高三建议信教案.doc

Teaching Plan
Teacher: Hu Fengling
Class 6, Senior 3
Time:
2016.9.27
Topic:
Guidance on Writing
Type:
Wring Guidance
Teaching goals
Knowledge
The students are to learn and master the general writing steps, methods and skills.
Ability
The students are able to write a good position and improve their writing skills.
Emotion
The students are able to be more confident in writing
Important and difficult points
1. How to organize a position and let students master the structure.
2. The use of advanced words, phrases and sentence patterns.
The Design of Teaching Content
Step1. Greetings.
Step2. Lead in
1. Brief introduction
Tell students: What is advice?---- opinion what to do
英文建议信属于应用文写作范畴，作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。
---多属于半开放性作文
2. Structure---三段
1).首段---开门见山，表明写作意图
2). 正文---对提出的问题进行分析、说明理由，接着委婉提出自己的建议
3).末段---礼貌总结并期盼对方回复
3. sentence patterns
A. State your purpose
1. I’m (more than) glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on…
2. I’m glad to write the letter to tell you…
3. I am writing to express my views concerning…
4. Knowing that…., I’d like to give some suggestions / advice/ tips.
5. When it es to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you can…
B. Give your advice
1. I feel that it would be helpful if…
2. I were you, I would…
3. It’s important/ helpful….
4. I would like to suggest that…
5. I feel it important/ necessary… to …
C. Express your hope
1. I would appreciate it if you could take my advice./take my advice into consideration.
2. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. /useful.
3. I’m sure if you take my advice, you will…
4. In my personal opinion, it would be wise of you to take the following action.
5. I will be more than happy to see improvement in this regard.
Step3. Practice
1. Practice by playing games.
1)begin like this: Knowing that…., I’d like to ….. suggestions on…(1 point)
2) 完美衔接过渡，编织流畅作文
根据句意，填过渡词(4 points)
1. In summer holidays, the weather is too hot to stand. ____ students have to stay outside all the day. __________ ,the training is very hard.
2. The boy wasn’t allowed to enter school. __________ , he was too young to go to school.
3. _____ the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.”
3)多使用词组，以增加文采 (2 points)
Developing a good habit is very important.
Developing a good habit is ___ _____________. (of great importance)
4) Form a sentence with the given words:2 points
to, it, vital, I ,think, obey traffic rules
I think it vital to obey traffic rules.
5) Please translate the following sentence (2 points)
Reading is to the mind what exercise is to the body.
读书对于思想，就像运动对于身体一样。
6) Give 3 tips about keeping healthy. (3 points)
eg:1. I feel that it would be helpful if…(do exercises)
2. It’s important/ helpful…(.to eat more vegetables and less mear)
3. I feel it important/ necessary… to … (have a good eating habit)
7) 变换高级句式，增加得分亮点
Translation3 points
只有用这种方式全世界的人们才能开心地交流。
Only in this way can people from all over the world municate easily.
8) Please correct the mistake(1 point)
There are two boys are waiting for you. (are waiting改为waiting)
9）Please take the place of the underlined word(1 point)
This book affects me greatly. （B）
A. effect
B. has an influence on
C. influent
Step4. Conclusion
Ask students: What should we pay attention to when we write a position?
Let students summarize the writing steps. And writing requirements.
Writing requirements: 1.书写工整2.标点；3.大小写4.分段5.格式6.字数7.要点全
Writing steps: 审、启、承、合、查
Step5. Practice
假如你正在某大学读书，你的表弟李华刚进入高中，感觉不太适应，请你写一封信跟他谈一下你的建议。
内容要点：
1.尽快适应高中老师的教学方法。
2. 探求适合自己的学习方法。
3. 学会与老师和同学和睦相处。
注意：1.词数120左右。
2. 可增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Beginning
Start with a sentence to grab the teacher’s attention?
Advice and reason1

Advice and reason2

Advice and reason3

conclusion

Dear Bob,
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to ________(引出主题).
Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to . Then, it also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to . You can also . (此三句不同的句式提出建议)
总之 , I suggest (有时根据需要具体到某一反面). In addition, (其他建议). I'm sure (预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心).
I'm looking forward to (表达愿望).
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
范文：Dear Li Hua,
On hearing the news that you feel it hard to adapt to the school life. I feel worried. When it es to the new life in high school, I’d like to give you some suggestions on it.
First, the senior school life is different from the junior school life. Therefore, you should adjust to their methods.
Second, as senior students you are supposed to explore your own learning methods, for effective learning methods are very important. I’m convinced that you will benefit from them.
Last but not least, it is of vital importance that you should learn how to get along with your teachers and classmates. Only if you municate with them will you grow up healthily and improve a lot.
All in all, a good start in senior school has an influence on your study. So, I do hope you can learn how to adapt to the new school life.
Step6. Homework
Send an e-mail or write a letter to me and tell me your advice or your successful experience in learning English.

教学反思本节课是一节有关高三英语的建议信的写作训练。首先，
教师用直接法介绍建议信的写作的框架，并指出3段写作模式，对beginning, body, ending的写作提出注意事项，通过Number games的游戏方式，让学生记住写作中要注意的事项及进行写作指导，最后一个环节，教师引导学生回顾“建议信”的框架结构，加深印象，画龙点睛。写作练习中，学生按照所给的模式，按照自己的方式去写出，最后学生朗读文章。教学始终以学生“写”为重点，能力追求写作课的实效性，教学设计简练、得体，鼓励学生合作写作，最大限度地促进学生书面表达能力的形成和提高。

学案
建议信写作句型：sentence patterns
B. State your purpose
1. I’m (more than) glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on…
2. I’m glad to write the letter to tell you…
3. I am writing to express my views concerning…
4. Knowing that…., I’d like to give some suggestions / advice/ tips.
5. When it es to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you can…
B. Give your advice
1. I feel that it would be helpful if…
2. I were you, I would…
3. It’s important/ helpful….
4. I would like to suggest that…
5. I feel it important/ necessary… to …
C. Express your hope
1. I would appreciate it if you could take my advice./take my advice into consideration.
2. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. /useful.
3. I’m sure if you take my advice, you will…
4. In my personal opinion, it would be wise of you to take the following action.
5. I will be more than happy to see improvement in this regard.
优秀范文

假如你正在某大学读书，你的表弟李华刚进入高中，感觉不太适应，请你写一封信跟他谈一下你的建议。
内容要点：
1.尽快适应高中老师的教学方法。
2. 探求适合自己的学习方法。
3. 学会与老师和同学和睦相处。
注意：1.词数120左右。
2. 可增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Beginning
Start with a sentence to grab the teacher’s attention?
Advice and reason1

Advice and reason2

Advice and reason3

conclusion

Dear Bob,
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to ____________(引出主题).
Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to . Then, it also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to . You can also . (此三句不同的句式提出建议)
总之 , I suggest (有时根据需要具体到某一反面). In addition, (其他建议). I'm sure (预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心).
I'm looking forward to (表达愿望).
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua