【备战2021高考】全国2021届高中英语试题汇编(第六期-11月)：D单元-短文改错(大纲版).docx

D单元　短文改错
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D单元　短文改错 1
D1 短文改错记叙文 1
D2 短文改错应用文 4
D3 短文改错谈论文 4
D4短文改错说明文 4

D1 短文改错记叙文

【英语卷(解析)·2021届云南省玉溪一中高三上学期期中考试（202210）】第一节 短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的作文如下。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或者修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
留意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处）不计分。

What’s your attitude to April Fool’s Day? A survey has done in our school and it shows that there are three different opinion. About 40% of the students thought it fun to have such a specially day to play jokes on each other. Besides, it adds many pleasure to our school life. At the same time, we can take this chance to test that our classmates are clever enough. But 30% of us don’t like the day because everything that seems in disorder and you don’t know whom to believe or how to do. Furthermore, most jokes are boring and some even go too far, but they often cause trouble or anger. The rest think people just play jokes; don’t too serious.
【答案】【学问点】D1 短文改错记叙文
【答案解析】
第一行：has done之间加been，此处是被动；
其次行：opinion改为opinions，不同的观点是复数；
第三行：thought改为think，依据上下文此处应当用一般现在时态；
第四行：specially改为special，形容词做定语；
第五行：many改为much，修饰不行数名词，用much不能用many；
第六行：that改为whether或if，句意是利用这次机会去检测同学们是否足够聪慧；
第七行：去掉that；此处不是从句，没必要加that；how改为what，do为及物动词，故应当用关系代词；
第八行：but改为so，上下句是因果关系；
第九行：don‘t 后加be，be的祈使句的否定形式；

【英语卷(解析)·2021届黑龙江省大庆铁人中学高三10月月考（202210）】第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）（见答题卡）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误只涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
留意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词，每句中最多有两处错误；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11出）不计分。
Volunteers Wanted
The Voluntary Service Club of our school will set up on March 25th. The main purpose of it is to call on and organize students to serve for society better and develop our ability to cooperate to others. The volunteers are required to work at weekends to visit the elderly in the nursing homes in our city, keep public places clean and offer some guidances to the passengers in some stations and so on The students which are healthy, patience, warm-hearted and willing to help others are welcome to join the club. Whether you are interested and want to become a member of it, please sent your application to the Students’ Union before March 15th. The office of the Students’ Union will contact the choosing candidates for a interview in a few days.
March 8th
The Students’ Union
【答案】【学问点】D1 短文改错记叙文
【答案解析】
第一行：will后加be；本句是被动，俱乐部应当是背被建；
其次行：去掉for，serve是及物动词，后不用加介词；
第三行：others前面的to改为with，cooperate with 与……协作，固定搭配；
第五行：guidances改为guidance；guidance 是不行数名词，不能用复数形式；which改为who定语从句，先行词是人，不能用which引导；
第六行：patience改为patent，用形容词做表语，表示有急躁的；
第七行：whether改为if，此处是if引导的条件状语从句；
第八行：sent改为send，please后加动词原形；
第十行：choosing 改为chosen，过去分词作定语，表示被选中的候选人；a改为an，元音前用an；

【英语卷（解析）·2021届山西省太原五中高三10月月考（202210）】第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定在英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文。请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
留意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I, together with my two friends, were eating dinner at a Chinese restaurant, locating in the center of New York. I noticed the young woman eating with two kids. We stopped by and I asked the kids if he believed in Santa. The elder boy, whom was about seven years old, pointed his younger sister and said, “She does, but I don’t.” I told them Santa was real and as we were paying for our dinner, I paid for theirs, either. I didn’t know that whether the woman was alone, but I grow up with my mother supporting us four kids alone. I still feel good thinking I may have helped on some small ways.
【答案】【学问点】D1 短文改错记叙文
【答案解析】
I, together with my two friends, were eating dinner at a Chinese restaurant, locating in the center of New York.
was located
I noticed the young woman eating with two kids. We stopped by and I asked the kids if he believed in Santa.
a they
The elder boy, whom was bout seven years old, pointed his younger sister and said, “She does, but I don’t.”
who at
I told them Santa was real and as we were paying for our dinner, I paid for theirs, either. I didn’t know
too
that whether the woman was alone, but I grow up with my mother supporting us four kids alone. I still
grew
feel good thinking I may have helped on some small ways.
in
1. 主谓全都，谓语动词与I 保持全都。
2. be located in 位于，作伴随状语
3.初次提到用a。

4. 代词代替的是前面的kids,故用they。
5. 考察非限定性定语从句，且在从句中作主语，要用who。
6. 固定搭配pointed at指着。
7. 确定的“也”用too,否定的用either。
8. know动词后缺宾语，考察宾语从句，不能消灭两个连接词，依据句意用whether。
9. 整个句子用一般过去时，要保持时态全都，此处也要用一般过去时。
10.in some small ways在一些小的方面。

D2 短文改错应用文

D3 短文改错谈论文

D4短文改错说明文

【英语卷解析·2021届河北省衡水中学高三上学期期中考试（202211）word版】第一节:短文改错(共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
留意: 1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分.
My niece Mary is a Senior 3 student, who devoted herself to her lessons every day. Last
Saturday, as usual, she went to several class. In the evening, she continued to study at home until deeply into the night. She was too sleepy and tired that she couldn’t work effectively. In Sunday morning, she was abut to do her lessons while her father came up and advised her take a break. Soon they came up a good idea. They decided to go cycling in the countryside. Mary enjoyed herself, competing and chatting with her father, and felt relaxing in the open air. On the Monday，Mary was energetic but active in class. She spent the whole day in the countryside, and Mary said what she had done was worthwhile.
【答案】【学问点】D4短文改错说明文
【文章综述】本文叙述我上高三的侄女玛丽的生活。
【答案解析】
1. devoted改为devotes,  本文的基本时态是一般现在时，故使用devotes.
2. class改为classes, 前面有形容词several修饰，后面使用可数名词的复数形式。
3. deeply改为deep,  deep指具体意义的深化；deeply指抽象意义上的深化。本句中的deep into night指到深夜。
4too改为so, 固定句式so…that…如此…以至于….；too不能用于这样的结构。
5. In改为On, 具体到某一天的早晨使用介词on。
6.while改为when, 固定句式be about to do sth when….刚要做某事，在这时…。这里的when是一个并列连词，表示“在这时…”
7.came up改为came up with, 动词短语come up with想出，提出；指他们想出了一个好办法。
8.relaxing改为relaxed, 本句的主语是人，故使用过去分词转换的形容词relaxed来修饰人。
9. 去掉the 在周一，故不用冠词。
10. and改为but 玛丽精力充分并且在课堂上很乐观，表示并列连接。