因为担心同学们浏览不健康假如你是小明，学校领导和教师因为担心同学们浏览不健康 网站，关闭了教室内电脑网络浏览功效，你们感到极难过。网站，关闭了教室内电脑网络浏览功效，你们感到极难过。请请你给校长写一封信，劝说校长同意开通教室内网络。你给校长写一封信，劝说校长同意开通教室内网络。事由：事由：教室电脑不能上网，提议学校开通网络。教室电脑不能上网，提议学校开通网络。原因：原因：1.有利于查找资料；有利于查找资料；2.浏览新闻，了解信息；浏览新闻，了解信息；3.作为高中生，我们正在形成自己判断力作为高中生，我们正在形成自己判断力注意：注意：1.信中要包含以上全部内容；信中要包含以上全部内容；2.词数：词数：120左右；左右；3.信开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数信开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数第4页 Dear Headmaster,Im writing to persuade you to let us surf the Internet in the classroom.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Xiaoming第5页Dear Headmaster,Im writing to persuade you to let us surf the Internet in the classroom.In our life and study,surfing the Internet is become more and more universal.At the meanwhile,many illegal net begin show some unhealthy news,which will be harmful to students body and soul.In order to protect us against being polluted by bad information,you forbid us using computers.But,using the computer also have some advantages.Firstly,it can help us refer to the data.第6页 Secondly,it also makes us go through the news and realize information.Whats more,as high school students,we also have ourselves judgement.We can control ourselves.Now the question is wheather you give us the chance.Im looing forward to your reply.Yours,Xiao Ming第7页Dear Headmaster,Im writing to persuade you to let us surf the Internet in the classroom.We know you want to protect us against being affected by unhealthy information which may be harmful to students body and soul.However,every coin has two sides.With science and technology developing rapidly,surfing the Internet is becoming more and more commom and can bring us advantages.Firstly,it can help us search for useful datas we cant find in books.第8页 Secondly,with Internet available,we can have access to going through some news and get to know the current events.Whats more,as high school students,we are developing the ability to distinguish/tell right from wrong and we can control ourselves.Now the question is whether you would like to give us the chance.Im looing forward to your reply.Yours,Xiao Ming第9页 1.覆盖了全部覆盖了全部关键点关键点 2.应用了较多语法结构和词汇应用了较多语法结构和词汇 3.有效地使用了语句间连接成份，使全有效地使用了语句间连接成份，使全 文结构紧凑文结构紧凑词汇词汇,句型句型,语法多样化语法多样化关关键键点点全全连连接接词词怎样算是一篇好文章？怎样算是一篇好文章？第10页写作时应注意以下几点：写作时应注意以下几点：1.要注意英文书信格式，兼顾文化差异，同时要要注意英文书信格式，兼顾文化差异，同时要注意防止语法错误；注意防止语法错误；2.第一和第三部分重视简练，而第二部分作为信第一和第三部分重视简练，而第二部分作为信函主体，要重视条理和说服力；函主体，要重视条理和说服力；3.要注意提升自己语言表示层级，尝试使用较高要注意提升自己语言表示层级，尝试使用较高级别词汇、句型或结构。级别词汇、句型或结构。第11页【惯用表示】【惯用表示】引入：引入：I am writing to.I hope that.That is to say.As far as I am concerned.In my opinion.Personally.第12页阐述：阐述：Here are my reasons.First of all,I think it would be better if.Second,.Third,.Moreover.Whats more.However.Instead.Here Id like to give my advice on.I would like to suggest that.If I were you,I would.第13页总结：总结：In short.All things considered.To sum up.In brief.Please take my advice into consideration and make a final decision.第14页惯用句型惯用句型1.Im writing to persuade you to.2.First of all,I think it would be better if.3.Here Id like to give my advice on./I would like to suggest that.4.If I were you,I would.5.I strongly hope that you can6.In my opinion,you should7.Please take my advice into consideration and make a final decision.8.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.第15页黄金模板黄金模板Dear _,Im writing to persuade you to _.First of all,I think it would be better if _.Secondly,_.Last but not least,_.I do hope you can take my suggestion into consideration and make a final decision.Looking forward to your quick reply.Yours,Li Hua第16页范文观赏范文观赏 Dear Headmaster,Im writing to persuade you to let us surf the Internet in the classroom.We know youre afraid that we may be exposed to unhealthy websites.Actually every coin has two sides.We still think that surfing the Internet can bring us much more advantages.第17页 First of all,I think it would be better if we can surf the Internet,because there is a wide range of learning resources on the Internet.We should make good use of it.Furthermore,we can broaden our horizons by reading various news online.Last but not least,as high school students,we are building up our sense of judgment.Given chances,we are sure that we will learn how to stay away from unhealthy websites.第18页 I do hope you can take my suggestion into consideration and make a final decision.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Xiaoming第19页Homework Write the passage again,using the words,expressions as well as the sentence and passage structures mentioned above.第20页第21页